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Title: *The Diary Of a Bad Girl*
Post by: Trixie Malfoy on June 19, 2003, 05:22:31 AM
Diary of A bad girl, Chapter 1: The Beginning

Dear Diary,
It's my "First year" at Hogwarts, actually I transferred from Salem and supposed to be in my fifth year. I'm sitting in an compartment with chattering first years who seem to be talking about "Gryffindor" "Slytherin" "ravenclaw" and "hufflepuff" I mean, what type of names are that, I'm really excitied about Qudditich, although I hope people don't think I'm to awakard about the broom I'm using, Cleansweep 7, mum promised me she'd buy me a new one, well no one listens to me anymore, now do they?

  Oh My Goodness! Harry Potter just walked into my compartment! the harry potter, have to go more later

~Trixie~


I dropped my pencil when I saw him, he looked at me with a small smile, while my jaw was dropped.Great.I'll be even more awkward.

A Boy who was slightly taller then harry, with red hair, freckled face was staring at me as if he had been thrown a big surprise party.

"Hello, I'm Hermione Granger, this is Ron" She added pointing to the red hair boy. "And...Harry" Ron meant to say "Hi" but his voice trailed off.

"Hi Hermione,Ron and Harry" (I blushed saying his name)

"I'm Trixious DeCloet"

"Trixie for short" I added hastily

 Hermione smiled,She had brown nushy hair (No Offence) and deep brown eyes.

"Well, do you mind if we stay in this compartment, every where else is full, BTW are you a first year" asked Harry.

I stared into his bright green eyes. "Actually kinda of, I transferred here from Salem, so I guess fifth year"

Ron and Harry had puzzled looks on their face

"Salem is in Amercia"

"Oh...."

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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 19, 2003, 05:41:30 AM
Good Job!!!!
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Post by: AcId_BrOoZ on June 19, 2003, 09:29:21 AM
YEAH! I like it so far. :D
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Post by: _Lavender_ on June 19, 2003, 03:05:57 PM
BUMPOOOOO!
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 19, 2003, 09:42:59 PM
really good plot!
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 20, 2003, 05:43:36 AM
~let's go Kate!~
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Post by: Trixie Malfoy on June 20, 2003, 07:21:55 AM
Continuation of  Chapter 1: The Beginning

 Were here.

Dear Diary,
I cannot believe it "The Harry Potter" actually talked to me! OMG! I can't believe it! maybe he doesn't take me for awkward, what's weird is the Ron guy keeps "Checking me out" he probably doesn't know what that means. Amercian Language. he's pretty cute I guess...Harry's talking to some big guy.A Giant.Who goes by the name of "Hagrid" Hermione isn't bad either, she's pretty nice to me, and she's full of spunk, and she doesn't care about what other people think of her.At the moment I'm in a boat since I'm considered a "First year" but soon I'll be aquainted with the rest of people who are actually my own age, no offence to the 11 year olds, but i'd like to hang around people who are actually my age.Well were arriving at the castle , I should sign off for now BTW i figured out "Gryffindor" and all those names, there like 'Houses" where I'll stay for the remaining 2 years, I hope I'm in Gryffindor! So i can be with Harry, Ron and Hermione

Bye!

~Trixie~


The End of chapter one: the Beginning
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 20, 2003, 07:40:30 AM
BUMP!
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 21, 2003, 04:54:41 AM
:)
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Post by: Trixie Malfoy on June 21, 2003, 05:14:10 AM
chapter 2: the sorting ceremony

Dear Diary,
That was freaky, you want to know? Well a firs tyear boy was in his boat, and he was splish spalshing with the water and the giant squid pulled him under.i automaticially dived in and saved him.Nopw everyone is calling me the term "hero" well...I'm getting ready for the sorting....i'm so scared..My hand is so sweaty, I'd better stop writing, Gryffindor please, please,PLEASE!

~Trixie~


I froze as Professor McGonagall called my name, what do I do now? A boy behind me nudged me, I took a big deep breath, and walked towards the hat.

i slipped on the hat.....

