My First Fan Fic~Please Read and Post

[MrsRadcliffe0480]

Hey Cam! Have a good time on vaca! Make sure to update this story!!!! It's wicked good!

[Lily_Evans]

I just started reading it! 17 pages whoa!, now 18, I lvoe your story Cam!

[Lily_Evans]

I just started reading it! 17 pages whoa!, now 18, I love your story Cam!

[MagicCamStarz]

Care of Magical Creatures was surely going to take the whole Voldemort thing off of Cam's mind. Or that's what she thought. They were told to go into groups of four. Hagrid handed each of the groups a large box. Cam's group consisted of herself, Malfoy, Tom, and Lavender Brown.
"Now don' scare 'em. They can be very dangerous. These creatures are called Barrates. Don' be startled by there appearences. They can get pretty feisty. Ya all can open yer boxes now. But do it slowly. They may bite."
Tom opened the box. Inside was a snake-like creature. It had black, wrinkled skin and green stripes down its long body. Lavender covered her mouth to stifle a small scream. Suddenly, the Barrate started to talk to them.
"What isss a Sslytherin doing with thessse Gryffindorsss?" it asked Malfoy.
"Ummm..." Malfoy started, "These are my friends."
"That isss not right!" the Barrate suddenly yelled. "A Sslytherin and a Gryffindor musst never be allowed to come together! Did you not hear about the cursse of the Bassilissk? It sayss that if a Gryffindor and Sslytherin come together..."
"Their loved ones shall be destroyed...yes, we know," Cam finished the Barrate's sentence. The Barrate just coiled into a ball and stayed that way for the rest of class.
"That was the weirdest Care of Magical Creatures lesson I have ever had," Cam said as she and Malfoy headed for the dungeons for Potions class.
"I surprised that it could talk. I thought you had to be a Parseltongue to be able to understand snakes."
"Well, it wasn't exactly a snake. It was a half-breed. A Barrate is born when a fish lays a chicken egg. Sounds weird," she said, seeing Malfoys mouth drop, "but it's true. They're very rare. I'm surprised that Hagrid was able to get so many!"
After all their lessons, which they received about four pages of homework each, Cam and Tom went to the library to do their homework. It took them over three hours, but they managed to complete everything. It was already dark outside when they finished. They headed up to Gryffindor Tower but were attracted by a soft laughter coming from around a corner. They decided to investigate.

[Lily_Evans]

Good! Keep going Cam!

[MagicCamStarz]

As they turned the corner, Cam almost passed out from shock. What she saw, she could not believe. Malfoy was standing with Pansy. But standing was not all they were doing. They were kissing. Cam covered her mouth to cover her scream. Tom was staring wide eyed at the two Slytherins.
Pansy saw Cam and gave her a satisfied smirk. She walked away smiling. Cam walked up to Malfoy.
"W-What did that mean?" she stuttered looking after Pansy.
"What do you think it means?" Malfoy spat. His eyes were not shining as they usually did. They were dark and looked empty. Cam pushed him aside and ran down the hallway and up the staircase, covering her face and wiping tears from her face. She stopped only when she arrived at the Fat Lady's picture. She fell to the ground and started sobbing even louder than before.
"Cam? Are you okay?" The voice belonged to Tom. He placed his arms around Cam.
"Do I look okay?" Cam nearly shouted. Tom was silent. "Sorry," Cam apologized. "It's just that..." She broke down and started to cry again. Tom patted her back. Obviously, he had no words of advice or comfort. Cam started to speak again. "I'm really sorry, Tom. I should've listened to you. I should've known he wouldn't change," she sniffed. Suddenly, she kicked her books that were on the ground toward the Fat Lady.
"Fiddletoe," Tom said. The password had been changed on Christmas. He picked up Cam's books and guided Cam into the common room. He placed her books on a table and sat down with her on the couch. The fire was glowing a bright orange, red, and yellow. Cam put her head on Tom's shoulder while crossing her arms. Tom placed his arms around her into a hug.

[MagicCamStarz]

Kinda stupid....sorry!  There's really nothing I hate more than this story!  LoL   ::)  Hope u all out there like it though.   ;D

~Cam

[emily824]

i thought it was very creative! i think it's not malfoy...but someone else in disguse! like they drank a polyjucie potion or something....it just wouldn't be right! malfoy was so in love with cam...and now this?

[Lily_Evans]

I love it Cam!

[MagicCamStarz]

I'm glad u all like it....I'll try to post a bit more in a little while....if i can.  Sorry, but i can't make any promises....

[emily824]

c'mon cam! i love the story! please post more! ;D

[Lily_Evans]

Keep going!

[MagicCamStarz]

"I'm sorry," Cam said again.
"It's okay," Tom replied. He looked into Cam's eyes, which were already very teary. He leaned in and kissed her. He looked at her again. She was still beautiful, even though her face was smeared with tears.
"Was that supposed to mean something?" Cam asked after they broke away.
"Well, I'm hoping it means that you'll be my girlfriend." Cam nodded, happy knowing that Tom would not do anything to break her heart.
The clock struck ten. It was getting late. Cam kissed Tom on the cheek and said, "Good night, Tom. I'll see you in the morning." She walked up to the girls' dormitories. As she lied on her four poster, she saw that Hermione was already sleeping and that Sam was also in her bed.
"So...what happened?" Sam said from the shadows. Cam jumped at the sudden noise.
"What do you mean?" she replied.
"You know what I mean. What's up with the whole 'You and Tom' thing?"
"Huh?" Cam was thoroughly confused.
"Don't lie to me, Cam. You and Tom got a little too close down there," Sam said nodding toward the door.
"How did you-"
"I have a confession to make....I'm a seer." The room was silent.
"You? A seer? One of those 'Tell the Future People'? Okay, that is just not right! Why didn't you tell me?"
"I can keep it a secret if I want to."
"Does Hermione know?"
"Oh, she found out a long time ago!"
"So...you know about everything that happened?"
"Yup....From the 'Malfoy and Pansy' incident to the 'Cam and Tom in the common room' incident." She laughed but stopped when she saw Cam's face. "Well, it's getting late. I'll see you tomorrow. 'Night, Cam."
"Good night, Sam."

[MagicCamStarz]

Ok...I KNOW that was stupid and cheesy and whatever, and I'd change it if I could, but I can't....Sorry if you hate it or whatever.  LoL  I'll try to post more soon...

[emily824]

it was knda cheesey.....but still good! post more!