OK, part 2 is in the making to Devil's Puppet. I hope you all read it and like it as well as the other. A Battle For Love. Give me a few more days and I should have it up for you to read. LUVS~N~STUFF Kiara.
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Chapter 1 Awakening
The rain pelts against the windowpane and the noise from the storm drowns out all else. The only light that can be seen in the room comes from a candle, dancing in the draft coming from the old window. The room is warm, despite that chill, and the fact that no fire is lit in the hearth.
Max sits next to a bed where Kiara lay, unmoving, she had been like this since he brought her back to the castle form the woods and their near destruction. His face looks haunted, almost dead. His hair shows through his hooded cloak, a golden yellow and a mark of a lion sits on his brow.
"Kiara, wake up, please." He says as he wipes away the tears still streaming down her cheek as she sleeps.
Suddenly there is another light in the room, a golden, almost soft light, it grows then Evan, Kiara's guardian Angel stands at her side. He looks upon Max with his blue eyes, a sadness coming from him like none known to Max before, an almost inhuman pain that Max feels within his very soul.
"I meant no harm to come to you or her, you must know this. I was only curious. Wanting to know her. I've helped you look after her all these years, longer." The Angel Evan said, now returning his gaze upon Kiara's form, lying, weeping, and asleep on the bed.
"Your not supposed to make contact with or human, Evan. You know that. It is, regardless your feelings, your fault she's like this, it's your fault she killed me." Max pauses then looks up at Evan, his ice-blue eyes showing how much hatred he has for this Angel. "The only good you have done is to make her realize, she's not invincible, that your father controls a part of her. At least now, she can learn to live with it as it should be." Max returned, his words seeming to echo in the dead still of the room, the storm raging out side seems to go away and Max brushes yet another tear from Kiara's cheek.
Evan looks to Max then back to Kiara. He places his hand lovingly on her forehead and Kiara stops crying, then Evan is gone.
Max stared a the empty air in the darkness.
"How can he continue to control her, when I can not?" He asked himself.
Kiara slept on, max leaving her side only to fetch something to eat or to take a trip to the bathroom, from time to time. When he left he would always be sure to leave another at her side incase she woke.
""Don't worry Max, if she wakes, I'll send for you." Ginny said with a warming smile, although she was more worried than she let on.
"I'll be back soon, I've only to take my finals and I'll be back..." Max replied, not wanting to leave her side but not able to put his tests off any longer. His life depended on them and if he and Kiara were to have any life after school, he'd have to pass them all.
With one last kiss to her soft, lips. Max left the room.
"Come on Kiara, where are you?" Ginny whispered.
All her time knowing Kiara, she had always been able to connect with her mind in one way or another, that is, until now. It scared her, where was she that Ginny could not find her?
Kiara wondered in a dream land filled with fire. She was lost and could not find a way out. Echoes of her friends voices came in and out. Visions of creatures known only in Hell came to her eyes and the low, menacing laugh of the Devil clouded her mind relentlessly.
She had no idea of time, no feeling of hunger or anything except for pain, a great pain she had never before felt. The pain rested in her heart and nothing seemed to pacify it. She thought once, she saw a golden light in the distance. It's warming comfort helped ease some of the pain and she had stopped crying. She felt always a warming touch on her face, but could not reach out and feel these things. As soon as she thought she would escape, turn to the light or the touch, she'd be redirected, pushed away by some unseen dark force, to wonder around again in pain and desolation.
At the end of the day, Max returned again to Kiara's side. Ginny left him alone, she knew he wouldn't want company. She had tried to stay with him, for company, before but, he had not even spoken to her. She worried now for him as well. If Kiara didn't come back, what was he to do? Would he sit here by her side for eternity?
After laying a comforting hand on his shoulder, Ginny quietly left. She didn't even bother asking about his tests. She knew she wouldn't get an answer.
The day turned to night again and still, Kiara did not stir. Max sat at her side, talking quietly to her, trying to get her to hear his voice but to no avail. She was so deeply into the Hell set for her by the Devil that she could not hear him.
The weather outside darkened the sky once again. For the last two days, since Kiara had left them. The world around had began to change into one wicked stormy sky after another. No one could go out side, all Quidditch matches were canceled after three students had been struck be lightning. Max looked out the windowpane now, and he barely even noticed the flash of golden light behind him. Barely, but he did.
He turned to once again glare into the eyes of Evan. Max's dark locks changed again to gold as he looked upon this angel. Oh how he hated the sight of him.
"What do you want this time? Come to take her from me again?" Max snapped.
Evan didn't smile nor did he frown. He looked into Max's cold, ice-blue eyes with no expression what so ever.
"Max, my father is keeping her. When she gave up, in the instant you saved her from her plunge, my father took her away from us. It's only a matter of time before she gives up in there too. If she does that, we both loose her."
"Then how do we get her back?" Max replied between clenched teeth. He knew he'd have to except Evan's help rather he liked it or not.
Evan let his gaze drop away from Max and moved his eyes to Kiara. The look upon his face was one of a deep love, just the same as Max always had when he looked at her.
Max notice this and stood quickly, then taking control of his anger, walked over to Kiara's side and stood next to her.
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"What do we do then?" Max asked.
Evan walked to the other side of the bed and placed his hand on her chest.
"Put your hand on mine and talk to her Max, get her attention."
Max placed his hand on Evan's and when it touch the angels, a golden glow emitted to cover Kiara's body and the symbol of the lion appeared on Max's forehead. Max then opened his mouth to talk.
"Not with your words you fool. Speak to her with your mind, yours is the only that can reach her and you MUST reach her mind, you can not reach her ears." Evan growled, is hatred for Max evident for the first time.
Holding back a retort, max closed his eyes and began to search for her mind, he brushed against t and called her, bade her speak to him, to come home.
Kiara felt so warm, so peaceful, the light, it was in front of her and she wanted to walk to it but something held her, something with a grip of iron that refused to let go. She tried to tug against it but it's grip only tightened and began to sear into her flesh. She screamed out in pain. Then, she heard him, Max.
