Harry Potter Fan

my name is shelby. i have no short thing for it tho. i am hoping to audition for a aprt in the movie. this story is called
"h.p. and the mysterious messages"
please read and post your thoughts!! thnaks!!
(ther ewill be romace, fun, mystery and adventure!!!)

Harry Potter and the Mysterious Messages



Harry was up doing his homework late in the night. He was doing his last essay on "locating". (locating witches and wizards who send you messages but don't sign there name and such) It was so boring. It was for charms. He looked at his clock.  it read 11:59. one more minute he'd be fifteen! He got up, and looked out the window.He saw some owls flying towards him. Hedwig (his snowy-white owl) Rons owl, pigwidgeon, 2 old barn owls that must be from hermione and hagrid, one that must be from school, one from his god father, sirius, and one more! hmm, who could that be from? They flew into his window.
after reading each of them, opening his presents (each contained a cake also) and setting up his cards on his desk, he looekd at his last card which he had left aside.
He opened it slowly.
Dear Harry James Potter,
this year at hogwarts will be event full, very eventfull indeed. I just hope it won't be too dangerous for you.
Sincerely,
asrgsrtjszhsjksxjkskdggxskdykdxgkksxskk
Harry stared at the letter.
"why isnt there a name?" he whispered. Then he heard a grunt from beside his small bedroom. he heard foot steps. he heard two ppl tlaking
"What is it, dear?" that was aunt petunia.
"I thought i heard a noise....like wings and clicking." Vernon grunted. Harry looked at the owls and quickly tried to shoo them away.
"thanks guys, go back now! you're gonna get me into trouble!" Hedwig clucked again, and sored out followed by the other owls. Harry jumped into bed, blew out his candle, stuffed his homework under the bed, and closed his eyes tightly.
He ehard the door creeeeak open.
"u mangy beast, are you awake?" harry didn't answer to vernons mock. uncle vernon walked into the room. he was so beefy, he could almost fill the room itself! harry opened his eyes a peek.
"darn kid....." he heard uncle vernon mutter. harry saw him eyeing the mysterious letter. he picked it up!
vernons eyes strated scanning the letter. then he growled.
"get up, boy! your in a heap of trouble!" he thundered.

do u want me to write more? please post and read it, thanks!

Yes!  Please post more!  This is good so far!

Oops!  I forgot:
Welcome to the site, Shelby!  Hope you have a great time here! *hands her a purple elephant* Now, this is a very very mini elephant that is purple.  IT is very rare, so take good care of it.  ;D
BTW- It is against HPFF Policy to give personal information such as your last name, so I edited it for you... jsyk!

 ;DWelcome! Welcome welcome! I love the story! Please keep going! ^___^ ;D

ok thanks guys! and thanks for the elephant :-), ok im continuing..........

harry followed his uncle down the stairs. harry knew the only reason he wasn't being kicked down the stairs we b-cuz of his god father, sirius. he sat at the kitchen table.
"WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT DOING YOUR HOMEOWRK WHEN WE ARE GOING TO SLEEP?!?!" he bellowedd. "oh," thought harry,m "so the old bloke knew...."
"AND WHAT THE HECK IS WITH THIS LETER? WHAT HAVE I TOLDS YOU ABOUT THE SCREECHING OF THAT d**nED OWL? AND I HEARD MORE OWLS, TOO!!"
"they just brought mail to me, and i had to do my homework!" harry shot back.
"DO-IT-IN-THE-MORNING-WHEN-WE-ARE-AWAKE! YOU UNGREATFUL BLISTER!!" uncle vernon roared.
harry coughed the name "sirius" uncle bernon went pruple to white. his adams apple bobbed in his trhoat, and he gulpled heavily.
"Now, er - harry, there is no need fore doing homework at night...and er- stop it, before we kick u outta the house!" he shooed harry back to bed. harry crawled under the covers and went to sleep.
a week passed. harry had written back to all his friends, thanking them. he was up in his room, staring at the mysterious letter. it was obviously a wizard. they must be left handed, also, harry could tell from the smudges.
he went down stairs to breakfast. just as he came down, dudley wobbled down the stairs, still chuckling about harry gettning in trouble a week ago. (dudley had been at the top of the stairs, listening, he never missed out on harry getting into toruble).
ring, ring. the telephone rang, and they all stopped and stared at it. uant petunia grabbed the phone.
"hello?" she asked eargerly, expecting some gossip.
"wha- who r u? har- why the hell do u wanna talk to him' petunia snarled into the phone's receiver. He tossed the phone into harry's stomach, and he picked it up.
"hello?" harry asked, walking into the living room.
the person on the reciever mumbled back.
"um- pardon?" hary said louder. he just made out the next words
"it's me, ron. i'm not yelling this time, i don't want to get you into trouble."
Harry laughed
"ron, you can talk louder, just dont yell!"
"oh - well, di u get hermione's letter?" he asked. hermione granger and ron weasley were his very best friends.
"um, well if u mean my birthday card and present, ya i did."
"no, shes inviting us over! i got mine just now, and i htought i'd call you."
"nooo, i din't.....wait! hold on!" just then, hary saw his snowy owl flying back to him. he had to letter in her claws. he flew threw the window. aunt petunia shreaiked
"the rudddy owl!! NOT AGAIN!" uncle petunia thundered. Harry pointed upwards to his owl, and she flew upwards. hary thundered up the stairs, yelling behind him
"i'll be back down later!" he thought he heard vernon course in rage, but he was already in his room.
"i got it, ya." harry said breathlessyly.
"ok, write back if you're going, and if you arn't aloud, write back anwyas, and we'll pick up, unless you feel safe about travelling by floo powder yourself" ron teased, knowing that harry hated it. they hung up, and harry picked up hermione's letter and read it.

