this is my first, please read and psot thanks :-)

[Hermione_Granger]

i know that, i can read *lol* i just changed it, cuz i have sumthing planned.
(i planned to change the last name anyways.....)
so don't wory, or fret, i have it ALL planned!!!
:-)

[emily824]

o ok...r u going to post more tonight?  ???

[Hermione_Granger]

i love tom marvolo riddle
i love tom marvolo riddle
back off hes mine!
back off hes mine!
i love t.m.r.
i love t.m.r.
smg+tmr=LUV :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)

ok, with the story...........(i love tom marvolo riddle! please back off, were dating, and i also mean the guy who plays him. so please leave us alone, we r very much in love.)

GRYFFINDOR! all the gryffindors clapped and cheeered (at least, the boys did) and the other houses booed.
hermione looekd huffy, and when the emily girl sat down beside her, she got up and tried to look for another seat. before she could sit back down, guys raced and pushed to get to that seat. she fell, and she took out her wand, looking very red, put then quickl;y put it back in her pocket as she caught sight of a teacher strolling along the table.
ron had gotten her old spot, so herminoe sat beside harry.
'hi' harry said. she ignroed him.
'listne - its not what u think - !'
'listen, i've lived long enough to know guys, harry, just look at ron!' herminoe snapped. ron was drooling over the white linen table cloth, and emily handed him a napkin, asking him if he ahd sum kinda drooling disorder, cuz thats all she sees him do. he went terribly red.
dumbledore got up to say his speech.
'there will be two new teachers here. prof. hagrid has something important to do. so, please allow me to introdue, the new care of magical creatures teacher.
professor bowen!' everyone clapped. he was skinny,
with dark golden-brown hair, an un-clean-shaven face,
his hair was standing on end, kind of spikey, and his robes were dangling open, where they reaveled blue jeans with rips in them and a old, red checkered shirt. he looked poor. but the girls didnt seem to have mind. a lot of them had grazed looks about them, and harry heard, with surprise, on seventh gryffindir girl say
"oo, he looks so hot! especially with the poor look, and that sexy grin!' herminoe was staring at the teacher.
'and, allow me to introduce the new d.a.d.a. teacher,
professor sirius black.

[emily824]

OMG...OMG... This is sooo good!  ;D

[emily824]

POST MORE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!1 :'(

[Hermione_Granger]

gee, emily, i now officialy claim u my number one fan, lol! i bet u readers weren't expecting that, were you?
hahahahahaha!
ps - i luv t.m.r.! hes mine, so please back off, we are dating. thank you.

ok, story.......................................

everyone gasped. they whispered. and then the screaming began. harry caught a glimpse of cho. she looked very surprised. ron harry and hermione got up.
'SHUT UP! ITS ALL RIHT!' ron roared, and only sum ppl fell silent. herminoes bad mood had taken an awful swing, and she kicked the table very hard, screamed the loudest, and everyone fell silent. even dumbledore looekd mildly surprised at her odd behavior.
'now. i would like to explain to you. peter pettigrew is not dead. he disguised himself as a rat, staying with a wizard family for some time. until prof black got out of azkaban, he got worried. sirius black has been cleared. the ministry of magic does not believe that peter is alive, htough he is, and he is the one who brought lord voldemort back to power.'
almost everyone flinched at his name.
'sirius black did not kill those muggles. peter did. now, i assume everyone will treat him like every other teacher here at hogwarts. thank you.'
evryone went to bed, tlaking and shaking. no one believe that sirius was innocent, and this brought the three back to earth. hermione seemed to have forgotten about the girls, and harry couldn't have been more happier. sum other ppl were talking about gardere. even when ron mentioned his name, hermione went misty-eyed.
they went off to bed. hermione turned to the right, muttering 'gardere........gardere......hmmm'
harry went to sleep.
it was pitch black. harry was sitting in a cicular room, shaking. suddenly, a white door appeared from no where. the door creaked open. BANG! something big hit something else, and harry bolted awake. he saw someone at the door. harry remembered his dream when voldemort said he would get harry when he least expected it. harry gulped.
'voldemorts in my room...or one of his death eaters....' thought harry. he climbed down his ladder quietly. the figure was still there. its hands were out. harry picked up his wand. he crept infront of the figure. he raised his wand, ready to hex voldemort, or the death eater. just then dean and seamus lamps flickered on., they screamed.