"Kiara, come on, come home to me. I need you. Don't let this evil take you from me. Kiara..." His voice echoed in her mind.
She closed her eyes and relaxed.
"Max? Help me Max, I can't get free, I can't get loose from this Hell, help me..." Kiara sent her thought out, it started weakly but grew in strength as the light in her sight began to grow stringer and stronger.
Then, she felt him, Evan was there, Evan was with him, Evan was helping max. Kiara's eyes flashed their brilliant green and the world she had been wondering in for so long began to fade, now, it was dark, hot and quiet.
Satan stood before her, his horned head and his black, endless eyes bore down on her, his voice suddenly blocking out all else.
"Your staying with me, your mine, my bride, not his." His voice stormed on to her head.
Kiara fell to her knees, a look of panic flashed across her face then, just as quickly as the panic had set in, it once again left to be replaced with a great darkness, one that matched the Devil own.
"NO!" She yelled. "I belong to no one but myself. No one owns me." She growled in defiance.
Max was thrown backwards to land on the floor several feet from the bed, as was Evan.
"No, get to her quickly, he's got her, he.." Evan started then trailed off as Kiara's body began to waver in and out of sight. Then, it was gone all together.
Max and Evan raced to the bed side and stared at it momentarily then Evan grabbed Max by the front of his cloak and shoved him against the wall.
"You didn't try hard enough!" He growled.
Max pushed him off and growled and Evan stumbled backwards
"You were not strong enough to hold her there, she asked for my help and ..I failed, we failed..." Max glared at Evan, his anger growing by the second and Evan, as well, showed signs of great distaste in his return look.
Just as they both grabbed one another The door to the room flew open. Ginny and Ella came rushing into the room. The two girls looked at one another then to the two guys preparing to pummel one another.
"Max! Evan! Stop it! Where is Kiara, I felt her..." Ginny scolded then stopped. She noticed Kiara wasn't in the room.
"What's going on here?" Ella asked in her mellow, almost accusing tone. Her long locks of golden-blonde hair falling over her shoulder a she turned to look upon the two males.
Max and Evan let go of each other and gazed at the girls, not really having any answers for them, or at least, Max had none other than Kiara was gone.
"She's with my father now, it's up to her as to rather she comes back to us now. If she's strong enough, she can fight against him. I will go, try to help in any way I can." Evan said, with not much of a light of hope in his tone.
"You will bring her back to me or I will destroy you for ever darkening this world, and Kiara's life." Max returned with a low growl.
"If I can not bring her back, Max. Then you will not have to destroy me..." Evan replied then vanished.
Ginny and Ella walked to Max and each took an arm and seated him on the only chair in the room.
"She'll be back Max, although I can not touch her mind, I still feel she's with us." Ginny said in a soft almost, tiny, voice.
Max didn't say a word, afraid of barking at her for nothing but trying to help.
"Don't think you can fight me Kiara, your strong, but not that strong and, look around you..." The Devil waved his arm showing the vastness of the cavern and it's occupants, now visible, to Kiara.
"Your alone my dear, no friends here to help you, no one to make you strong against.....Evan." The Devil turned around, his dark eyes glaring at his son.
"Let her go father, she's mine, not yours.."
The devil laughed his spine tingling evil laugh and Evan was thrown to the wall and chained.
Kiara stood on her feet now, seeing Evan bringing her more alive.
"Let him go." She growled.
"Little princes, that wishes to be a queen. You are in no position to command me." the Devil laughed at her, failing to realize her growing strength.
Kiara stood, glaring at him, her head pointed down at the ground and her eyes seeking out his. The look on her face was twice as menacing as the Devil's and her rage, even worse. He may be more powerful but she had the advantage of love and that in it's self, made her stronger than any thing down in this hell.
"I'm afraid, your wrong." Evan said from his chained position on the wall.
"Shut up, Boy..* The Devil growled, sending a rain of pain down on his son.
Evan doubled over, Kiara glared at the Devil, her emerald-green eyes, flashing with a light not known to her. They seemed suddenly to go white, then back again to green.
"I can not permit you to harm him thus. Leave him alone." She growled, a most inhuman sound.
Then, with the strength, not known to her, Kiara sent a force so powerful at the Devil, he was thrown back and out of sight. His screams of anger filling the caves, making them shake and rocks began falling about.
In the instant she attacked the Devil, something horrible awakened in her. She felt it, it grew rapidly, almost consuming her.
Evan released himself, his father gone, the magic weak. He rushed over to her and putting him arms around her, made the deadly rage go away and Kiara looked into is eyes, searching for a reason to his love. Then, they vanished from the Hell they had been in to return to the room, where Max and the girls jumped up and ran over to them.
Max stopped just short of grabbing Kiara out of Evan's arms, he saw something in her that he didn't want to see. The way she looked at Evan, the same way she looked at him. Evan quickly let her loose and stepped back, then, giving Max a glare of total hatred, he vanished.
Max grabbed her as she began to fall to the floor.
Kiara looked up at him then around to Ginny and Ella, a smile crept across her lips then she looked again to Max, searching his ice-blue pools and she smiled, her emerald-green eyes full of more love than Max had ever seen in them before, more love than he thought possible for one person to posses. All his worries swept away by that one look. He leaned down and kissed her.
Later that evening, when Kiara was safely put to sleep in her room and Max was sitting in the common room, alone. Evan showed once again. He came the same as he always did, and then went and sat across from Max's following gaze. Evan let his eyes fix on Max's, his hatred for this human evident but he had come for another reason and it wasn't to fight with Max but instead, to warn him.
"What now Evan?" Max asked, his stare just as hateful, just as jealous as that of the Angel's.
"Kiara isn't the same Max, she only thinks she has defeated my father. What she did down there, she did to save me and now, I am afraid the Archangel has fully awakened in her." Evan said calmly and with a note of sadness in his tone.
"You're wrong Evan, the way she looked at me, the love in her, there's no way an Angel of Death could ever.." Max was interrupted by Evan's annoyed look and sarcastic laugh..
