potry corner

[goblet_fulla_fire]

You are forgiven Nay-o. (thats how the little girl says it in Matrix Revolutions)

[_Lavender_]

Neo:: Very true. Every author, great{People like J.K, or Eddings} or small{like me :P} is a bit nervous putting theirselves into words, and letting others pass them around.
And ya hun, I really liked yours! The first one was really good, I got into it right away. ^.- I've reread it many times now, lolz. I most certainly like it. And the second one I liked as well, but the first was my favorite. I am a helpless, hopeless romantic. :-*

Em:: I liked that hun. I voted 'yes' on the probability that Em gives friendship, advice, AnD bruises :P ^.^

Goblet:: Like I said on my forum, I really like your poetry as well. Bold ;)

Fawkes:: I know you can write like that! Nothing is more fascinating than to see great authors taking steps into poetry. Poetry, although story writing is very close behind, is a very personal thing. And though the people without feeling or care can write poetry, only those whom are intimate with their writing are deemed great. Fawkes I know from having watched you here since you came, you are quite close with your works. Send me your published book? PWeasE? :-* ;)

Pig:: I loved the poem. Hurt is such an acquiescing subject, yet such an adamant subject - flexible, yet firm. I liked the description. ^.-



Now that I KNOW how bored you are of my ramblings, lolz, sorry for being a hypocrite and getting so off topic. :P


-Sarah

[LavyBrown]

lolz Lavender

[_Lavender_]

lolz. ^.-

[Neo]

lol thanks Lav, Im glad you liked it, your the only person besides me who ive shown that to, who has liked it   :'(

[LavyBrown]

Which Lav are you talking about? ???

[Neo]

the :avy who said she liked my poems, obviously. Lavender.

[LavyBrown]

lolz whatever ::)

[Em]

Em:: I liked that hun. I voted 'yes' on the probability that Em gives friendship, advice, AnD bruises :P ^.^

Lav, how many times do I have to tell you, don't call me hun! It freaks me out! lolz... and of course I give bruises... (and for the advice and friendship... well that could be bad :P)

[Neo]

LOL

[pig]

thanks lavander i like your poams two, i love the way it is set out realy intresting

here's another one of my poems hope ya like

Hate

Confusion, hate
spewing with lies
raw rage runnig throught my veins

from a friand to an enemy.
from desire to devastation

Words,Phone calls, texts
them all wasted....
on someone who dosnt matter

your true colours are shining throught
the freshly opened blinds

my eyes were once closed but are now open

love, devotion wondering, being whole

pain, tears,rage, ripped, broken, hurt hate.

[goblet_fulla_fire]

Revenge

Shackled, cuffed, and chained.
My soul is stained.
I got an itch in my brain.
Now, my main aim,
is to retain,
and regain,
control of my mainframe.
My thoughts are a runaway train.
My blood is boiling like its under propane,
They think I should pay my toll,
Forget that, I'm trying to get out this s*** hole.
Nevertheless. I do not fear none of my enemies.
My perspective of them is worse than my rivalries.
They kill more than the AIDS diesease.
Enough of this, had enough,
too tired of staying tough.
I'll break through the doors.
Slaughter them like wild boars.
Then we'll see whose cackling.
what happens to their family when I'm king.

[Neo]

i notice you like to use a lot of profanity in your poems...

no offense, but a true poet can get his point across loud and clear and more professionally without resorting to crudeness.

[goblet_fulla_fire]

Only used it once. Besides, I can't get the profanity out of my head since my class got 3 new kids from New Orleans.

[Neo]

Ah, "the devil made me do it" ::)