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Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Topic started by: brian on June 23, 2003, 01:51:58 PM

Title: Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 23, 2003, 01:51:58 PM
I'm sorry Guys, But I can't continue my old fan fic as of the fact that book five is out. Yet I wish to know on wheteher or not Avy members of the forum object to a year six book that follows Mrs. Rowlings book. Reasons for an objection is that I intend to use characters in book five that people (Who havent read) it might not know of. THis book may spoil the fifth one, so I would like people to post a yes (write it), or a no (don't write it). Thanks


It was tuough sounding all formal like that. I'm not doing that again!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 23, 2003, 01:54:23 PM
please do it next weekend I am just going to get it this week for sure...
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 23, 2003, 02:02:38 PM
I can't do that because, Oh My God, I haven't told any one. Next Weekend, I'll be leaving for camp. I'll be gone for THREE weeks. But I 'll be back. I really Should start soon though. Oh well. At least your vote was positive.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 23, 2003, 02:42:41 PM
I'm gonna start writing now, because I am bored. Here I go.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 24, 2003, 02:18:26 AM
Ch. One: A Different Kind of Summer

  The weather was a pleasant change from the previous Summer on Privet Drive. It's inhabitants were all in a good mood, and were all outside, enjoying the weather. This was true, for every one, except one. You are probably thinking that you know who this is, but no, it was not Harry Potter, but his fat Juvenile Delinquent Cousin, Dudley.

  You see, Dudley used to be, or so his parents thought, a nice young boy, who went to his friends houses for tea an sundays.  Little did they know, that this so called "tea time for Dudders", was actually spent on smoking, terrorizeng Little Whinning, and beating up it's young inhabitants, including Harry.

  Fortunately, Dudley and his "gang", were caught, and were about to be sent, to a Juvenile Delinquent Center. Mean while, Our young Dudley, had been locked in a certain Cupboard under the stairs, until it was time to set off to the Center.

  Meanwhile, Harry on the other hand, was with Ms. Figg. THey were eating cookies, and drinking Tea, when all of a sudden, Mundungus Fletcher arrived out of no where. Harry hadn't seen "Dung", since before, well, before Sirius had died.

 "Good day Harry?" Dung asked, wiping some dust off of his coat. "Ms. Figg?"  He asked the simply disgusted woman. Dung seemed to take no notice, and went back to Harry imediately. "Well Hary, You havent been writing us in a while, for three days exactly, and you know the agreement, three days silence, and someone is sent! Why havent you been writing us? Lupin was getting quite worried!"

  Harry felt a sharp pain of guilt, here he was having cookies and Tea, Not having any cares at all, And Lupin was worried sick about him. "Well," he said "I was a little busy-uhh-with school! You know, I did get quite a few outstanding O.W.L.'s", which of course, was the truth. Harry had been sick all summer worried about his Potions O.W.L. exam. He had been almost sure that he would get a T on it. Somehow, He had qualified for Professor Snapes N.E.W.T. Class! He had Gotten all Outstandings on his O.W.L.'s except for Astronomy and History of Magic. HE had even recieved a side note with his Defence Against the Dark Arts grade, that he had recived a one hundred twenty percent on his grade for the O.W.L., and had Qualified for a special course of Defence Against the Dark Arts, slightly abouve the N.E.W.T. class.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on June 24, 2003, 07:30:00 AM
Bump!!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on June 24, 2003, 10:01:05 AM
mega bump!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 25, 2003, 01:27:34 AM
   But that wasn't the point. Lupin was worried because he had been careless. "That's ok Harry, the important thing is that Dumbledore needs you at Head Qarters. Your friends are there already, so cummon than, let's go! I've already talked to your uncle and aunt. Actually, those scumbags seemed quite okay with it!"

  Mrs. Figg seemed quite upset. "So YOu're just going to interupt us and take him away? Is that it Mundungus? You could at least ask me!"

  "No Figgy, no need to be upset! It's Dumbledores request! You should understand that better! Cummon Harry let's go." And with hurried good byes, Harry left with Mundungus to go get his things quickly, and then fly off to the head quarters ofthe Order.

  Once inside Harry's "Home" as Dumbledore had called it last year, Harry was suprised to see Duddley smoking a cigarret, out side of the cupboard under the stairs.

  "What are you doing here?" Harry asked, noticing a crushed dore behind Dudley, and the space where the cupboards should have been.

  "I'm leaving, once I find out how to use his!" Duddley took out from the closet, Harry's Firebolt and smiled. "Just try to take it away from me, I have your wand you know, so you're completely useless and I doubt that bum", he glanced at Mundungus,"can do anything to-" At this point, Mundungus had taken out his wand, and had shouted expelliarmus!, and Accio Firebolt!! The outcome had been Dudling flying into the wall, wich was crushed, and Harry's Firebolt, in Dung's hands.

  "We'd better hurry now Harry." Dung said hurriedly.