Dear harry,
how are you? i figured since you don't enjoy your uncles and aunts and cousins company, you would like to come over to place for once. i wrote to ron, also. you have already been to rons before, we both have, so how bout just ocming to my place for the remainding of the summer? my parents say its ok, tho gthey r scared of wizards and such! i otld them all about you and ron, and they like you both. please reply a.s.a.p.
love from,
hermione
ps- did you get our presents and cards? has sirius wrote to you? Harry figured he would write back after he's ask his uncle and aunt, and picked up his other letter. no address. this seemd fimiliar. he opened it eagerly. it was another letter from the mystery guy!
Dear Harry James Potter,
you havn;'t wrote back. i'm waiting. your owl knows who i am, too bad you can't talk to her like i can. some things have tought me how to talk to owls, and i already know how to talk to cats.i had a pelasant chat with crookshanks, and he told me your address. have a fun time at school.
sincerly,
tjlhathkhjajdghju;tlhjotrlahjuoyr;uj;orujytrl;ujs
harry relized something else.

 :o ;DPLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is fantastic!!!!!  :D ;D

OMG THAT'S REALLY GOOD!!! but keep posting!! u got me hooked!!!! ;D

This is a great story, and a terrific idea, but could you hold up on the typos?  :-\

im sory about the typo's, im just soo excited that you ppl like my story!!!! :-) ok im continuing......

a slip of parchment had fallen out of the envelope. harry picked it up, and saw something faintly glowing on it. harry looked closer. it lookd like a letter, but which, he wsn't sure. o well, thought harry. he decided to examine it later on, when he was relaly bored.
he came thundering down the stairs.
"uncle vernon......aunt petunia...." he called.
he put the phone back down on the charger, and went into the living room.
"what" his uncle gurnted.
"my friedn, hermione, invited me over. for the rest of the summer. can i go?"
his uncle thought, his moustache quivering.
"whos this kid, now?" he grunted.
"uh....i'm sure you've seen her...she has, uh....brown hair, kind of frizzy, alittle, and thick, and uh, short..."
harry said.
"oh, that kid, with the big teeth? snooty?"
harry scowled. he thought it was rather rude to say that, considering he was beefy and his son was on a diet which didn't even sem to be working.
harry din't answer.
"she's picking u up, then?" his uncle finnaly snarled.
"i have her number in my room, let me clal her." harry said, and, without waiting for an answer, got her number and dialed it.
"hello" the other said asked
"hi....hermione""
"ya..harry?!" she squealed.
"ya. um, could you pick me up?"
"yep! of course. ron is arriving tomorrow at 1:00." hermione said promptly.
"great! i think ill be aloud. what itme would u pick me up at then?"
"hmm......well, how about, lets say - ten or eleven pm? cuz my house is kind of far, and since my parents are muggles, all we can really do is drive."
"that fine. i'll tell me uncle." harry put his hand over the speaker part, and yelled
"how about, tomoorw, she picks me up at ten thirty-ish?"
his uncle gurnted.
"fine. she better pick you up. AND SHE BETTER NOT COME THROUGH THE FIRE PLACE, EITHER!" his uncle raored, obviously still remembering when ron and come to pick up harry by floo powder. harry stifled his laughter.
"ya, all right, awesome, hermione! i'll get everything packed."
he ran up stairs, and packed up everything. he ate most of the cake, becuz he didn't want it to be stale. he munced happily.
it was night time, and harry woke up. it was 3;00am.
he saw something glowing brightly on his table. he got up, and picked it up.
the parchment! it was glowing the letter ------------------
s
harry forwned. he thought maybe it would be a clue, but all it was was a letter.
thje next morning, harry packed up all his letters also, went downstairs to wait for hermione. it was ten. - ten:15.....it was going on ten thirty. ten thirty on the dot she arrived, in a very nice, mazda (blue) car. she got out and rang the doorbell. he opened it, and positivly gasped. hermione DID NOT look like hermione!'
her hair was so straight and shiney, her skin looked oddly creamy, and she was wearing a blue sleevless top, small-ly overlapping a pink skirt, which was loose and was just abover her knees. she looked very pretty.
harry let her in, trying not to drool.
"uhh, i'm going now." harry yelled.uncle vernon, aunt petunia and dudley came wobbling in the hall. vernon looked taken aback, petunia looked aprooving in a scared sort of way, and duley gasped. he ranto the back garden.
"hahaha....." harry laughed nervously.
"my uncle vernom, aunt petunia, and er, the one who ran is dudley." harry said, just leaving.
then dudley ran back to her, and gave her some very beautiful----------

