Hogwarts-anime style-7th yr.

[Surfergirl7]

 "Harry have you seen Summer"Ron asked."No you do mean Summer Cunninghamm though right"-"Duh Harry do you know any other Summers"-"Well no"Harry answered."Oh no here comes Hermione"Ron said turning around;Harry did the same-Hermione never saw them because she was getting onto the train and she had her nose buried into a long piece of parchment."Hey Ron isn't that Summer"Harry asked turning around.Ron's mouth dropped open.There was Summer her blonde hair flowing down just past her chest-she was wearing a pair of stunning sunglasses-she pulled them off  and swished her hair around a moment adjusting it so that the pink highlights on the sides where her bangs would be showed;she then walked over to Ron."So what do you think"she asked."You look pretty good dollface"a cold voice behind them-no doubt it was Draco Malfoy-Summer went over to him and said "Listen if you don't want a broken nose-leave-oh and NEVER call me dollface"she also had kicked him in the shins before saying that.He ran off afraid of what she may do."Whoa as far as I know you are the only one who's ever made Maloy run like that"Harry said."Not really she's the second remember Professor Moody that was the best moment of my life seeing Draco bounce like that"Ron added getting on the train with the other two right behind him.They then begin looking for a empty compartment....  

[Surfergirl7]

"Guy's I found one"Summer yelled.They all clambored in-Summer took her hot pink Vera Bradley backpack off and began digging in it-"What on earth are you looking for"ROn asked."My other earrings I had 'em peirced a third time"Summer replied showing him the small pink earrings that were currently in the holes."Found 'em"Summer added pulling a pair of small gold hoops out of a make-up bag.She took out her pink ones and out the other one's in."Okay now that that's taken care of"Summer said but was cut short by a knocking on the compartment door....

[cho chang]

Give me a break! I don't even have interest to read your story because it's too crammed together! Relax, okay? Take your spaces, ther's lots! And then I bet you all my savings then people will love your stories!

[Miss Xantier]

this is a good story. But like cho chang said, you need to use proper grammar and spaces. Update this regurarly.

[fudge0604]

Don't post in topics five years old...

There's a reason that they are in like, page seventeen.