   "Hold on!" Harry got his wand, stared at Dudley, and shouted, impemendius!, and stupify! Dudley went flying again, and finally landed on a couch, which was not so surprisingly crushed.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on June 25, 2003, 06:09:10 AM
lol, get him Harry!  Bump!!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on June 25, 2003, 06:18:02 AM
 ;D cool!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 26, 2003, 07:39:48 AM
awsome!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 26, 2003, 08:58:05 AM
   Harry turned back to Dung. "We can go get my stuff now" The two wizards went upstairst, got Harry's things, and went to the backyard. Dung took out his wand, pointed it to the air, and sent red sparks flying into the sky. After a few more seconds, Green sparks flew into the sky.

  "We can go now Harry" Harry Mounted his Firebolt, and Dung mounted a brand new Nimbus 2000.

   "Who'd you steel it from Dung?" Harry asked.

   "I didn't sttel thhis!!" Dung said, sounding offended. "I paid a large price for this broom!

  "Oh really, and what was that? Harry asked, not believing a single word that Dung was saying.

  "Five hours of hearing Mrs. Weasley shouting in my ears. I was almost deafened y'know. Harry agreed that Dung had payed a good price for his theft, but wondered why Mrs. Weasley had consented to letting him keep it. "I got to keep it because I helped her with a bogart. But she wasn't to happy when she realized that my worst fear was a Ministry official thrying to arrest me."

  Harry couldn't help but laugh. Dung had a bad reputation for stealing. He had even put Harry in severe danger for going off to steal some cauldrons last year.

  The two set off for what Harry guessed was Number 12 Grimmauld Place. Harry felt a little uneasy.He couldn't bear the thought of going into the all familliar headquarters, and not seeing his Godfather anywhere at all.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 27, 2003, 12:46:17 PM
oh thats so sad I'm litarly starting to cry!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on June 27, 2003, 01:36:55 PM
Oh, Sirius! Waaahhhhhh!!!!! :'(
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 27, 2003, 11:04:38 PM
   Mundungus seemed to have sensed Harry's sorrow, and said, "Harry, he died in honor, he died the way he would have wanted to, it wasn't your fault he died, it was arrogance that killed him. Harry noticed that Mundungushad left out the fact that it was Sirius's own arrogance that killed him, but he remained quiet the rest of the journey, and when they finally got there, they walked up the familiar doorsteps, and Harry was about to ring the doorbell, when Mundungus shouted, "STOP!!!"

  Harry stopped immediately, and asked, "Why Dung"

  "We've discovered a way to get in without waking her"-at the words "her", Harry again felt sad for his godfather. Harry knew what it was like to have the people who took care of you to not be nice at all, but Sirius had had a real mom and dad, but They were so mean, he couldn't immagine what it had been like. -"up. Just knock the door, there's always some one stationed near the other side to hear the knock"

  Harry knocked the door, and sure enough, the door opened immediately. A young teenage boy with red hair, and brand new robes, opened the door. "Ron!!!!", Harry cried, "how's it going? Where'd you get the new-"

  "Fred and George are the most successful joke shop owners in the world, they've gotten me loads of things. And, We all have new brooms!! I mean I still have a new cleansweep, but We all have Firebolts!!! Can you believe it, they bought two firebolts! Even one for Ginny, I heard she's gonna be your replacement if anything happens, so she got one!!! And, Lupin found a great place to practice!! Hermiones even gotten good on my cleansweep. She doen'mt want to play though.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on June 28, 2003, 07:02:26 AM
BUMP
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on June 29, 2003, 03:09:20 AM
Ginny showed up then. "Hi HArry! How's it going, Actually, I am trying for Chaser, I'm getting real good at it, and We have a whole set of balls!! Fred and George are spending like crazy!!! But, they have so many tricks and jokes, that their Bank vault is as big as a, a, Well, all I can say is, it's big!!!"

  "And it's al thanks to you!! " Chimed in two i dentical voices from up the stairs. Down came Fred and George, in the samd Dragon skin suits that they wore to pick them up last year
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on June 29, 2003, 04:24:32 AM
....Bump.....
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Ginny Weasly on June 30, 2003, 06:45:58 AM
[size=10]BUMP!!![/size]
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on June 30, 2003, 08:26:20 AM
bump!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on July 17, 2003, 08:35:19 PM
Oh hurry and get back so you can bump!!  :'(
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on July 20, 2003, 02:32:24 AM
Before Harry could say hi, FRed said, "You're probalby wondering why we havent gotten new suits yet. It's because we're spending money on refurnishing this place. The good news is that Fudge has made us legal too! So The Order is a branch of the Ministry, but it's kindof like the Department of Mysteries. No one really knows about it. Fudge is helping sanitize this place too!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on July 20, 2003, 04:18:26 AM
go on....
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on July 21, 2003, 05:20:27 AM
Sorry I dont write as much as I used to, but I have a wicked busy schedule! Get up, eat, study for SAT's, eat lunch, Study for SAT's, havfe rest of day off! with brakes in between
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on July 21, 2003, 11:09:28 AM
sheesh, busy little Duck Tape Man.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on July 22, 2003, 05:12:37 AM
yup yup yupskerdoodles!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on July 22, 2003, 05:34:07 AM
lol...Yuperoonies neighboreino..Busy little bee all raigh..err um.. ya... (http://www.tomfelton.com/discussion/images/smilies/blinkie.gif)
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on August 6, 2003, 12:07:29 PM
lol, keep it going polase!
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on August 9, 2003, 10:04:22 PM
"HE actually does work, it's funny seeing the minister of magic running around cleaning like a maid!! but I think it is good for him!! He actually gets to know what is is like to be, ummmmmm, not snobbish."

