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Hi, just a few corrections. I think you should state the blood status of Alfonso's parents. You said he has a star tattoo. A tattoo is an artificial imprinting on skin drawn with ink or a rapid drum beat. I think the word birthmark would apply better. Thunder is a noise, no wait, a sound, sorry. It doesn't electrocute things. Lightning is electricity and light and thermal energy and all of that. That would electrocute a person.  And when he blows up in anger, does he blow up as radiating electrical energy from him or does he throw tantrums or does he do both?

Her advice was sound. Aaron smiled back at her. He carefully closed his text book after wedging his incomplete essay in. He packed everything into a small men's satchel. He slap his forehead. "Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Aaron." He said and outstretched his hand.

Aaron heard a voice above him. The voice was familiar, from a class maybe? He looked up to meet full-face with someone's stomach. It bulged out in a round fashion suggesting pregnancy. He looked up to meet his speaker's face. Aaron was surprised to find her so young...and pregnant. His mother threatened to hang him by his thumbs outside his third story window if he ever got a girl pregnant.

"Another week? You mean a week hasn't already passed? Hmm, maybe that was last week. Sorry, I'm easily confused. I get days and weeks mixed in my head." Having a non forgetful mind can be such a gift and such a pain. He tilted his head to one side and furrowed his eyebrows. "You gave me doubled advice; are you suggesting that I stop my work, or should I continue it in the library?"

Aaron sat with his socked feet on the edge of his armchair. His thick History of Magic textbook was resting open upon the table that was his knees. A vast piece of wordless parchment stared back at him. His faerie war essay was not going so well. His head hurt as he did a tantivy mental recap of his notes and novels and textbooks and anything else he has heard or seen about faeries. Eventually he managed a few quotes various history books and included his own observations.

His quill broke underneath the crooked angle of which he held writing utensils. He sighed and pulled out his wand and quickly muttered the repairing charm. He sighed again and thought that it was time that Hogwarts modernizes and issues ball-point pens. Then he wondered why they were called ball-point if round objects can't have points. In between pondering the science of spheres and finishing homework, Aaron, being too shy to engage in conversation, wished somebody would come and help him relieve the work his troubled mind was under.

Okay I Kind of named my character wrong. His name Is Aaron Collin Bergles. Sorry.

Hi. I'm pretty sure you forgot Severus Snape's spells, but I'm not sure if they count as official spells.

Well if they do, you left out "Levicorpus" and "Sectumsempra".

Levicorpus makes one levitate by their ankle, and Sectumsempra cause one to bleed severly, if I'm not mstaken.

I'm not sure if that right and I hope it helps your spell collection.

Name: Aaron Collin Watson

AGE: 14

Height: 5'5

Appearance: His skin is pale. His veins are visible under his stark skin. His hair is almost the same bleached color. His hair hangs straight over his eyes. His eyes are gray due to past sicknesses. Despite his lanky appearance, lean muscles are hidden underneath his skin. He is almost always seen with sunglasses.

RACE: Muggle-born, Bardic

Parents: Collin Bergles and Becky Watson Bergles.

Personality: Aaron is the type of person who would give the clothes he is wearing to a homeless person. He is shy and quiet. His greatest fear is betrayal, likewise he doesn't hand out his trust on a silver platter like some people would do. It's hard to see Aaron smile. He is able to love but is more likely to hate. He can be angered easily,but he never shows it. He is literal. Jokes come slower to him. He doesn't have mental issues,he is actually really intelligent, just not so logical. He is loyal to the few friends he would manage to find. He is polite and independent. He is humble to a point not far from self-deprecation.

Likes: Books, Music, Animals, Solitude, Hygiene, Water

Dislikes: Noise, sometimes People, Insults, Death, Violence, Meat(He's a vegetarian)

Power: His mind is more than a place for thinking. He can project his mind out to read other peoples minds and to communicate with people mentally. He can also read their emotions depending on what color there mind happens to be. He can enter the world of consciousness-a subconscious place where you can only "see" people's and other living things' minds. He can enter peoples minds and take away their sorrow or make them feel better. He can change their emotions. He can also take pain away from people and inflict it on himself or other people. His senses are really sharp. He can hear what key is being played when listening to music, detect what notes are being played and can replicate it. He can smell and see better than most people. His touch is the most annoying. He could touch his pants and feel every thread and every seam used that his finger or hand would give access to.

History: Disease always managed to find him when he was a child. Well actually he always managed to find disease. He would have rather seen himself suffer than people he cared about suffer. He was always a bright boy. He could recite passages from his text books when he was in Muggle school. His parents are both Muggles. His mom is a Squib. His dad had no knowledge of magic until he married Becky. Aaron loves his parents and cares about them dearly. His parents didn't hide him from the world of magic. All of his mom's siblings are wizards. He was born in the United States. His parents are rich as well. His mom owns a bakery slash cafe and his dad is an accountant. His magical family allowed him to use their bank account. Having seven wizard's worth of money can come in handy. Magic always came simply to him. He is now in his fourth year of Hogwarts. His grandfather is a bard.

Strengths/Talents: His knowledge may be his greatest strength. He has a completely eidetic memory-meaning he can recall visual images, voices, sounds, and information easily. He sings well and plays three musical instruments: guitar, piano, and the flute. He's a fast runner and he learns quickly.

Weakness: He has more weaknesses than he does strengths. His hesitation is the biggest. Before he would do something big or important he would over-analyze the situation. He would gladly help someone in need but it might take some time for them to get help. His modesty is the next issue. he doesn't think he'll succeed and,being afraid to fail, sometimes doesn't try or to take risks.

Wand: It is nine inches,made of ebony, and has the core of a unicorn's tail hair.