The Unexpected Wizard

[halfbloodprincess6]

A week after Lena got home from school(hogwarts obviously), she wrote her friend Sarah from school. Sarah replied and wrote "I will not come back to school next year in order to achive my lifelong deam to become a death eater before I turn 16 and I hope hope to kill you."
Two days later she got a letter from the Wizard Protection Program saying they were coming to get her that day to put her in hiding to protecy her from her so called friend. She heard a knock on the door and there was a man standing there. "Hello, are you from the WPP?" said Lena  "No, I'm coming to take you away for a different reason." said the man with a creepy smile on his face.

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[I loves YOUz]

short but i would like to know what happens!!

[harrypotterfan:)]

pretty good suspenseful and I agree with Billie make it alittle longer....