Tori Annamarie Jackson

[Tori]

Name: Tori Jackson

AGE:15 

Height:5'2

Appearance:Tori is small with long black hair that has short layers to her chin.  Her eyes are two different colors, during the day they are grey, and at night they are a bright green, the color of fresh cut spring grass.  She is very skinny but in a heathly way.   She is short, but it doesn't bother her at all.  You can see her wearing anything.  She does wear Kimonos when she isn't in her school outfit;she wears tights and leggins alot, and shirts with them and shorts.  She also wears long sleves shirts, and tanktops.  For shoes he wears flats and her converse.

RACE:witch.

Parents: unknown. Has lived on her own for as long as she can remember.

Personality:Tori is a quite, really shy girl.  She doesn't talk that much, but when she does is really nice to everyone.  She gets along with people, but gets along with animals better.  She is caring and a very loving person.  She also is alot of fun once you get to know her, and can have a quite hyper side.

Likes:The night, drawing and writeing stories.  The time when the moon is showing (when she is the most alive). Music, reading, boys.  Playing widards cess, card games, cooking, and cleaning, things being in place, the libaray, and flowers.  Her hores Credo.

Dislikes:Nuts, butter beer, mornings, her parents for never being there, sleep.

Power:very good with elements.

History:She has lived with her 'uncle' for all that she can remember.  He has taught her everything she knows.  Her uncle lives for horeses, she had one of her own, his hame is Credo.  When she was five she fell off the top of her roof and brooke her arm.  But she didn't know why but it healed right then within an hour.  That is when her uncle told her that she was a witch and she had a gift to heal herself and people.  Her uncle had made her work on her magic everyday of 13 years. 

[Seth Lockhart]

This is a good profile. I can see that you put a lot of thought into it, and that is good. My one suggestion, for your future posts, is to take a little more time when you type it out. I noticed a few grammatical and Spelling mistakes, but that's okay. It doesn't have to be perfect.

Welcome to Harry Potter Fan.

[fudge0604]

Nice bio! I repeat what Seth said, plus some stuff that I found!  :)

Make some flaws, right now, she's nearly perfect. Like a bit anger or something! Albus is blue paranoid smurf!:p

And, (the only other thing I can come up with right now,) ya uncle couldn't train her magic since she was 2 years old, 'cause the magic powers don''t kick at around seven! :P (Seriously)

And try to be a bit more detailed at the elements! :)

Nice bio, you've done some good work!

[Tori]

Okay, I will make some changes when I post some more and see how I really want her to act.

This is my bio, I have ever made.