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Started by googl, June 3, 2004, 04:34:02 AM

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googl

Okay I know this is my story, but I want to get more people involved and I'm kinda running ut of ideas too.  So why not leave a post with 1 or 2 sentences of what u think should happen next  and then I will try and put them all together into the next installment...Remember it's got to folow the current story

Or you can tell me if u would just like me to go on with it myself
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Ginny Weasly

hmmm....I'm fresh out of ideas, my brain is recuperationg from me scratching it to get ideas for my stoy! Sorry. If you need ideas though, I'm sure that most everyone agrees here, you can put us all in the story.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Hermiony Granger

my sisters are so weird and grapes are great!

googl

I JUST TYPED LOADS UP AND THEN IT SAID I COULD NOT POST IT NOW I'VE LOST ALL MY DATA CAN SOME1 PLEASE HELP ME... I WILL TYPE IT UP GAIN ANOTHER DAY BUT I CAN'T BE BOTHERED DOIN IT AGAIN TODAY
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googl

#19
I decided to go on myself due to lack of ideas given-LOL



"Oh," said Lupin sounding surprised at harry's sudden outburst. "Now the first bit of the plan is complete we really should go and rewake Sirius." interrupted Tonks. Mad_eye led them to the end of the long corridor, turned, right then left, there was Dumbledore wating patiently for all of them. Beside him lay Sirius' dead body and next to him was a large black cauldron, with a red liquid in it, which looked strangely like human blood (when Harry asked later it turned out it was actually just water with a red plant growing in it called rewik, the plant gave the water it's red colour.)  Dumbledore was holding a glass jug with a sort of sucker on the end.  He looked at Harry "Are you sure you want to do this?" "Yes." said Harry firmly.  "Very well then, Harry I must warn you this will be very sore, but it will only last a second." Fine!" shouted Harry.  With that Dumbledore placed the sucker on Harry's arm and then pain beyond anything Harry had ever experienced he screamed. Then suddenly the pain stopped, he looked up he could see his blood in the jug. "Here eat this," sais Dumbledore handing Harry a piece of chocolate "It will help with the shock.  He then looked at the members of the Order "It is time." They nodded  and then moved into posistions around the cauldron.  Lupin helped Dumbledore lift Sirius' body into the cauldron, there was a strange sizzling sound.  Then Tonks brought out what looked strangely like a plate Harry had once found with The Blacks Motto on it.  She dropped it in the cauldron and said  "Object of a forgotten life, help revive the one you once called a traitor." Tonks stepped away. Mad-Eye moved forward with Sirius' old school diary and said "Object of a happy life, make your master  happy again.  Then Professor Mcgonnogal took the clothes Sirius had died in and said "Objects of death, which helped your master through is life, make your master live again!"  Then Lupin dropped Sirius' wand in the cauldron and said "Spells of your master,  use your power and help us revive your doer."  Then they all sang,  "Come all thou objects, make your master happy."  Finally Dumbledore took Harry's blood, poured it in and said "Blood of a friend, given willingly, give your master eternal happiness with the gift of friendship" With this there was an almighty bang and a body stood up in the cauldron.  "Sirius!!!!!" yelled Harry and ran towards him.  But Lupin blocked his way "No, Harry that's only his spirit if you touch him now he'll die again." Dumbledore interrupted "Quickly we must now give him his flesh body," Dumbledore whipped out some powdered unicorn horn, Lupin some Phoneix Feathers and  Mad-Eye some Kneazle eyes. Dumbledore yelled "Fawkes!"  The amazing bird flew right into the cauldron and burst into flames the ashes went everywhere .  Then Dumbledore, Lupin and Mad-Eye dropped in their ingredients there was aloud sizzle.  Then Dumbledore said, "Now we wait." He got to his feet and started to look for something on  the floor. "Ah." He said "There you are,"  He picked up fawkes who had just been reborn from the ashes and put him in his pocket.  "I thought he Fawkes was dead forever" said Harry feeling stupid. Lupin laughed. Then all of a sudden there was a noise like tyres squealing and Sirius stepped out of the cauldron...      

