Harry Potter Fan

(Chapter 1)

The wedding bells rang. Max and Kiara kissed. It was done, they were married. Professior Dumbledore smiled as he introduced them as husband and wife. Then after the line of well wishers and hugs and pictures, Dumbledore had to return to the school.

The reception had started out great, all their friends and family were there. They did more pictures, the cake and present thing then, it turned ugly on them....

Draco Malfoy had somehow gotten wind of this day. He had tried for over three years to break them apart, with out, success. Draco only knew one thing, he wanted Kiara for himself. He showed up towards the end of the party. He arrived with several of Kiara's father's, Death Eaters at his side. Draco had every intention of killing Max.

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    They came though the door, no one noticed them at first, they were to busy partying. Harry, Kiara's brother, shouted the alarm. Needles to say; All hell broke loose. Draco aimed his wand at Max, Kiara screamed for him to get down, throwing a charm around him...Draco made a mistake, leaving Max for dead, stunning Kiara and grabbing her, they dissaperated from the room.

"Max. Max, wake up!" It was Emily, Kiara's cousin. "Max. come on, Kiara, we need to find her." Max slowly opened his eyes. "What, what happened?" The last thing he remembered was Kiara yelling at him to get down, then nothing. Max jumped up, "Where's Kiara?" He asked franticly. Emily didn't have to say anything, the look of total horror on her face told it all. "She, he took her, Max." Emily cried. Harry came over, not knowing of Kiara's abduction yet. "Good thing she threw that spell over you, mate. Otherwise, you'd be dead." Harry told Max. "Ya --- problem is, by doing so, she left herself open and --He has her Harry. Draco took, Kiara ---" Emily trailed off, Max wasn't even listening. He was pacing around grabbing Death Eater after Death Eater, questioning them, when they didn't tell him were Kiara was, he simply snapped their necks and went on to the next. "Max Stop!!" It took both Ron and Harry to finally bring him back under control. "Look, we can still find her. Just give me a few minutes. As soon as she wakes, she'll let me know were she is, We've always done it." Harry told him. they waited.

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    Kiara stirred and Draco smiled. "Let me out of here, Draco Malfoy!" Kiara screamed at him. Draco laughed. "Your not going any were, Kiara. Your mine now and with Max dead, you really have no reason to fight, anymore. Now do you..." Kiara knew that Max wasn't dead, even now, she could feel his presence, some how. She opened her mind to Harry. "Your wrong, Draco. Max is no more dead than I am." Kiara grinned. "Your time with me here, grows --" Draco cut her off. "NO! I killed him, there's ---" Draco narrowed his eyes. "You protected him, of course. Why didn't I see that -- No matter, they won't find you here. I know how you and that stupid brother of yours connect. I've fixed, that little problem." Draco laughed again. Kiara gasped. "That's right, princess, no one will come for you. Like I said --- Your mine."
"Your twisted! You just don't get it, do you! I HATE you! I don't want anything to do with you! Why can't you just leave me ALONE!!" She struggled against her iron bonds. A futile effort that only earned her painful cuts around her wrists. With out her hands, she was helpless. Sure, she could perform small tricks but, nothing to help her out of this situation.

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     "I can't find her!" Harry said with great irritation. Max had begun pacing angrily again. "Why did he have to, today of all days!! Were are you Kiara!" He yelled at nothing in particular. He felt, for the first time in his life, helpless. They had tied every thing, they even dosed each remaining Death Eater with a truth potion, not a single one knew where Draco took her. Max picked up a table and threw it against the wall, watching as it splintered over the floor. All of a sudden, Max's wrists started to bleed, he dropped to the floor in pain. "He's hurting her. d**n it, stop it!"
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Draco had tried the imperious curse to no avail, Kiara's will was just to strong. He got angry... "Crucio!!" He yelled. Kiara screamed. She felt his anger in her body, cutting, tearing and burning, every muscle in her body. Her binds were cutting into her wrists more and more with each convulsion. Blood was now running freely down her arms but, she didn't even notice. Her father had inflicted the same curse on her before, but even that wasn't as bad as this. All of Draco's anger, jealousy and hatred, he'd felt, over the years, came out in this one, single, attack. It was more than Kiara could bear. She wanted nothing more than to slip into the safety of unconsciousness but, somehow, Draco was preventing this. He kept her alert to feel all his pain. Over and over, each tome he thrust his wand forward, he'd hit her with renewed agony. Each time, if possible, more painful than the last. It was all she could do to protect her mind from this attack and, if it continued much longer, even that, would be gone. Then as suddenly as it started, it stopped. Kiara passed into thankful darkness. Draco sat down in a chair, staring at her, still with the same, mad hunger as before. His attack did him no good, did not satisfy him.

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    Harry, Ron, and Emily went over and helped Max off the floor. "I know where she is." He said between breaths. "Right before it ended -- I saw the school.."

    Draco got up and walked over to her. He forced her awake with a charm and forbid her to sleep. Kiara couldn't even stand, she closed her eyes. "Open them and look at me!" Draco commanded. When she didn't, he hit her across the face. She forced herself to look at him. "That's better." he smiled. "Why did you make me hurt you? I didn't want to you know...." He ran his hands up her arms then brought his now, blood stained hands down and grabbed her chin, forcing her head up further. He began kissing her. She tried to struggle but it only earned her further punishment. Draco slammed her against the wall. When it hurt to even breath, she could fight him no more. His motions got rougher and rougher. He was kissing her, running his hands over her body. Just as he slammed her against the wall again, there was a loud CRASH. The door to the room flew from it's hinges. Draco jumped, he turned just in time to see Max grabbing him. The next thing Draco saw was the wall, right before he hit it. Max turned to continue his attack but Draco dissaperated. Max sneered then turned and went to Kiara, Harry and Emily had already taken her down. Max grabbed her up easily and took her to the hospital wing.

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    School was in session so they had a clear run to Madam Pomfrey, who shrieked when she saw Kiara. "My goodness, what happened and what are you all doing here? Put her over there and some one go get Professor Dumbledore." Pomfrey got busy right away. After she had done what she could for Kiara, she fixed up Max's cuts. The best she could do for Kiara's was to bandage them. Pomfrey knew, from past experience, that nothing she tried would heal her. Kiara had to heal herself.

