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The Elder Wands Power!

Started by fudge0604, January 10, 2008, 02:41:29 AM

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dobby888

Just that I have mixed emotions  ;D And I love it Albus it's so great!

Ginny Weasly

Good job, Albus. I can't wait to read more! I;m glad to see someone pays attention in Ginny's classes. Haha.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

fudge0604

It know I'm good! DON'T SAY TO ME I'M GOOD!!!!!!!!!!  ;D
I always remember those dumb little things that don't matter at all.


Post Potter depression.

dobby888

Please post more Albus! I can't wait!

I loves YOUz

Your sooooo good!! hehe.. keep up the good work!
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

fudge0604

I'll write tomorrow. I'll have to figure out a bit more of the story... And, I have to go to bed in a little time...


Post Potter depression.

dobby888

OK  ;D  I can wait! (But not for too long!)

I loves YOUz

I can't wait! Rocks back and forth waiting*
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

fudge0604

~What's going on?~ Albus thought, as he just disappeared with his soul.
He was his soul, he controlled it, he was alive, yet, not alive again.
But, he had read in the book that his soul was going to explode, making him an invisible ghost.
The blue flame, his soul, appeared one more time, giving him sight of his body. The last electrical impulses through his spine and brain was starting to vanish, leading his body into a death cramp.

Albus's body was twitching around, the eyes empty, and, as the last beat of his heart was, the twitching slowly stopped, the eyes looked even emptier, and the last signs of life left his body.

Everything had went as he had planned.

A sad feeling swept over him, as he remembered he may never come back.

But something was wrong. Albus could feel it, a dark feeling
slowly coming up on him. He felt for his power.

They was gone. Wasn't he going to keep them?
What had happened?

Suddenly, he was dragged off, long into the forest, deeper and deeper. It was going so fast, and he was wondering what that was happening. He felt terrible, but,
he had prepared for this. Maybe only for some days,
but to maybe die, didn't seem to much of a deal,
when to protecting the world from a crazy maniac.

Then, stopping, being dragged downwards, into the earth.
Albus was scared. Why was this happening?
What was happening?

After being dragged some yards down into the ground,
everything opened, and he landed in a cave.
Roots was growing on the walls,
and the cave was circle formed.

In the middle, there was a big fire, the smoke
going out of a hole in the roof.

Sitting next to the fire, was Chad.
He looked terrible.
No shirt, you could see the bones in his face and you could also see his ribs, being skinny as h*ll.
His hair was greasy, his pants ripped here and there,
and he had cuts all over himself.

Albus saw his back, and just by seeing that human being, made him sick. He was so mad.

But then, Chad got up.
He looked around in the cave, looking right past Albus,
as if he was invisible.

“I have his power! I HAVE HIS POWER!!!!”
Chad screamed out.
With a wave from Chad's hand, hundreds of ice spears had appeared out of thin air, all around Chad.
Then, all of them shot out, hitting the walls. Several spears just flew through his soul, dealing absolutely no damage.

Albus was shocked.

Chad, had gained his powers.


((Sorry! I'm so lazy!))


Post Potter depression.

I loves YOUz

Ekk!!!!!!!!!
I loveth it!
Its totally and completly AWESOME!!!!!!!
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

fudge0604

Thanks Billie. Your a FF lover you! Spamming my thread and Mira's!  :)
Good that you like it!


Post Potter depression.

I loves YOUz

I like reading... and reading other peoples stories...
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

Ginny Weasly

Absolutely wonderful, Albus. Please continue...even though it makes me feel guilty because I haven't written in mine in a looooong while. Haha.

Please, keep going!
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

fudge0604

Then I'll write even more so that you HAVE to write more in yours! MUHAHAHAHA!!!

Bact to topic. Next part, out this night. I'm going to a birthday party, but, I'll write it when I come home.
Till then, Bye!


Post Potter depression.

fudge0604


Bridge.


The air was chilly, and you couldn't see a hand in front of you.
Whispers were heard from everywhere.
Out of no where, a fountain slowly appeared. All of the water in the fountain was frozen, even the water in the air. Then, more and more started to appear. Now, a stone floor was assembling around the frozen fountain. Suddenly, a house appeared. It was clearly buildings from the roman empire, big, stone buildings.