WHAT DO U THINK OF THE STORY SO FAR. WHAT DO YOU THINK WILL HAPPEN NEXT. LEAVE A GUESS....
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googl

"Sirius!!!" yelled Harry, "Harry!" you've no idea how good it is to see you again," said Sirius racing towards Harry with his arms open, "Yes, Yes I'm sure you're glad to see Sirius, so are we all, but they'll be plenty of time to have a reunion later, now we NEED to get out of here quickly because the Death Eaters ae coming." said Mad-Eye hurriedly.  All of a sudden  dumbledore whipped out his wand tapped the cauldron and said "Portus," He told them all to take hold of the cauldron and instantly they were back in Grimnauld Place. "It looks so different, so --- clean."  said Sirius amazed.  As Harry looked round he to saw it was much, much cleaner.  He didn't know why he hadn't noticed before.  Then Sirius suddenly said "How's Buckbeak?"  "Oh.... I'm afraid there was a slight accident  about a week ago" said Dumbledore sadly.

Sorry for the shortness of that pargraph...i'm running out of Ideas and just came up wit buck beak at the end...  I'll think about a new more exciting thing to follow next..
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Fawkes


pig

 yep great keep writing and what happened to buck beak? :'(

googl

Ah you'll just hav to wait and see PIG...LOL
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pig


googl

I'll do it asap but i'm kinda runnin out ofideas so I'll need to thinnk
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googl

more....

"You see, Sirius, Remus and Alastor were arguing about who should be on protection duty that night.  Remus said he had done it the last 2 days but Alastor said he couln't be bothered doing it...Anyway to cut a long story short BuckBeak got caught in between the fighting,  in his anger Lupin had accidentally hit a curse straight for Alastor instead it hit Buckbeak, Buckbeak was turned in to a chicken and then turned ito a goat.  Buckbeak was in shock, that force of a spell isn't good for an animal, however strong.  Within the hour buckbeak had died..."  Sirius started crying and said "He was a faithful animal and a faithful friend. Did u bury him?"  "Yes, in the back garden."  Lupin said respectfully.

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THANKS TO PIG FOR PART OF THE ABOVE IDEA MUCH APPRECIATED ;D

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Then suddenly there was a loud bang coming from the kitchen, in walked Fred, George, Ginny and Ron all covered in ash.  "You know Sirius you really need to buy a new cooker." said george laughing. Then out came Hermione and said "Welcome back, Sirius!"  Than without warning there was a massive explosion at the back of the small living room and in walked Voldomort flanked  on the left and the right by 10 Death Eaters.  Harry recognised them all  Malfoy, Macnair, Crabbe, Goyle.... "How, how did you get here?" spluttered Hermione.  "Ah thats a good question but they'll be plenty of time for talking later.  But first lets get rid of Dumbledore, Lucius I believe you have the non-spell thread?" "Yes, Sir." "Then tie up Dumbledore in that case." said an exasperated Voldomort. "What makes you think I'll let you?" said  Dumbledore.  "Oh just the fact that I'll kill Harry if you don't." said Voldomort slyly, pointing his wand at Harry.  Then with lighning fast reactions Dumbledore yelled "Silencio!!" silencing Voldomort and all the Death Eaters at once then he pulled the cord off Malfoy and tied up Voldomort.  Then he told everyone in the order that was there to round up the Death Eaters, so that he could transport them back to his office.  But suddenly Voldomort untied himself leapt up and fired a killing spell at Mad-Eye.  Dumbledore, distracted rushed over to help  him but he was to late, Mad-Eye was dead before he even hit the floor... :'(  Dumbledore in a burst of rage pulled himself up and  yelled "Pertrificus Totalus!!"  Voldomort ducked and fired a killing spell at Dumbledore, Fawkes flew in front of him and swallowed the spell whole, he burst into flames. Dumbledore fired another spell at Voldomort.  The two greatest wizards of the age were about to duel once more, resting on this battle was the difference between Evil ruling the world and good ruling the world. This the battle to end all battles........


MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH



Once again thanks to PIG for helpin me have the idea of Buckbeak
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Avril