The Follower

[LordBlaZe]

BUMPPP!! wow that's really good. Write more~!!

[Maddy]

Wow V! That is really good. I knew you could write, but this suprised me! Continue!

[Molly]

Bravo i say Brava

[Vanessa]

((thanks everyone!!))

I walked out the door. "Thanks Hagrid. I wish I could tell you that I will be fine, but this time I'm not sure." I mummered, pain in my voice. I hoped that I would get to see him again, along with everyone else at Hogwarts. I hoped that this was all a dream but I knew by telling myself though Id be lying. I sighed, I was 17 and in life threatening danger. I kept walking, entering the forest. The sounds of nature surrounded me, keeping me calm. I walked in deeper and deeper, stopping as I heard a voice.

"Allissa! Come here if you can here me!" The voice sharp and pricing. I walked toward it, seeing Belatrix, Lucious, and another man, the one who had brought Noel into this. I walked in front of them, holding Noel a little tighter. I wanted her to feel safe.

"Finnally." Lucious huffed. "I thought that we were going to have to come and get you ourselves. Today we will be going to see the Dark Lord." I flinched at the mention of his name. I hated him with every once of hate within me. I tried to give a half smile, wanting to seem as if I wasn't afraid even though fear shook me inside.

"Come along." Belatrix said impatiently. "We have no time to waste." She started walking, quickly. I followed behind, not wanting to upset her anymore.

"Father wait! I can help too! Please father don't leave me here!" I could hear the whine of no other than Draco Malfoy. "Well if it isn't Allissa. I didn't think that you were brave enough to join the Dark Lord. And that child, is it a mudblood like you?" He sneer when he saw me. I rolled my eyes, wishing he would dissaperate far away from here. I knew that he would just make things worse.

"Why are you even here? No one wants you here so go whine somewhere else. And just to set things strait, I'm a pureblood!" I said, willing to fight back with his harsh words. He backed away slowly, as if he was defeated. I smiled, happy to see him back down to someone. I turned around, walking again as Belatrix and Lucious followed. I glanced over my shoulder, Bellatrix's face proud and Draco and Lucious stunned. I giggled to Noel, whose eyes beamed. I felt more of a want than ever to help her.

[Ginny Weasly]

It's a very good story, I like the plot line.

Just a few mistakes to look out for...Bellatrix and Lucius for spelling, dear.

Overall, the plot is intriguing, your form of writing is very good, and I'm very much interested in finsing our what happens to Allissa and Noel. Keep it going and I'll keep reading.

[Maddy]

Keep going V. It is really good. I can't wait to hear the end!

Mads

[Vanessa]

((thanks everyone... expecially Ginny. Ill try to improve my spelling lol, its my worst subject.))

[Vanessa]

I couldnt look at him. I just was too afraid. His voice, it was if it was the wind. It gave you the kind of chills that made you want to hide. I looked down at my feet, the best distraction.

"Allissa, isnt it? Ive been expecting you. Im asumming by what I have been told you are going to help me." Voldemort said, his voice allmost a hiss. I nodded, not knowing anything else. He smiled, turning to Belatrix, giving her permission to talk. She nodded quickly, then turned to me.

"We need you too get someone for us. His name is William Maliton. His assistence is deeply needed." Belatrix said, speaking only business. "He is needed to help us with our... mission." I could tell she didnt want to give anything away. She must have something that I dont want to hear, I thought to myself.

"What exactly is the mission?" I chalenged her words, smirking. I layed my hand on the table, clicking my nails against it. She paused, thinking about what to say. I hoped that she wouldnt keep her knowledge to herself.

"Well we are going to plan an attack, taking over Hogwarts and the Minestry of Magic." She said not giving any details. "But before I can tell you more you need to prove to me your loyalty." She grabbed my arm, taking out a smalll knife. I winced in pain as she made a small cut, forming a mark that I had noticed earlier on her arm also. I knew it was the mark of the Dark Lord, which would burn if I attemped to tell their secrets, burning so bad that I could not speak. Noel looked up at me, her eyes filled with fear and confusion. My heart ached agian, not just for her but for everyone that was going to come into this.

[Ginny Weasly]

Good, keep going.

[I luv all of u !!!!!]

i like it!!!

[Vanessa]

I walked down the hall, keeping my eyes on Noel who was now walking beside me. I had to find William Maliton, who I was assuming was a student here at Hogwarts. I had to lie, saying that she was my cousin who I had to watch over while her parents were away. I hated lying to people but sometimes it seemed the only way. I knocked softly on the Griffindor Commonroom, I had the weirdest feeling that that was were I would find William. I walked in as the door was opened. I looked over to a first year who was reading a book.

"Excuse me but I was wondering if you could tell me if you knew of a William Maliton." I said, as softly as I could be heard. He marked his page and slowly looked up, a mischievous smile on his face.

"Whats in it for me?" He said, shrugging his shoulders. I rolled my eyes, reaching into my bag. I should have known that he would ask something like that, but once again I wasn't prepared. Just like when I dragged myself into this. I found a bag of Chocolate Frogs, irresistible to a first year. I opened it up, letting him look inside. He smiled holding out his hand. I pulled away, wanting my information first.

"Fine Ill tell you!" He sighed. "He is a fifth year Griffindor and hes probably..." He paused, looking at his watch. "... Down in the Great Hall." He said, holding his hands out once again. I dropped the bag in his hands, which he started to devour instantly. I walked away, down to the Great Hall. I grabbed Noels hand, beginning another mission. She looked up at me, her face blank. I smiled at her, and then she smiled back. I knew no matter what came, we had each other.

[natalie]

I LOVE IT!!!(singing)

[Ginny Weasly]

Very good, keep it up. You're doing a great job.

[natalie]

(singing)  I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I WANT SOME MORE OF IT!!
lol
i love singing
love nat

[Vanessa]

Thanks everyone so much... I didnt think that it would have that many readers!!! Anyways I need a little help, what are the ages for each year?

1st year:
2nd year:
3rd year:
4th year:
5th year:
6th year:

are there anymore years? sorry ive just gone braindead lol