"Do you honestly think a human could contain such love Max? Be serious here. You are blinded by what you want to see. Yes, Kiara loves you but no, she can't feel the love of an angel, death or not. Keep her at your side at all times Max.." Evan paused to regard him then smiled a bit peevishly at him. "The next time you slip, I'll be there to take up the slack, and trust me, I will not let her go back to you. I'll keep her next time." Evan said in a tone that Max knew all to well.
"Leave.." Max said between gritted teeth and clenched fists.
Evan left but he left behind him a laugh that mocked Max and although the laughter faded, it still jaded him. He got up and threw his book across the room and stormed out of the porthole.
oh! another cool one!
Thanks Gin. I will post the 2nd chapter after I get some more posts here. Thanks again.
great story.
Awakened Angel
Kiara woke. She threw her legs over the side of her bed and gazed at her dorm room through her new eyes. Sure, she still looked the same, but something was different about her. Suddenly, her senses were peeked, everything, sounds, sights and smells, all of it was enhanced. So much so that Kiara had to begin to shut down some things.
In the boys dorm she heard Draco and Sebastian talking about girls. She blushed at their stories and quickly blocked that conversation out. She listened in the common room for any sound of Max, then a smile stretched over her lips as she heard his heart beating outside her dorm She got up, not bothering to dress and ran to the door, flung it open and stood smiling at him.
If Max had any anger left from his earlier conversation with Evan, it was all thrown out of is mind now. The way she looked at him, everything about her seemed so, loving. Almost like you could cry at the love she sent you. Max smiled at her and took her hand then led her down to the common room.
He picked her up off the ground and tossed her playfully onto the couch. Kiara laughed. Even her laughter made one feel light headed, almost intoxicated. Everyone felt it. Everyone that is, except Sebastian. He and Draco walked into the common room as Max and Kiara sat and were talking.
"Max, we should talk sometime, soon I think." Sebastian stated then turned a positively hateful glare on Kiara who, in return, hissed. Then turned back to Max and kissed him, although looking at Sebastian as she did. A glint of malice forming in her beautiful green eyes.
"I think, no one sees you as you really are but me, Kiara. Trust me, I will not let you out of my sight, until you truly do let my real sister out of her prison inside you." Sebastian sent the thought to Kiara's mind then left the room with Draco.
"I know who you are, Fire Lord. Don't mess with me." Kiara sent the thought back.
It went ignored by Sebastian as he and Draco walked down to breakfast.
As the days went by, Sebastian held true to his word, and each time Kiara started to feel a little, frisky, he would be there to knock her down a notch or two.
The Death Angel was set loose when Kiara used it's power against the Devil. It was his plan to make her do it. Now, he could sit back and wait for some one to anger her and all would be going as planned. He would step in and take control again.
"The true meaning of the Prophecies has been set into place. Once everyone begins to love her, she'll destroy them all. Then, She will take her place at my side." Satan said and turned an ecstatic look to his son, chained once again to a chair at his side.
"I wont let it happen father, she is not destined to rule the world at your side, she belongs to Max." Evan spat the name out like poison. Knowing full well that if he took Kiara as his own, things would turn out quite differently than they should.
The Devil laughed, "You can not have what your heart desires, my son. The one with the eyes of winter will fail, he's no match for her." He continued to laugh.
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Evan sat back in his chains, and waited for his father to leave, he sat there for days.
Kiara walked the halls, Max at her side, as warned by Evan. He might have been blinded to Kiara's new love but, he wasn't stupid either. He knew they had gotten her back too easily and he waited for a sign.
"We need to talk now, Max." Sebastian's voice came from behind them.
Kiara spun around, the look she gave him was one of death. Sebastian ignored it and looked to Max.
"Now, Johnson."
Max looked at Kiara, kissed her cheek and then smiled at Sebastian.
"I'll see you in Potions Kiara."
Kiara glared at Sebastian one last time then walked off.
"This had best be good, Holguin." Max said as he walked in the other direction, following Sebastian.
Sebastian didn't say a thing until he and Max were inside an empty class room.
"Oh, it's good Max, only thing is, I don't think your gonna like it." Sebastian finally replied, taking a seat on one of the tables and turning to regard Max for a moment.
Max raised a brow, knowing that Sebastian never got involved with Kiara's affairs unless there was a realy good reason. He, Sebastian, and Kiara might be half brother and sister but there was never any real love loss between the two. Every since they were little, and Kiara killed him in a duel, Sebastian had hated her. Kiara likewise, Max was sure. Sebastian made her kill him, he knew what would happen if she did and Kiara never forgave him.
"Max, that's not Kiara your hanging around with, she's not what you think. The Angel has awakened and taken over. Be careful man. She's more dangerous now than ever before..."
"I've already heard all this!" Max growled.
"Look, Johnson. I'm just trying to make you see what she really is, that's all. You've lost Kiara, she's in there yes, but she sleeps. Come on, I know she's got some kind of hold on you, your blind by her love you think is for you. Do you think that I would honestly care if Kiara was the one we were dealing with here? You know, better than anyone else, I do not fear Kiara, but this, angel, we are dealing with is yet another thing. She's not one of God's angels Max, you should have let Evan take her. At least then, the fight would not have been made on earth."
Max's temper flared at the mention of Evan.
"I don't know what game your playing at Sebastian and rather Evan has put you up to it or not but I do know what I am dealing with and trust me, Kiara will wake up, I will not, let Evan have her." He growled then stormed out of the room. His hair beginning to change to that golden blonde once again.
Sebastian lowered his head and sighed.
"Then you condemn us all to death..." he whispered to himself.
Once again, waiting for replies, the reason being, I need to be sure pl are reading, if not, then why post? Also, please post replies to Em's story, I want to read more but she refuses to post with out feed back. lol I love you all, and thanks for reading.
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Chapter 3 Immortal loss
Lavender sat in the Gryfindor common room. He mood less than jovial. Since Kiara's return, she had stayed away, not wanting to face the fact that her, sister, had become everything the Prophecies had forewarned. She had thought, at one point, Kiara's friends could keep her away form all that but she had been proven wrong. Kiara had gone so far as to push her, Lavender, away with those hurtful words and now, Lavender wanted nothing to do with her former, sister.
