The Ashes of the Phoenix [NOT HP Related]

[Naroto Mashima]

Chyea, it's kinda confusing. But here...

Prologue
   
   "Are we almost there?" the young boy asked his father.
His father turned around from the passenger seat, smiling. "Yes, almost," he replied. Just as his father turned back around, a fire became visible ahead. In an instant, the car was blown backwards.
Time paused. A man in a ragged robe came out of nowhere, his fingertips sticking out from the sleeves of his robe, were white as snow, and cold looking. His robe was torn and dirty, as if it had gone through many years without being washed or repaired. His breathing came in short, rapid breaths. His feet dragged slowly, creating a noise that would have been almost hypnotic in a rhythm of swish, swish, swish.
Suddenly, the noise of his feet stopped. He was now near the source of the explosion. A small boy, around the age of thirteen, was being blown back, but stopped in midair along with the rest of the people.
He resembled the boy in the car. Short, with chocolate brown eyes. His hair was long and black, so it barely reached his eyes. He was wearing glasses, which were cracked from the explosion. He wore baggy jeans, and black shoes. He had a white button-up shirt on, with a black undershirt. He had a silver wristhingych, and torn gloves. His backpack was still attached to his back, though with a bit of freedom.
The mysterious man touched him and muttered a phrase. After that, he said, "You shall be cursed with the souls of the people killed today." He walked away, slowly disappearing. When he completely faded, everything continued.
The boy in the car didn't die. He got out slowly, and limped away from the car, nursing his wounds. The boy near the center of the explosion slowly got up, pausing now and then from his wounds. He held his arm when he got up, and limped to a support. At the same time, both the boy that was near the explosion heard the old man's voice.

"You shall be cursed with the souls of the people killed today."

[Kiara Johnson]

hmm, wow.. I want to read more


Bump!!!

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[harrypotterfan:)]

Oooh I like how it starts, now we have two writers on this site. ;D ;)

[Naroto Mashima]

Chya. Writers block. Now I know how it feels.....

[harrypotterfan:)]

LOL
Take your time. ;)