Ron soon returned with Professor Dumbledore. "What happened here? What are you all doing here?" He asked. They explained what happened after Dumbledore had left the wedding. Ron and Em then, showed Dumbledore the room where they had found them. "I see, Draco must have worked long and hard on this when he was here. I'll see to it that this room is not used again." Dumbledore said angrily as they walked back to the Hospital wing. "Poppy, Kiara is to stay here until she heals. It's the safest place for her just now. Max, you of course, can stay with her. The rest of you can come join us in the Hall for lunch, if you like." Ron, Harry and Emily, each laid a hand on Max's shoulder as they left the room. When all was quiet and no one was around, Max cried... He blamed himself for this, although, clearly, he had no control over it. Draco always told me to stay away, told me -- he stopped that thought there. No way would he ever had been able to stay away from her. From the first time he saw her, he was drawn to her. He reached out and brushed her hair from her face then leaned down and kissed her forehead

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GO GO GO KIARA IT'S UR  well...not birthday IT'S UR STORY GO GO

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(Thanks people, I'll write more later tonight, should be ready for ya by tomarrow.  lol  8))

BLURK..BLARRRGH!!!....that's the sound of me THROWING UP!!!lol...I can't stand this 'mushy' stuff...what evr happened to "Voldemorts Daughter"???..hmmm, sounds more like a Mills and Boon!...Seriously, though KM, great writing so far, keep going...btw, what is "bump" all about?
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    Several hours had passed when finally Kiara woke. She gasped and sat up quickly. Then, looking around, saw Max. She started to cry. He held her. "It's ok, your safe, it's ok --" He held her until she cries herself out. When she'd stopped Max brought her face up to look at hem. "I'm sorry, I -- we couldn't find you. I don't know how but --" Kiara was shaking her head. "NO! You don't have anything to be sorry about. You did find me." She laid back down. "You should try and get some sleep now." Max told her. She tried but each time she closed her eyes, Images of Draco would flash in her mind. She finally gave up and opened her eyes. "What's wrong?"
"Can't sleep." Kiara said simply. "But you need to sleep in order to heal---" Kiara was shaking her head again. "I CAN"T!" she spoke loudly and with a terrible anger. Kiara turned over and curled into a ball and started crying again. This time when Max tried to comfort her she jerked her shoulder away.

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     "Just let her be for now, Max. She's going to have to sort this out on her own, first." It was Professor Dumbledore. Max turned and looked at him. "But --" Dumbledore shook his head. "No. Now lets go over here and talk." They moved across the room and sat against the window.

"She's trying to deal with the fact that Draco, defeated her. Granted, he wouldn't have if, she hadn't saved your life. All the same, she doesn't see it that way, she sees it as he, totally and utterly defeated her, on his own and, for some one like Kiara, that's pretty hard to take." Max looked at Dumbledore, shocked. "You mean to tell me, that if she would not have been saving I disagree, none of this would have happened?" Dumbledore shook his head. "No Max. Think about it. If she didn't protect you, you'd be dead. Where do you think that would leave her? No, don't blame yourself. You are both safe, that's what matters." Dumbledore stood up. "Now, go see your wife. Rather she likes it or not, she needs you." With that he left. Max went back and sat next to Kiara.

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    Kiara had finally cried herself to sleep and, her wounds began to heal themselves. A few hours later, Madam Pomfrey came busting in. Pomfrey took Kiara's dressings off her wrist and examined them. "Looking good, should be as good as new in a few more hours." She looked at Max then , offered him a sleeping potion which, he refused politely. He wanted to be sure he was awake when Kiara woke up --- Also, he was occupied, thinking of different, painful ways to Kill Draco when they next met.

(End Chapter one)

(Ch.2)
    Kiara and Max had only been home one day when The Ministry sent them an owl. "Great, they've learned we postponed the Honeymoon." Max growled. "I've got to go in, are you going to be alright?" He informed Kiara. then smiled. "Go, Fudge obviously can't live with out you. He won't stop sending them until you do go, I'll be fine." Kiara replied. They had been married now for two weeks and still, had not had more than a few minutes alone. "Maybe ---" Max said "Maybe we should go anyway." Kiara smiled. "No, go...You'll want me to be 100 percent when we do." She blushed. Max laughed, kissed her then dissaperated to the Ministry.

    Kiara walked around the now, deserted house. It wasn't how she'd planned for them to greet it....It was odd, seeing all her things mixed up wit his but at the same time, right. There were still boxes full of items that needed a place, laying here and there. Kiara sighed "Well, nothing else to do ---" she got started.

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    "How's she doing?" Harry asked. "She seems ok -- Still a little sore, muscles take a bit to heal. I don't like leaving her there alone though." Max replied. He was heading to Fudge's office and Harry had caught up to him.
"She's not alone. I had Fudge send Ginny and Hermione over to the house to keep an eye out." Harry winked.
"Really? Good, then I won't worry so much." Max smiled. He should have known that Harry wouldn't let his sister go unwatched just now.
"Thanks Harry." Max opened the door to Fudges office, Harry left him to return to his own desk

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    "Oh, come in Max, close the door and have a seat."  Maxx did just that.  "You wanted to see me about somthing?"  Max asked.  Cornielius Fudge sat down.  "Going to have to pull you of the Draco Malfoy case Max.  To risk --"  Max jumped up.  "What!  You can't!  If anyone should go after him, it's Me!"  Max started pacing the office floor angrily.  "No, Max -- it's too personal for you now.  Wouldn't want him getting off on some technicality just because you roughed him up, now do we?"  Fudge tried to explain.  Max turned on him.  "Who says I'll bring him in alive --"  he growled.  "You can't do this to me."  Fudge looked at Max coldly.  "That's the other reason,  The Daily Prophet finds out you killed him whle working on the case, they make a marter out of him.  Then where would we be?  If I find out you've been any where near him, you'll be suspended.  Got it!"  Max glared at him, barley controling the urge to rip his head off.  "Ya, I got it."  He turned and left the office, slamming the door behind him.
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    By the time Max came home, Kiara had finished the unpacking and had dinner on the table.  "Some one has been busy."  Max smiled, kissing her an the forehead.  "Bored is more like it."  Kiara replied, sitting down to dinner.  "How'd your day go?"  she asked.  Max smiled.  "It went fine."  he lied.  He wasn't about to tell her that he'd been forbiden to go after Draco.  She'd just get upset and he didn't want to ruin her day too.