Ginny sat in the common room, sitting silently next to Lavender. Several times since Kiara's return she had tried to contact her telepathically to no avail. She knew this wasn't Harry's sister they were seeing walk the halls of Hogwarts. She also knew, that if some one didn't do something soon, Kiara would be lost to them forever.
Harry came down from the boy's dorm and sat next to Ginny.
"What do you think Gin? Do you thin k Max can beet this one? I mean, he's won every other time." His words lost the conviction they normally held.
"She's lost to us Harry, I suggest you cut you losses now and walk away. School is almost out and soon, Kiara will no longer be under the protective eyes of Dumbledore and then what's to stop her?" Lavender growled.
"Lavender, if Kiara wanted to do something, Dumbledore couldn't stop her, not even if he had the rest of the teachers to back him up. No, she's not lost, just missing. If she were lost, This school and all the people in it would have been destroyed long ago." Ginny replied to Lavender's angry answer.
"It's all up to who can take control over her. Right now, it seems that she's controlling it herself. However, her hold is weak and anyone can step in and take over at any point. When that happens, I hope it is Max who does so. Anyone else means the total loss of Kiara and depending on the winner, perhaps the total loss of the world as well. She was born to become the perfect weapon, her father made sure of that when he made the pact with the Devil." Draco's voice came from the porthole as he stepped through.
Instead of being upset at Draco's knowledge of the pass word, Harry looked at him curiously.
"How do you know so much Draco? What is it you've been hiding inside your mind, not telling the rest of us?" Harry responded.
Draco assumed his all too familiar snake-like grin and looked at the others in the room.
"Do you mind?" He said, pointing to a chair, looking around at the Gryfindor common room for the first time.
Harry nodded and Draco went, sat next to Ginny on the couch and smiled at her, his gray-blue eyes mocking her hatred for him. Ginny growled then stood and went to another seat. Draco laughed then let his eyes fall upon Lavender.
"How one so beautiful can hold so much hatred, is beyond me, Miss Potter." Draco said in an almost distant tone.
"Get on with it Draco or leave." Lavender growled.
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"How one so beautiful can hold so much hatred, is beyond me, Miss Potter." Draco said in an almost distant tone.
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Keep it up kiara! And Ryan, neither you nor DRaco would be able to say that, it's too cool! J/K! lol
LMFAO people. And yes, Draco would come up with something like that. lol, he's just the kinda character that would say it. :P
I am, I am. You miss my point, wolf." Draco smiled at her. "You need not hate Kiara, it's not her that hurt you, it was the devil. She had no control over herself. The moment her Guardian Angel stepped foot in that forsaken room of her fathers, it was all over, her fate sealed." Draco paused then turned and gazed into the eyes of his long time enemy. "Potter, you have heard for each evil born into this world there is a good? Am I not correct?"
"Go on.." Harry replied, narrowing his emerald-green eyes. "Get to your point Malfoy."
"Such unrest in this room, I'm getting there." Draco started, letting his eyes now fall upon Ginny. "Well, Kiara was born the ultimate evil and it was once thought, you were the good to counter her birth, but you're not. That, my dear Gryfindors, is Max. He was not destined to be in Slytherin, he is, by rights a Gryfindor, however, the hat knew he needed to be in Slytherin. It knew he had to become one with the evil to be sorted there after him. You, my dear little Weasley, have no role here except to make sure Harry here, kept alive through the Shadow's existence. The Shadow is dead, your time to step down has come."
"I won't give up on Kiara any more than anyone else. You can't come in here and tell be to back off, I won't!" Ginny's eyes flashed with anger at Draco's words.
"You know what Weasley? Your gorgeous when your angry." Draco laughed as he stood. "Oh, and Potter.." He continued, looking at Harry. "I'd be careful, she can still kill you, you know... and that would be the Immortal loss that throws her over the edge." With that, Draco left the Gryfindor common room, a smirk on his face.
"How does he KNOW so MUCH." Ginny growled.
"Well, look who his father is, I still think Malfoy is keeping a few more things to himself however, his giving us these things is a good step. Perhaps he won't stand in the way of things, after all." Harry said, a look of thought across his handsome features.
Lavender stood at that point and walked off. She headed out the porthole and was gone. Draco's words hanging in the air and ceaselessly echoing in her mind. Had she been too harsh in her opinions? She'd have to think about things again.
As she walked, she turned into her white wolf form and headed in to the forest.
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More is on the way. I want to finish the next chapter before I post any more so hang in there, should have it up by 5am my time.
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okay, so I add four hours...6...7....8....9 am est. time!
So, I gather I am being held to that? heehe
yes of cours, I want to read some more!
Sorry, didn't even get hime from work until 6 this morning. lol but here is some of the 4th chapter for you.
Chapter 4 Evan and Sebastain
Evan sat in the back of the room, watching as Sebastian began to create a void in which to step through to his firey underwrld.
"Sebastian, wait."
Sebastian turned around and eyed Evan, a darkened grin crossed his extremely handsom features and he noded a greeting to Evan.
"What is it son of Satran?" Sebastian asked, raising a brow at his contact with the Angel of light.
"Kiara, I wanted to speak to you about your sister." Evan returned, steping down from his seat on the table and walking over to Sebastian.
Sebastian turned, closing the porthole into the other world then again, turned to gaze, questionably at Evan. Evan's piercing-blue eyes looked a little beaten to him. He looked the total oppiste of Max, who's ice-blue eyes seemed to perfect image of strength and stuborness that Sebastian always admired.
"What seems to be the problem, Angel." Sebastian almost purred.
Sebastian knew what Evan wanted, and he was more than willing to help, for a price. He didn't want to see Max and Kaira together any more than Evan. The diffrence, Evan knew that Max belonged with Kiara and knew also that taking her away from him was going to be the hardest thing any one, God or not, had to do.
"Max has lost, he no longer controls her and if they...well if they join together, it will be the end of this worlld the humans have become so attached to. If onlyI could take Kiara away, I could stop this battle form happening on earth. I can bring it down to the pits f hell where is should be. Together, Kaira and I could stop my father for a long time and let this world continue on it's merry way. Will you help me?"
Sebastian laughed. His laughter was a great darkened sound, not the jovial sound of a normal person but that of I real status of the lord of fire.
"I will help you Evan, however, I must ask that once you do gain her total love, you help me take her powers of fire. They are rightfuly mine and only the Lord of Fire should be allowed to hold power over the flames in that way." He said, his black eyes flashing with a great jealousey that seemed to consume him totally.
Although, deceiving Kiara this way hurt, Evan had no choice but to agree. He wanted her more than anything else in the univers and this small rice seemed to be small enough to give for that love.
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"Ok, it's a deal."
Sebastian smiled, a dark, evil smile and then turned and left the room with out another word. He followed the halls to the Slytherin common room where he knew Kiara would be, opened the porthole and stepped in.
"Kiara, dear sister, I need a word with you, alone." He smiled at Kaira and then flashed Max a warning glare.
"Hang on, whats this about Sebastian." Max growled.
"You never mind, it has nothing to do with you, Johnson." Sebastian growled back, his black eyes flashing with fire.
Max stood and grabbed Kaira's arm as she roase to walk to Sebastian.
"She goes no where with out me."
Sebastian laughed evily then looked at Max and smiled. "As you wish Johnson, but I was just trying to protect you, be nice, but you can come along if you wish." Sebastian answered, knowing that the moment the angel possessing Kiara saw Evan, she'd go to him, no matter what Max had to say.
The three walked along te halls in silence. Kiara was glaring at Sebastians back, oh how, even in her angel form, she hated her brother. Sebastian turned once and grinned at her.
"the problem with you dear sis, is that you have far to big an ego for our own good. I think perhaps ou need a lesson in manners one day." He said, then turned his back on her again.
"Oh, I suppose you think you're going to be the one to teach it to me, brother." She spat back, a low, inhuman growl escaping her lips.
Sebastian stopped in the middle of the hall, and turned to face her.
"No, I will not be the one to teach it to you, Kiara. That, I will leave up to my master. Perhaps becoming his bride will smother a bit of your high andd mighty attitude." He growled back ith the same, in human sound.
"Wait a minute here Sebastian, whis to say she'll become his bride. Kiara is mine, and ..."
Max stopped as te door to their right opened, and Evan walked out. Max's heart sank as he watche dKiara turn and smile. That smile was for him, not Evan, not any one.
"Hello, Max." Evan greeted with heavy sarcasm.
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please continue
OK, I am sorry, but i have gotten the cursed Writer's block here, and don't know how I really want to send it. Hum, I will post some more as soon as it comes to me brain-pan as to what exactly I should do to this....I have too many out comes right now and I need to chose the best one. So , hang in there, I will work on it soon.
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Kiara
I could help,If you want.
That'd be cool
MAx, just email me your thoughts, or even if you have a whole chapter to add. I think we could make an awsome story together. lol
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Ah, Kiara, mabey you should rephrase that! *laughs* Cuz it sounded a bit like something else
Post more!!! please? :-\ LOL ;) great job K!
:-*Lav
This can now be called a story written by both Max and myself. Thanks Max for your input, please, continue to send me ideas. Like I said, this could be great with the two of us putting our thoughts in. And lol Lav. You're silly.
Max did not return the greeting. His lip curled in a sneer and he turned to Sebastian.
"What is this Sebastian? What did you bring her to him for?" Max growled.
Sebastian only smiled, that evil smile only he could do. And watched now, to see what would unfold between the three of them. Knowing full well that Kaira would do what he wanted her to do.
Kiara looked at Max, then over to Evan who smiled at her, welcoming. She seemed at a loss for just a moment then turned from Max, totally, and walked to Evan. Not a backward glance at Max at all, she simply left his side for Evan.
Evan welcomed her with open arms, bringing her to him then kissed her lips softly.
Max growled and jumped on Evan, grabbing him by the throat and knocking Kiara back. Kiara stumbled backwards then, regaining her self, she let a hollow growl escape her thraot.
Max slammed Evan up against the wall, knocking his head into it.
"Stay away from her." He growled.
"I once told you Id take her from you Max." Evan sneered.
This put Max over the edge and he slammed Evan against the wall, Kiara stood watching for no more than a few seconds before she snapped.
"You will not hurt him Max!" Her voice cracked through the air as if thunder rolled into the school it's self. Then Max flies backwards and is pinned to the far wall as Kiara walks to him, she obviously isn't her self and Max knows, he remains silent as she steps to him, putting a hand, unloving, to his temple at the right side of his head.
Evan leans against the wall, catching his breath, not even paying attention to what's going on any longer, he looks up just in time to see both Max and Kiara wrapped in a black gauze of mist. A few students enter the otherwise deserted hall and stop, pinned to the spot, no one moves, no one can and when the blackness fades, Max slumps to the floor.
One of the students screams out and Kiara turns her emerald eyes to him and sneers.
"Go on little Ravenclaw, run to your Headmaster and tell him what has happened. Perhaps he can find a way to waken this one." She looks down at Max as she talks, knowing that she is the only one who can wake him from the death like sleep she has put him into.
Sebastian has disappeared and Evan walks to Kiara, takes her by the arm and looking curiously into her eyes he wraps her in his arms and they too, disappear from the hall.
I kinda feel bad for max, he only wants to take care of Kiara! But anyway and like always, great! Please write more!
Do not cry for me,Ginny.LOL...It was my Idea to get rid of me.
Chapter 5 Forgetting
"Where are we?"
"Open your eyes now Kiara."
Kiara opened her eyes and the stars reflected in her emerald irises.
"We're in the stars..but how? I'm not an angel, I'm.." Kiara started then stopped, she didn't know why she questioned, she thought there was something but, it faded as soon as she began the thought, not really caring how, she looked around at the vastness of her beloved stars. "Can we stay here forever?"
Evan smiled down at her, he held her in his arms, keeping her both safe and warm.
"No Kiara, we can't stay here."
