I never imagined that my life would form into this. I never thought that a small, innocent little red-headed girl could grow up to be a monster. But I was wrong. This is what I am.
I lay on the floor of the cold, dark dungeon. Bound by chains in a small cell, barely any room to move. My stomach aches with hunger. I try to roll over but the chains send a small bolt of electricity through my body. Any sudden movements cause the chains to react, sending a zap of electricity through my body. I try to sit up, getting zapped again. I wince but manage to get up. Resting against the wall, I try to figure out what time it is. I've been here for a week now and I've lost total track of time. I look out my cell. Within the darkness, there is a small flash of bright light. The sound of footsteps walking down the hall, stopping occasionally at a few cells. The steps get louder as they get closer. Finally, I see the flashlight staring me in my emerald green eyes.
" Riku Xeria." His voice said, not caring about how loud he was. I could make out somewhat of the security guards looks. Blue hat, long face, brown beard and blue uniform, mid forties. I wasn't sure who he was, but I remember seeing him when I was brought here. He took a key out of his pocket. "Dr. Matsu would like to see you now." He stuck the key into the lock of the cell, twisting it quickly and opening the cell. I was silent. Dr. Matsu? Who could that possibly be? Maybe he was going to let me go. I slowly got up, careful not to trigger the chains, but fell to the ground hard. My legs were weak. The chains reacted as I hit the ground and sent the zap through me again. I grasped the metal bars of the cell and pulled myself up, ignoring the chains this time. The security guard didn't seem to care that I had fallen.
He led me through the hall in silence until we came to a large metal door with no windows. He knocked quickly then opened it, letting me through then following me. There was a large wooden desk with three chairs around it and one behind it. A man sat in it. He was tall and muscular. He had short blonde hair with blue eyes and black glasses. He appeared to be waiting for us.
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Not bad.
Yeah. Grammatical Errors, Characters probably could use more detail. I didn't take my time but I wish I did. This is the place where I can store my ideas and whatnot, so sorry if they kinda suck at first. I hate it when my parents look at my documents.
Haha, me too. If I wanna show someone, I'll friggin say "LOOKY!". Until then, stay out of my files.
Cintinue Please!!!!
Really great job sky! I love it! And I agree with you guys..... I always like hide my stories until I post them.