    "I was thinking --" Kiara started then paused.  "We've got another week until we take our Honeymoon and well, I think I'll go to the Ministry tomarrow and finish training for my spot in the Department of Mysteries.  I should have been in already but -- with what happend it was put on hold.  I think I'm ready now."  Max looked up.  "Are you sure?  It's only been two weeks since --"  he trailed off.  Kaira smiled.  "Look, the more I sit around, the more I'll dwell on it.  I - I need to keep busy."
"Ok, why not then.  I'll feel better if your there anyway."

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    After they'd eaten, they settled down on their couch and started talking.  Just as Max started kissing her, there was a knock at the door. Max sighed "Wonder who now..."  He opend the door, "Suprise!"  It was Fred and George, Ginny, Emily, Lavender, Isis, Sher, Harry, Ron, and Hermione.  Max let them all in.  "Thought maybe we'd throw you two a littel house warming party -- Didn't uhm, interupt anything, did we?"  George laughed.  "No, no come in---"  Max shook his head and closed the door after all had finally enterd.

    Hermione took Kiara by the hand and they, along with the other girls, walked to the kitchen to sit and talk about, well, wouldn't all you guys like to know what women talk about when they get together...

    The party went on and on.  Kiara finally said good-night to Max who was locked in a game of Wizard Chess with Ron.  She went to bed and slept.  Every one left at around two in the morning.  Max went to their room, fully intending to wake Kiara, but decided against it.  Instead, he just layed down, putting his arm around her waist, she smniled in her sleep.

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    Kiara's training was going great untill she came up against a Boggart.  Suddenly, standing in front of her smiling his whicked evil smile was Draco Malfoy.  Kiara froze instantly, she was backed into the vorner when finallt, "Ridikulus!!"  Craoker came into the room and got rid of it.  "I knew it!  You weren't ready yet.  Just what do you suppose you'd do if that was really him facing you like that?!?  I remember when you were only fiftenn, you wouldn't have let the likes of him scare you lijke that!  I wouldn't have found you cowering in the corner like a little baby."  He yelled at her, hoping to get her angry.  "I - I'm sorry --"
"Sorry, she says...No your not sorry.  You will be if you don't get over this soon!  Yes, Draco is out there and yes, he WILL go after you again but, You need to remember that he is NOT somthing to be afraid of."  Craokers words, although quite harsh, were very true and Kiara knew this.  For the first time since his attack on her she was faced with actually reliving it on=ver in her mind again.  "Your right, lets try again."  Kiara replied.  "That's more like it."
 
    Once again, draco Malfoy stood infront of her and once again, Kiara froze.  She couldn't do it.  He had so totaly defeated her both physicly and mentaly that her mind just couldn't stand up to him.  Craoker, once again, got rid of it for her.  "Go home, we'll, we'll try again tomarrow..."

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    Kiara walked from the training roo,. pictures, once again flashing through her mind.  "What's wrong, Kiara?"  Max asked as she walked past haim, not even realizing she had.  "N-nothing, I'm going home, see ya later.."  she dissaperated.  Ginny and HErmione dissaperated as well.

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    Max came home later, "I heard what happend."  He told her, sitting down to dinner.  "Oh--"  Kiara replied.  "I'm sorry to have let you down."  Max laughed.  "Let me down?  No Kiara, you didn't let anyone down, except maybe Croaker.  I'm personaly suprised you wanted to try a second time.  You might not want to hear this but, I think you needed that wake up call today.  Your not invincable, you know --"  Kiara laughed sarcasticly.  "Ya, kinda proved that a couple weeks ago, didn't I.---"  She put her fork down, "I don't think I'm hungry any more.  I'm going to bed."  She got up and left the room.  Max let her go.

    The next day was no better. Kiara couldn't will herself to stand up to Draco.  "I don't get it --"  Craoker started.  "You can best, each and every person in this Ministry, your not afrais of your father but, you continue, to let this -- little weasle, intimidate you.  You truely have become weak..."  He shook his head in disgust.  Kiara glared at him this time, he anger from yesterday still in her.  "Ya, and don't you forget that I can best the lot of you."  she growled.  "Oh, is that a threat?  Maybe you still do have a backbone in there some where, after all."  Craoker taunted.  "Kepp it UP Craoker."  Kiara warnd, through gritted teeth.  "Oh, and I'm suposed to be afraid of a little girl who can't even stand up for herself?  I hardly think you've got what it takes any more--"  Kiara was looking furious.  "That's right, I find you've grown weak, nothing more than a pathetic, whimpering cry baby.  That's what you've become!  Poor little Kiara, got beat, now she won't even fight back!"  That was it,  Kiara couldn't hold it back any longer she gatherd her will, Craoker released the Boggart, Kiara glared at it and utterly destoyed the poor thing then turnd to Croakerand threw him against the far wall, with out even really relizing what she had done.  Craoker slid to the ground laughing and wincing at the same time.  "I knew you'd do it!"  He laughed.  "Just need, ow!  a little help, that's--- ow! all."  After i'd finally soaked in, just exactly what happend, Kiara started laughing as well.  "You idiot!  I could have seriously hurt you!"  she continued to laugh then, seh went and helped him up.  "Thanks for, well, you know."  Kiara said.  "No problem."  Craoker groaned.  "I'm getting to old for this.  Now, get outts here, go home and rest."  He paused then laughed again.  "You do leave for you honeymoon tomarrow, don't you?"  Kiar asmiled, "Oh ya!"  She quickly walked out of the training room.

(CHAPTER 3.  THE HONEYMOON)

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(*Smacks Sirius on the back of the head, really hard for rolling his eyes...* HOW RUDE!)

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(K  I'l rewrite it, I was just gonna skip to the fouth chapter..lol but if you want, I can rewrit a pg13 chapter for this part.  heehee)

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    ~~~~Chapter three:  THE HONEYMOON~~~~

    After Max got home that night, he and Kiara took off the Scottland for their Honeymoon.  Dumbledore had given them his castle in the Hills as a wedding gift, he claimed it was the least he could do for his goddaughter.

