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The Elder Wands Power!

Started by fudge0604, January 10, 2008, 02:41:29 AM

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dobby888

Just write it on a peice of paper or something and then type it up when you get home!!!

fudge0604

" NO! " The desperate scream of a thirteen year old girl, sang through the forest, and castle.
Albus was pushed away, falling to the ground, tumbled. In the few seconds before he hit the ground, and got the air in his longues hit out, he managed to see a blonde figure, and blood.

Jessie fell to her knee, feeling the ice cold sword piercing her stomach. Tears in her eyes, she glimsed at Albus, smiling, as she hit the ground violently, with an unpleasant, crack!

She lay there, just as if she were asleep, only that blood was oozing out from her stomach, and a crazy murderer, was hanging above her. Chad cursed, than drawed the sword out of her stomach; Jessie felt the sword turn, and puncture vital organs.

Tears filled Albus eyes.


Post Potter depression.


I loves YOUz

OMG NO... you hurt her.. wanta jerk.. tehe
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

dobby888

NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(

WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


((It's really great though, please write more! (And let me live!)))

fudge0604

Everything seemed to go in slow motion. How could this happen?
His mind, senses, and body, seemed like they were shattered into pieces for themselves, not able to function. All he could do, was to look at Jessie. "Jessie? " A faint whisper left his lips, softly.
The wind blew, playing gently with her hair, something that Albus had seen, and adored, times before.
This was uncomprehensible.

Chad strode over to Albus, his right still a sword. Smirking, he raised his arm, ready to finish, something that he should've finished a long time ago. If it hadn't been for his recklessness.

Stumbling, he got up, ready to face him. His mind was in chaos. And inside of him, he felt an extreme rage, growing, growing. He couldn't control it.

Never, had he given up Jessie. It was impossible to him. She was his world.

" JESSIE! " He shouted out; couldn't but, to release his pain, his suffering, his sorrow.

Chad attacked Albus.



Post Potter depression.

dobby888

No no no no no no no no no no!!! ALBUS HAS TO ATTACK CHAD!!! NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND!!!


Seriously great though... love it!

I loves YOUz

Why must you kill yourself and her.. whata jerk.. but its still really good..
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

fudge0604

You don't know what's coming  :P I've got it all in my head, i've had it for a long long time now,
but it's hard to get it out! New part soon. But first, I have to finish Harry Potter and The Order of The Phoenix, because we are having a reading competition in our class, and I am currently leading, but,
I have to be clear that I will win... :P

I have 400 pages left to read now, and tomorrow... ( End tomorrow for the competition...)


Post Potter depression.

fudge0604

#114
Albus jumped away, then channeling ice shards at Chad. The raging urge to kill him, was taking over.
His teeth gritted, heart throbbing, he turned himself into ice. Merging, into the essence that was ice itself, making ice, himself.
Chad backed away, feeling something. Unbescribable, uncomprehensible, impossible.

Awestruck, his mouth fell, big eyes.

Albus felt his mind grow dark. Cold. Slyly, he smiled, while he laughed a maniacs laugh. He rose to the sky, now pitch dark.
Ice, was overpowering him, a dark cloud stretching over his mind. Soon, he wouldn't recognise friend, or foe.
His whole body were of ice. Glowing. Radiating, with power. Magnificent power.

Skulls of ice, appeared from nowhere, and faster than a normal eye could see, they ate into Chads legs.

The scream, was crucial, filled with pain, and hatred.

Albus felt his hate, towards this man, grow, bigger than anything.

Inside himself, a moster was created. From his powers, hate, agony, suffering, and need to protect.

Suddenly, a long sword, appeared in his hands. It's presence was extreme. Malevolent, sly and evil.

A sinister presence.

Albus's eyes went ice blue, engulfed by ice.



Post Potter depression.

dobby888

 :o

OH MY GEE!!! ALBUS IS EVIL!!!

fudge0604

I know! You don't know how much thought I've put into this! I've been on this FF for too long... I'm getting many good ideas!


Post Potter depression.

Ginny Weasly

Heehee, he did the "mwahahahaaa..."

*coughs*

Continue please!
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

fudge0604

The sword controlled him, as it was a monster, inside of him. Slowly, he landed. Radiating with power, the sword in his hand was raised.
It was of ice. A dark ice. Looking into it, you would find no depths, no end. Nothing, or everything.

Chad had sunken down to his knees. Not a single word could escape his mouth. The sinister presence, kept him silent, as he glared into the depths of the sword.

He was waiting to be executed.

Albus mind, was empty. Blank, harsh, cold. Nothing, could stop stop him, stop him from the murder that was at stake.
He ran forwards. Sword raised, snarling, he ran forwards.

Albus reached Chad, and pierced his heart.

Killed him.


Post Potter depression.

Ginny Weasly

Awwws. Poor Albus had to kill someone...
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret