Carter Keen

[Carter Keen]

Name: Carter James Keen

AGE: 16

Height: 6'1"

Appearance: Carter has light blonde hair that ends just above his vibrant blue eyes. He has long, strong limbs and his skin is a creamy golden color. His cheeks are always slightly pink and her get sunburnt easily. He has a crooked smile and perfect white teeth. His laugh is booming and contagous.

RACE: Pure wizard

Parents: Ciera and James Keen

Personality: James is an all-around nice person. He enjoys reading and hanging out with his friends. His smile and laugh adds to the fact that he can gain friends easily. He can get angry quite quickly, though, and when he does he doesn`t hold anything back. He can be quite or shy at times when meeting someone new.

Likes: Muggle cars, the color blue, dogs, and sunlight

Dislikes: Loud areas, green, and the dark

Power: Besides normal wizard powers, Carter has mastered the use of water and air. He is a panther Animagus.

History: Carter was born and raised around Hogwarts; All of his family attended the large school. His parents divorced when he was twelve, and he lives with his mother in Godric`s Hollow. He learned his Animagus and elemental powers after that. He didn`t, and still doesn`t, like to stay home very often, so he would work on his powers.

[Alexis]

Not bad.  Can't wait to rp with you.

[Miss Xantier]

What Alexis said.

[Sky]

It's not bad, like the others had said, but I do see some potential in the profile. For the appearance, you could easily make it a paragraph or two. As with History and personality. But I do like your description. Good use of words. Can't wait to RP with ya and welcome to HPFF!

[Alken]

Its not that much good as not that much bad also. What you are looking is the very interesting topic to discuss.


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