Gryffindor please, not hufflepuff, gryffindor please.

The hat had a sinking feeling on my head.

"I know where to put you...GRYFFINDOR!" shouted the hat.

I froze, I had wanted Gryffindor, but had it been a mistake?
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 21, 2003, 10:20:04 AM
really good!
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 21, 2003, 08:04:19 PM
Keep going. don't give up!
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Post by: Trixie Malfoy on June 21, 2003, 11:17:12 PM
The great hall errupted with applause.

I took a seat between Harry and Ron, the one Ron had actually saved for me.The sorting went on and on, finally the feast began.

Food magicially appered, and I hadn't realised hoe hungry I was until now! I ate two pieces of chicken. The list could go on, i felt like i was at home, it felt like a wonderful dream that would last forever.oh how I wished. The feast ended and so did my hunger, we were sent to bed with full stomachs.

**

I wrote a quick entry before ebd:

dear diary,
Yup! Gryffindor,just as i thought, but it hadn't been a istake, right? I think I like harry more then a friend...he's charming.. and he always bids me conversation, I've known him for almost 2 days and  yet we seem so close...I don't want to break the connection with him,or either one of us I feel will get hurt. Ron's okay, he has a younger sister ginny, who seems way to different to be his sister, Ginny's so sweet and out-going, were becoming good friends. Same with Hermione I've never met anyone who's interested in reading, unlike my self of course.
i'm pretty tired, and i miss mum so much!

~Trixie~
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 21, 2003, 11:21:43 PM
good job, Katie!
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 22, 2003, 08:06:45 AM
vry good job. Hey Hermione yoe do read alot of books don't you? lol
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 23, 2003, 04:27:03 AM
Of course! ;) :), Good job kate!
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 23, 2003, 05:31:11 AM
lol how about in real life?
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 24, 2003, 08:49:47 AM
YUP!
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Post by: Trixie Malfoy on June 24, 2003, 09:30:24 AM
End of Chapter 2, Chapter 3: His one last regret

A/N=Authors Note, i may do this throughout the story.

A/N: You'll get the chapter title after a few more posts.

**

"Trixie, Are you hungry, it's breakfast?" Hermione shook me awake at 7:00 a.m in the morning, I usally prefer to sleep in during these days.

I groaned.

"I'll come down in a minute, I need to take my dressing gown off, and get dressed"

"Okay" answered Hermione who already had her robe on, I noticed..She never brushed her hair! or her teeth, or even put on makeup. Ew! (A/N Trixie is quite the perfectionist)

I slipped off my dressing gown, brushed my hair straight and left it down for once. put on lipgloss and eyeshadow..and once I was satisfied i smiled at my self in the mirror.

Dear Mum,
Trixie here, I know your worried...term has just begun and i'm happy with my school already,  I have 4 good friends so far (You were right that I would make friends) harry Potter (yes mum, The boy who lived!) Ron, Hermione and ginny. There are nice! I'll write more to you later...I only wrote you a quick note to tell you I'm not suffering, so how's America? I miss you mum. I'll see you at Christmas Holidays!

Luv ya  lots,
~Trixie~
p.s hope you enjoy your self!


I sent the letter away with my owl, and went down to breakfast.
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Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 25, 2003, 09:02:28 AM
 :)
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Post by: Lily_Evans on June 26, 2003, 09:25:44 AM
GOOD!!!!
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Post by: Trixie Malfoy on July 1, 2003, 10:31:02 PM
chapter 3: His one last regret

 "Can you pass the eggs, please?," asked Ron to Harry. I noticed how much food was on his plate already.What P-i-g, I thought to myself. Clearly Ron was drawing attention to himself.

 Hermione, meanwhile was in-some sorta trance. looking at me in a jealous way, and staring at Ron, in well a nicer way.

 Dear diary,
Is it possible that Ron Weasley might actually like me?! i think so, but he seems so well....calm with Hermione, i don't know.i'll check it out my self.
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Post by: cho-chang on April 18, 2004, 01:50:52 PM
LOL!....its awsome ;D