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SIX BOOK SPOLLER IF YOU HAVNT READ IT THIS STORY WONT MAKE SENSE

Started by pig, August 14, 2005, 01:19:43 AM

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pig

 TITLE The last horcruxes

It had been a long journey for Ron, Hermione and Harry. They had been travelling for  3 days  and in those 3 days they battled through  a terrible snow storm. They were now  hiking up a  hill that was covered in thick snow as the wind blew hard ,pushing  there  body's back down the hill .  Ron and the others saw that there destination  had come into view.  Ron stopped as he reached the small deserted house it looked pretty normal but this house was far from that. It was very old, the windows were smashed and the wood that the house was built from was begging to rot. There was a small garden but grass did not grow there only weeds that were coated with snow.

Ron gulped and looked at Harry his face was full of determination, he was a true hero and great friend. A girl beside Ron  shivered , a girl with bushy brown hair that was poking out of her hat. A girl he admired and loved . But he couldn't tell her. Hermione was his best friend and it had to stay that way.  Still he got jealous he couldn't help it. But he new this two should stop.

" we should  go in" Harry whispered.

Ron stopped thinking about his confusing relationship with Hermione and started to think about the task ahead.

The all took out there wands and slowly walked up to the old Riddles  house. They all stood close together  Ron staid extremely close to Hermione he would protector with his life. As they walked Ron remembered Harry telling them what happened here. All Riddles that once lived in this house  where found  dead. Killed by Voldermort or by  Tom Riddle as he still went by that name . He found out that his dad was not a wizard so he killed him and his family. He wanted to disconnected anything to do with his farther as he left his mother and him.

They slowly climbed the stairs that creaked with every step.

Ron stood behind Harry who stood at the door hand clasped around the handle and turned it he opened the door and they stepped in.

As soon as they stepped in Ron heard a clicking noise. Ron felt the floor move beneath his feet and saw the walls spin. The floor and the walls moved faster it soon became a blur. As he and the others tried to keep up right.

Ron was starting to feel really ill he tried not to look  at the spinning room . Ron started to panic  as he realised that the lights had gone out. He could not see either of his two friends.  He then felt a hand grab his it was Hermione's. his breath got caught in his throat  for a seconded. He was so happy that  he where she was.  Ron and Hermione swayed , Ron then became worried again where was Harry he could not feel him or see him. But before he could say anything  the floor gave a violent jerk and Ron fell dragging Hermione with him. The spinning had stopped and the light were now on. Hermione was sprawled out on top of him. Her face was an inch from his. He could smell her perfume and feel her frightened breath. Hermione looked at him her lips parted. A tear fell from her eye. Ron knew she was terrified and he  just wanted to make her fill better . He felt there hands where still together but now the fingers were untwined. He kissed her on the head  it took him every bone in his body to   resisted  the urge to  kiss her on the lips. They were friends and friends defiantly didn't do that. Hermione then slowly realised that she was on him and she let go of is hand and moved off of him and got up. He frowned he wanted her to stay there. He quickly changed his frown into a worried glance.  Ron got to his feet

" sorry for falling onto you Ron " she said blushing  " where Harry" she said looking around

" its ok " was all he could say.  He then scanned for Harry he was no where in sight. " he must of some how got shifted somewhere else in this house " he said

Ron then realised that they were no longer in the small landing it  was bigger. Ron new this was done by magic they now stood in a large corridor that had many doors. It looked liked it never ended. The corridor was very dusty and the floor was made of old wooden boards. The walls were damp and were very dark a dull with bits of mould here and there. The doors were big and also made of the same rotting wood.
    " we have to go into each room in search of the Horcrux" Ron said

" but that could take for ever how do we know once we go in will be able to go out or the rooms will change like in the Mister. Or will be lead into another hall. Or even worse will be killed" Hermione said 

" well just have to find out, no matter what Hermione I wont let that happen , where get through  this and then Harry can finely kill Voldermort" he said grabbing Hermione's hand

" come on lets go and  let us hope Harry is fine" Ron said walking down the corridor to the first room


please tell me what you think  ;D

pig

arg you lot are evil i konw people are reading it or looking at it so please please please tell me wat you think or i wont continue if no ones reading it  :(

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As soon as Harry step into the house it started to spin and then minutes later there was no more light. He looked in every direction for any sign of movement from Ron and Hermione. But all he saw was a blur.  He felt his body shake a stumble as the room went faster and faster, his legs couldn't keep him up any longer , they collapsed he fell to the floor he tried to get up but every time he would fall as the house floor moved more  violently .

" Ron, Hermione" Harry yelled but no one answered.  The floor jerked again so hard that it sent him skidding into the stairs.  Everything stopped and stood still once again.  As Harry tried to get up the lights came back on. Harry looked around  Ron and Hermione were no where in sight.

"what the- " Harry said just realising the whole room was different. What was once a small flight of  dusty stairs were now twice the size. They were no longer straight but spiralled.

Harry looked up. The stairs seemed to go up for ever. He looked behind and saw that there was no longer a front door  but a blank wall that was very far away.

Harry knew this wouldn't be easy, this place was a maze just like the maze in his forth year. He rapt his jacket more tighter around him as  the cold wind blew through the old house. Harry held his wand out and began to climb the stairs . The old steps creaked and the  railing wobbled a little with every step he took . It seemed to take for ever and was very surprised that nothing had attacked him so far. He remembered the words  Ginny Weasley had said to him the night he  was leaving Hogwarts forever.