flowers!!!
"he fancies her" thought harry. harry told this to her in car, and she luaghed, going red.
then, at 12:56 they arrived atthe grangers house hold. mr and mrs granger seemed odly shy and nervous. just minutes passed, and then they heard a clunk  from the fire place. out popped ron, and then mr weasley.
ron stared at hermione, not seeing harry.
"uh - sorry - we must have got the wrong house...do u know where the grangers live?" ron asked, going red, thinkning that this enw pretty hermione was soemone else.
he lent towards his dad and said "i dont feel that right about tlaking to muggles... ready to modify their memories?" harry started laughing.
"oh! hary!" ron lept back into his dad. " u got the wrong house too, huh?" harry burst out laughing, and hermione went red.
"uh...im hermione, ron....."
"oh!" he went a deep red. hermione took them into the ,living room, where they would be sleeping.
"we pulled in another couch, so we could each sleep on one." she said.
"we were going to slep outside, but the swamp attratced too many bugs. and i din't want u guys, nor me, to get stung or anything." she said with a small smile. ron was gasping at the t.v.
"this is some wireless u got here, hermione!" he said.
both harry and hermione laughed. mr and rms granger were tlaking to mr weasley.
"its actually a television, ron." she pointed out, turning it on, then off, just to show him a picture of it. ron turned red again. he stayed away from the odd objects after that.
"would u like to stay for dinner, your wife may too, of course." mr granger was saying.
"um, actually, we have boys at home who need to be accompinied by an adult." mr wealsey flushed.
then apparated. mr and mrs granger gasped, and hermione promised to tell them about it later.
"wanna see the swamp?" hermione offered.
"ya, sure." ron and hary answered. she lead them to the back door, where crookshakns the cat purred against it.
"back crokshanks, back youve been a naughuty boy!" hermione hissed.
"was did he do?" harry aksed.
"we;;, last night, we heard her going crazy outside. neighbors heard, and we and the neighbors say him attack someone. i dunno who, htough, they just ran away after that." hermione shrugged.
"the neighbors threatned they'd report the noise to the police, so i keep him in most of the time now. we r gonna build a fence tho, soon." she lead them out side, and ron was rather quiet. he seemed to be thinking, hard.
after they took a tour of the swamp, ron blurted out what he was thinknig.
"remember how crookcshanks kept on attacking wormtail in our third year?"
"yes..." harry said.
hermione just nodded.
"well, he always seems to freak our on, well, bad ppl...what if, that person your cat attacked, was, well, wormtail? hary and hermione knew whaT HE was talking about, and both did some thinknig of their own.
"yes, i think your right, but then how would he know where i live and where i am?" hermione asked, horrified.
"harry, did u see a rat or sumthing, reading your letter?" ron asked seriously.
"no, but it could've when im asleep." harry said, thinkning it peobably would have done that too.
they all stared in silence. wormtail was on hary's track....
"u know what we have to do, don't you? we have to write to sirius, and dumbldore. tell them." hermione said, running in her house to get soem parchment and a quill.
"but, hermione, hedwigs is gone on , delivering a letter!" harry pointed out.
"ya, and pig is....wait! i have pig!" ron thumped him self on the head.
they were bent over the parchment, hary gripping the quill hard, and writing frantically.

Dear Sirius,
crookshanks, hermione's cat (you remeber him, don't you?) attacked someone, and we think it was wormtail. since voldemort is rising again, we think he is tyring to kid napp me, possibly. don't be too worried though, i'm fine. and someone is writing my anonumous letters. any idea who that is? i think they are left handed, and there was another parchemtn that said the letter "s" on it.
-harry

"wait... what mysterious letters, harry?" hermione aksed, her eyes round and shining. ron looekd concerned.
hary lowered his voice.
"i'll tell you guys tonight, lets finish the letter to dumbledore."
Dear Prof. Dumbledore,
sorry to bother you, but ron, hermione and i think wormtail is in hermione's neighborhood. crookshanks (hermione's cat) kept attackuing him two years ago, and just yesterday he attacked someone else. maybe was the mysterious person, him?
-harry

they tied the letters to pig, and threw him outdoors.
"so, why u all dressed up, hermione?" ron asked slyly.
"oh, um......u remember how viktor asked me over to his house for the holidays? well......the thrid day of the holidays, i left for his house. we had a wonderful time. then, just two days ago, i cam back here. he really is a great guy, ya know." hermione added.
I've been keeping touch with him. oh, hary, isn't that hedwig?" hermione added.
they looked out the window, hedwig came soaring, holding two letters in her beak. she came in through the window, and dropped htem down. harry picked up one.
and opened it, and let hary ron and hermione open it.
Dear harry,
this is fleur. i write to u b-cuz i would like to thank and congratulate you again. i feel bad very much about cedric. i like him much also. i am also writing to your tall firend, with the cute orange hair. in the meantime, please tell himi say hi. and your grumpy firend, that hermione, tell her i say hi too.
love,
fleur

harry and ron laughed, (ron was red also) and hermione clicked her tongue agrily. they opened the next letter. it was from the mystery writer. the three of them gasped.

please keep posting!!!! ;D

Keep going.... hmm, going over to 'mione's house.  I like that idea... :)

i think hermione and harry should date! ;D

just out of curiousity, why does, belowmy name s ays 'i'm a llama'? er - im not! anyway...the stroy.....do you guys really like it? :-[

dear harry james potter,
your owl knows where i am. i will hopefully be paying you a visit sometime during the eventfull year. please be careful. never go places by yourself.
-sthrgjhra;yhgrhelayhklafhkladhklgdk
 