"That's ok, I don't know that I wish to stay here that long." She turned her gaze to Evan, a look of unending love in her eyes. "I don't belong here, any more than you. I only wish to be here in death. That is all that matters to me now." She kissed his cheek lightly and Evan closed his eyes.
Evan unfolded his arms from around her and held her hand now. At his lead they began to walk amongst the stars, Kiara looked around then down at her bare feet as she stepped lightly upon thin air. She suddenly noticed her garb. She was now dressed in a long, almost sheeer black gown that hung loosely from her waist to flow lightly around her ankles as she walked. She looked up at Evan and smiled
"Do you like it?"
Kiara nodded then looked back out at the endless univers. She couldn't remember anything past her being held by Evan, she only had memories, of her longing for the stars and it seemed the only one she knew was Evan but this didn't bother her. She felt safe and happy, what else mattered? She couldn't even remember her mortal life any longer, it was lost, stricken from her memories like chalk is stricken from the calkboard at the end of the day. The moment she bagan to remember things, they simly slipped away. Nothing mattered to her now but to walk amongst the stars or to follow Evan where ever it might be he took her.
They stopped and Evan stood behind her, his arms wrapped around her waist, his wings spread far out and Kaira rested her hands upon his and sighed the most contented sound she'd ever made in her 17 years of life. The weight of the world off her mind, the fate of others, unknown.
The stars began to grow further away and Kaira seemd to sadden, just a bit at their leaving. She felt his lips on the back of her neck and closed her eyes, now lossing her longing to stay, so long as he held her, it was fine, nothing was going to harm her, no one would try and take her away and besides, she thought, they could always come back.
The rested now on a cloud, far above the earth. They kissed, after some time, Kiara layed her head on hias chest, his arms came around to hold her almost protectively and Kiara smiled.
"What am I? I mean, who and why, can I walk amongst the stars with an angel, with you? Am I dead?" Kiara asked, her mind, being the same as always began to question things. She couldn't help it, it was just they way of her young mind.
Great!Keep going! ;)
Evan ran his hand through her long, soft hair, gently. He thought how to answer her question for a moment then smiled and leaned his head down and kissed the top of her head..
"Does it really matter to you how, or why? Isn't it enough just to know you are here and we are together?"
"I guess, it doesn't really matter, I just don't know who I am, or why I even exist. These things seem to cloud my mind, alost screaming at me to be answered. Is that wrong?"
Evan smiled again, to answer this straight could mean the end of their fun. The end of his selfish longing to have her as his own.
"You exist for me. You are my angel in a world of hate, you are my light. The humans below us, they care not for the things you do. The care for nothing more than ownership of the univers. You care for the existence of the univers. Unlike you, the rest of the world wants to see the earth ruled, you just want to see your self exsiting in the world. You are perfection and the only one worth existing amongst the stars and the only one who can do not more than visit them. I once made you a promise of flying amost them. I am here to see that my promise comes true." Evan answered. His answer was honest and truethfull, while still evading a straight answer as to exactly why, she was here. He couldn't tell her she was the one to bring balance to that horrible world below them. Had he, she would leave, even if she didn't want to. It was her nature to take care of others, all he wanted, was to take care of her.
"The world sounds like a scary place. Are the humans really that horrible? Do they really want nothing more than to rule everything they see? How can one be so selfish? Not letting things be as the should, Wanting to keep the beauty of something so dear, to them selves? How can the Gods permit such horrible creatures to walk to face of the planet? I wish I could help them understand their wrongs..." Kaira sighed, a tear for humanity rolling down her cheek to dissapear in Evans robes.
Her words made tears of his own well up in his sky-blue eyes. Was what he was doing as selfish as those humans she spoke of? Sheould he tell her the trueth? If he did, would she hate him for ever. To loose her, his true light of life, it would surely destroy him. However, it was only a matter of time, he knew, before his father crept in and tried to take her form him. Max was easy enough to overcome. He was but human. His father, on the other hand, was the lord of the underworld and once he realized, or found, them. The Devil would surely try and take her for his own. He, like the humans, sought out only rulership over the entire world. Kiara was not meant for that. She was meant, in Evans eyes, to walk amongst the stars and lay amongst the clouds, forever happy and forever beautiful.
Instead of answering her further questions, Evan sat up and Kiara with him, he took her once more in his arms and they began to decend to the earth, the land looked quite beautiful to Kaira form up here in the clouds. Her heart soared once again as the soft eath toughed her bare feet, she curled her toes in the cool dirt on top the mountain the stod upon.
"Why have we come down to the earth love?" Kiara asked, watching the trees sway in the slight breeze.
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Evan took her hand in his again ands they walked over to the edge of the peek and looked down.
"You see the beauty of the planet though untainted eyes. Your soul sees what it wants to see. Look closer Kiara, look closer at the scares and the wounds in the earth. All caused by those humans who dwel upon it.
Kiara looked down the side of the mountain, her eyes searching for signs of destruction. At first she saw nothing, but after a moment she began to see what Evan was talking about. Just a few miles below she notices a bare patch at the side of te mountain. A clear-cutting and watched as the huge vehicles waound down it's side, carrying away the now dead trees upon their beds.
She looked up at Evan. "Why do you show this to me Evan? I don't want to know, I don't want to feel the pain of the earth." Kaira looked pained, she hadn't remembered any of this, all she could remember was happyness, until now. Now she began to realise the pain of the planet and something else. Something cutting at the edges of her mind.
"That's enough. Come here Kiara." Evan straightened the look in his eyes was of slight panic. He hadn't realized his showing of the planets suffering would dresge other thoughts to her mind.
Kiara straightened, and walked to him, her expresion one of great curiosity. She took his hand in hers and followed him back to the clouds.
"I only showed you those tings so you would know what I speak of. Now you know and we will no long need to go to earth. We'll stay here."
Kiara looked quizzickly at him again. "There is something else down there, something that wanted me to know it. I know not what it iwas...maybe.."
"NO! It was nothing Kiara, forget about it."
"O, ok Evan as you wish." Kiara responded then smiled.