Another house, another house, the one as big and great as the next one.

Whispers turned into regular voices, streets appeared, then, people, appeared.
In all ages. Childs appeared, running around the fountain, running in the streets, screaming, shouting, laughing.

But the whole world was in ice. The childs was covered with ice. Gigantic ice taps hang from the houses.

Ice, was, everywhere.

All of the building looked like they was some part of a big city, but, there was only ten buildings, in a circle around the fountain.

Out of the closest, biggest building, right next to the fountain, three old men, stepped out, in a line behind each other. They had long, ice blue robes. All of them stepped out to the fountain, spread, making a triangle. Each of them grabbed an ice handle that just had appeared.

They said together, " Lat isens kraft taka oss, bringa oss, forføra oss, la den visa oss veien, so me kan
balansera verden." 'Let the power of ice take us, bring us, seduce us, let it show us the way, so that we can balance the world'

Children gathered around them, whispering, " They're gonna do it! Wow!" all of them waiting in excitement.

Suddenly, the fountain raised,seemingly by itself, revealing three ice chairs, just like
the chairs kings have, in a triangle, and, in the middle, on one of those clairvoyance tables, just made of ice, was an orb.

There was frost around it, and inside, a deep deep fog.
The three men stepped inside,
and,
the fountain slowly got down, sunk down.
When the fountain was back at it's regular place,
the orb, changed.
It exploded, and out came some fog, then,
a man appeared out of no where.

He was tall, his hair, down to his midst,
his eyes, was ice blue, and they reflected something special,
something no one, no one without power,
could find out what was.

The man opened his mouth, and started to breath slowly.

“ It seems that it has happened, my lord.
We already knew that this was the time of the elemental
children, but, we didn't know that it already was the ice time!
Have you foresaw this my lord, without telling us, the three of the ice?”
One of the men said slowly, his voice dark.

The mysterious man, now sitting on the table that he had appeared on, said, “ I am ice. You are just weaklings,
thinking you know everything” His voice was very dark,
and he continued, muttering, “ Any child could have foresaw the
time of ice. Do you not remember the prophecy?

'A time will come, where the elements, will gather,
and together, make, the elemental children.
Twas, as the sun rises in north,
the children are to be born, on the same date,
each, in a different month of time.

In January, Lightning  will be born, 
France, will awaken it's powers.

In February, Ice, will be born,
and The Elder Wand, will awaken it's powers.

In April, Earth will be born,
Denmark, will awaken it's powers.

In May, Metal, will be born,
England, will awaken it's powers.

In June, Fire, will be born,
Africa, will awaken it's powers.

In July, Sand, will be born,
Egypt, will awaken it's powers.

In August, Thunder, will be born,
America, will awaken it's powers.

In September, Air, will be born,
and Denmark, will awaken it's powers.

In October, Water, Will be born,
and England, will awaken it's powers.

In November and December nothing will happen.
The elements will rest, until their powers are needed once more,
when the final battle comes. “

The three men nodded.
All of them knew the prophecy, what that would happen.
Everything they knew.
“ We know that, your majesty, Ice,
But... What is happening? We find ourselves weakening!”

“ The boy, Ice, have lost his powers.
Gone over to soul form, performing the outdrawing.”
Ice spoke slowly, muttering.

“ He has?!” The three men said together.

“ Shut up with you.” Ice snapped, then,
continued, “ I need you, to bring him to me.
Afterwards, you are to leave.”

The men nodded slowly, they wanted to argue,
they could council ice.
They were the three of ice!
Not wanting to make Ice angry, quickly, they messed together,

“ We, that are the three of ice, calls upon ice,
one of the elemental children. “
They continued messing it.
Suddenly, an ice blue flame appeared right next to Ice.

“ Get out!” Ice said as the fountain was lifting upwards.
Children outside, was waiting, and clapped, as they saw the three of ice go out.

Albus was hanging mid air, in front of Ice.
He was terrified.

“ Welcome. I am Ice.”

Albus stared into his eyes, now finding himself in his body that he had left minutes ago.

~What, was happening?~


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