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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #15 on: November 23, 2008, 05:38:27 AM »
I rolled off the bed early in the morning, or at least, I think it was morning.  I can never tell because the dim lights in the hallway never turn off.  I went over to the small tin sink in the corner, and splashed some water in my face.  It was freezing.  Apparently convicts don't get warm water. 

I lied down on the floor and did sit ups until my abs burned.  Then I did about 10 more to push myself.  I rolled over and did some push ups.  Well technically one push up... I'm not very strong I guess...

I lied on my bed trying to decide where I could do pull ups in this room, when I accidentally let my mind wander.

We were standing in a dark hallway.  I couldn't even see Mira standing next to me, though I knew she was there.  I heard people bustling around down the hallway.  "Mira, please just go!" I begged.

"Jessie you know I can't do that! You didn't even kill him! I did!"  Mira said, begging also.

"Mira... just go! I know you'll come and find me to get me out.  I know it!  Please!" Jessie said.

Mira knew she could argue no further.  I had made up my mind.  I would not be persuaded.  She nodded in submission, a single tear rolling down her cheek.  "Is there anything I can do for you in payment of this?"

"Just get me out as soon as you can."  I said, peering around the corner at the flashlights that were getting progressively closer.  "Oh and bring Albus too.  Months of submission and I'll literally need to see him.  And plus when he's angry he'll be able to kick some butt."

Mira laughed quietly, but you could hear the sadness in her voice.  "I'm sorry Jessie... I really am."

"Don't worry about it.  If you hadn't killed the Death Eater I would have died."  I said, gratefully.  "But you should go now, otherwise they'll see you."   I hugged her, knowing I wouldn't see her for a very long time. 

"Thanks again Jessie.  I'll come as soon as I can."  Mira promised, running off into the dark.  I waited until the men found me, then I put up a fight, killing one of them with a the killing curse.  The caught me eventually, I was hopelessly outnumbered, I never really had much chance, and was planning on getting caught anyways.  Then I was knocked unconscious and interrogated, before being knocked unconscious again and dragged here.

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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #16 on: November 23, 2008, 06:42:42 AM »
Lovely!!!! Ok, I don't really like the part about me being a murdererer... But at least I killed a bad guy!!! Nicely written!  ;D
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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #17 on: November 23, 2008, 07:30:40 AM »
Thank you!  ;D  I'll try to write more tomorrow... but depending on my homework, it may fail!  ;D

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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #18 on: November 23, 2008, 10:52:47 AM »
YaY! New part! I like it! I luff it, actually! Great work!


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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #19 on: November 24, 2008, 03:43:19 AM »
I really am interested in what happens next!!
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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #20 on: November 26, 2008, 08:02:37 PM »
;D yay! Thank you guys!

I woke up and tried to work out again, my muscles screaming in protest.  I finally gave up and sat on my bed, waiting for the lunch to arrive.  When I was about to start pacing, the door was kicked open, and I gave an involuntary shudder.

"Kayla! It's been too long!" He said, bringing in a tray with my food.  He set it on the ground, and then sat down beside it.  "Come on, aren't you hungry?"

I walked over to him slowly and sat down across from him.  What is going on? I thought he was mean!  My face must have given away my thoughts, because he laughed.

"I gave up trying to force you into loving me.  I love you, and however long it takes you to realize that, I can wait! I mean, you are in here for 20 to life right?"

I nodded, and reached for my food.  "No, no! I'll get that!" He said.  Then he proceeded to feed me as though I was a baby.  Once all of the food was gone, he tenderly touched my face, and then the next thing I knew, I was laying flat on my back, with him over me.  He crushed his lips down into mine, and I thought to bite him, but couldn't move.  His hands ripped my shirt open and my mind screamed, RAPE!  He pinned my arms behind me, and crushed his face to mine again.  He was kneeling over me, so I brought my knee up with as much force as I could muster.  He doubled over, and I jumped to my feet.

