My secend one you like it?

[drewskit]

Name: Tom Pales 
AGE:  15
Height 5'6
Appearance:  Handsom, black hair, combination of blue on one side and green on the other side of his eye color, white, always smiling.
RACE:  half-blood
Parents:  Nancy and Niles Pales
Personality: Awsome personality loves to joke around, a big rebel, loves causing mischefe, Loved to make people laugh.
Likes: joking and girls
Dislikes: Teachers
Power: able to shipshape in to any thing he pleases
History: Started to duel when 5 really good his parents left him in a orphanage they didnt like him, he had lots of friends because of personality and lots of lady friends because of his looks. He was excepted at Hogwarts on a friday, he had no money so dumbledor helped him and went to hogwarts.

[potter_fan122]

It could use a little more description, like what year he`s in.

[Alexis]

Not bad...could be more descriptive but I like it

[drewskit]

Thanks he is 15 so he is in his fifth year and I made him perfect because the fist one I made was a ex death eater and a werewolve plus hes a loner.

[potter_fan122]

muches better! just modify the form to have that info on it.

[drewskit]

What do you mean? and I meant 4th year sorry.

[potter_fan122]

Go up to where you have the bio form and click modify, then add the extra info of there and re-post.

[drewskit]

oh

[harrypotterfan:)]

lol...great job slow one....joking
umm I just want to know what house you're in so I could either be your friend or your worst enemy....mwahahaha sorry really hyper o.O
btw good bio=]

[drewskit]

Thank he is in Gryfindor this time

[potter_fan122]

yay

[drewskit]

kOOL AH

[potter_fan122]

=] Stacey leave Niles for Tom!!! muhahahahaha!!!! no, j/k

[drewskit]

lol

[potter_fan122]

don`t laf!!! shes goin out w/ both of `em.