My charater tell me if this will work or not. please

[Shara2007]

Is this one alright or do I need to do different because I don't know who to send it to:

Full Name: Sarah Rayne Jones
Age: 15 turning 16, 8th August 1981, Leo.  Year: 5th
Gender: Female
House: Gryffindor
  Blood: Muggleborn
Wand Description: 10 3/4 inches, Maple wood, Unicorns horn core.
   
  Height: 5ft 6in
Eye Colour: Crystal blue that are clearer when hse is upset.
Hair Colour: Brown with blonde highlights it is about mid-back.
  Physical Attributes: She has dimples and a great smile. She is about
5ft 6in and 140 lb.
Accessories in general: A necklace that had Sarah Rayne written on it.
She also wears an ankle bracelet that she had made when she was
younger.
Usual out of uniform attire: Blue jeans, Light pink tank tops, and a
hair bow with pink flowers.
Bed-wear: Pyjama bottoms that are pink, and a pink tank top.
   
  Personality: She is fun to get along with but after she joined
Hogwarts she started to become self-conscious. She is afraid that since she
is Muggleborn no-one will like her so she has slowly formed herself a
low self-esteem. She is afraid of the fact that she might fail to do good
and become an outcast more then she is.

History: She is the first one in her family to become a witch. Her
brother Matthew is great at Basketball and her brother Jason is great at
Soccer. Sarah feels like she has to fight to be seen because her brothers
are the 'Golden Boys' and she feels like a no-one. The family moved to
the UK before Sarah turned eleven because her brothers were asked to
play for the UK basketball and soccer/football team. The boys transferred
schools to be on their new teams and the family moved as a whole
because the boys were too young to be off on their own. Het parents had
decided that it was an okay school and they sent her of to it. now she is
trying hard to strive for the best not knowing how she got into
Gryffindor.

Familiar: An owl named Shadow.
Friends: not any yet
  Enemies: not any yet
  Crush: She used to have a cruch on the twins and now she has one on
Oliver Wood but she never met him.

  Family -
Mother: Rebecca Jones
  Father: Richard Jones
Siblings: 2 Brothers; Matthew (25) and Jason (20)

Nationality: Texan.
Birthplace: Austin.
Broom: She has just a normal broom that she uses when she needs to at
school.
  Her view on Voldemort: She thinks that he is evil but doesn't know
that much about him since she is from a Muggle family.
Favourite subject: Transfiguration, because she likes being able to
turn things into other things. It helps her not be as scared.
Most disliked subject: Potions, because she was never good at mixing
things so they go wrong.
Favourite Professor: McGonagall, because she teaches her favourite
class.
Most disliked Professor: Snape, because he is strict and she doesn't
like his classes.
Favourite Quidditch team: She doesn't have one yet because she is still
trying to figure it out.
Hobbies: She loves to read and draw pictures to help her remember the
things she has done and seen.
Likes: She likes that she is finally out of her brothers' spot lights
and doing something on her own.
Dislikes: That she has a low self-esteem and that she doesn't have
anyone to help her when she doesn't understand.
  Plans for her future: She wants to become a teacher at a school, or
she wants to get a job at the Ministry of Magic.
   
  Classes:
  - Astronomy
- Care of Magical Creatures
- Charms
- Defence Against the Dark Arts
- Herbology
- History of Magic
- Potions
- Transfiguration
- Ancient Runes
- Muggle Studies

[Ginny Weasly]

Very well done. Some extra info, we don't use the older teachers always. In this case, Snape is long gone. (If you havn't read book 6, just accept it, lolz) I'm not sure if McGonaglle is still around. Harry is adult, and teaches Defense Against Dark Arts, and his twin sister, Kiara teaches Potions.

But, your profile is done very well.

[Shara2007]

ok Ginny will you help me with all the detials that I will need to do well on this

[Ginny Weasly]

Just ask me, and I'll help.

[Shara2007]

ginny since this is done can i work on the other ones.

[Kiara Johnson]

You should be certain to get this character established before moving on to crete more, and it is always wise to have a seperate account for each character as well.  it just seems in bad taste to have more than one character in under the same name, less it is like a one time thing.

Love the profile it was perfect, btw

Huggles
~K~