*Whee... My first bit of fan fiction! Well, this has no continuation from any book at all. Oh, BTW, I hardly log on, so you guys gotta wait a bit for the next parts*
BTW, this is my style: I'll write a little in a post, I'll do many posts, so just in case something happens and I have to stop, I wouldn't lose so much data.
Enough talk, here goes!
The Final Showdown
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Right now, the only thing Lord Voldem0rt has in mind is destroying Harry, the boy who had destroyed him years ago and stripped him off his body...
And now, he was going to acheive his goal, the one he has craved for ever since his return to a human body...
He has kidnapped Dumbledore. Surely, this would attract Harry to him. And sure enough, Harry could not ignore it. He walked right into Lord Voldem0rt's lair.
There was Albus Dumbledore, bound and gagged, tied to the ground. And right beside him was Lord Voldem0rt himself, who turned to look at Harry, an evil grin spreading on his face. His plan has worked exactly the way he wanted it to.
There were no death eaters. Just Harry, Voldem0rt and Dumbledore. Voldem0rt stood up and walk towards Harry, who stood there. Very much afraid that Dumbledore would lose his life because of him.
And then Voldem0rt spoke. "I won't do anything to him." He walked right in front of Harry. "I only want" he poited his wand at Harry's throat "your life".
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(thanks, Em)
Harry wasn't going to just give up his life. He remembered the propecy "Neither can live while the other survives". Killer or victim? He chose killer.
"Not without a fight, my lord" Harry said, looking straight into Voldem0rt's face.
Voldem0rt whipped his wand away from Harry's throat. He lifted into the air and screamed "AVADA KE-" and just then Harry said "Expelliarmus". Voldem0rt's wand was knocked out of his hand.
It propelled to the other side of the room. Voldem0rt dived towards it, but before he was even near it, Harry had shouted "IMPEDIMENTA!!!"
Voldem0rt was caught in mid air. He fell hard onto the ground, he was slowed down and crawled jerkily to his wand.
"Accio Wand!" Harry shouted. Voldem0rt's wand flew across the room and Harry caught it.
Voldem0rt looked as though he was bound by invisible ropes. He crawled across the room but instead of going for his wand he lunged at Dumbledore, grasping Dumbledore's throat.
Harry knew Voldem0rt was trying to scare Harry, but he was not going to let Voldem0rt do it. Pointing his own wand straight at Voldem0rt, he screamed "REDUCTO!".
The blasting spell worked well, Voldem0rt was lifted from the ground and smashed against the wall.
Then the impediment jinx wore off. He turned to look at Harry and dived straight at him...
this is good continue :)
(thanks)
Without a wand, however, that was a bad move, and Harry had not played seven years' of Quidditch for nothing. He dived sideways and Voldem0rt's hands only caught thin air.
Then he worked his Dark Arts. His wand flew off Harry's slightly slackened grip. With a surge of fear, Harry saw Voldem0rt catch his wand in his hands...
And then voldem0rt reached for his dark mark. Harry knew he was attempting to call his death eaters for help, and Harry wasn't going to let him do that.
Bringing his wand down from the air in a swishing action, Harry shouted "Wingardium Leviosa!" He immediately gained control of Voldem0rt's hand. He forced it away with his wand tip.
"No, no, no." Harry said mockingly, hoping to provoke Voldem0rt. "I like it just like this, just me and you." Voldem0rt's face contorted with fury for a moment.
"Very well." He said and lifted his wand to point straight at Harry's heart...
"CRUCIO!" he screamed. Harry had no time to resist. The curse hit him right in the heart. Pain surged through his body and he was forced to kneeling position.
Then he heard Voldem0rt's voice, as though from far away, say the words "AVADA KEDAVRA!". Although the pain was so intense, he did not want to die...
He forced his muscles to work, and they did. He managed to roll sideways as the blast of green light hit the stone floor right beside him.
The pain drained out of his body. He was angrier than ever. He swung his wand upwards and shouted "STUPEFY!". Right at the same time, Voldem0rt had shouted "Protego!"
The stunner hit the shield and bounced off towards the ceiling, cracking it instantly.
(GUYS! I'm really bored. Anyone wanna talk to me, please go ahead!)
Harry was slightly confused. Voldem0rt took the chance to send another killing curse at him, which thankfully missed. It blown a hole in the wall.
Harry realized that he could not fight Voldem0rt alone. He needed help fighting Voldem0rt.
Just as he's thinking, Voldem0rt sent another killing curse. Harry rolled sideways again and a gold galleon fell out of his pocket...
Then Harry remembered. Back in his fifth year, he had organized a Practical Defence group, called the DA. He remembered Hermione had used Galleons as a method of communiction, similar to that of the Dark mark.
Then he remembered that his galleon had a dent in the center. The particular galleon that fell out of his pocket had a dent in its centre.
At that point of time, he had to duck another killing curse, but now he had a plan...
Great! Continue.. :thumbsup:
(Thanks Fawkes! Guys, I'm running out of ideas! Any ideas pls IM me, thanks)
He picked up his wand and smashed it hard onto the coin. The effect was better than Hermione had made it to be.