    When they arrived, They were greeted at the front door by the serving staff.  Max and Kaira walked in and looked around.  The place was absolutely huge.  Almost the size of Hoggwarts it's self.  "It's beautifull"  Kaira smiled.  Max shook his head in agreement.  Not really paying much attention to the castle.  He was too busy watching Kiara.  

    After they had eaten a light dinner, outside, they went to the drawing room for a drink.   Max had sent every one home for the evening so they could finally, after three weeks of marriage, be alone.  They sat infront of the fire, talking, Kiara was cuddled next to him and MAx put his drink down, and began klissing her.

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(lol ya, had to get all romantic for the forum ears LMAO..heehee walks away humming to self.. :devil: )

     Next morning, Kiara slept in late; it was a long night.  Max had already been up and was just walking through the door when she woke.  He was carrying a tray of food.  "Morning sleepy"  Max smiled.  "Morning."  Kiara returned his smile.  "I made breakfast, hope your hungry."  Kiara smiled at this.  "Oh, you made it?  Should I eat it then?"  She said teasing.  Max set the tray down and sat next to her.  "Well, if your not hungry, I can think of more fun things to do..."He gave her a devilish look.  Kiara blushed slightly but, recoverd quickly.  "Oh, you can can you?  Well, I'll be the judge of that."  She smiled.  Max raised his brow, "Oh, is that a challenge?"  He asked.  "Why, yes, I do believe it is."  Kiara returned.  Needless to say, they never did get to eat a hot breakfast.

    A few hours later, they were lying in bed, tired again.  "Well, I guess, you win.  You did find us somthing much more fun to do.  I think, I'm hungry now."  Kiara smiled.  Max smiled back.  "Might I suggest a shower first.  Kiara laughed, I planned on it, coming?"  Max grinned.  "You can count on it."

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   HArry had just finished with his report for Fudge and had droped it off in his office when he recieved an owl.  Harry took the letter from the owls leg, gave it a treat then sat at his desk and opend it to read:

  Just a note to Kaira's dear brother as a warning.  I have not given up and I WiILL be seeing you again.  I hope they are having fun on their sweet little honeymoon because it will be the last bit of fun they will ever have.  Try and find me if you wish however, if I were you, I'd leave it alone.  You know, Hermione is a sweet little thing and I would really hate for somthing awfull to happen to her.
                     Draco Malfoy

    Harry dropped the letter to his desk.  "I can't believe this!  Now he's threatening ME!"  Harry took up the letter and went directly home to check on Hermione.

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    Kiara and Max spent the remainder of their day out by the lake; talking to one another and catching up on the time the lost, due to the unfortunate instance with Draco.  Neither one aware of the fact that Draco planned to start into action as soon as they returned home.

    The next morning, it was time for the two to get back.  They were both expected back at the Ministry the next day.  "Oh, I hate to leave so soon.  If on;y we had just a bit more time.."  Kiara sighed.  Max took her by the hand and they waked out of the room.  "O know Kaira however, we are needed.  We'll take some more time off and return, soon."  They bothe dissaperated and returned home.

(End chapter 3..will post more when I get more relies..ppl just aren't reading lately  :()

I'm reading.

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I`m reading! (hey Kiara, as I am Moderator at my Forum, you can post the original chapter there. You got me intrigued to hear the real thing lol)

(LOL, sorry Lav.  That belongs to Max.  ;))

    Kiara and Max apreared in their own living room.  Kaira sat happily on her couch.  Max sat next to her.  "So --"  He didn't have to finish, Kaira had already had the same thought.  She pushed him down on the couch and smiled.  "Yes, we really should --"

    Later that evening, Kiara and Max were eating dinner and there was a knock on the door.  Max stood and walked to the door opening it to find Harry and Hermione standing there.  "Hi Har--"  he trailed off as Harry and Hermione both walked in with serious expresions written across their faces.  Kiara came in from the dining room, "Who is it hun?"  She started to smile at the sight of her brother and now, sister-in-law, but stopped at the sight of the two.  "I think you need to have a seat Kiara."  Hermione said, walking over and taking her by the hand leading her to the couch.  They sat and when Max had seated himself as well, Harry brought out a letter and handed it to Max.  "What's this?"  Max asked as he took the letter from Harry.  "Just read it."  Harry said in a some what subdued voice.  Max opend the letter and began to read, his expresion turned angry.  "What is it Max?"  Kiara asked.  When Max had finished he handed the letter to Kaira.  She began to read, a gasp escaping from her throat.  She bagen to shake.  Max quickly went to her and held her.  "Don't worry, he wont, not this time."

(yeah! Harry and Hermione are togeather!hee hee, always thought they should be..lol!) (ok Kiara, I understand)

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  Max turned his head to Harry, still holding Kiara protectively in his arms.  "When did this arrive?"  he asked.  "This afternoon at about three.  I didn't think much of getting an owl so of course, I let it go, probably was sent using the post office any way.."  Harry sighed.  "I haven't showed it to any one else.  I wanted to see what you thought we should do first."  Max thought a moment.  "Wonder if Fudge would let us back in again or if this would just further his stupid judgement of taking us off the case.  Regardless, I won't stand by while he's out there making threats of this nature, and what with Hermione being pregnant and all, you can't afford to put her in danger.  Harry, I want you to stay out of this one.  Please, if not for me then do it for her."  Max nodded his head towards Hermione.  Harry looked at Max and was about to protest then taking another look at Hermione, decided that maybe he was right.  He couldn't imagine what would happen if Hermione lost their child because he was to hot-headed to know when to back down.  "Your right, I'll stay clear from this, for now."  Harry answerd.

    After Harry and Hermione left for home, Kaira and MAx sat alone in their living room; neither spoke for a long time.  Suddenly there was a bang, just out side their door.  Max jumped up to investigate.  When he opend the door, there was a rock, sitting on the matt and a dent in the front door.  Max bent to pick up the rock, looking around for any sign of people.  There wasn't any one out there.  When he picked up the rock, he noticed a note attached to it.  He brought it inside and together, he and Kiara read:

    Hi there, hope you had a great time!  Now that you've broken her in, I'll be taking MY little princes back again. Don't worry, I'm sure I can take your stench off her in no time.  Hi Kiara, miss me?

                   Draco Malfoy

    Max growled and Kiara glared.  "Just who in the Hell, does he think he is!"  Max yelled at Kiara, not meaning to, of course.  Kiara flinched.  "I'm sorry"  Max said imediatly.  "Look, if he's out there, trying to get at me again, why don't we just trap him?  The Minisrty could ---"  Max cut her off.  "NO WAY!  I will not put you out there in his way not on purpose!  If anything were to go wrong--No Kiara, Fudge's approval or not, I will find the little snake and when I do --"  Max was pacing the floor now, furious.  "How in the Hell, did he find where we live!"  Kiara thought she knew the answer to that one. "He followed Harry...He knew Harry would come to us with that letter, that's why he sent it.  Simplicity in it's self."  Kaira answerd.  "Well, we're not sleeping here tonight, that's for sure.  You need, I need to get you to a safer place."  Max said, thinking.  Kiara sat back on the couch and started a line of thoughts herself.  Suddenly she loked up and noticed a light coming in from the window.  "Max!  Look out!"  Kiara jumped up and knocked him to the floor just in time.  A bright line of crackling light swept over their bodies, making the hair on their bodies stand on end.  It was gone swiflty but not with out leaving a huge melted hole in the window and scorch marks on the far wall where it had dissapeard though.
"What the hell was that?"  Max asked as they stood back up.  Kaira looked around.  "Lighting bolt."  Max looked at her in amazement.  "Does he have that kind of power?"  Kaira shook her head.  "But we now know that he has some one helping him who does..."  She swallowed hard.

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     Kaira suddenly went verry still, Max opend his mouth to ask what was wrong and she put her fingers to his lips to silence him.  She closed her eyes and began reaching out with her mind, searching the surrounding area for any sign of intruders.  She felt a jolt as some one quickly pushed her away from them, she smiled.  "Found him, the sorcerer, he's out there...right, about, there."  She pointed a finger in the direction she had felt his presence and shot a lighting bolt of her own through the wall at him.  They heard a yell of fright then silence.  Kiara laughed.  "I missed but at least he knows now that he isn't playing with just another helpless victim."  Max shook his head.  "Is he still out there?"  Kaira seached again.  "NO, he's gone.  Probably back to Draco to ask for higher pay."  The two of them stood in their living room for a bit before deciding the best place to go, if they ever wanted to get any rest, was to the Ministry.  They dissaperated.

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     The next morning, Max and Kaira woke with a start as they rememberd what had transpired the night before.  It was still quite early so, no one had come yet into work.  Kaira sent out a thought to Harry, hoping he'd be able to get there before any one else.  Sure enough, Harry aperated right next to her.  "You called?"  He asked with a smile.  Kiara jumped. "Don't doo that!"  She scolded.Max had come in at that point with breakfast.  "Hi Harry."  He said as he put the food on Kiara's desk.  "So, I suppose you just got here?  Well, let's fill you in then, shall we?"  Max and Kaira explained what had transpired after Harry had left last night.  When they finished, Harry sat down.  "So, what your telling me is that now, Draco has a sorverer joined with him?"  Harry asked.  "It would seem so.." Max answerd him.  

    Soon, people began coming in to work and things had to be put on hold because, Max and Harry couldn't be caught talking about Draco, together.  Kiara had convinced Max to bring what had happend before Fudge and so he did.

    Max walked into Fudges office, Kiara right behind him, and closed the door.  Fudge looked up from his paper and smiled, that annoying smile of an polotician.  "So, what do I owe ---"  He trailed off at the look on their faces.  Kaira opend her mouth to speek but was beaten by Max.  "Look, Fudge."  Max started.  "I have been doing what you ask and I have stayed away from Malfoy however, he has now openly attacked both Kiara and myself and has decided to contact me.  What do you plan on doing about it."  Max. to Kiara's suprise kept his voice even and didn't yell at or even threaten Fudge.  Fudge sat back in his chair. "Look, I still will not have any one of you, going after Draco.  You will leave that up to the others.  I can, however, be sure that your home is watched from here on out."  He answerd, looking a bit annoyed with them.  Kiara's turn, only she didn't seem as controlled as Max.  "Look"  She growled.  "If that jerk, comes anywhere near myself or MAx again, you can be asured, I will not be calling on the help, you have hired to come save us.  He will die and If I do it then so be it!  You can't stop me from doing it any more than you can stop Max, or Harry for that matter!"  Kiara's temper was rising with each nod of Fudge's head.  It infuriated her more and more, every time she looked at him.  She had always hated him, from the moment she started working with the Ministry when she was 15 till today, with every moment she spent with him, she hated him all the more.  "Kiara, you are not being taken off the case, Croaker has asked for you specificly to help with this one.  I think he's planning a trap."  Max slammed his fist in the desk.  "NO!  Absolutely NOT!  I will not have you put Kiara out there as bait!  At least not with out me there to be sure averything goes right."  He now yelled at Fudge.  Kiara took a stepp back, even though she had suggested the very same thing, to Max, she had planned it with him there.  With out him, her resolve crumbled.  "I-I can't do that, You can't expect me to trust any one in the Ministry to protect me, no, I won't."  Kiara shook her head in reply.  "I'm afraid, dear, that it has already been put into action, you have no choice."  Fudge answerd.  "Then you can bet, I'll be there."  Max answerd.  "Oh, no you won't, if you show your face, the whole thing will be blown.  I can't except that.  Sorry Max but you'll just have to trust in others in this one.  If you don't, I'll have you arrested for disrupting the Ministry."  Came Fudges growled reply.