Evan took her in his arms again and kissed her. Kiara reacted just as any lover would and kissed his lips softly, then she smiled a bit devilishly and jumed into the air, the wings of her angel form spreading wide and she soard back high in to the sky and hovered, a look af great curiosity on her face.
must i say it again? Keep going! lol
keep goin hun! its great!!
a bit mushy for me...(But becca loves it) I like it to! So don't worry..your doing great!
Thanks Ryan, I think and thanks to becca too. lolJust hang in ther eall you non mush lovers, it's going to get better starting now..*Evil laugh*
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lolz, ooo! ;)
Hey,Kiara...Does this have anything to do with my idea?
Next chapter amx, next chapter, this was written before your idea. lol Huggles and kisses
Kiara
Chapter 6 The Awakening
Jason Johnson walked up the mountain, as he looked around, he began to think that perhaps this was not such a good idea after all.
Jason had come to Hogwarts this year, he was only 11 years old but had the same determination his older brother had and right now, Max lay in ST. Mungo's and Jason had been told that Kiara was the only one who could wake him so, he trudged now, up this mountian, to find her.
He came to a clear cutting in the forest and stopped, looking around with horrified eyes. What he saw truly had to be the work of something strong and very unforgiving.
To his right there was a large logging truck, tipped on it's side and smoldering from a fire that had sweapt through it not long ago. The Muggles had tried to esccape from it but it would seem that they too, had been burned and still lay there, amongst the dead tree trunks they had begun to carry down the mountain side. To his left, there seemed to be even more Muggles lying aound, dead, all of them dead, dong the job they had been ppaid to do. Jason took a deep breath and continued on.
He walked amongst the fallen trees and stumps for several minutes before finaly, at the edge of the clearing, he once agan came to a stop, finding what he had been lokng for.
Kiara sat on a dead tree stump just a hundred yards away from him. She looked odd to him as she sat, holding a small bird in her hands; she seemed to be talking to it. He didn't make a sound and instead, waited for her to notice him. He had no intentions of upsetting her for any reason. He was here to ask her why and also, to see if he might be able to persuade her to bring his brother back.
"What do you want, little human?" Kiara asked, letting the bird fly from her hand and turning to regard him.
"Kiara...I, could you, what happened here?" Jason asked, he was nervouse but stood his ground at any rate.
"Oh, this, the earth was crying out in pain and those non magical humans continued to destroy her forest so, I killed them. Really, they wouldn't listen to me when I asked them nicely. They just laughed at me." She paused then turned her eyes on him again. "How is it that you know of me? I know not who you are." Kiara asked, her emerald eyes keeping him in their sight.
"Kiara, it's me, Jason, Max's brother.." He stopped, relising that perhaps, she didn't remember, well, he'd just have to make her remember then.
Jason took a step closer and, relising she didn't take his forward movement as a threat, he walked dup to her.
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Max lay in a bed at St. Mungo's, he had been there for weeks now. His mom sat at hs side still, holding his hand and talking to him. Then, for the first time since Kaira had plunged him into this sleep, he spoke.
"NO! Get away from her.." His words echoed loudly through the Hospital, his mother jumped awake and stared at him. Then standing quickly, she sent for a nurse and bade her call Dumbledore to the hspital. She was told to contact him the moment max made any change.
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Kiara tilted her head to the side and streached her wings forward, brushing Jason's shoulder then folded them at her back. She then reached out and took the boy's hand and pulled him gently to her, looking at him closely now. With her other hand she reached out and ran her hand over his spiky blond hair. Then, looking almost haunted, she loked into his eyes for the firt time.
"Your eyes, the are ice-blue, it seems as though perhaps I do know you.." Kiara paused, trailed off, trying to remember those eyes.
Jason then did something very brave for an eleven year old boy. He boldly reached out and layed his hand on the side of Kaira's face and closed his eyes.
Kiara suddenly gasped at all the visions Jason began showing her from his mind. They were visions of her and a boy, those eyes, the same as the one's she looked into now, the hair balck, but the eyes, then she saw him, it was..Kaira jerked away from Jason, a look of compleate horror written on her face and she trembled.
"Lies! All lies, I don't know him, he's .." But she knew now, the thing that kept trying to enter her mind, it was the same person she saw in Jason's mind.."Max..." Kiara finished in a whisper.
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Dumbledore was at Max's bed side now, he looked down at him.
"You were right, he's waking but.." Dumbledore was at a loss, not human could come out of this, no human could break through the barrier Kiara had put on him.
As Dumbledore and Max's mother looked down upon him, Max began to change, right in front of them. His hair changed slowly at first to blond, not just any blond bt, a golden color. His whole self sseemed to change. His face taking on a harder, less friendly apearance.
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Kiara and Jason both jumped at a loud bang behind them. Kiara looke dup and suddenly her safe, angelic expresion changed to that of hurt and anger.
"Why did you make me do it Evan?"
"Get away from her boy. You.."
There was another jolt in the air, almost as if a rift in time was created and everything seemed to slow.
Evan spun around to see Max, standing before him, the loko he had was of compleate anger. Only, the diffrence was, max too, had his own set of wings. Like Kiara's, and not like Evan's, they were leathery and black.
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Evan stood between both Jason, Kiara and Max. His expresion was quite shocked. He had not known, as no one did, that Max too, was not truly human. He quessed, that the last draw for his demon self, was the Curse Kaira had set against him, or perhaps, His own, stealing of the girl that was rightflly Max's. Kiara he knew, would never have gone to him if she was herself and now, he was not willing to let her go, with out a fight.
"She's mine now, go away, leave us, she wants nothing to do with her former life. She's happy, she has no worries, no cares, except.." Evan pased and looked around at the chaos Kaira had created in the forest clearing. "Perhaps the well being of the forests."
Kiara looked between the two of them, not really understanding the significance of what was going on. She still couldn't totally remember who Max was, Evan, standing there, clouded her thoughts and her memories. So, she did the one thing that set her apart from the evilness she was supposed to be and grabbed Jason up in her arms and flew off, knowing that the situation was beginning to turn hostile.
Max stood silently his ice-blue eyes burning with a hatred only seen in the eyes of those who have a score to settle.
