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The Darkness unfolds

Started by Kiara Johnson, June 4, 2004, 08:28:27 AM

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Kiara Johnson


Ginny Weasly

need to know what happens! please please please? Finish it Kiara, I wanna read some more!
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Kiara Johnson

Thanks, will post more later.  Got something going n just now.   :-*

~Harry Potter~

Its great Kiara I can't wait
They say trust is like a mirror, you can fix it if its broke
But you can still see the crack in your reflection

Kiara Johnson

#34
Chapter 5




Max opened his eyes with a wince and a gasp of breath.  Harry stood next to him, holding a hand out to help him stand.  Harry didn't look hopeful.  He turned and looked over where Kiara, still laying next to Voldem0rt, still remained unmoving.

Max walked shakily over to her, JR was already knelt next to his mother, his eyes turned up to look at his father and he began backing away.

Max laid his hand on his son's shoulder.

"It's ok, you're forgiven, it wasn't your faul..."  His words trailed off as he looked at Kiara, her form seemed to be fading.

"No..."  Harry's words were soft and defeated.  Kiara was leaving.

"She's, not coming back, is she?"  Harry's voice interrupted the silence.  Max knelt down and held her form in his arms until she altogether vanished.

"I love you Kiara.  Don't be gone long."  Max said and smiled.

He knew that if she disappeared, she'd be back, had her body been left behind to be buried, that would have meant she'd left for good.  Max looked up at his son then to Harry.

"No, she'll be back, we just might have a long wait.  I think she wants to spend what time she's allowed on the other side.  I understand.  She'll be back."

Max pointed to the floor where Kiara had laid, burnt into the stone was a message from, Max thought, Sebastian.

Even in death, she will walk at your side.  Have no fears the watcher will return.

Voldem0rts body was taken form the dark fortress, all his Death Eaters, lost with out their leader, dispersed, disappeared from the sight of the Ministry to be rounded up by Max, Harry, Ginny and all the others now working for the Ministry of Magic.

Two years had passed since the fall of Voldem0rt and his Reich and Kiara had not returned.  Then, one night, after going to bed Max was woken up as he felt the soft lips of a long awaited kiss against his cheek.

"Hello.  Miss me?"

Max smiled.


What will Kiara's life on the other side, with Evan, be like?  Will Max cope with her being gone? What about the new face Max and JR saw in her at the end?  Was it just simply a trick of the light, was Kaira just raged or was it something else?  All those questions will be answered in my next story....In Death We Do Not Part.   ;)  Thanks you all for reading.

:devil:  Kiara  :devil:


Ginny Weasly

Loved it! Apsolutly loved it!  :-* Can't wait for the next one!
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

_Lavender_

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Kiara...that was... :othat was BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!! :o


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A new age. | A New definition. | A new life.
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Sabastian

^^What she said.  Good Job Kaira, I loved ti and you put me in, if only for a camio, I was there.  Thanks sexy.  
No person should be made to feel "Put Down" by you: avoid hurting others hearts as you would avoid a deadly poison.

Kiara Johnson

LOL Bastian, and thanks to all of you.  I've got the new one posted now, or atleast I have ti started.  ;)

Damion

*Stands and bows to Kiara's greatness*  

Once again Kiara, you have made my time reading a pleasure.  I can't wait to read the next part in your R/p series.


Friends are the ones who still love you even after you fart really loud in class.

AcId_BrOoZ

 ;D
nice, very good.
looks like you've got yourself a standing ovation in here, eh?
;D
"There are no flowers known at this time
There'll be no angels gracing their lives
Just these stark words I find
I'd show a smile but I'm too weak
I'd share with you could I only speak
Just how much this hurts me"
-A.F.I. 'This Time is Perfect'