Noelle Paige {Revised}

[Noelle]

Name: Noelle Paige

Age: 16

Height: 5' 6'

Appearance: She has dark brown hair with bang they swoop across her forehead.and also has dark brown eyes. She has a mysterious long scar that runs across her stomach, streching from her hip to her ribs. She asually wears heavy eye makeup. She has a birthmark in the shape of a star on her wrist.
 
Race: Witch

Parents: Cory and Maricia Paige

Personality: She comes off as quiet and dark. It takes her a long time to trust people. She can get very very jelous and is usually in the wrong place at the wrong time. She can be a trouble maker. She loves reading and usually spends most of her time doing so. She can be wild whenever she's in the right mood. Its hard for her to tell people things. She is very intelligent, but she won't brag about it. She thinks that there are better things to do then waste all of your time partying, even though she will sometimes untend them. She sometimes gets strange flashbacks of her past that causes her to be nevous and stressed. She is secretly power hungry.

Likes: Power, reading, knowledge, boys,

Dislikes: small talk, peppy people

Power: She is still learning about her power. She can look at people's memories, along with her own. She can travel into people's minds. She doesn't know how destructive her power is yet. She also has a photograpic memory, making it easy to memorize books or things people say. This, along with her power to travel into people's minds, makes it easy to get usefull information.

History: She grew up in New York, spolied with rich parents and a private bording school. She had what most teens would see as the perfect life. Then about a year before she came to Hogwarts, weird things started happening. Her parents got scared of her magic and kicked her out, believing that she was a devil child. She then got a letter, asking her to come to Hogwarts. She figured that it was Hogwarts or the streets, so she picked Hogwarts. Now that she's here, she has had a problem fitting in and making new friends.

[billy_1437]

its really good

[fudge0604]

Good and descriptive. But can you say a bit more about what she likes and dislikes?

[kira]

NIce noelle I like how you changed it.