[emily824]

THANKS FOR NAMING ME UR # ONE FAN! I LOVE THE STORY!CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!1 :-[

[Hermione_Granger]

how cum emily is the only one who posts? i know about 121 ppl read my story, but ppl, please post, i wanna know what u think!!! ppl, what do u think of my story? should i write the rest of the hp series by myself (like, write the rest of my fan fic series) i have excellent ideas! i'll write a 6th and 7th too, ok, ppl? PLEEEEEEEEEEASE POST! and also, please check out
my *crappy cuz i need more links, but dont worry im getting sum* hp site,
www.expage.com/crazee4hp
please and thank you.

[emily824]

i saw ur site, it was ok...but ur story's great! please post more, and i'll get more ppl to post on it....what does gardere mean?

[Sway]

great story... Keep going

[emily824]

hey sway....see shelby, u got fans, though, i'm her# 1 lol* that's cuz it's a great story, and u put me in it. so when will my name be corrected by the way lol* post...post!

[Hermione_Granger]

i think your hooked on ALL the stories on this site....lol! your name is EVERYWHERE on the fan fictions! ok, continuing............... (im adding stuff to my site, dont worry, it wont be that crappy for long!)

i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
anyways................. ya, the story.......

dean and seamus jummped up, dean witha  krowbar in his hand, and seamus with a - sock. neville woke upm then gulped, and hid underneath his covers. ron rolled over and said
'c'mon, u can have a better weapon than that seamus......HOLY ****!' ron jumped up, and grabbed the krobar.
'SIRIUS BLACK!' dean roared.
'SHUT UP, DEAN!' harry yelled.  neville looed up in horror at ron and harry, surprised how scary they could be.
'and i thought hermione was frightening at dinner!' neivlle gulped. even sirius laughed, which made the three boys jump.
'congratulatins,  sirius!' harry grinned. sirius pulled harry and ron into a tight,brotherly embrace, then let go. he looekd at the other three boys, and said calmly
'the only person  iwant to kill is u-no-who and his supporters, especially wormtail.' the three boys shook, and laughed nervously, as tho he may pounce.
'ya, im surprised i got the job. took awhile, but im under close watch. the ministry will be dropping in, no doubt.' ron and harry grinned.
'so....hermione tells me she's a prefect.' sirius said casually.
'what?' ron and harry said. she would obviously be prefect, but she hadn;t told them.
'ya, i talked to her when u guys were ignoring her. wanna go visit her?'
so they crept to the girls doratories, ron hoping that he would catch emily walknig with a see-threw nightdress on.
they creake dopen the door, and the screamed. parvati and lavender were wearing green masks, braiding eachothers hair. herminoe was reading. she gaped at them. the girls had hardly anything on, just night dresses, and they each turned pink.

[emily824]

that's so funny! i have to write more on my fna fic tommorrow.in mine, i'm harry's long lost cousin and sirius and i r really good friends! i don't mined if u take the idea of sirius and i as friends!*lol* but, when r pple gonna know what my real name is? my real last name...

[Hermione_Granger]

parvati and lavender quickly put on their bath robes, and
hermione covered her bare legs with her blankets.
'sorry, ron, but u have the wrong dornitry! the sixth
years are just a few doors down! and harry, i'm
surprised, i didn't think u were that dumb! cho
is in ravenclaw!' hermione snarled. harry noticed
where ron was looking, and it was wear hermione's
legs had been. he shook himself.
'uh- s-s-sorry, m-mr b-b-black, we, er, were
just, um, having sum fun, please m-m-mr black,
d-don't k-k-k-kill us!' parvati said, lavender nodding
behind her back. sirius roared with laughter, and
so did the other boys. parvati looked disgurntled,
and dean and seamus, who woudln't miss taking
a peek, laughed too. herminoe got up, and looked
as though she could smack them all,
even sirius who was acting like a fifteen year old.
'congrats, sirius, now, can u boy sleave?' the boys,
still snickering, left. they conversation that followed
afterwards surprised harry.
'best legs, next to emily and fleur, she has, that granger!'
dean said, nodding. neville looked odd, as tbhough
not wanting to addmitt he could sink as low as the
othe rboys and talk about what they had seen.
'oh ya, skinny and long, she sure is growing...' ron
said dreamily. harry stared at him.
'mm hmm....and lavender and parvati in those
tiny night gowns!' the boys (sirius had gone) orared with
laughter, even harry had to admitt herminoes legs were
nice and paravti looed stunningly pretty, even with a mask
on. this was the life...except he didn't want to sink
too low.

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sorry, emily, if u feel offended, i'm just trying to make u one of those perfect girls, if u know jwhat i mean, and ill change your last name to wat it is, all right? :-)

[emily824]

oh no! not a perfect girl! i'm nothing like that!i thought that i was a5th year like the others :'(