and a piece pf parchjment fell out. hermione turned off the light, and it glowed 'a'. she turned the light on again. they stuffed it away.
they wen tup to see hermione's room. she had a pink bed, white pillow. she had tow dresseers and a closet full of clothes. a jar which had on concealed a nosey, horrible reporter, rita skeeter, sat on her desk. she had a hwole bunch of books hiding her desk, and her trunk was tucked away in the corner. on her wall, right next to her bed, was a whole bunch of pictures (moving) showing her and  - viktor krum.
one picture had them beside the a fire, sipping hot choclate, krums arm round hermione.
another showed them outside by a frozen lake, krums arm round hermione again, only this time her head was reasting comfortably (though her smile was nervous) on his shoulder. there were some more, krum lifting hermione in the air, them ice fishing and so on.
ron glared at them, but hary smiled thoughtfully.
'u and krum really seem a good couple.' harry said.
'if u ask me, he's too old for u, hermione.' ron snarled.'did u kiss at all?' hermione went red.
'well.....he kissed me hello, and i kissed him goodbye...and uh...there is a few pictures of us...er - kising.' she lifted her pillow, and underneath it was her and krum, dresed very neatly, krum smooching her, very close to her mouth. she was smiling and blushing. he looked as though he had eon the quidditch world cup.
they were going out to dinner with the grangers to swiss chelat. it took awhile for them to be seated, but when they were walking, a group of teens (mixed boys and girls) looked at them walk by. the boys raised their eyebrows and major approval of how hermione looked. one girl whispered to her friend 'zarah, zat eeze zee girl 'ew waz weeth veektor krum. she usally 'as verry ugly, bus'y brrrown 'air. she looks pretty today, tho, no?' her firned gave a very jealous look. hermione turned a bright red. then another girl jumped up, and positivly screamed
'my goodness! sacre bleu! eezt - eezt - 'arry potterr!' all the teens jumped. everyone stared at them. it was harrys turn to go red as rons hair.
''arry! oh 'ary! my i plez' 'ave yourr auto-graph? you ver so amazeeng during zee triweezard tournamen!' hary signed the girls purse in lipstick. one guy came up to him and said
'arry, trulee amazeeng. cool' finally they sat down to eat.
that night, the three of them were sleeping soudnlessly on the three couches, all facing eachother.
harry was siting on a couch. sumone, wearing a black cloak wuith a hood, walked up to him.
'harry.....' the voice said. harry cuoldnt tell if it were a boy or girl.
'who r you?' hary asked. his voice echoed in thew dull white room.
'the mystery writer.' it whispered. harry got up, advancing slowly, wanting to de-hood the figure. it moved back, without meaning to.
'what do u want? why is my year going to be so eventfull?'
'harry......i do not speak why.....just....be....carefulllllllll.....' the voise sounded, echonig also. harry was about to take of the person hood, when crookshanks appeared, purring loudly.
'crookshanks!' hary hissed. 'go away!' crookshanks pressed up against the thing. the perno shook crookshankspaw, as though they had a sum sort of deal.
harry bolted up, sweating. he heard a loud purr. comnig from outside. he got up, and pressed his nose agaisnt the window. he could see, very faintly, a cat and a person. the cat was definitly crookshanks....and judging by ron and hermione's last conversation, that hood claok person was.................

wormtail.
hary ran to rons bed, abnd shook him violently.
'ron! ron!' harry hissed. she shook, and rolled over.
'wassamatta harry?' he mummbled.
'womrtail! outside! crookshanks!' he jumped, and look alert.
'wormtail? u sure harry?' he breathed
'sure im sure. its the intruder! remeber...' ron jumpeed again, and ran to hermiones bed.
'hermione! hermione!' he shook her wildly, and she bolted up. he eyes wwere wide and shiney.
'what is it ron? whats wrong? what is it?' she asked breathlessly.
'wormtail. outside. with crookshajnks!' hemrione gasped, and they all ran to the screen door. ron opene dit in a hurry, but hermione stepped infront of him and snarled at him.
'sssh! do u want him to see us? we should sneak up on him!'
'yes, hermione.' orn whispered. this wasny the only time they were afraid out of their wits of hermione. once, in thier first year, hermione had cast a full body bind on neville with an extremely evil look, though was sorry, but ron was afraid of her, and harry was also firghtened.
they tip toed outside, slowly. wormtail looked at them ofr a fracture of a second, then crouched down and started whispering to crookshanks.

oh,please more!! ;D

 ;D This is getting good!

come on, why do u keep us in suspence? :'( i can't take it any more!

lol. ok continuing........

they tip toed as quiety as they could, though they still were far away from the distant wormtail and crookshanks. suddenly, out of the blue, hermione. she dissapeared.
'HERMIONE!' ron and harry screamed.
juist then - 'AHHHH! HARRY!' ron had dissapeared. harry took a step forward. his foot slipped. he screamed, and wormtail ignored them. he felt his wasit dip into very very freezing cold water. it was gushy and sticky. he felt like he was being sucked into it.
'hermione? ron?' he called.
'harry? is that you?' ron yelled. it was troo dark to tell where they were.
'ya.......eh, hermione - is this, by any chance, quick sand?' harry called. he heard hermione gulp and ron moan quietly. they were being sucked in faster and faster. harry grabbed onto rons hand, and he grabbed onto hermiones. hermiones head just got sucked in, it was up to rons neck, and harrys chest.
'hermione! noo!' ron yelled, tyring to pull her up. it just tugged the three of them down even faster. harry took a gulp of cool night fresh air. they were being eaten alive by bugs, and harry felt a bee land of his glasses. it was right on his glasses. he wiped it off, and his brittle grip of the dirt let go. 'nooo!' he yelled. ron just got sucked in. he got pulled away for mthe edge. the last thing he saw was wormtail dashing towards the three of them. he waved his hand frantically, so someone, hopefully, would hear the commotion and come and grab them out of the muddy water. he tried to breath, even though he knew it was impossible, and just got a mouthful of dirt. his lungs were peircing him with pain, his head was growing dizzy. suddenly, he felt rons hand slip from him. he was getting lift up by someone. he was let go of a considerabl amout, and knew hermione had gone with him. harry waved his hand, trying to scream. he got more quick sand, and he felt like he had swallowed a small rock. he was running out of air. he felt his closed eyes roll back into his head. he was a goner.

