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Nineteen Just Held Such Better Days :Narcissa's Story:

Started by Hathor, July 15, 2002, 07:56:25 AM

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Hathor

Hope you like my fanfic! (It's posted at another site, don't worry, I'm not stealing!! lol)

Draco lay on his bed unhappily, watching the sun travel through cracks in the thick stone walls of the Malfoy mansion. He was sleepy, after staying up all night.
The evening before, Lucius Malfoy had threatened Draco once more. Draco often found it in his best interest to stay up all night, just in case Lucius decided to carry out his threat. But either his father was too drunk or too tired himself to come and beat his son, so around five o'clock that morning, Draco had tried to fall back asleep.
But now the sun was creeping into his room, and he was finding it harder and harder to close his eyes. Finally he bowed to the inevitable and got out of bed.
"Good morning, Draco dear," Naricissa said quietly, not looking up from Witch Weekly.
"Morning, Narcissa." he returned.
Lucius came down the stairs; his eyes were puffy and red and his face was blotched. Draco laughed to himself. So his father had probably tried to come to his room . . . and he couldn't find his way, the old drunk.
"Why do you read these trash magazines?" snarled Lucuis loudly, ripping the Witch Weekly out of his wife's hands. He looked at the cover; Sirius Black was flashing a handsome smile at him. "Vile!" he shouted in disgust. "The man gets out of prison and suddenly he's the most handsome wizard on the planet!" Lucius eyed her angrily. "I don't want you reading these smut magazines anymore," he growled.
Naricissa nodded vaguely, and returned to her breakfast. Draco scowled. He hated seeing his mother give in like this, but both of them knew it was far better than allowing Lucius to lose his temper. He only did it at home; in public places he was the epitome of calm and composure. But once the great mahogany door of the Malfoy mansion closed, it was the opening of a more deadly power. And it hurt Narcissa far more than Draco would ever know.
Narcissa climbed the winding staircase up to her tiny alcove.
She reclined in her chair, in the only room in the house that was all hers, and did what she did every day.
Wish for what could have been.

"Will you be requiring anything, Miss?" asked the attendant politely.
"No, thank you," responded Narcissa, waving him away. She turned to view her small hotel room, and laughed softly, taking in all of the Muggle furnishings. It was a beautiful hotel, no doubt.
Lucius would hate it.
She shuddered, and pushed away the thoughts of her faraway fiance. Narcissa often tried to remember why she was marrying him, but it would always end with a talk from her mother, saying how she was never going to get married if she kept doubting herself.
Naricissa looked over at the bedside table. There was a tell-a-phone, and a Bible. Narcissa flipped through the pages amusedly. Muggles . . . what they would create to avoid magic. There was a sudden knock on the door and Narcissa jumped. She walked over to the door and opened it.
A young man, perhaps a year older than Narcissa, smiled brightly at her. He was tall and lanky, with red hair and bright blue eyes.
"Hullo, miss! May I be of service?" His eyes darted around the room and landed on the cage containing her owl, Felicity. "d**n Muggles. They're so lazy they insist on room service."
Narcissa breathed a sigh of relief. "So you're a wizard . . ." She glanced at his nametag. "Jack Weasley?"
"That's me."
"What are you doing working in a Muggle hotel?"
"It's an entertaining job." he said lightly.
Narcissa happened to glance at his arm, which seemed a bit strange. He caught her eye and smiled. "Oh yes, I was in Quidditch before. Got hit by a Bludger, though. My grip on the bat's never been the same since."
"Wait- you're Whomping Weasley!"
Jack grinned. "That I am, Miss."
"Oh! How silly of me not to recognize you before! I'm sorry."
"Think nothing of it, Miss-"
"Narcissa. You can just call me Crissy."
Jack looked at her strangely. "Where'd you get that nickname?"
"Well, my mother hates-I mean hated-" She caught herself, feeling the uncomfortable past tense in her mouth, "names that are more than two syllables, and she thought "Cissy" would be a bit of an unfortunate name. So Crissy it is."
Jack laughed, a charming, deep laugh. "All right then, Crissy. Is there anything I can get for you?"
"You could tell me why you're working at some oblivious Muggle hotel."
Jack gave a her a look of mock anger. "Oblivious Muggle hotel! My dear, this is THE Muggle hotel! The Savoy! It's the most famous hotel in all England!"
Crissy laughed appreciatively. "Okay, Jack. Fine, why are you working at the Savoy?"
"Well, my wand arm got tore up pretty badly, and the doctor who fixed it wasn't so hot, so it's never really completely healed. And I couldn't be a Beater anymore."
"So you became a hotel attendant? Couldn't you work for the Ministry?"
"Nah. I'd end up really bored and set fire to something." They laughed together.
Jack smiled michieviously, "So, what brings you here, Crissy?"
"Well, I'm traveling through London, and I'm planning to meet my fiance."
Jack made a face. "Your fiance? You're only nineteen!"
"Yes, well . . . my father insisted on arranged marriage, and I love him and trust his judgement too much to say no. My mum died about a month ago."
"Oh, I'm sorry."
"Anyway, so my dad's really special to me. If this is what makes him happy, so be it."
"You're mad! Love is not a tool! It's an emotion!"
Crissy snorted. "Love is always a tool!"
Jack shook his head in wonderment. "So young. So cynical! Who is your fiance?"
"Lucius Malfoy."
Jack scowled. "That slimy git?"
"Hey!" Crissy punched him lightly on the arm, and Jack laughed.
"But seriously, do you love him?"
Crissy looked down at the floor. "Yes."
"You're lying."
Crissy's head snapped back up. "Excuse me?"
"When you lie, you look down."
Crissy stuttered for awhile. "Well-er-so! It's none of your business anyway!"
Jack gave a fake gasp. "Excusez-moi! Ve ver haffing such a vunderful conversatshun and just vook vat you've done vit it!"
"Since when did you develop the accent of a French man living in Russia?"
Jack laughed. "Fine! If you don't want to talk to me. But here, take this. Just in case."
He pressed a tiny sheet of paper into her hand, kissed it, and winked at her before walking away down the hall. Crissy stared at her hand for a long time, like the kiss was still there. Finally she opened it to reveal a note scrawled on a tiny bit of sticky paper on her palm.

