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My First Fan Fic~Please Read and Post

Started by MagicCamStarz, April 27, 2002, 08:51:13 AM

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MagicCamStarz

LoL  Well, Emily...sorry, but Ron is taken for this ficcy.  I'm writing a new one about Hermione and Draco, so maybe then you could be there.... ;)  Thanks for posting and I'm glad you enjoy it.  BTW, Shui...Tom's one of my favorite characters in this story too!  Well, I'll be posting in a bit....hold up....
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*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

After breakfast, the girls headed for Gryffindor Tower. The boys were already there. Cam spotted Tom sitting in a corner. She walked over to him.
"Hi," she said. "Merry Christmas."
"Hey," he answered. He looked a little sad. "Still mad at me?"
"No, I forgive you. Now I know why you've had a grudge against Malfoy."
"It's a stupid reason. I'm really sorry, Cam."
"It's no problem. I said I forgive you."
"Yeah, but-"
"Don't worry about it." She went up to Tom and gave him a hug. Tom smiled. "I'll see you at the dance later," Cam called back as she headed towards Sam and Hermione. "I hope you have fun with Lavender." Tom was smiling.
"Did you really do that?" Sam asked.
"Do what?"
"You hugged him. Malfoy wouldn't have liked that."
"Well, he wasn't here. And besides it's not like it meant anything. We're just friends."
"Whatever," Sam said.
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*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

The night came quickly. Cam was very excited about the ball. So were Sam and Hermione. They were going to meet their dates at the statue of the humpebacked witch. Cam was wearing a dark blue, sleeve less, silk dress that matched the color of her earrings. She decided to leave the necklace off in case the night became a little chilly.  Her hair was left down on her shoulders with clips that pulled her hair back. When she looked into the mirror, she reminded herself of her mother. Hermione was wearing a black dress with her hair in a twisted bun. Sam's dress was a royal, midnight purple. Her hair was half tied.
Hermione was talking to Sam when Cam burst into the room. "The girls are ready!" she exclaimed. "Shall we go now?"
Hermione laughed. "Love your formal talk, Cam! Let's go you guys."
The boys (Ron, Harry, and Malfoy) were already at the statue of the witch. "It's about time you girls showed up," Ron said.
"If we took a shorter time," Hermione said, "we wouldn't look the way we do now."
"Oh," said Ron. "Then I appreciate you guys being late." He walked over to Hermione and placed his arm around her waist.
"Let's go," Malfoy said as he took Cam by the hand.
This is going to be the most magical night ever, Cam thought to herself.

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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
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*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

.:~*Shuiliya*~:.

"Incase the night gets chilly" lol!
Good good good!  I think I've told you that about a million times,  but what does one more hurt?  lol  Ur a terrific writer!  Can't wait for more! ^____^
Shui~the Queen of Monkii's in the Future World
      ~One of the two brilliant... beautiful... and majestic Spelling Mages!

Be happy! :D

MrsRadcliffe0480

OMG Cam you absolutely HAVE to update this story ASAP!!!!!! It's sooooo awesome! Would you mind if I posted it on my website?

http://www.geocities.com/sparklestar0480/drhottie.html
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hpcoolest5

 ;DMan, I think this is the longest thread here! It's FANTASTIC, Cam! I love this! PLEASE keep going! Love it, love it, love it!!!! ;D
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I luv Dan Rad!

Sway

Ohh... It keeps getting better!
More, more, more,... (bangs spoon on kitchen table)
i like their dresses, pretty pretty pretty!
Dave Matthews Band muvarse mi mundo!!!!  Are there any other dave fans here?

MagicCamStarz

MrsRadcliffe0480:  Sure, you can post this ficcy on your site (which is great btw).  Just as long as you say it was written by me. ;)

Thanks to everyone else who's reading.  I really appreciate your comments and stuff.  Thanks again, and more will be up soon. :)
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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

The Great Hall was beautiful that night. A large Christmas tree stroked the ceiling. Its large ornaments were shining on the pine smelling leaves. A large star was at the top of the tree. I sparkled in the small light it was given. The house tables had been moved aside. There were only two large tables. A long food table and the teachers' table. Smaller circle tables were scattered accross the room with chairs to each tacle. A large stage stood near the back of the room. The band Sisterly Witches and W2W were performing. Dumbledore had made a wise descision because the two bands were the best "slow song" bands in the world, literally.
The three couples sat together at a table and started to get some food. Tom was found sitting with Lavender and Seamus and Dean. Seamus and Dean had gone with the Patil twins. Neville was with them too. He was with Ginny, Ron's younger sister. After eating, Malfoy, Ron, and Harry stepped in front of their partners and asked at the same time: "Would you like to dance?" All three girls accepted greatfully.
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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