GOOD STORY!!! KEEP GOING!!! WHO IS THE MYSTERY WRITER?????? lolz. rEally, now that's i'm feeling normal (ish) keep going!!! :D

oh please keep going! the suspence is killing me!  :-\
scinece hemione is with krum, than ron can go with me!*lol* seriosly
love the story keep posting!
-emily ;)

ok ok calm down! i'll keep going, lol.
i'll give u a hint.
im thinkning like j.k.r. herself, so that means a lot. i hope u get it. like how things appear earlier in books and then they appear later.

then, suddenly, harry felt someone grab his wrist tightly.he wa sbeing pulled onto land. he heard the rescuer run away. he heard a faint pop, and felt something fury pushing agaisnt him. it licked his face with a cold brush, then he heard people calling his name. it sounded very far away. he was being shook violently. his head was spinning. he opened his eyes, and his vision came slowly to him.  two muddy faces stared at him.
'ron....hermione?' he asked, getting up slowly. he was still out of breath, and but the sound of very heav ypanting, so was ron and hermione. crookshanks sat rat on harrys legs. he pushjed him off, but crooskahnks still followed him, probably cuz pof all the bugs.
'ooooo what r we gonna do? we're all muddy, we might get into trouble!' hermione squealed
'hermione! calm down! we'll think of sumthnig!!' ron said in alarm.
'the hose!' harry said suddenly. they dashed for the side of the house, hermione in the lead, crookshanks tagging harry closely. they rinsed down, yelping at the coldness. by the time they were down, they were shivering like crazy, taking heavy breaths. they wlaked inside, sat down on their beds (crookshanks sat inbetween harrys crossed legs) they stared at eachother.
'who saved us?' ron asked
'i dunno....it could'nt have been wormtail. he wants be dead. and if u two r dead, like he'll care, it'll proabably be easier for lord voldemort.' the two flinched at the name, and as usal, harry ignored it. herminoe was looknig at crookshanks intently. crookshanks stared back.
'i don't get it. why didn't wormtail just kill harry with -well- you know - ' she turned red. ' avada kedavra' she finished.
they all looked at eachother. hermione was still concentrating on crookshanks, who quickly lookd away and stared out the door.
'i don't understand...' hermione mummbled.' it would've been easier. it would've been quieter too. so why did he do that? why was he talking to crookshanks?' the three thought abou these hard-answered questions.
pretty soon, they drifted off to sleep.  only crookshanks stayed awake, acting rather jumpy.

really cool! love it...love it! maybe wormtails becoming good?(ya right!)  please put me w/ ron.... :-\

eek! im soo happy u guys like it! yes, em, i'll put ya with ron! do u wanna be from durmstrang or beauxbatons? what do u look like? or do u want me to make up my own description? clue - things are necessairly what harry ron and hermione say they are. theres more to what meets the eye. oh, and have u guys heard this song the goes like this-
he was a boy, she was a girl, can i make it anymore obvious? he was a punk, she did ballet, what more can i say?
cuz i need to know who wrote it and what its called!!!!!!!!! thanks - anyway - continuing.......

the next day they were very sleepy, and hermione had come down with a cold. ron was doing everythnig wrong to helop her, like trying to scare it out of her. he had gone as far as to say, dea din the night, when they were all sound aslewep (except for that crookshanks, who was acting very strange)
'hermione! ooooo hermione! harry - i think he's - dead!' hermione had jumpe dup and started to ball her eyes out. then when harry had awoken from the noise, she had ran up to him and hugged him tightly, and gave ron a good kick where the sun didn't shine (she had ment to kick him in the head, but her aim was poor, and he had jumped in the air with laughter.) after that, they had been rather touchy with eachother. after a few weeks had passed, they went to diagon ally to get their stuff. their was a big crowd around quality quidditch supplies, and ron and harry just had to check it out. a banner was floating in the window. in the crowd, ron and harry ogt seperated.
'ron?' harry called. he though he heard sumone call his name, but he was being pushed and shoved by the mob. just then, her heard sumone say in his ear
'hi harry. have u seen what the big commotion is?' it was cho chang. harry flushed a deep red.
'er - ah - um- huh?' harry asked. she was looknig prettier than usal. just then, a handsome boy came up to them, an dhe too, gaped at cho.
'uh - er - miss? would u like - to - er - get to the front?' he asked. he was rather muscily, and he managed to make way for cho. just when harry started to feel put down, cho grabbed his hand  lightly and said
'were a pair in this mob, harry. lets go together.' she said in mock bravery. he nodded stupidly, and they went to the window.

NEW BROOMSTICK!
name the new broomstick! it goe ssuper fast, your hardly eevn a blur! it makes the firebolt slower than a snurtle! write down a name and send it in to quality quidditch supplies! zoom zoom!

