Harry Potter : 24

[bluberfish]

I would like to think what people's opinions are on my idea for my own FanFiction of Harry Potter Six. It would be titled - Harry Potter : 24

For those of you that do not know, 24 is a program that is viewed in real time. There are 24 episodes, each take up an hour of a day and each episode is an hour long.

I intend to make a Harry Potter story where the whole event happen over 24 hours. The story would focus on a terrible war. But this time, enemies will have to unite in order to save the wizarding world.

Good idea?
Bad idea?

[Fawkes]

I think it's a good idea, especially when enmies unite! :thumbsup:

[bluberfish]

I have just done a rough draft of the story and it's really complicated!!!! I have done my first few paragraphs of it. Please give me any ideas/ways to change it. thanks.

first few paragraphs:

01.00.00

A cloaked figure ran along the river bank. It was almost midnight and there were no muggles in sight. The figure removed it's wand from its pocket and stopped. It then looked over its shoulder a final time. The area was deserted; it was safe to use magic.

"Caranet!" The mysterious figure shouted, pointing the wooden stick in its hand towards its chest. There was a bright blue flash and it felt like a completely new being. Suddenly, it began to cough and splutter. The spell had worked. It put my wand back in its pocket and dived straight into the water, taking a deep breath and putting it's newly acquired water-lungs to use.

01.06.32

Not too far away, Harry Potter was sleeping. He awoke instantly and looked around. He was in his dormitory at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, at which he was in his sixth year. There seemed to be nothing strange about and all of his friends seemed to be sound asleep. Then why had he woken up so suddenly in the night?

Instantly, Harry felt a strong urge to remove his wand from the cabinet next to his four-poster bed, just to be safe. As he was doing this, he heard a noise. He was unsure what the sound was. He couldn't describe it. However, he knew that he noise meant bad news.

He jumped up from his bed and with his wand in his hand. He made his way down the circular stairs that lead to Gryffindor common room.

[googl]

Kl pleasee continue

[Ginny Weasly]

this is cool, I don't think anybodys ever done it this way. I like it!