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     Max stood there, fists clenched, trying to keep himself under control.  Kiara stepped in front of him and put her hands on his shoulders.  "Max, hey..I don't want you doing anything stupid.  I might need you.  If you go and get yourself thrown into prison then where will that leave me.  If anything happens, I will need you to come and get me, I don't trust any one else, except maybe Harry and I don't want him to risk it so please..."  Kiara was almost crying, MAx relaxed a bit then, with out saying a word, he turned and walked from the room.  Kiara watched him go then, she turned on Fudge.  Her anger held in check but not hidden.  Fudge could see her shaking, and there was no way of hiding those red glowing eyes.  "If you so much as even try, to put him in that dam prison, it will be the last thing you ever do.  Don't underestimate me, whith Max gone, I would have nothing else to loose."  She spoke both calmly and steadily.  Fudge paled a bit at her words then straightend himself up.  "If your trying to threaten me Kaira ---"  Fudge started but was cut off.  "Oh, no, Fudge.  That was no threat, it was a promise and I always, keep my promises.  Now, where is Croaker, I do believe I have a mission to get ready for."  Kiara was no longer looking at Fudge but had turned her back on him and ready to leave.  Fudge sat there in shock that she would have spoken to him like that.  "He--he's in the training ...."  Kiara didn't wait for him to finish, she walked out of the office, closing the door behinde her softly.  She headed straight to Croaker.

    Max had gone to his office and was angril shifting papers about his desk when Emily walked in.  "What's wrong."  She asked, first thing.  Max looked up and explained what had just transpired between himself and Fudge.  Emily's expresion turned dark.  "That...Grrr!"  She growled.  "kiara's right though, you have to keep out of it.  Fudge meant what he said.  Kiara needs you around so DON"T you dare, do anything to get yourself into trouble."  She knew Max and knew he would try somthing and hoped, he wouldn't, this time.  "I know Em, but..if anything happens to her ---"  Max said between gritted teeth.  "I know Max, I klnow."

    Kiara stode up to Craoker.  "So, what is it that you have planned for me while I was away?"  Croaker looked a bit sheepish.  "I - I'm sorry Kaira, I didn't mean to stepp over you or anything but, it's a good plan."  He went on to explain what it was that he planned and Kiara stood there nodding and shaking her head.  "I think, there is room for improvement in a few spots but, I think we can work this."  She had now assumed a profetional tone and sat down at a table and together, they worked through the rough spots in his plan untill Kaira was satisfied.  "There, that should work, however, we didn't take in to consideration that he now has a Socerer with him so...we had best get every one briefed, I need to instruct them on a few things."  Kiara added.  Craoker looked a little shocked.  "You mean to tell me that the little weasle has employed a Socerer?"  He whistled.  "This is getting a little out of hand here."  Kiara nodded.  "I know and I felt his mind for just a moment before he pushed me out, I think I know who it is and if I'm correct, then we do indded, have a problem."  Kiara looked seriously at Croaker.  "His name is Migan, and he is every bit as good as I am."  Kiara finished.  Croaker paled slightly.  "Your serious, he if he's that good then, what chance do we have?"  Kiara smiled.  "We have just as good a chance as they do, we just have the element of suprise and the fact that we now know he's out there, like I said, I need to teach are crew a few things.  Oh, and Croaker...Max doesn't know, he knows there is a socerer but, he has no idea as to what kind of socerer there is...."  Croaker nodded his understanding then left to round up those who were to be implemented into the plan.

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    Kiara took the time it would take Croaker to round up his people and went to see Max.  She didn't dare tell him of the problems surounding the sorcerer involved but wanted to let him know that they were indeed working on a good solid senerio.

    "Hi hun."  Kiara said in greeting when she walked into his office.  Max looked up fromhis work and smiled, despite his anger, he knew he couldn't take anything out on her.  "Hi babe.  How are things going in there?"  Max asked.  Kiara put on a smile and told him at some length their plan and asked for any input he might have.  Max was glad to help, of course.  "Although personaly, I would like to see you flat out refuse to have any part in it, I know your going to go through with it any way and it does sound like it just might work."  Max said to her, matter of factly.  Kiara smiled.  "You know I can't pass this oppertunity by.  If it means a chance at us ridding our lives of this little weasle then, I think it should be done.  Although, I would really feel better if you were there with me."  Kiara answerd just as matter of factly as he.  "Kiara, I--"  Kiara put a finger to his lips.  "No Max, don't do it.  don't say your sorry because you have nothing to be sorry for.  It isn't your fault that Fusge is such an as*."  She gave him a kiss and turned to leave.  "I need to get back.  Craoker should have every one rounded up by now.  I'll see you after work, we can go shopping before we head home."  Max sighed.  "Ok.  See ya then."  Kiara left.

    After the briefing Kaira gave every one a compleat detailed discription of the sorcerer they were dealing with.  By the time all the questions had been answerd and all the nessecary modifications to the plan had been made, Kiara finally headed out the door to meet Max.  Togeth, Max and Kiara left the Ministry through the Muggle side exit.  They had some shopping to do in that part of town.  When they stepped out the doors, there was a huge crowd of people.  Muggles mostely.  Kaira and Max got seperated.  Max was swept away bty the crowd.  He turned to search for Kiara and when he did, what he saw horrified him.  Draco was standing behinde her, she was too busy looking for Max to notice.  Draco smiled and waved at him.  Then, he reached out and, grabbing Kiara around the waist, dissapeard.  "NOO!!"  Max yelled then suddenly, the street was deserted.  Only a few people now strolled along the sidewalk.  They had been set up.  Max ran to where he last saw them.  To angry to think, to anguished to act.  There was a tugging at his robe.  Max turned and looked down.  A small Muggle boy stood ther, holding a piece of paper.  "Excuse me mister, that guy with the dark hair wanted me to give this to you."  THe boy reached up his hand and offerd Max a letter.  max took it from his hand and the boy walked off.  He opend the note, knowing who it was from before even reading it.  He read:


    Max stood there, looking around for any sighn as to where they might have gone but found nothing.  Every one from the Ministry had gone home by now so he did the same, but not before stopping by to see Harry and Ron and a few others.

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(Ya, it's missing the pasion I had when I first started.  I can't seem to get it back with out Max.....But I started so I will finish...... :'()

     Kiara woke up, she was lying on a bed.  She wasn't bound or anything, ass a matter of fact, there were seemingly no restraints out on her at all.  She swung her legs over the side of the bed.  Her head was still pounding a bit however, she closed her eyes to it for a moment then stood up.  Upon looking around, she noticed the room she was in had no windows and seemed not to even hav an exit.  She puzzeled over it for a moment.  There's got to be a reason behind all this.  SHe thought a moment then started bringing her will to bear but she couldn't.  It would start then just slip away.  She narrowed her eyes.  Oh, goody.  So, he's found a way to keep me with out restraints, and the little weasly now has me powerless.  But how?  She sat back on the bed, as it was the only piece of furniture in the small room, she waited.