"NARCISSA! WHERE ARE YOU?"
"Up here, Lucius."
Lucius came up the stairs to Narcissa's attic room, panting like an angry dragon. "Why do you insist on sitting up here in this stuffy tower?"
"I like it up here."
"Well, I don't. See if I care if you suffocate and die."
"What do you want?"
"I'm going away for a few days. Maybe a week."
"Where are you going now?"
"None of your business, wench!" he shouted, raising his fist to strike her. She flinched, and he continued.
"I have things to attend to. Draco will remain here with you. Be sure he isn't allowed to fly, visit with friends, or go to Hogsmeade."
"Why not?"
"Because, Narcissa. He's a spoiled brat. He needs some discipline in his life."
"All right, Lucius."
"Goodbye, dear." He leaned forward, very close to Narcissa's face, and when most couples would have kissed, he whispered in her ear, "You know what will happen if you leave."
And with that he Apparated and was gone.

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Thanks for all of your replies. youve been soo nice I'm going to add chapter two!! Lolz. Here it is!

"Draco! Draco, come up here!" Narcissa shouted down the long flights of stairs.
"What-Narcissa-" he panted, after climbing the ten flights.
"Let's go out. If I stay one minute longer in this mansion I think I'll scream."
Draco smiled wickedly. "We haven't been to Bangers in ages."

Crissy paced back and forth in her hotel room, picking up the phone, then putting it down. Picking it up, putting it down. She debated calling Jack. What if he wasn't there? What if Lucius was trying to call her at the very second?
At that Crissy made up her mind. She picked up the phone and dialed the number written on the note Jack had given her.
"Hello?" asked a barely-awake voice on the other line.
"Hi, is Jack Weasley there?"
"No, this is Arthur."
"Arthur? What are you doing at Jack's house?"
"I'm his brother."
"His brother? But only Jack knows how to use Muggle phones."
"So he taught me." There was a weak laugh on the other end of the line. "Is there a reason you're calling so late at night?"
"Oh! I'm sorry, Arthur. But is Jack there?"
"Well, he's asleep, I'm afraid."
"Oh . . ."
"I could wake him up if you wanted."
"No, that's okay. I have to call Lucius, anyway."
"Lucius? Lucius Malfoy?" he said in a stunned voice.
"Yeah," Crissy said tiredly. "He's my fiance."
"Your fiance?!" he asked. "I'm so sorry!"
"So am I." Crissy muttered. "Well Arthur, it was lovely meeting you. Goodbye!"
"Bye!"

"Jack! Jack, wake up!"
"Huh? What?"
"Guess who's getting married?" Arthur said, practically dancing from one foot to the other in front of the sofa that served as Jack's bed.
Jack propped himself up on his elbows and rubbed his eyes sleeply. He yawned. "Yes, I know, you're getting married to Molly, I haven't forgotten."
"No, no! Lucius Malfoy! He's getting married!" Arthur said.
"Gee, you sound so excited," said Jack. "Look, I already knew that. Is there a reason you woke me up at-" he checked the clock- "quarter to twelve to tell me this? I have to go to work in three hours, and I'd like to get some sleep here."
"I was just talking to Narcissa Malfoy, and she said that they were getting married!"
"Why were you- WHY DIDN'T YOU COME WAKE ME UP?" he shouted indigniantly, suddenly fully awake.
Arthur's lips curled into a smile. "She said that she didn't want to wake you." He began wagging his finger in Jack's face. "An engaged woman! Jack, I'm shocked!"
Jack punched him and knocked his hand away. "Shut up, we're not doing anything."
"Yet," snorted Arthur.

