[u]My[/u]first fan fic:Harry Potter meets barry trotter and kills him!!muhahaha

[emily824]

ron....please up date ASAP!!!!!

[ronweazley122]

I can't think of the next chapter.....
]Thinking.....Thinking.....Thinking....
thinking......thinking.....THIS IS 2 HARD!!!![/color]

[emily824]

well, why don't u start the next chapter as like, when the weeks go by and it's time to go to hogwarts? does that help at all? :-\

[ronweazley122]

a little bit!thanx!

[emily824]

welcome hun!

[ronweazley122]

*laughs*

[emily824]

hope that my suggestion helped! i really want u to keep writing! ur a great writter and i'm not just saying that....

[ronweazley122]

*blushes*thankyou!

[emily824]

*blushes and smiles*

[Lily_Evans]

I should have read earlier!

Keep going!

[ronweazley122]

I'll try...

[ronweazley122]

chptr.4:2 letters from hogwarts?!

  Hermione had arrived yesterday and had dinner with them.after dinner they went to bed.
The next morning harry was awoken by the sound of pig chirping happily.harry yawned, reached for his glasses and sat up and stretched his arms lazily.He saw that ron had obviosly gotten up for breakfast.He yawned again and went down for breakfast.mrs weasley turned around and smiled.

"Good morning,harry dear"Harry smiled back and replyed,

"good morning,mrs.weasley"harry sat down at the table with ron and fred and george.ron said,

"You got two letters"he handed them to harry smiling.Harry smiled back and said,"thanks"He opened the letter and saw it was the letter from hogwarts and read it.Next,he opened the second letter and read aloud

Dear harry,
I heard about you hosting an exchange student.and the headmaster of the school has informed me,that you may
meet him at the train station,and don't forget to do it.,
dumbledore

"You never told us you were hosting an exchange student,whats his name?"ron said in suprise.harry replied,

"barry trotter"fred and george looked shocked.ron dropped his toast.george said with a suprised face,

"Barry Trotter?!I heard about him!he's been held back for a long time!he's like .....twenty-two!"

Harry was suprised."how did u know that?!"fred said with a odd face,

"he goes to hogwash!thats the second most popular shcool.....but,it's got some problems.harry didn't want to press on the subject so when hermione and ginny came he smiled and said,

"morning!"

[emily824]

absolutly love it!!!!!!!!!! please continue! ;D

[ronweazley122]

Hermione looked at harry,smiled and said,"Morning!"ginny,just blushed.fred and george snickered.Ginny blushed even more deeply,and scurried back upstairs.Mrs.weasley said,sternly,"You really should be nicer to Ginny...."

Fred said innocently,"so we laughed at her this once..."

mrs.weasley said shaking her haed,"once?oh really...well, we need to get our shopping done today....we'll go at 12:00 to diagon alley..."

"Okay,mum.."fred and george said together,with a mouth full of bacon.

"How many times have i told u not to talk with your-"

"mouth full..."george interupted.Harry sat silently eating,and when he finished mrs.weasley chimed in,

"would you like more,harry dear?"
harry said politley,

"no,thanx,I couldn't eat another bite!"
mrs.weasley smiled.

hows that? :-\

[emily824]

wonderful!  ;)   keep going