Malfoy held Cam in his arms as they danced slowly accross the floor. W2W was singing "Over the Mountains, Into the Snow". It was a very peaceful song. Cam rested her head on Malfoy's shoulder as they danced into the night. Malfoy put his arm around Cam's waist while she put her arms around his neck. Their bodies were pulled closer together. That one dance seemed to last forever. Cam was hoping it would.
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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

Unfortunately, dances don't last forever. Cam and Malfoy danced the next few dances before sitting back down at their table. Suddenly, Pansy Parkinson came over. "Can I talk to you in private?" she asked glancing cruely at Cam.
"Okay," Malfoy said confused. "Can you excuse me Cam?"
"Sure."
They walked over to a corner.
"How could you?" Pansy said.
"How could I what?"
"You and that...that...Gryffindor!"
"Pansy, keep it down. Look, I know you're still upset about last year, but leave Cam out of this."
"You used to be so much better as a Slytherin," Pansy said moving closer to Malfoy. "We would always make fun of those Gryffindors, especially that Harry Potter. But now I see you and Harry talking like old friends. You and Cam dancing for over an hour. Forget her. She doesn't deserve you." She put her arms around Malfoy and pulled his body towards hers. "Give us another chance. I'll make it worth your while..."
"Get off me!" Malfoy answered pushing Pansy off. "I love Cam. Not you. It was over last year. It's not coming back together." Pansy looked at Malfoy evilly. Suddenly, she walked up to him and slapped his face as hard as she could. Malfoy stumbled backward. Cam was watching the whole thing. She ran over to Malfoy and kneeled down next to him.
"Are you alright?" she asked with a tone of concern in her voice.
"Yeah." Malfoy got up, rubbing his cheek. It had turned red. Cam put her hand on his cheek as if she had healing powers. She didn't, but Malfoy felt better anyway.
"I can't believe she did that."
"I'm used to it."
"Is that how she always treated you?"
"Only when I would disagree with her. Forget her. I'm alright." But Cam couldn't forget what Pansy did to Malfoy. She left Malfoy where he was standing and walked over to where Pansy was.
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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

MagicCamStarz

That's all for now.  Hope I'm leaving you in suspense.  LoL  I'll try to post more tomorrow.  'Till then, bye bye bye!

~Cam

P.S.  Pansy's a jerk!  LoL
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¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!

emily824

i hope she curses her!! I hate pansy!!!!
Harry Potter and the Signs of the Dark Lord

new chapters are in so read it if you follow the story! ;)

MrsRadcliffe0480

Wooooh! I think I can feel a rumble coming on. Thanks for letting me post your story MCS. Don't worry, of course I'll say it's your's!


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MagicCamStarz

"What do you want, you stupid Gryffindor?" she spat. The Slytherins around her laughed.
"I want you to lay off Malfoy," Cam said cooly.
"What? He asked you to come here and defend him?" Pansy put up a high voice that was supposed to represent Cam's, "'Oh, Draco! I'll protect you! Mommy, Daddy! Come help me! Get away from him you stupid Slytherin'," she said slapping the air. Cam couldn't hold herself in. She rolled her hand into a fist and punched Pansy in the face. Pansy fell down. Her nose was bleeding. She screamed.
"There's more where that came from," Cam said threateningly. "Never talk about me or my family ever agian! You'll regret it." Malfoy was running over with Harry, Ron, Sam, and Hermione. They stared at Pansy with wide eyes.
"WOW...Way to go, Cam!" Ron congratulated.
"That's not a good thing," Hermione said.
"Let's go," Cam said. They left the scene
`'·.¸(`'·.¸ ¸.·'´)¸.·'´
¸¸.*~Camryn~*.¸¸
¸.·'´(¸.·'´ `'·.¸)`'·.¸
*~*Call me Cam
*~*When tears are on the outside, the inside is healing
*~*You say 'Harry Potter Freak' like it's a bad thing
*~*Kristin Kreuk Rules!