"She's not yours Evan, she only stays because you fill her head with lies." Max growled. The sound of which made the hair on Evan's head stand on end.
"Try and take her form me then.." Evan presented the challenge
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With out so mach as a hiss, Max smiled, revealing his sharp pointed fangs, and Evan flew backwards and hit the side of the mountain with suck force, it shook and grumbled.
Evan fell to a knee and looked up at Max as he flew towards him. He put his hand up and Max stopped, hitting an invisible sheild with a hard thud, knocking him to the ground. The two males then each dove for one another, Max grabbinng Evans shoulders and tossing him to the side, his eyes flashed black then ice-blue again as Evan lightly fell on his feet, a smile streaching across his lips.
The mountain gave a lurch and grumbled again as Max and Evan stared at one another, knocking them both around and tripping them up.
Up in the cloud, Kiara held Jason to her, and watched, they both tensed as the mountian grumbled awake.
"You're going to miss her soft lips, aren't you Max." Evan grinned.
The mountain shook again and this time, Evan was knocked aside but Max was ready and had already spread his wings to keep his balance and as soon as Evan fell, Max was upon him.
"I'm worried about the Mountain Kiara, I think they woke it up with their fighting." Jason said, looking apprehensively down at the ground.
"I think you are right, Jason.." Kiara answered. Then she looked at him again, her mind beginning to clear, now that Evan was occupied. "You're Jason, Your.." She trailed off and then gasped as she witnessed the molten lava begin to sprew from the top of the no longer dormant volcano.
Max and Evan, both went on, unawear as to the lava beginning to spread rapidly down the mountain side.
"Kiara! They're in it's path, help..."
But Kiara was already gone, leaving Jason sitting on the cloud with stunned silence as he saw the lava rushing to overwhelm his brother.
Just as Max was about to bring down, what would have been a fatal blow to Evan, Kiara swooped in and snatched him up, just as the lava covered Evan and, what would have been Max.
Max looked at her, shocked. He looked down at the lava, spilling freely out of the top of the mountain. Then Kiara let him go and Max spread his wings wide and flew with her to the cloud, she had left Jason sitting on.
"Thanks, Kiara." The Demon Max said, in his low, almost animal like voice.
"Thank him.." Kiara nodded at Jason, sitting down and looking up in awe of his changed brother.
Kiara didn't wait around for anyone else to say a word but jumped up with a hiss and flew toward the lava once again. She held a hand out and the lava froze, just feet from burning her foest, she had tried so hard to keep alive.
At first, it was just the lava surounding the forest but soon, the whole river of the molten rock began to cool and once Kiara was satisfied it would no longer continue down the mountain, she landed softly on it's crust.
She looked almost teary eyed around the now harded, suface of the lava ground. Her eyes fell on the spot, Evan would be burried and began to walk over to it, suddenly, the ground shook and then split, flames reached out of the crack, just feet in front of her and the force pushed her back, sending her skidding on the ground.
When she came to a stop, she looked up, from her downed position and saw a great, red leathery hand reach into the air and come down, grasping Evans body and pulled it under. The ground shook once again and then the crack, sealed it's self, leaving only a whicked sounding laugh behind, that echoed in the air for a rather annoyingly long time.
Max, had flown down and now turned to Jason.
"Go back to the school, let Dumbledore know what has happened, I'll catch up with you later."
Jason nodded and was off, not even bothering to question a single thing.
Kiara went to stand and saw Max's hand in front of her. She reached up, taking it, allowing him to help her to her feet.
They looked at one another, neither saying a single word. Kiara let her eyes wander over his new form, noticing, for the first time, that his hair was gold and his eyes, although the same ice-blue as always, were actually cold, she almost shivered in their scrutiny of her. His leathery black wings were not folded behind his back, but instead, looked as though they were positioned and ready for anything. The bruises and cuts from the fight, seemed now, to heal themselves at a rapid rate, faster than Kiara was ever able to do herself.
Max noted as well, the change in the Archangel that was once, very evil looking and very dark. Where the endless black eyes of Kalista, had once been, stood the emerald eyes of Kiara. It was almost as if, the two had fused together. One not over powering the other, as was the case all the other times she had made the transformation.
Kiara lifted a trembling hand to Max's head and ran it over his hair, narrowing her eyes as she examined him. She let her hand slide down his head to his shoulders then stepped closer and toched his leathery wing. She ran it over the wing softly then let it fall back to her side.
Max opened his mouth to say something but Kiara put a finger to his lips and silenced him.
"Me first..." Kiara whispered.
Max relaxed, and allowed her to speak.
"An archangel....nice. Did you know about this, don't answer yet." Kiara started then looked into his eyes. "Look, I don't really remember all that happened, all I know is that I put you into a death like sleep. At least that's how Jason explained it to me, up there, while you two were fighting..." She trailed off as a tear ran down her cheek. "I didn't know you Max, I had no idea.."
Max's turn, he put a finger to her lips now and silenced her.
"You couldn't have known." He started, wiping yet another tear from her cheek. "It's not your fault Kiara, it was Evan, all along. He loves you." Max explained, a hint of detestation in his voice. "The moment you let yourself free and decided to kill yourself, is the moment he took over. It was only a matter of time before he tried this. There was nothing you could have done and I knew it, I just didn't want to except it. Perhaps if I had..."
Kiara let him go no further and leaned in and they kissed. As they did, something odd passed between them. Neither could explain but it was as if the earth it's self had sighed a relief.
Kiara and Max rose into the air and flew back to the school, each in their angel forms and landed softly on the lawn, just out side the front door.
"And no, I had no idea. I always wondered why I was chosen to be with you when I wouldn't ever have lived even a quarter of what you were going to, I guess, this changes things a bit." Max finally answered her question.
The two walked in to the school hand in hand, smiling.
K, that's it, all over. Hope you all liked it. There is still a question of Lavender and Kiara, and it will be answered for you all in the next story. Hope you will read it too.
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great.I love it.wish it could've beeen a bit more long,but you did a great job wrapping in up.
Thanks Max.
that was really good Kiara! keep it up hun :-*
:-*Lav