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Started by goblet_fulla_fire, August 3, 2005, 06:23:09 AM

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LavyBrown

no now you have to tell me what your book is about. If you tell me I'll tell you mine.
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Neo

Lavy wrote a book?
"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

ronweazley122

sure.Its set in the future,(i never point out exactly how far)Almost everyone is part robot,and hardly anyone chooses to die.Right...so,this boy(the main character)discovers,after his fathers 40th birthday,that the government does something to people at their fortieth birthday,and while he attempts to uncover this,the government goes after him.thats preetty much it,but thats just the bare plot of the first book.
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LavyBrown

humm...intresting. I would read it. And I haven't witten the whole thing yet.
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

Neo

What's your's about Lavy?
"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

ronweazley122

neither have I,And I found out why the heck I can't come up with anything.Cause I keep showing people what I've written.J.k. says she doesn't waste her creative energy telling people what she's written.I'm trying that for a while.I just gave you what would probably be on the back cover...anyway,whats yours about?right..he posted before I did,so I have to modify this..yeah,whats yours about?
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Neo

"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

LavyBrown

lolz I get it my first drafs where really good. but then I got somone to read it and they gave me all the suggetions. I repect the suggetion but they messed me up. so now I write like a page or so then I go back 2 or 3 days later and I revise try that it work wonders.
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

ronweazley122

I'll have to try that.But I've got an awful case of writers block,so...
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Neo

join the club. i got so much stuff i need to write but got no ideas :-(
"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

LavyBrown

But my story is about this girl who is very rich and gets kidnapped. The kidnappes take her to this cabin until the randoms comes. And there is this boy who is also rich an gose to camp close to the cabin. On thing after another and the boy and girl in up in the past. I haven't decided upon which time period but I'm thinking midevil time
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age

Neo

sounds interesting, but try the dark ages. medevil age has been done so much its horrible.
"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

ronweazley122

...I like medieval.The dark ages...?I don't know,it depends on where she's going with it.I like the ancient egyption or roman...
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Neo

That would be interesting you know, the boy and grl become the Emporer and Emporess of Rome?
"Without a common power to keep them in check, there will be no advancement, and the life of man is poor, solitary, nasty, brutish, and short."~Thomas Hobbes

LavyBrown

no no no. See what I plan on happening is one of them is accused of somthing like murder and the other one has to get them befor they'er beheaded.
Don't do it behind the garden gate, love is blind but the neighbours ain't!
Can I get your picture? I collect nature disasters.
Whoever said nothing's impossible never tried to slam a revolving door.
I must confess, I was born at a very early age