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dobby888 · August 25, 2007, 08:03:09 AM

Siri was washing the hallways of the hospital, when a Nurse came running down the hall out of breath. *Siri!! Come quick!!* she said frantically, *we're about to lose one!* and with that she ran back the way that she had come. Siri was never one to wait, so as soon as she heard the news, she dropped her mop and sprinted through the hospital wing, following the other Nurse. She skidded around a corner and into room 579. She put on the required mask and followed the instructions. She wasn't a trained Nurse, but she was a very useful assistant. She began handing the Nurses potions almost immediately, throughout the entire hour of potion-passing, and reinforcing spells, and wiping sweat off of the nurses faces, she continued to think to the patient something like this, ~hold on, you'll be just fine and dandy in an hour or so! Stay positive!~ and things of that nature. She had never been in a room where someone died, and some say it's because of the experience of all of the Nurses that work there, and others say that it's because of the way that she talks to the patients.

After two long hours had passed, the Nurses told Siri that she could go *Thank you Siri, we think we have it under control now.* and so with that, she wrote down the room number, meaning to come back later to check on the patient, and then went back to her abandond mop.

LordBlaZe · August 25, 2007, 08:19:58 AM

lol nicee, its good. Post more!!

dobby888 · August 25, 2007, 08:50:44 AM

ok but that was just off the top of my head, so I'll try to plan out and edit the next part before I post it. ;D ;D and Thanks!! ;D

Sky · August 26, 2007, 10:02:52 AM

Very good, but I think it could use more about the patients condition and background. But I very much like it. ^_^

dobby888 · August 26, 2007, 10:07:34 AM

Oh ok good feedback, I'll take that into account!!!!

;D ;D ;D
*Jess*

Sky · August 26, 2007, 10:12:26 AM

*My thoughts* OMG! Maybe he had...had...AIDS!

dobby888 · August 26, 2007, 10:14:10 AM

Right...... uhm no!!!! lol jk I don't know what I want to do yet, but I just got a new notebook that I can write this all in.

;D ;D ;D
*Jess*

Sky · August 26, 2007, 12:38:38 PM

booya

uglycupcakes · August 28, 2007, 05:38:25 AM

awsome job jess.. its good i can't wait to read sommme more.. I bet them nurse are listening to lean like a cholo. lol im listening to that song right now. its awsomejust

just.only.isabelle :-* luv ya!

dobby888 · August 28, 2007, 05:41:27 AM

lol thanks Is, I'm working on it right now, it should be ready tonight!!

uglycupcakes · August 28, 2007, 06:16:36 AM

Now im listening to I got from my moma. But, enough polluting your site!! Check out my fan fiction. Lucy theo's life story

Luv you! Isabelle :-*

dobby888 · August 28, 2007, 10:28:09 AM

The next morning as Siri flew into the hospital, she couldn'tstop thinking about the little boy from the day before. She didn't even find out his name before leaving, and she just couldn't shake the feeling that something bad had happened.When she arrived at the Hospital, she dug a small piece of paper out of her coat pocket. '579' it read. She sped off towards the room. When she finally arrived, partly out of breath, at the correct room, she gathered herself together, took a few deep breaths, put a bright smile on her face, and pushed open the door.

She slipped into the room closing the door behind her, when she turned around, instead of seeing a smiling boys face, she saw a nurse in her 60's making the empty bed. Her once cheer filled eyes, became ones filled with confusion, her smile fell, along with the rest of her face into a terrified one.

uglycupcakes · August 28, 2007, 10:44:57 AM

Oh how sad the little boy dies :( or at least i think so :/

Luv ya! :-*
Isabelle

uglycupcakes · September 1, 2007, 04:14:57 AM

Hey are yoU going to Keep wriTing on this onE. I hopE you do buT, you haven't Posted fOr a cOUple daYs so Idk.

Luv ya!! :-* :-*

dobby888 · September 3, 2007, 10:46:01 AM

Siri felt like she was going to faint. She sat heavily on the half-made bed. Siri felt like her head was going to explode with questions. She began to calmly ask the Nurse questions about what had happened, even though she felt anything but calm.

*What was his name?*

*Uh.... I....it was....oh! Shawn... Griff? G.... G....Gregor? Yes yes that was it Shawn Gregor was his name dear!*

*What exactly did he....* she couldn't get out the last few words but finally she said*die...of?*

*Well....I don't know dear, the other Nurses where in to much shock that he had died, that they wouldn't tell me, but the good thing is that he went* she emphasized this word *during his sleep*

After Siri pursued answers about what exactly had happened, and the nurse continued to be unable to answer them, Siri left, still in complete shock, and with a heavy heart.

When she got home, she went on the computer, and looked for any trace of him or his family, and thanks to her magic search enhancers,she found a website or two.

She began to read. 'Drunken father abuses family' read one newspaper headline, 'mother diagnosed with cancer' read another. Siri read on as tragedy after tragedy slowly wiped out the Gregor family. When she had finished reading she looked at the notes that she had taken.

-Shawn was the last in his family
-mother diedofcancer
-father died in car accendent (most likely drunk driving)
-Shawn had lived in a foster home until he died.

Siri's eyes were filled with tears, and she was on the verge of crying, when she thought to herself ~crying won't help Shawn or his family... but maybe I can do something about it... I mean, so manypeople die every day, and I think I have a way to reduce those numbers.~

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