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Title: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on December 12, 2008, 12:54:27 PM
Hey guys.So I'm making a Fan-Fic and I need pointers I don't have anything yet but it is coming I promise. ;D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on December 12, 2008, 01:56:48 PM
Prologue: On the 18 of the 12 2002 Alex was very very happy because he had designed                       a cure for the horrible disease of vampires. He was also happy because he knew he would be rolling around in cash when the cure was shown to the world. He could see it now: living in a mansion, having a personal butler for all his needs and being spoon feed by Pamela Anderson.


19/12/02 (The next day)


It was only two o'clock in the morning and Alex already had about one thousand unhappy vampires trying to break his door down to get the cure mixture. Unfortunately Alex slept naked and about half a dozen vampires saw his stuff through his window. Alex quickly got changed and went outside and shouted "Can't a man get five minutes peace without some weirdo's looking at his dinga ling" and this made all of the vampires laugh. "So why are you here" Asked Alex "We won't the cure idiot" Said a boy from Hogwarts named Nate "O the cure I'm sorry I don't have it on me you will need to come to the ministry today to get it" Said Alex sadly.



Two hours later

At the ministry it was such a busy day for Alex. He was selling his cure every second all day so far. Alex had no time for lunch for he was using every spare second he had on a daily basis selling his mixture. It was a horrible day for Alex but he was happy when Bucky and Isabelle came along to cheer him up so his day would be better.


That night
Alex was very tired from his day so he used his magic operated television with his magic operated Foxtel and watched the latest episode of Kyle XY and went to bed and fell asleep instantly.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on December 14, 2008, 01:05:03 AM
nice!
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on December 14, 2008, 05:10:10 AM
Thankyou part two will come when more pepole post a comment in mine ;D ;D ;D ;D....
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on December 14, 2008, 05:30:07 AM
k.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Sky on January 5, 2009, 09:40:52 AM
Not bad...but is it meant to be so...funny? Kinda satire-ish. Could be more serious. Spelling is a little off and grammar too. But that doesn't really matter.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on January 5, 2009, 09:54:09 AM
What's satire-ish mean?




yeah it was sussposse to have that funny normal kind of vibe ;D ;D
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Sky on January 6, 2009, 07:59:36 PM
Satire is like being funny in a serious matter.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on January 7, 2009, 12:45:10 PM
That is what I meant it to be ;D ;D
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on January 18, 2009, 07:15:12 AM
When are ya gonna continue?
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on January 18, 2009, 08:42:15 AM
Soon
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on January 18, 2009, 01:17:13 PM

                                                ~Next Morning~


Alex awoke to some broad knocks on the door, when he awoke, he answered the door to see two rather strong looking Ministry workers "We would like to escort you to Azkaban now Sir" said the tallest fellow, "Bu-but what for?" Asked young Alex, "For giving Vampires a potion that makes them aggravated so lives go" Said the shorter man, "No, No you don't understand that was a cure for Vampires it must be a side affect!" Shouted Alex, "Did they know of this side-affect when they took it" Asked the tallest of the two men, "No" admitted Alex "But the vampires she could arrested not me" Said Alex.


Alex shot a fire ball at the two men and ran of to Bucky's home.

                              ~Bucky's Home~



When Alex arrived at Bucky's house he did his special knock on the front door and five seconds later Sirius Black answered the door and directed him to Bucky's room, when he knocked on the door Bucky replied with "enter", Alex looked around and noticed that Bucky had lip stick all over his face and Isabelle Xantier was checking out Bucky's room Bucky looked shocked "Alex what are you doing here" Bucky asked Alex, "I'm running from the law it turns out my potion had a few unexpected side-affects" answered Alex, Bucky sighed "Come in" He said , Alex sat on the bed and inspected Bucky's guitar "A Gibson Dot" Said Alex "Yes that's right exactly you should think about a music career" Bucky told Alex, Alex thought 'I know I should be a guitar maker player" Said Alex, Isabelle laughed "Weird occupation" She said, "not really  you know Les Paul had a similar occupation" Bucky told Isabelle.


                                         ~Ten hours later~
No one expected it but Alex was rocking out already on Bucky's Dot, Bucky entered his room and saw Alex using his guitar "O.K it is time for the inventing part I don't like you using my guitar" Bucky told Alex, so as you'd expect Alex made a similar Dot in four hours that ran on electric not magic someway that did not make sense to Bucky at all but it made perfect sense to Isabelle.