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Harry was packing his things together in his dorm. All through out the year he was away with Ron and Hermione finding the Horcruxes. He had found nearly all of them except one, the very last. He only came back to Hogwarts to see Ginny and his friends . Now he had to leave again and he was afraid that this would be the last time he would ever step into Hogwarts again. Harry knew this would be the most dangerous as this is Voldermorts  last chance of being immortal, he would do what ever it takes to stop Harry and his friends.

Harry had told Ron Hermione that this trip he was going by his self but they didn't care they told him they were going , Harry couldn't change there minds what ever accuse he came up with.

Harry heard a door open a girl with long red hair came in.

" so where never going to tell me you were going " she said tears were streaming down her eyes

" I was but " Harry said he was interrupted by Ginny

"LIAR!" she screamed.

" YOU HAD NO INTENTION OF TELLING ME OR EVEN SAY GOOD BYE "  she  said 

Harry walked towards  her " no your right the reason why is because I know it would cause you grief  and you would try and talk me out of" he said grabbing his hand she shoved his hand away

" YOUR DAM RIGHT" Ginny said
" this is dangers , you know he's going to have that whole placed crawling with death eaters a god knows what obstacles, please don't go "  Ginny said her voice know full of concern

" I know but I'm still going" Harry said 

" well if I cant stop you  I'm coming with you then " Ginny said folding her arms

" no way Gin It's to dangers , I'm not letting another person I love get killed"


" I don't care I'm going and that final" she said

"I'm sorry Ginny "

Ginny stared at Harry confused

" for this " he grabbed his wand  and Ginny collapsed in Harry's  arms fast asleep.

He lifted her up and placed her on the bed.

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pig


LavyBrown

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pig


pig

next part  ;D

Hermione and Ron stood  outside the first door , Hermione held Ron's hand tightly she was  terrified and the only thing that stopped her from running away was  Ron.  If she was by her self she wouldn't be able to do this, having Ron next to her  made her  stable. Most importantly she felt safe when he was around. She knew he would not let anything happen to her no matter what.  She was so scared when the lights went out and the room moved.  She remembered grasping Ron's hand and then they falling onto him.

For one moment when they were in on the floor she thought Ron was going to kiss her  and he did but not  the place she wanted him to.

Hermione pushed it out of her head she had other matters to think about like what was behind the door they  were standing in front off .

Ron pushed the door open it slowly it creaked as he did so.  The room was dark, Hermione couldn't see anything  but she knew it was big .

" stay close to me "Ron  said to her as they stepped inside.

As soon as they stepped in the room lit up and the door slammed shut.

Hermione  looked  in front  of her and saw a huge puzzle on the wall. There were loads of different raised shapes with symbols. 

" Hermione look at the floor" Ron said  squeezing her hand

Hermione looked down there were similar shapes on the floor

" I think we have to work out the code." Hermione said thinking .

"the floor is the same as the walls if we step on the right  symbols at the corrected order a message  should  appear if I'm correct " Hermione said

" and if your not" Ron said looking at her

" then we have just walked into a trap" she said


Hermione took a step before Ron could call her back it was best that she did  it she knew what this symbols meant Ron didn't . As soon as she took a step on  to the triangle a letter magically appeared .

D was the letter

Hermione kept stepping on the symbols  they glowed with each step  but it felt to essay something wasn't right .

She looked up the word was nearly complete.

She gasped at what it said

DEATH EATER

" Ron I think  we should be leaving "

Ron nodded but before Hermione could run back to him she heard a crackle 20 death eaters had just appeared into the room.








mamabiscuit

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pig

thanks im in a bit of a rut for this story at the mo but hopfully i will updat it soon

cutediva


pig

 ok i cant tell if that was good or bad anyway heres the next part i finly had somthing to write yay lol

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Harry finally reached the top he stood  on the landing out of breath and with a painful stitch in his side.  He regained control of his breathing and stood up straight . The landing was very dark and dirty a lot like it was down stairs . The light from his wand cast eerie shadows  on the walls, as Harry walked down the long landing something moved  amongst the shadows.  Harry  noticed that all round him he saw  little air vents where a light breeze wafted out of them, he turned as he saw figure run  past more further a head . Harry raised his wand more higher ready to jink the first person he saw. 

A high pitch laugh bounced of the walls.


" who's there ?" Harry asked the thin air  as he walked on


The insane laugher  was still there and it was now starting to make Harry's head hurt .,he could not see were it was coming from. Harry stopped as he heard no more laughter  but it was then replaced with a ear piercing screech.

Harry instinctively covered his ears as he fell to his knees, the noise was to much , every inch of his body was in pain, as he lent his head in between his knees he felt that breeze coming through the vent but  this breeze did not make him feel better  instead it made his head spin. Something was being pumped thought the house and was most likely to be poison. The wailing stopped and Harry took his hand away from his ears and open his burning eyes that were tightly shut.

His eyes darted everywhere as he saw showdown's  that he notice before turn into figures.

Harry shot to his feet and held out his wand, the figures now surrounded him in a tight circle.

The blue light of his wand illuminated  the creatures faces.

Beneath it long black tangled hair ,a pair of red eyes stared at him, all of them with there teeth beard and claws out .
Harry insanity recognised what it was and wondered why he never knew realised this from the piercing screams he heard.

They were banshee's 

~ but what are they doing here how could Voldermorts convince them to work for him~ Harry thought

All Harry knew was he was in deep trouble one swipe from there claws and he would be dead.