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Life and Death

Started by goblet_fulla_fire, June 24, 2005, 12:39:08 PM

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_Lavender_

Mmm. I really am, liking. Please comtinue. :)
A new age. | A New definition. | A new life.
Hi. My name is •Lavender•

LavyBrown

Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

"F***, if she's dead. She better wake up right now or else I'm gonna kill you!" Then the crate on Karen moved. She got up and groaned. Now Goblet realized what happened, the spell hit the crate and it fell on Karen. But that didn't make Goblet feel any better. Karen went up to Goblet, who was now holding the death eater's neck and the his other arm on the knife that is in the thigh, moving it around painfully if the death eater's hand gets to close too it. "What are you doing? Get that knife out of him! He's a human being!" yelled Karen, pulling on the knife as the death eater screamed in pain. But Goblet was holding the knife even tighter. "STOP IT, KAREN! You take that knife out and it might kill him from all the pain that he is taking. BACK OFF KAREN!" Karen did what she was told, anger tears in her eyes. "Now," said Goblet calmfully, "how many death eaters are out there?" "Ehh, twenty...five." "D***." said Goblet. "Why are you the only one here?" Goblet asked demandedly. "Go to h***, Keith," Goblet moved the knife up towards the mid-stomach. "AAARRRRRRGH!!!!" "DO YOU WANT TO SEE IF THIS KNIFE CAN REACH YOUR RIBCAGE!?" The death eater repied" We...heard more than one person...in the basement. We figured...that you called for help and dozens...were...already in the room by now. We drew straws to see...who would go in first. Looks like my buddies didn't back me up." the death eater squeeled. "The death eaters are outside." the death eater was slowly making for Goblet's wand, which was hanging loosely from Goblet's pocket. "Well, what do we have to do to make you stay put? Looks like we are going to have to kill you" said Goblet. "That...won't be neccessary, Keith." said the death eater smiling. "What can you do?" asked Goblet smiling back. "This. AVADA KADARVRA!!!"

(the story ain't over)

LavyBrown

Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

                There was a flash of green light. Karen backed into the wall, wide eyed. Goblet however, was amazingly alive. "You're supposed to be dead!" Goblet got up,"You are talking to the wrong person." Karen looked down to see the corpse of a death eater, with a look of terror on Karen and the death eater. "What did you do?! Why did you kill him?! He was still a human being, death eater or not!" said Karen, crying her eyes out. "I didn't do anything. If he had used his wand, it might have worked, except I felt my wand going out of my pocket, if anybody uses it but me, the spell always backfires." "So WHAT?! YOU COULD HAVE STOPPED IT!!! YOU ARE EVIL! I WANT OUT, LET ME OUT!" Karen yelled.
                Karen went to the door and closed it behind her. "KAREN WAIT!" but it was too late. Goblet went through the door and heard a window break...she was outside. Goblet heard dozens of death eaters yell stupefy. Goblet got out of the basement and looked outside the broken window. One of the death eaters was carrying the fainted body of Karen. Then the death eater layed down Karen near the whole group of death eaters and used a spell to wake her up. "ALL RIGHT," one of the death eaters yelled," THROW ALL YOUR WANDS DOWN TO US AND WALK TOWARD US SLOWLY! THE LONGER YOU TAKE, THE LONGER THIS GIRL SUFFERS!" All of the death eaters were performing the cruciatus curse on Karen, 25 people. "S***! S***! S***!" Goblet thought to himself. Goblet had no choice, if he stayed, Karen will die, if he goes out, Karen will not suffer pain when she dies.
                Goblet threw his wand at the death eaters and walked slowly toward the death eaters, feeling braver than he ever felt in his whole life.  The death eaters stopped the spell. "Well, where is the rest of you?" asked one of the death eaters. "There is only the two of us. The death eater that came in will never come back out. Send one your people in there. There is nobody else in the house that can help me." said Goblet. One of the death eaters told another one to look in the house. The death eater came back out with the bloody knife in his hand. "The kid killed Emerson with this." The death eater jammed the knife in Goblet's hamstring and Goblet yelled in pain and fell down on his knees. "Now, we are obeying the dark lord's orders. Prepare to die." said one of the death eaters. This was it. When he killed the death eater, there was only one. Now there are twenty five, and Goblet was wandless. "Goblet," Karen started,"I am sorry I called you evil and everything." said Karen with tears all over her face. "I know." responded Goblet. "Karen, is it? Say your prayers." said one of the death eaters. Goblet heard a distant yell. But he knew that doesn't matter anymore. "Avada Kadarvra!" Karen fell back, with a expreesion of terror on her face. There was no doubt in Goblet's mind that Karen was now dead. "Don't be sad, Keith. You will meet her again. Avada Kadarv-" he was cut off by somebody. "EXLEMPRI ENMATON!!!"

