My 1st fanfic!!Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

[*~*Hermione*~*]

On July 31,Harry Potter was noisely fixing the sink,his cousin Dudley wolfing down his 37th plate of bacon.
     "KEEP IT DOWN IN THERE,BOY" Uncle Vernon roared from the living room.
   Dudley dropped his fork and shot Harry an EVIL >:(  grin.
      "MUUUUM!!" he howled"Look what Harry made me do!!!!"
      "I did not!"Harry yelled indignatly.  "Iwas over here making noise, remember?"  
 
        " Are you saying that Dudly is a liar?" sneered uncle Vernon.  

        "Yes-i mean, no i'm nearly stating the facts."  

        Suddenly aunt Petunia stuck her bonney and horse-like face into the kichen.  "Vernon, darling, someone is coming up the drive way.

        "I exspect it's the milk-man," Vernon said.  

        "Vernon, " said Petunia,more insistantly,"it's not the milk man."  

[*~*Hermione*~*]

Isn't any 1 going 2 read it??? ??? ??? ???

[Kaeli]

Who is it? Keep writing!! Don't worry....if you just posted your story today, chances are that people haven't gotten a chance to read it yet or just haven't gotten on the computer!! You'll get more replies!

[DokkenSuite]

Yah.Like me.A yak yak to muck ;D.

[*~*Hermione*~*]

*jumps up from the corner she was hiding in*
     YAYYY!!!!!!! U have inspired me to continue!!!!!!!
*********************************************
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^*********************************************      "Well,then,who is it?" asked Vernon,a bit annoyed.
      "It's some of his kind" she answered,narrowing her eyes at Harry.
      Vernon's eyes,on the other hand,went wide with fear."How could you invite some of your kind to our perfect neiborhood???? Petunia,Duddy,upstairs,now,no questions,just HIDE!!!!"
      "I am afraid it is too late for hiding Mr. Dursley." said the familiar voice of Albus Dumblebore :).
     Well?? Any 1???*whimpers patheticly :(*
        Feedback(negative :'( or positive ;D) is your friend.

[DokkenSuite]

can't wait for more

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

:D Cooli!  Nice story so far!  But could you please withhold from the smiley faces?  They're a bit distracting.

[DokkenSuite]

Yah that's true

[*~*Hermione*~*]

Sorry,Shui.

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

is'sokay!

[*~*Hermione*~*]

Yay!!Now I know I have fans!!!I feel another section of fanfic coming on

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

*cheers* Yay! *claps*

[DokkenSuite]

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*~*Hermione*~*]

Oops.Lost it. >:(

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

What did you lose?