    "Well, Kiara, we meet again."  It was a familure voice.  She didn't need to turn around to see who it was.  She inwardly shuddered at that voice, not daring to show he fear outwardly.  "Hello, Migan."  She said between gritted teeth, as she turned to look at him.  "Working with slime balls these days.  I wouldn't think you'd stoop that low but, then again, you always did have an atraction to filth."  She finished.  Migan laughed.  "So, how do you like my new little invention?  Works well, doesn't it?"  He walked over to her and put his hands behind her ears.  "Right about.."  Kiara winced.  "Awe, yes, there thjey are.  Does it hurt when I push on them?  I do apologise."  Migan smiled.  Kiara brought her hand up to her head and felt the place, just behind her ear.  "What have you done?"  She said in a soft, cold tone.  "Implants, my dear, implants.  They restrict your power, or in your case, totaly disengage it."  Kiara reached quickly to her head, intending on taking them out.  Migan grabbed her arm.  "I wouldn't do that if I were you.  You'd only succeed in blowing your pretty little head off and, then Iwouldn't get payed, now would I?"  He laughed.  Kiara jerked her arm away and punched him, hard in the gut.  Migan doubled over.  "Your a real AS*!  You know that."  Kiara then kicked him for good measure.  Migan grabbed her by the throat.  "Look, princess.  The only thing keeping me from tearing you apart right now, is a rather large sum of gold, waiting for me in another room.  Keep this up and even that won't keep me from doing what I've been wanting to do for a very, long, time."  He growled, then let her go.  Kaira glared at her old, enemy.  "I should have killed you years ago, when I had the chance."  Migan raised a brow at her.  "You were to week minded to kill me, I remember.  Yes, Kaira, you should heve.  However, you didn't and look where it's gotten you now."  He smiled a truely evil smile.  "Next time, I won't be so kind."  Kiara said in a low, snake like voice.  "I felt pity for you then, I no longer have that feeling."  She ended and then turned away from him.  "Still turning your back on your problems, I see.  Such a bad habbit, Shadow."  Migan said as he walked back around to stare at her.  Kaira jerked her head up and glared at him.  "Don't call me that.  That is not, who I am, or ever going to be."  she said, her voice shaking now.  Migan once again raised a brow.  "So, she is frightened of her destiny.  What a shame, many of us would love to be in your position, Shadow.  Yes, I think that is what I shall call you from hence forth, it does indeed, seem to fit you."  With those words, left to echo in her mind, Migan dissaperated.  Kaira stood in the room, shaking with anger and now, knowing what she faced, fright, as well.

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     They had all gathered in Max's house, Ron, Harry the Twins and Laender, Ands and Ginny.  Em was with Hermione, she didn't want to leave her alone. Ron would fill her in on everything later.  

  "So, he's got her again then?  d**n little jerk."  Harry said as they all sat to disguss what had happend and Max told them how he'd done it.  "right from under my nose, this is the second time."  Max was pacing, he blamed himself once again.  Although it could have happend at any time with anyone.  "Evidently, he's got a socerer under his employment as well, Kiara thinks she knows him, other than that, I don't know anything about him.  What I do know it that he seemed to scare her."  He let it stopped there..  Harry looked up with a thoughtfull expresion.  "I think, I know who it was, there's only one scorcerer I've ever heard her talk about as if he were an equal, Migan."  Max looked puzzled.  "She never mentioned him to me before."  He replied.

(Look, i'm sory but I can't continue this story any longer...It's starting to suck.  There isn't any reason for me to have Max come after her now..sorry.  Lost the motivation.)

If you don''t then I will right this story and it won't be pretty.

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(You have no idea as to what you are forcing me to do.  To continue writing this story now is nothing more than torchure to my very soul, but if you insist, then I will continue.)

No its alright.I was just kiding.

(No, you are right, I have gotten a few hate mails because I said I wouldn't finish so, I will continue.  LOL, It's not just you ppl that read these stories ya know...)

Stop stop stop.I will not have me or anybody else kill your soul.

(I thank you however, I feel it should be finished.  As kind of a closing, I think I can finish it.  It will hurt yes, however, I think I need to.)

ok,but finish it fast.

(I will write more to this story in a while.  There are other things I must tend to first.)

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 "That's because she never did like it when she knew there was som one out there who could potentialy defeat her in an honest battle, some one not quite as pleasant as the rest of the world."  Harry replied.  "You've got a point, so, then what your saying is that this, Migan, fellow, he is going to be a majore problem then?"  Max asked.  Harry shook his head.  "From what I understand, anyway."  He replied.  "Well, then, we had best divise a way around him then, shouldn't we?"  Ron asked.  "It would seem so, yes."  Max stated.  They sat up most of the night, disgussing and forming a plan.  By the first light of the new day, they had figured a way around, Migan, they hoped, but still, none of them could figure out just where, Kiara might be.

 Kiara paced her quarters.  She was more than a little worried now that she had been visited by Migan.  Now that she knew for sure, just who this wizard was, she knew that rescuing her was going to prove a problem, for anyone.  Even if they did manage to find her, they would still have to go through Migan, Kiara's only hope was that they would think like her.  Migan had been trained by the same socerers as she had, perhaps though, for a bit longer.  His training may now, even be more advanced as her own.