                                         ~2 O'clock~


"Stop playing that Bloody guitar" Shouted Isabelle "I need some rest I'm not a robot you idiot", Bucky awoke "Isabelle you woke me up what's going on?" Asked Bucky "Your friend is still playing guitar" Said Isabelle, "And?" Asked Bucky "It's annoying" Said Isabelle, "And so's your bragging" said Bucky half asleep. And with that Bucky fell asleep, Alex fell asleep still playing guitar and Isabelle sobbed herself asleep.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on January 19, 2009, 01:20:34 AM
lol, very funny. the very end is mean though for me. I DIDN'T BRAG. But its awesome!
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on January 19, 2009, 07:38:49 AM
Yeah he was half asleep
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Kiara Johnson on February 17, 2009, 03:10:47 PM
Bump
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on February 24, 2009, 01:34:08 PM
Bucky awoke and walked to the bathroom, Bucky’s jaw dropped in shock, Alex had converted the bathroom into a recording studio, “Did you even think to ask my Dad?” Burst Bucky, Alex knew what Bucky was talking about and immediately answered with “Yeah He helped” “without him I’d still be working” Alex told Bucky excitedly “Wicked” Said Bucky picking up his guitar “Wanna jam” asked Bucky ‘how about we maple syrup” Said Alex “O.K’ Said Bucky laughthing.



                                                ~Half an hour later~



Bucky picked up a paper and read an article at random, Bucky read ‘Duets or singles @ the crazy elves, just show up and start singing or playing. “Ay Alex read this” Bucky called to Alex came over instantly, Alex read the article “cool I should go” Said Alex “I” said Bucky clearing his throat twice “alright we can play together but you’re not using my guitar it’s mine” Alex told Bucky roughly “fine” Said Bucky.




                                                 ~Later~


“Up next is Elwood and Jake as they call themselves” Said the owner of the crazy elves, yep you guessed it Alex and Bucky jumped upon the stage howling. They sang “B”movie first Alex on guitar and piano and Bucky on trumpet, and boy did they get a huge, huge cheer, next they played Fip,Flop&Fly which was also by the Blues Brothers.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on February 24, 2009, 10:40:07 PM
nice. you like Blue Brothers too much. Oh well, this is good.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on February 25, 2009, 12:16:06 PM
To much... ow You made me fell bad :'( (LOL)
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on March 16, 2009, 01:39:39 PM
~Hello Elwood~



Elwood Jake had gasped when he had heard that Elwood and Jake would be playing *What the F**k* he thought. He realised that they where really good. As they took a rest Elwood ordered a drink cold 'Maggee', Elwood sipped his drink and walked in a Kool like fashion over to who he thought where could Elwood and Jake "Hey I'm Elwood Jake" "Excuse me" Said Bucky "My Name is Elwood Jake" Said Elwood "O' your god" Said both Bucky and Alex at the same "Well I'm Bucky and he's Alex" Said Bucky "O Kool I'm Elwood err I said that twice didn't I?" asked Elwood "Yeah" Said Alex ; "What do you say you join my band?" Asked Elwood "Is it Famous?" Asked Bucky "Yes" Said Elwood "Is it a Blues band?" Asked Alex "Yes" replied Elwood; The three where walking down a road "So ya have a girlfriend Elwood?" Bucky Asked "No but I'm interested in this one girl named Alexis do you know her?" Elwood "Do we know her, we both liked her at two different times but I'm taken now but Alex is a lonely sack" Bucky Said Laughthing "Hey" Said Alex nudging Bucky, "I'm interested In Stacey" Said Alex "What the F**k you never told me this" Said Bucky "I never had a chance I only just figured it out" Said Alex "You know she's engaged right?" Asked Bucky "No" Said Alex.     
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on April 22, 2009, 10:29:32 AM
lol! PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!!!!!!! Add me in it!!!!
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on April 22, 2009, 06:06:40 PM
Alright but I'm busy with Bucky Maggee (My Movie) so I'll do it in the time Ib have cool????
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on April 22, 2009, 09:13:56 PM
fine...
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on April 23, 2009, 08:42:15 AM
Arew you angry with me (I'm aloud to have a life)
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Miss Xantier on April 23, 2009, 08:48:44 AM
maybe... maybe not... you'll never know.
Title: Re: 1st Fan-fic (Don't laugh at my stuff ups)
Post by: Dobby_ROX on April 30, 2009, 03:23:22 PM
"How about that Isabelle bird" asked Elwood "You really have a short memory". "Be quite you talking chicken" Said Elwood waiting to see what Bucky said. "Man you're funny but I love funniness so you rock a lot man".  (Very very busy or I would have about at lest 8 more lines so sorry pepole but I'm a very very very busy man)