My first fanfic, sorta love story, me and Draco read if you please

[Draco's slave]

Ok I am going to write the first bit and see if I get good feed back and then ill post more


Draco Malfoy got up early one morning in summerbreak. He wondered what had woken him up and rolled over and looked outside. Outside there was a handsom tawny owl from the school and a small eagle owl with a package and a letter.
He let them in and ripped open the letter from His girlfriend,Hanne.
it said......

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

yyyeeeess?  WHat did it say?

[Draco's slave]

Thanks.  ;D


Hi Draco sweetie! How are you? I am fine. I am in Norway vistiting friends in Norway. I miss you so much! But the pic's from this past year have helped. *Malfoy grins* What did you do this summer? I am going to come back three weeks befor term starts and stay at the leaky couldren. Mabye you could too! That would be so fun! Send a respons! Lots(and I mena lots) of love Hanne
PS:Im a prefect

He grins and runs down to see his father. His father is sitting in the kitchen. "Can I stay at TLC for the last three weeks of term? Please" says Draco exitedly. "Why may I ask" said his father in a drawling voice "Hanne is going to, please! I will get to Kingscross! Please?!"
"Very well" Says Lucius. Draco runs into his bedroom and writes hurredly on a piece of parchment:
Hi! Dad said OK. Congrats on beeing a prefect! I am one too. see you soon. Lots of love Draco
Draco got up early on the day he had agreed on meeting Hanne and started packing. He packed all his school stuff and took his cloak out( He was going to wear it to TLC) On top of all his school stuff he got a framed picture of Hanne and him on the hogwarts grounds walking around and and he had his arm around her shoulder(Im sorry I love Malfoy) He dragged his trunk down a realized that it was three hours till he was supposed to leave. He decided to go early and bellowed to his father and mother:"Im gonna go early see ya!" He took a hand full of floo powder, stepped into the fireplace with his trunk and yelled:"The Leakey Couldren"

[Draco's slave]

should I post more?

[Lily_Evans]

please do!

[cho-chang]

hi i just wanna ay that it is the BEST!!!! please please please! write more  ;D