    "Well, welcome home Kiara, it's been to long."  Draco said.  He had appesrd behind her, Kiara jumped at the sound of his voice.  "Jump, arn't we?  As well you should be.  I don't take kindly to those who deny me what it is I seek."  Draco continued.  "More threats, Draco?  I would have thought that you'd out grown those, years ago."  Kaira said, as she turned to face him.  Draco smiled.  "Just as sarcastic as always, I see.  Even knowing you have no chance of possibly getting out of here.  You are a brave soul."  Draco replied, a dark and forboding smile crossing his handsom features.  Kiara backed down, she had no idea of his current intentions and really didn't want to provoke him.  She had no way to defend herself from him at this moment.  "That's better.  So, I understand that Migan has informed you of your current status?  So you know, I can pretty much over power you when and if I need to." Draco advanced on her.  Kiara still backed another two paces.  Draco smiled.  "What is it you want from me?"  Kiara asked in a surprisingly calm voice.  "What I want is simply to have you.  I have wanted this from the first time I laid eyes on you.  I told Max, time and time again that he had no business with you.  He wouldn't listen though, now, look where it's gotten us.  Now, I'll have to kill him just so that we can be together.  Now, I have to resort to tricking you into becoming mine.  I didn't ask for this, you and Max put it on me.  You and Max, selfish people you are, it's his fault your here, not mine."  Draco took another stepp forward, Kiara another back.  Draco was becoming more and more angry with every word he spoke, driven by some insane need to have what he seeked.  "I don't want to hurt you Kaira, I shouldn't have to.  Why won't you just relent and become mine, take your place at my side and become that which you are destined to become?  We, could be happy.  You'll understand in time, I'm sure."  Draco took yet another step closer, Kiara was against the wall and could not back away any more.  "Your insane!  I never wanted you and I never will!  Get it through that thick skull of yours, I LOVE MAX!"  She yelled and instantly regretted it.  Draco grabbed her by the thraot.  "You will NOT say that in my presence.  You do NOT love him, You LOVE ME!"  He pushed her against the wall.  Kiara winced as he pushed her head into the wall.  Kaira kicked him ijn the shin.  "Bitc*!"  he yelled as he backed away.  Kaira stepped to the side and bvacked away again.  Draco stood his ground but followed her with his eyes, he started to laugh.  "You know Kiara?  I think I need to teach you a little lesson as to how, you should treat me....Crucio!"  He hit her again with this agonizing ounishment, every muscle tightend in her body, dropping her to the floor.

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    Max doubled over, wincing at he pain throug out his body.  Draco had though he put a stop to this connection but the last thing Kiara thought about before he attacked her was, Max.
"GGGRR!  I'm going to rip our heart out and feed it to the dogs!"  Max yelled out as he shakingly stood up.  Now, however, he had a glipms of Kiara's surroundings and although, it was just a glimps of a room.  At least he knew she was close.  He felt that much.  

    Kiara woke up an the ground, her head pounding but atleast, she was alone.  SHe stood up and walked around the room, looking for a way out.  Or atleast, a way to show Max where it was she was.

    "You seem to be looking for somthing Kiara."  Migan sneered from behind her.
Kaira turned quickly around to face him.  The last thing she wanted was to have her back on him.
"Of course I am.  You don't honestly think I'll be sitting around idly whilst you and that deranged mad man have me imprisond here, do you?"  Kiara retirted back at him.
"You are still fighting this, why?  I am to understand that if you give in, you will become the most powerful being on the planet."  Migan stated.
"Some people do't find power, the only thing worth living for Migan.  I would have thought that your lessons with Belgarion would have taught you that.  Oh, I forget, you and Belgarion didn't really get along to well, did you?"  Kiara smiled.  "If I remember correctly, he ended up almost killing you after about a year.  You seemed to think that you could defeat him and attacked him, not the brightest thing you've ever done."  She finished with a chiding smirk.
"Shut up!  You were there, he cheated!  If --"  Kiara cut him off.
"No, he didn't, you were the one who tried to cheat.  He only stopped it.  What ever were you thinking.  Trying to kill the God slayer."  Kiara laughed.
"I could do it now if I so choosed."  Migan said, for lack of anything better.
"Ya, sure you could Migan."  Kaira replied.  Migan dissaperated from the room and Kiara laughed even more.  Knowing she hit the soarest spot she knew of.

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    "ok, so we have a sence as to where she is then?"  Harry asked as Max recounted his story.
"Ya, we do.  I get the feeling it's not too far from here.  THe room was old and looked as though it was perhaps made of concrete ---"  He trailed off and a look of knowing crossed his face just as quickly as did Harry.  They looked at each other and smiled.
"We got him......"  Max said with a vicious grin.  Harry had the same, vicious look upon his face.
"So, lets go get him."  Harry said.
"No Harry, you stay with Hermione, if anything should happen and Draco finds out you were there...."  He left it hanging, not wanting to state the obvious.
"Ok, but you should at least get Roin before you go charging into there."  Harry told him.  Max nodded and dissapoerated.

   

(Chapter 5:  Ministry Interference)

    Max had just arrived at Ron's home when he was suddenly taken from behind by three Ministry officials.
"Sorry Max, we have to take you in.  Fudges orders."  The first one said as they pinned him to the ground.
"Wait!  No not now!  I know where she is.  Come on youknow I'm the only one that can save her.  What is Fudge playing at?"  Max said in an angry voice, just before they dissaperated.

    "Max, my hands are tied in this one.  I warned you that any interference with Draco Malfoy would land you in custody."  Fudge said as he walked around his office, hands cupped behind his back.

    Max was still being held by the three officials whoi brought him in.  THey were not taking any chance of his attacking the Minister to try and escape.

"Look, Fudge -- "  Max growled.  "I know where Kaira is and if you don't let me go and get her, you'll wish you were dead."  He finished.

  "Max, Max, Max, I've got the best people on the case and you can be usured, she will be found in due time.  Take himn out of here."  Fudge motioned for the Officials, holding Max to take him away.

    Max was thrown into a hight security cell.  Not in Azkaban, for he was still a Ministry employee, but Fudge felt he needed to be secured.

    "Stupid --"  Max paced the floor, suddenly, Ron apeared.  He had walked in through the front door.
"Ready to go get her?"  Ron asked at the suprised Max.
"Ya, let's go."  Max said, recovering rather quickly.  He decided he wouldn't ask how Ron did it.  He was a Weasley, after all.  So Max really wasn't too suprised to see him.

 >:( >:(what about meeeeeee >:( >:( >:(

(LOL, It is a finished work but I am currently working on a story for all in here, but you must first, put your character discripion in the proprer place in the General section of the board.  ;)  Other-wise, I don;t really know how to write you properly.)

There, I am finally caught up.  I like Kiara, This Max and you seem to have a good relationship in here.  *Smiles devilidhly*  Anyway, please continue, I need to find out what happens, you can tell me or show me at your place later?