cho looked delighted. they went back to the back of the audience, and cho looked into harrys eyes. he felt a chill run threw his spine, a ncie,m happy chill.
'uh - so....' harry said
'hmm....well, i suppose i'll see you at hogwarts, harry!' she kissed him quickly on the cheek, smiled, and dashed away. harry touched his cheek where sh ehad smooched him, and smiled stupidly. he then heard snickering. ron, dean, seamus (two fellow gryffindors whom they shared their dorm with, though neville longbotton wasn't there) harry went red, and then hermione came by.
'o, i should've known - c'mon, i know whatever it is, it's not as important as buying new quills and books!' ron snorted, nad hermione ignored him. they walked away to buy their new books.
'hermione.' ron said suddenly
'hmmm?' she asked, looknig at a book called 'enchantment enhances!'
'what did krum tell you before we aboarded the carrages?'
'huh - o - humm....' she shrugged and muttered sumthing, which they couldn't hear.
'huh?' harry asked
'he-he might get a job at hogwarts, to - to see me more. thats all.' she looked higly embarassed, and ron thumped a bookcase, with tittered threatingly. the manager gave him a warning look, and ron shuffled out of the store, steaming.
'i don't see the problem.' herminoe said, scanning threw a book.
'i dunno, hermione. maybe ron doesn't like the fact that u're going out with one of his favourite quidditch players, considering u cant even tell the difference between a wonky faint and a wronskie feint.' harry shrugged.
hermione went scarlet, and tutted.
'o, please! like that matters!' then she marched out of the store. harry followed her, wishing he hadn't said anything. he didn't really know why, thats just what he figured. hermione went into magical mengeries, to buy some calming down medicince. he was being jumpy, which she found strange. there was only one other person in there, beside them and the manager. someone with a hooded cloak, and black boots. the person looked at them, then jumped. the person let a cat drop, and then the person ran from the store.
'hermione......harry.....' ron said. they all thought the same thing. hermione threw her money onto the desk, yelled 'keep the change' and dahse out of the store to follow to hooded person, aka, what seemed to be, wormtail. they ran, but that person ran faster.
'STOP THAT MAN!' ron roared. they chased  him , tripping over things. ron knocked over a snowy owl, which fluttered after them, screeching. hermione bumped into a witch holding a plate of worms whic turned colours before their eyes, and she yelled 'sorry! my bad!' and kept on running. ron fell over, but harry and hermione kept running. the owls talons dug into him, and he hulted, and was threw to the ground with great force.
'go, hermione! gooo!' harry yelled. to both their surprise, and to the old lady holding the garbage can, hermione jumped onto the grabge can, leaped into the air, and flew on top of the cloaked figure. the person tried to get up.
'hermione!' he said in a muffled voice. hermione gasped. she knew that voice.

hey guys, i was wondering, do u guys want me to write the other two books? like,. my own fan fic series or sumthing? cuz i have some great ideas, and i want to share them with u all. and has anyone heard this song, know the name, or know who isng sit? its driving me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!
goes like this -
he was a boy, she was a girl, can i make it anymore obvious?
he was a punk, she did ballet, what more can i say?
he wnated her, she never tell, secretly she wanted him as well.
but all of her friends, stuck up their nose, they had a problem with his baggy clothes.
he was a skaterboy, she said see ya l8ta boy, he wasn't good enough for her.
and so on. theres more, but i think u could reconize it by now. i think its punk rock. a girl sings it. thanks :-)

that would be so cool if u wrote a series! any way, i really want to be an american, but went to a school in ireland...is that ok?  :-\  my full name is Emily McKinley. thatnx so much for puttin me w/ ron, nobodyelse will  :'(
thanx
-emily ;D

no prob! i needed a new character anyways.......
i think i'm gonna keep u ppl in suspense for awhile.....that way u never know who the claoked person is. muah hahahahahaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tee hee!
but hey, u never know......keep checking it out! :-) i'm glad u like my series idea, i hope everyone else does!!!

OH NOOO!!  :o U CAN'T KEEP US IN SUSPENSE! it'll drive me crazy!!!!!!!  ;)

oh, i'm sry, here's what i look like, reddish,blondish,brown hair, with blue eyes, and for some reason, my cheaks are always alittle pink.....

o, hey, no prob. is it really killing u that much? do u REALLY wanna know who's under that cloak?
or....maybe i should just STOP the story.......
hmm.....no, i know i can't do that, now that i've got sum ppl hooked.

TEXT :o

please keep going!!!!!!  ;D

it was their third year d.a.d.a teacher.  :o
remus lupin.
'p-p-prof. lupin?'hermione gasped.
'y-yes.' he said breathlessly, hermione not noticing
she was choking him. she quickly let go as he turned a
light purple.
'uh....er..i-i- was dressed like this cuz i didn't want
anyone to notcie me.' he said quickly. hermione got
up, and ron and harry joined them, both in pain.
'o, and i'm not prof. lupin, im just remus now.' he added.
'uh...right.' hermione blushed.
they went back to meet the grangers. they looked
again terrified to meet a full wizard, though lupin wasn't
only a wizard. he was also a  werewolf. he shook
their hand jovially. he looked very pale. after that,
they promised to meet the grangers at gringotts at six,
and then they walked around with lupin. they filled
him in with what has been going on, including the
mysterious messages, and their trip in the swamp.
after that, he felt perfectly calm, as thougth relieved.
about what, harry ron and hermione couldn't guess.
'oh, don't worry about that! maybe a cat lover was
playing with him. and maybe the messages is just
from a - a - a friend who cares.' he seemed odd when
he siad this, and then quickly changed the subject to
dinner plates that can float in air while you eat,
so u don't have to bend down. hermione ppointed out
when he was gone that those plates weren't even real,
or at least, she's never heard of them.