goblet_fulla_fire

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                     Everything that surrounded him was a blur, a big white blur. White? Goblet felt a shockwave and he fell face flat knocking him unconscious. When Goblet woke up. He saw a single man, dressed in solid white, even wearing a white cloak, standing in front of him. Who was it? Goblet didn't have a clue what was going on. Judging by the man's appearance, he definently wasn't a death eater. "Get up, Keith" said the man. He recognized this voice, who could it be? No...it wasn't- "Yes Keith, it's me, your brother, Mithos. Goblet rubbed his eyes. His brother was tall, taller than he was, had solid black hair, in his 20's, and he seemed really strong and ripped. "But, where have you been? Mom and dad are worried sick." asked Goblet repetively. Goblet just remained sitting there, shocked. "Keith, what you did today was heroic." said Mithos. "What-were you just watching the whole thing?" asked Goblet. "Yes, I did. I was also the one who told the death eaters that you were here." replied Mithos. Goblet was dumbstruck, his brother, tried to kill him? "W-why, Mithos? I am your brother. It's me Keith!" said Goblet. Mithos started speaking,"No fatal harm was ever meant to come to you, brother. Rest, Keith. I will explain everything." Goblet just sat there. He didn't know if his brother was hostile or friendly.
           "Keith, I killed a lot of death eaters, more than you might think. One death eater, placed a curse on me. A curse that death will come to all of my family. He used a rather complex curse that even probably Dumbledore couldn't perform. I killed him. I thought that all of my family would be all right. How stupid I was. I didn't even check on my family. I learned that a week later, aunt Jane and her husband were killed. I thought it was just a coincidence. Then the rest of the family went to the funeral, everybody except me, you, mom, and dad. The death eater came to the funeral as well and killed everybody that was there. He learned that we weren't there, and went after us. When he came for you first, you know what happened. That death eater you killed, was also the one I killed, the one that placed the curse on me. Now, he's dead. The curse is off. I learned a power during my...secret travels. A power I think you should have, if you are worthy. Judging by all the actions you did, you are more than worthy." explained Mithos. "Take a look around you." Goblet didn't even realize that all the death eaters are dead. He even forgot that there was a knife in his leg. He looked down at the dead body of Karen, but she was still breathing. "Keith, I used a charm on one of deaths eater's wand. That charm made the avada kadarvra spell, rather, incomplete. Karen is just unconscious. That spell I used, killed every single death eater here." said Mithos. He picked up Karen. Now I need to go, brother. I know you have many questions, but they will be answered another day. Now, remember when I used to turn into a gerbil and you a tiger, and you looked more fearsome by comparison? Let's do that now, quickly. I need to be leaving soon."
              Goblet did as he was told, without question. He turned into a tiger and growled. Mithos however didn't turn into a gerbil. He turned into something bigger, MUCH bigger. He turned into an enormous demon, a white one with dual golden battle axes. He shot out a big white beam into the air. Goblet looked like a harmless rat. Both of them turned into thier original forms. "I want to you to learn this power, Keith." Goblet was speechless. "Keith, this power is the summoning of The Defender of the Heavenly Gate Demon. I want you to have it." Mithos gave Keith a white gassly sphere, and it immediately shot into Goblet's heart. Goblet was rolling on the ground in pain. "Goodbye Keith, we will meet again." And Mithos hovered off to the distance. 

                                                                   (((( :::: The End :::: ))))

Please tell me what you think of my story? I don't think I did too good on the ending.

goblet_fulla_fire

Just reminder that don't hold back if you criticize this.

LavyBrown

now I said from the start that I lovedit and the ending made no diffence. In fact it was a very good ending and everything leading up to it made it that more enjoyable. But just to make you feel good cause that's how you are

*evil voice* I hated it every last thing I mean Karen please such a winer. And that ending sucked(not really)


*normal voice* Anyway I loved it and you better write another one fast.
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

I can't think of another one, need ideas! Too much pressure! *ends up in an insane asylum, with an internet connection!*

LavyBrown

Fine I'll start one it will be an rp
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

I will participate. You know this was originally a rp? But I just did a story instead because it was all laid out for me. And the rp, well I don't think it may lead where I want to in the story if you know what I mean.

LavyBrown

That's the beauy off it you never now where someone might take. My sister said that it takes a real man to give up some of his power.lolz
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

He didn't give it up, just shared it. I am going to think of a another piece of the story. hmmm :-\

LavyBrown

lolz ok if you want to in fact start this story over I have an idea. ::)
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

goblet_fulla_fire

You mean RP? Okay, but another topic. I will make one in a little bit, maybe right now if I have the time.