Ben Sichen!

[fudge0604]

Now I'm going to show you guys a bio I made for another site.

Name: Ben Sichen!
Age:14.
Date of birth: 6/4/1993
Homelands: America, New York.
Race: Human
Class: Elementalist. ( controls Ice)
Finish: Death mountain: He focuses very hard as the enemy quickly freezes to the ground. Then a mountain of ice appears,
and traps the person. The person dies of cold and he gets no oxygen.

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[weapon information]
Staff of ice
An light blue long staff. Has an sapphire stone in it at the end that channels ice.

[Armour Information]
Robe of ice An Ice blue cloak that has shards of ice in its pocket. Many pockets inside.
Long and thin.

[Accessory Information]
Wand of Ice A wand that powers Ben's powers.
It gives him more strength, and bigger power within ice.
Its long and as nearly all the other things Ben have, blue.
The top of the wand is an ice shard which is glowing when Ben uses his powers. The handle is made of ice with air bubbles inside.
He got it when he won over an evil ice elementalist, and now it belongs to him forever until someone kills him or he dies.

Gloves of mana Gives him more mana.
Have passed down his family for generations.
Gloves that are made of each element.
They covers his whole hands but the tips and nail of his fingers.
They are colored deep blue. The gloves are also very thick.


[Physical Description]
Ben has brown hair and brown eyes. He is 165 cm high.
He has a short, round face. He is not slim but not fat either.
He has long legs and a short over-body.
Ben's hair reaches him just to his ears. He has a bit pointy ears
and have gotten teased by that in the past.
He has freckles over his nose and cheeks.
When not wearing his regular armour he uses a pair of blue jeans, and an orange T-shirt.

[Background]
Ben grew up in a family of elementalists. His father, controlling fire, his mother controlling air, and his little sister controls electricity. He have always been teased on school. Unable to control his powers so much when he were a kid, so because of that he had a difficult childhood, filled with teasing and a lack of self-confidence.

He has a little damage on his eyes. When he were in second grade some bigger boys threw rocks at him and unfortunately, they hit him in his eyes. He sees a bit but not so good.
He uses his powers where he goes. He detects coldness and how hot things are when he walks around. So then he makes himself a better picture in his head than the eyes can make.
Ben handle his elemental powers well, and have had two well trained elementalists as parents. He have heard his parents
telling him of an Academy for gifted, and have always dreamed about when he came here.

So here you have it. Just for this I got a 6 out of ten. AND an mod, global mod or admin had to say to me:
Okay your bio is accepted. Now you can RP.

And this bio just reached the requirements of a bio! And this is also a message to all of you:
Make longer bios. Explain harder how your characters personality is! Make a long, good descriptive background,
and make some flaws! It is not fun to RP with a Mary Sue! (( Look here if you don't know what a Mary Sue is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Sue ))
And remember, use some time read over it, and if you are unsure of your spelling just use the spell check!

[~Harry Potter~]

Yes, Fudge is right.  This is the site I was talking about before.  Maybe if I can get permission I will post a 10/10 from there, just to show you how good a bio acutally can be. 

Go Fudge!  He can write great bios!