hey love the story! please continue!  ;D

they had gone to a lot of muggle places, like the
movies, malls and such, and even to na amusment park.
ron was both fascinated and bored by this, but he was
still having fun. he was now examining muggle money
with mr.granger, who had taken a dissbelieveing
liking to him.
'whats that? is that a-a- ummm...a three?' he asked.
mr granger chuckled ' no, no, thats a fifty.'
mrs granger had also taken a liking to ron, but it was
obvious she liked to hear about harry more.
'so, you fly? on- on broomsticks? thats really amazing.'
mrs granger gushed. harry told her about the different
kinbd of broomsticks in good detail. hermione was
going inbetween conversations, reading, and enjoying
herself. she had even wrote to krum about her summer
without him, and she had got a letter back from him,
which was flowers, a card singing beatifully that said
'i'm misssssing you...' and a two boxes of candies.
ron and harry had helped her with the candy. they had
gone down to a shop to get sum stuff for krum, and ron
bought krum sumthing hisself. that made a lot of
commotion. ron had put sum sickles down on the counter.
'whats this?' the pretty cashier lady asked, surprised.
'uhh.....money.' ron said slowly.
'is this sum kind of joke? do i like look an idiot?' the girl
had snapped.
ron looked as though he was going to say
'heck, no! u look pretty, not an idiot!' but instead he
said 'no to both....uh...' then he had pulled out
some muggle money he had exchanged at gringotts.
he gave it to the girl, grumbling and blushing.
they sent their package of things to krum that night.
sooner then harry liked, they were aboarding the
hogwarts express. they got a compartment to themselves,
and the boys from harry's and ron's dormitory came in,
along with fred and george. fred and george filled ron
in on what had happened at the burrow without him, and
then the quidditch talk began. hermione ha dburied her
face into a book,
when someone opened the compartment door.
'uh, i'm sorry for interupting, i didn't realize how
crowded it was in here.'
a beautiful girl stood there. she had magnificent
red,brown,blonde hair together, and her pretty cheeks
were slightly pink. she was tall, and very skinny.
her eyes had a way of saying sumthing meaningful,
but harry couldn't make it out. she had an accent
that sounded american and ireland mixed together.
it was beautiful, but harry wasn't all that attracted to her.
actually, it was more likely to be ron, dean, seamus,
neville, and even fred and george's eyes poped out of their
heads. she looked as pretty has fleur delacour had,
who was half veela.
'n-n-no, i-its not crowded at all' ron gasped. the girls
eye brows rose, as she took in all the people.
'go, hermione! just for the whole ride, thats all!' all
the boys except harry hissed. harry perfered her to stay,
cuz he knew the boys would do nothing but stare at this
girl. hermione went red and sputtered with anger.
'what?' she snapped.
'go!' ron gave her a soft nudge, and said 'shes gorgeous!'
hermione looked as angry as she had when crookshanks
was blamed for eating scabbers. she got up, grabbed her
things, and left, but made sure her back pack had swung
the girl to push her slightly. the girl looked abashed.
hermione slammed the compartment door behind
her, and the glass shattered.
'reparo!' harry muttered, and he, too, left. he couldn't
see hermione anymore, so he just went into the next
compartment, only to find cho chang and her group
of friends.
'harry!' she looked surprised. the other girls giggled.
'hi harry' one girl said, winking at him.
'hey, harry, maybe you'd like to make up for cedric.
not in looks, but in - well......you know.' another girl
said. cho looked as thoug she may cry, and another of
her friends hit that girl in the arm and then smiled
sweetly at harry as though he hadn't noticed.
'uhh......i guess i'll leave..' he said, wanting to get
away from cho's friends. they were all sixth years,
and some, he noticed, were seventh years.
'o, u don't have to, harry... ' cho said quietly.
so he stayed.
all the girls were giggling and staring at him, moving
closer to him and whispering things in his ear loudly
so that the other girls could hear. cho was sitting beside
him, and her friends kept pushing them together.
they were telling harry sum things about cho,
which made her blush and harry blush.
one girl on the opposite side of him touched his
arm and said 'if theres another ball this year, will u go
with me?' she looked tall, and she was one of those
seventh years. harry stuttered, and the other girls glared
at her. except cho. she didn't seeme to care.she just
looked away.
'no, harry wants to go with me!' one said. she smiled
at harry. actually, she was pretty, and he would
go with her if cho said no.
'um...actually...' harry tried to say, but then, one girl,
probably the only girl besides cho who wasn't
gushing all over him said loudly which made the girls
freeze.
'harry, u went with parvati last year, right? who did
u really want to go with? who did u aks first? cuz i think
u should try her again this year.' this girl said. he knew
she was cho's best friend. they were always together.
'uh....i - i..asked...uh..' he turned as scarlet as the
hogwarts express. luckily, to his great liking, crookshanks
jumped up on him.
'crookshanks!' hermione called. she ran through the door,
then said, rather snappily,
'o, so sorry i interupted, i guess i should've realized
your not the only boy flirting with pretty girls older
than himself!' she picked up crookshanks, who bit her,
and then left.

omg...i love the story!!!!! i really want to be hermione's friend, and i'm not really a girly girly ya know, i...well...tend to speak out when things aren't really nice or stuff like that..........i love quidditch!!! please post more!! ;D

sry to bother u again, but i love to read to!

ok, lol, don't worry! the stroy, and my own little series has just started.
hermione will start to like you, and you'll be liked by everyone. oh, and what house do u want to be in?
i'll put u in any house, i was thinknig either ravencalw or gryffindor. u pick.

gryffindor please....o, cloud u make me not go out w/ ron like right away?

 r u going to post more? :-\

yes,yes, and yes! i think im gonna put u and ron togehter in the middle of the story, and i htink it'd be better if u were in gryffindor!! excellent choice!!!
:-)
o, ya - ppl, another hp site (i mad eit myself, i'll have to get sumore stuff, but for now, its not bad for my first!)
www.expage.crazee4hp.com
please check it out! THANKS!

story.....................