"I agree" George said immediately, and than the rest of the Weaslely's came, except for Percy, HArry guessed that Percy still felt the same about his family, and would never be back. Harry didnt care either, especially after the letter that Percy had sent ROn, Harry thought Percy was a good for nothing goody two shoes, who was subservient as a mouse when it came to his employers.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on August 11, 2003, 07:56:25 AM
keep it going hun   :)
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on April 14, 2004, 03:57:16 AM
Harry talked to Fred and George a little more about their new products and annoying complaints from parents (" It's their faults for not keeping a better eye on the little buggers" George had said frustratedly.) After Fred and George went up to finish up on another "project", Harry went into the kitchen where he was surrounded by Lupin, Moody, Tonks, Shacklebolt, and of course, Mr. and MRs. Weasley. Amidst Mrs. Weasleys shreaks of delight, and Tonks and Moody's warm welcomes, Harry notices Lupin was unusually quiet.

  When the chatter wuited down, Lupin finally said, " HArry, I was worried sick about you, no letter in three days... Anything could have happened! Dumbledore said that new spells might have penetrated his defensive charms, what if you were dead!??!" Harry looked at Ron and Hermione and they rolled their eyes.

  Tonks said in an annoyed voice, "C'mon Lupin, your beginning to sound like Mrs. Weasley! Next thing y'know, you'll be tryin to get Fred and George to close shop!!" At this Mrs. Weasley  blushed an extremely red color.

  " I'm sorry, but it does get hard writing every three days, and what with all the confusion in the muggle world with all the deaths and everything, I mean just because I forgot, it doesn't mean that V0ldemorts caught me or anything, look, I'm here now, so just calm down, okay?"
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on April 14, 2004, 06:26:46 AM
 8)  cool, go on Bri, go on hun.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on April 17, 2004, 12:46:10 PM
~He's been like this ever since we got back from school y'know.~

HArry whipped around buoice. t couldn't see who'd spoken. MRs. WEasley immediately said, "Oh Ginny, speak normally won't you?"

"But Mum, talkings boring. Besides, I need to get better at using my powers anyways. HArry was the only one who was supposed to hear that, but you did too, see?"

"She's right you know, her powers could help us a lot if she could only harness them" Came moody's growling voice. Anyways, I'm hungry, and the rest of the group should be arriving any moment now, might as well get dinner ready.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: _Lavender_ on April 17, 2004, 01:28:52 PM
post more soon, Brian! :-* :-*

:-*Lav
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: brian on April 18, 2004, 11:55:09 PM
   Mrs. Weasley and a very eager Tonks ("I WANT TO HELP!!") prepared the table, and after a few crashes, spills and shatters, the table was finally set. As Harry sat down, he heard a humoungous farting sound and all of a sudden, everyone was staring at him. HArry jumped up from his chair and picked up a little bag. He stared menacingly at Fred and George, who had falled off their chairs from laughter. "They're muggle jokes!! Really genius acutuall. You wouldn't have expected people like them to-" But they had had their say opn the matter.

  "OUT!!!! NOOOOOOOWW!!!!!" Mrs. WEasley looked like the devil as she pointed at the door screaming at them.

  "Oh, c;mon mum, it was just a little joke."

  "It was i mmature and unwanted, that's what it was."

  "HArry, could I see that baggy thing for a sec-"

  "OH NO YOU DON'T ARTHUR!!!"

  "Oh right, sorry molly, maybe later HArry."

  FRed and George left the rooms, but not in bad moods, indeed you coud hear their laughter from their room, which was three floors above the dinning room. Then there was a sudden knocking at the door, and Moody said, "That'll be shacklebolt and podmore." But they never came, they knocked again, and again but didn't come in. "Who's supposed to be at the door?" Moody said grimly, because everyone already knew the answer.

  "Mundungous!!!!!!!!" Dung apparated out of no where, into the dinning room and took his seat.

  He began to fill his plate and said, " Molly, this dinner looks delicious, and I'm starv-"

  " Why don't you tell that to Kingsley and Sturgis??!!"

  "What? they aren't here though. Are they." Mundungous, then heard the knocking at the door, and his face turned a very dark red, as he got up and went to answer the door.
Title: Re:Year Six, The Dark Lord's War
Post by: Kiara Johnson on April 19, 2004, 06:16:33 AM
go on hun, more please