A marquee of words formed at the side of the galleon, saying "Please help Harry. Harry is in the Shrieking Shack in Hogwarts".
Harry waited, doing only defensive magic, until at least twenty people rushed into the shack. voldem0rt's eyes widened. "I thought we agreed we'd fight one on one, Potter?" asked Voldem0rt. "Or has Dumbledore taught you how to play dirty?"
He redirected his wand at Dumbledore. "Since your promise is not kept, I find no reason to keep mine. AVAD-" Twenty-eight jets of light issued from twenty-eight wands, hitting Voldem0rt all over.
A few jets were red. They were stunners, which served their purpose. Voldem0rt slumped, stunned onto the ground, right beside Albus Dumbledore.
Harry walked towards Voldem0rt, rage pumping through his veins, then, he turned to his friends and said "Those of you who want to be able to see Thestrals in the future, please stay here. The rest can leave."
Nobody moved a muscle.
Harry bent down and removed dumbledore's gag. He looked at Harry, tears in his eyes, and said "I truly appreciate this, Harry." Harry smiled, then looked at Voldem0rt.
He muttered, more to himself than anyone else "Neither can live while the other survives..." He pointed his wand at Voldem0rt. "Neither can live while the other survives..."
He took a deep breath. "Avada... Ke- Ke-". He let out his breath. "I can't do it." He said softly to Dumbledore, who merely said, "One must die in the hands of the other".
Harry was determined. He lifted up his wand and brought it down. "AVADA KEDAVRA!"
I didn't work. There was no flash of green light.
Harry looked at Dumbledore. Who said, "I cannot kill him. He must die in your hands, Harry."
But Harry couldn't do the Avada Kedavra. What could he do?
(OK, guys, it's now open for suggestions. The first suggestion about what to do with Voldem0rt would be used! Oh, BTW I won't be online for a few days.)
(Ok, I'm continuing. Credit goes to Tweetie for giving me the idea! Thanks Tweetie!)
Harry had no idea what to do. He looked around for a means of help, until Dumbledore spoke again. "He must die in your hands, Harry. Any ideas?"
Then Harry understood. Dumbledore wanted Harry to kill Voldem0rt physically. No magic, just physically attacking.
Harry looked at dumbledore, who simply nodded. Harry took a deep breath and looked at Voldem0rt. Then he brought his hands down and grabbed Voldem0rt throat.
It looked like a joke. He didn't even know if he was doing any damage to voldem0rt. He let his hands go. He must, somehow, vent his anger, destroy the man who killed his parents.
And he knew, he shouted "ACCIO Baseball Bat!". And a baseball bat came. He took a deep breath, and began to swing it at every bit of Voldem0rt he could reach.
After a full five minutes, Harry stepped back. His clothes were dripping with blood. However, Harry didn't know if Voldem0rt was dead. He had, after all, tried many ways to stop death...
(Guys wanna submit any ideas?)
Harry was about to step back to see the damage when he heard somebody shout "Enervate!". Lucious Malfoy had appeared in the door and had revived his master.
Voldem0rt was injured but alive. before anyone could react, a deep voice shouted "AVADA KEDAVRA!". Malfoy slumped onto the floor. Dumbledore had killed him.
Voldem0rt limped towards Harry. He pulled the baseball bat out of Harry's hand and suddenly brought it down on Harry's head. He missed, however. It only hit Harry's shoulder hard. Harry ran to one side and summoned the bat out of Voldem0rt's hand. Harry ran across and whacked Voldem0rt in the head.
He collapsed to one side and fainted.
Not bad, Violent, but not bad. lol
(Yes, Ginny. I intended it too be violent. speaking of violence, you can visit www.madnesscombat.com for some real, hardcore violence.
Harry lifted the baseball bat and brought it down on Voldem0rt's head. Blood splattered. Voldem0rt was dead. And this concludes our story, my first Fanfic.
lol,nice ;D
:thumbsup: That was great! :) I do like violent stories, and that is the sort of thing that I like. Maybe you could write a sequel, where Harry has to fight the remaining Death Eaters. Just a suggestion. I look forward to reading anything else that you may choose to write. ;D
:sweetheart: Tweetie
*grins* I think it's awsome. I was just noting that it was violent.
yes very good violent but good.
imagine it in more detail!
You guys like my writing, then?
Could you rate it, out of 1 to 5, 1 being the worst and 5 being the best? ;D
4 its good
4, love it ;D, write another! ;D
I'll need some ideas, you know ;D
yeah, umm, godd luck on that! :P
What's that supposed to mean? ???
means I suck with fan fics so I am no help....
Oh, I thought you liked writing? ;D
Yes, I do, just not Fan Fics..... Just not good at them.....
What's the difference? It's about the same thing, isn't it?
Fan Fics are based from characters already made and I can't do that, I have to make my own characters and bla bla bla bla bla bla.....Dangit rain! my power goes out I will scream *screams* lol haha