Draco was slicking back his hair in front of the washroom mirror. He loved it when his father went on these trips. Lucius hadn't gone on one of his Death Eater killing sprees in ages, and Draco was almost glad for it. Satisfied with his hair, he walked down into the parlor.
Narcissa was standing there, her long, white-blond hair wavy down to her waist, vivid silver eyes dancing with mirth and marked with liner.
Anyone spotting the two together would guess them to be brother and sister. And it was true; they almost were. Narcissa was only twenty years older than Draco, only thirty-four, and Draco, of course, looked at least five years beyond his age of fifteen.
"You look disturbingly handsome, Draco. Why don't you have a girlfriend again?"
"Narcissa," he smirked, "you may look my age but you're still my mother."
Narcissa groaned good naturedly and tossed some Floo powder into the fire.
"Bangers!" she cried into the emerald flames.

She was greeted by loud music and dim lighting except for the occasional strobe.
"Crissy!" shouted someone she never thought she'd see again.

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Harry Potter and the Signs of the Dark Lord

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This is sooo good!  I haven't read a story like this yet!  Puleeease keep going!  :o Who is it?   ??? ???
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Thanks everyone SOOOOOO much for your replies.
Here's Chapter Three!!

"Crissy, dah-ling! How ah you?"
Narcissa grinned widely. "Hey, Nigel. Haven't seen you you in over fifteen years. What have you been up to?"
"Za use-ual. Trying to zave zeese silly fools from zeir muy terrible hair."
"Drop the accent, Nigel. I know you're not French."
"Aww, Crissy. It's so great to have you back."
They hugged warmly, when a sarcastic voice behind them said, "Good lord, Narcissa. If you're going to cheat on Lucius, at least do it with a man."
"Draco! Don't be rude!"
Nigel smiled at him. "Boy, I am more woman than you'll ever have and more man than you'll ever be."
Narcissa laughed, and Nigel joined her. Draco flushed bitterly and mumbled something about wanting a drink, and ambled off.
"You know, you shouldn't have done that. He's got Lucius's pride."
"And your looks. Remind me again why he doesn't have a girlfriend?"
"Because he's Lucius Malfoy's son."
Nigel laughed. "How could I forget?"
"How goes the hairstyling?" Narcissa asked.
"Business as usual. Most witches are convinced that they look good until I get a hold of them!" He smiled wickedly.
"Oh Nigel, that's so like you. Why don't you go back to murdering the self-esteems of Muggles? They all loved your 'magic touch'."
"Ahh, stupid Ministry of Magic caught up with me. Now I'm stuck with witches again and in the dredges of magical hairstylists."
"You poor thing."

"What do you mean, 'yet'?"
"Oh, come off it, Jack." said Arthur playfully, punching his younger brother on the shoulder. "We all know you're a womanizer."
"That's not true!" he cried indigniantly.
"Hmmm, then what happened to Susie, Jenn, Michaela, Louise, Victoria, Maggie-"
"All right! All right! So I live a little bit!"
Arthur snorted again. "Understatement of the year."

There was a knock on the door, and Crissy jumped. It was four o'clock in the morning. Oh well, she hadn't slept much anyway. She walked over to the tiny peephole and saw Jack standing outside.
"Who is it?" she asked in a nasal French accent.
"Service for the misses."
Crissy opened the door a crack. Smiling mischieviously, she asked, "What kind of service?"
"Any kind she desires," whispered Jack. Crissy's eyes widened a bit, and she slammed the door.
"OWWW!" howled Jack in pain. "You slammed the door on my foot!"
Crissy gasped. "I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Come in, I'll get some ice or something, I don't know what these Muggles do . . ."
Jack wobbled in unsteadily, leaning heavily on Crissy's extended right arm.
"Thanks," he said weakly. "You know, a simple 'no' would have sufficed . . ."
"I'm really sorry. I'm not used to that kind of thing, you know. The only guy who I'm used to is Lucius, and sometimes that's the only way to deal with him. Here, sit on the bed."
Jack winced as shifted onto the bed sideways and lifted his foot up onto a nearby chair. "Supposedly elevation helps. Do you mind getting that ice? When you come back you can tell me all about Lucius."
"Oh really? Gee, thanks." said Crissy sarcastically. She went to get the ice. On the way back, she bumped into the back of a tall, dark-haired man.
"Hello, Narcissa." said an oily voice.
Lucius.

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Harry Potter and the Signs of the Dark Lord

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Oo! :o Oo! :o I think I know who it is!  Love it very much!  Plllleeeaaasssssseeee (lol) do go on!  ;D
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"Lucius! What are you doing here?"
The figure turned. "Hello, Narcissa. I'm doing fine, thanks. How are you?"
Crissy laughed, masking her surprise and and anger in a single swift manuever. "I'm fine, Lucius. Do you have a room?"
"A room?"
"Yes, a rented room that you sleep in?"
"Well, of course I do. Not that this is particularly pleasing. I hate Muggle hotels."
"Why don't you go to your room and wait there? I'll come visit you."
"Sure-what's with all the ice?"
"Um-drinks?"
Lucius laughed. "A woman after my own heart."
Crissy forced a laugh and scrambled off.
Lucius watched her departing figure with interest.
She was hiding something, and he intended to find out what.
Sorry kinda short but I have to go!!!
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*laughs* My my, it said Lucius right under it!  I didn't notice it.  I feel really stupid now!  :-[ :D
Too.... short.... need.... more...!!!!
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Be happy! :D

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Harry Potter and the Signs of the Dark Lord

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