I proceeded to kick him as hard as I could, most aimed for his groin area.  He couldn't stand, and whenever he did, I would cripple him again.  I grabbed the metal tray with the food on it, and slammed it against his head.  He was bleeding, but still kept coming.  I took the tray, and slammed it into the side of his head, knocking him unconscious, and sending him sprawling across the floor.  Guards heard the fight, and came running into the room.  I hid in the corner, and tried to fix my shirt buttons.

Two guards ran in, and began screaming into their walkie talkies.  More rushed in, and carried out the unconscious guard.  Others came in, and put hand cuffs on me.  They dragged me out of the room, and down the hall.

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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #21 on: November 26, 2008, 09:05:22 PM »
Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun.

Hahaaa.
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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #22 on: November 26, 2008, 10:16:04 PM »
Can Albus soon come in and kick some A$$? :P

I love it! Can't wait to see what happens!


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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #23 on: November 27, 2008, 07:36:13 AM »
He'll be in the next one!  ;D

I was dragged to an interrogation room.  A.K.A., a glorified cell with a two way mirror.  They sat me down, and asked me a ton of questions.  The whole time there was this bright light shining in my face, and it made my eyes water.

"What is your name?"

Should I tell them?  They might hurt me if I don't, and I have to be ready for Albus when he comes to save me.  "Jessica Anne Hughes"

"Did you intentionally hit the guard?"

"Yes, but-" They cut me off... how rude.

"Tell me in your own words, exactly what happened."

"Well, he came in, with my tray of food.  Then he sat down and I sat across from him, like he told me to.  He said that he loved me, but he wasn't getting far trying to earn my love through force, so he was going to try to be nice.  He was being too nice, it wasn't like him.  Then he fed me... like he put the food in my mouth for me.  It was so weird.  Then once the food was gone..." I swallowed.  I didn't want to think about this part.  "Once the food was gone, he tried to rape me.  So, in self defense, I hit him."

"You must have hit him several times correct?"

"Yes."

"How many, and where?"

"I kneed him once, low.  Then I kicked him several times, around the same area.  And a few times in his shins.  Then I took the food tray and hit him with it once on the fore head, and once on the right side of his head, which knocked him unconscious."

"I see.  Thank you."

They escorted me back to my cell, and I curled up on my cot.  I needed Albus to come, and fast.  How much longer could I last?

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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #24 on: November 29, 2008, 02:38:40 AM »
Holy crap... I hate that guard... Evil! But the story rox!!
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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #25 on: December 6, 2008, 03:08:00 AM »
* Robot mechanical voice*

We. Demand. More.

We. Demand. Albus. Kicking. Some A@@!


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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #26 on: December 28, 2008, 06:47:22 PM »
Terribly sorry about the long wait!

I expected for my guard to be out of commission for a few days, which granted me some sort of relief.  There was a knock on the door.  Maybe this guard was going to be polite.  Or maybe he just didn't want to get beaten unconscious like the last one. 

The door was pushed open, and the guard entered, his back facing me.  He was a little guy, couldn't be much taller than I was.  He had brown hair that looked familiar to me, but I wasn't sure why.  He shut the door and turned around. 

My mouth dropped and my eyes widened.  I burst into tears of joy. 

He came over to me and sat on the cot beside me.  He put his arm around my shoulders and together we rocked.  Back and forth, back and forth.  I stopped crying and looked up into his eyes.  They were a blend of blue, green, and brown.  I threw my arms around his neck.  He was very cold. 

He said, "It's OK Jessie.  I'm here." 

We looked each other in the eyes for a long time before I finally whispered, "Albus!  I knew you would come!"

"Of course I would come.  I couldn't just leave you here!  Now let's go kick some a$$!!!"


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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #27 on: December 28, 2008, 06:57:38 PM »
"Of course I would come.  I couldn't just leave you here!  Now let's go kick some a$$!!!"

I wuw you Jessie....  ;D
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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #28 on: December 28, 2008, 06:58:44 PM »
Teehee I added that for you!!!!!!!

I'll post more after people reply.

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Re: The Darkness Has Only Just Begun...
« Reply #29 on: December 28, 2008, 07:14:44 PM »
I love dis story dobby888! Pwease Pwost Mwore!  :)

I no this is a guud stury! i luv it!
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