the girls stared at hermiones back, then at harry.
'o, you just wanted to flrit with us, u knew we were in
this compartment all along?' cho whispered.
'uh-  no, cho, she just thinks that bcuz - '
'whata jerk!' her best friend snapped. cho looked
sad, then she got up and left the compartment. the other
girls got angry and push him out.
'no - wait - she - thinks that bcuz - girl - argh! stop!'
but they wouldn't listen to him. harry got thrown to the
ground, and he shook his fist at their backs.
the hogwarts express came to a stop, and harry got
out, trying to spot cho to explain to her.
harry got stuck in a carriage with ginny weasley
who had a crush on harry, and the creevy brothers,
who were squealing with happiness. the brothers
were talking to him, and ginny was blushing.
it seemed like forever to get to the castle, but they
finally did. it seemed to take ages.
they had a surprise from the sorting ceremony.
there were some new people from durmstrang,
and plus the pretty girl. a lot of guys were staring at her,
like they had with fleur. they were done the first year
sorting, then they did the newcomers sorting.
'Brotferd, Louis!'
GRYFFINDOR!
he walked to the table. he sat besdie ginny, and started
talking to her with intrest. she caught harry's
eye, and waved, turning red again. Louis looked
disgruntled at suddenly being ignored, but then she told
him sumthing, and he nodded, smiling and looking
relieaved.
"they must be friends already" harry thought.
they called sum more names, then they called the girl
with the cool accent.
',mckinnon, emily!!'
she sat upon the stool. the hat was on her head for awhile.
a lot of guys were praying that she would be in their house,
including ron. hermione was sitting away from them,
by herself. finally, the hat shouted -

*lol love it so far, but it's McKinley.... ;D

PLEASE POST MORE!!!!  :-[

i know that, i can read *lol* i just changed it, cuz i have sumthing planned.
(i planned to change the last name anyways.....)
so don't wory, or fret, i have it ALL planned!!!
:-)

o ok...r u going to post more tonight?  ???

i love tom marvolo riddle
i love tom marvolo riddle
back off hes mine!
back off hes mine!
i love t.m.r.
i love t.m.r.
smg+tmr=LUV :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)

ok, with the story...........(i love tom marvolo riddle! please back off, were dating, and i also mean the guy who plays him. so please leave us alone, we r very much in love.)

GRYFFINDOR! all the gryffindors clapped and cheeered (at least, the boys did) and the other houses booed.
hermione looekd huffy, and when the emily girl sat down beside her, she got up and tried to look for another seat. before she could sit back down, guys raced and pushed to get to that seat. she fell, and she took out her wand, looking very red, put then quickl;y put it back in her pocket as she caught sight of a teacher strolling along the table.
ron had gotten her old spot, so herminoe sat beside harry.
'hi' harry said. she ignroed him.
'listne - its not what u think - !'
'listen, i've lived long enough to know guys, harry, just look at ron!' herminoe snapped. ron was drooling over the white linen table cloth, and emily handed him a napkin, asking him if he ahd sum kinda drooling disorder, cuz thats all she sees him do. he went terribly red.
dumbledore got up to say his speech.
'there will be two new teachers here. prof. hagrid has something important to do. so, please allow me to introdue, the new care of magical creatures teacher.
professor bowen!' everyone clapped. he was skinny,
with dark golden-brown hair, an un-clean-shaven face,
his hair was standing on end, kind of spikey, and his robes were dangling open, where they reaveled blue jeans with rips in them and a old, red checkered shirt. he looked poor. but the girls didnt seem to have mind. a lot of them had grazed looks about them, and harry heard, with surprise, on seventh gryffindir girl say
"oo, he looks so hot! especially with the poor look, and that sexy grin!' herminoe was staring at the teacher.
'and, allow me to introduce the new d.a.d.a. teacher,
professor sirius black.

OMG...OMG... This is sooo good!  ;D

POST MORE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!1 :'(

gee, emily, i now officialy claim u my number one fan, lol! i bet u readers weren't expecting that, were you?
hahahahahaha!
ps - i luv t.m.r.! hes mine, so please back off, we are dating. thank you.

ok, story.......................................

everyone gasped. they whispered. and then the screaming began. harry caught a glimpse of cho. she looked very surprised. ron harry and hermione got up.
'SHUT UP! ITS ALL RIHT!' ron roared, and only sum ppl fell silent. herminoes bad mood had taken an awful swing, and she kicked the table very hard, screamed the loudest, and everyone fell silent. even dumbledore looekd mildly surprised at her odd behavior.
'now. i would like to explain to you. peter pettigrew is not dead. he disguised himself as a rat, staying with a wizard family for some time. until prof black got out of azkaban, he got worried. sirius black has been cleared. the ministry of magic does not believe that peter is alive, htough he is, and he is the one who brought lord voldemort back to power.'
almost everyone flinched at his name.
'sirius black did not kill those muggles. peter did. now, i assume everyone will treat him like every other teacher here at hogwarts. thank you.'
evryone went to bed, tlaking and shaking. no one believe that sirius was innocent, and this brought the three back to earth. hermione seemed to have forgotten about the girls, and harry couldn't have been more happier. sum other ppl were talking about gardere. even when ron mentioned his name, hermione went misty-eyed.
they went off to bed. hermione turned to the right, muttering 'gardere........gardere......hmmm'
harry went to sleep.
it was pitch black. harry was sitting in a cicular room, shaking. suddenly, a white door appeared from no where. the door creaked open. BANG! something big hit something else, and harry bolted awake. he saw someone at the door. harry remembered his dream when voldemort said he would get harry when he least expected it. harry gulped.
'voldemorts in my room...or one of his death eaters....' thought harry. he climbed down his ladder quietly. the figure was still there. its hands were out. harry picked up his wand. he crept infront of the figure. he raised his wand, ready to hex voldemort, or the death eater. just then dean and seamus lamps flickered on., they screamed.

THANKS FOR NAMING ME UR # ONE FAN! I LOVE THE STORY!CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!1 :-[

how cum emily is the only one who posts? i know about 121 ppl read my story, but ppl, please post, i wanna know what u think!!! ppl, what do u think of my story? should i write the rest of the hp series by myself (like, write the rest of my fan fic series) i have excellent ideas! i'll write a 6th and 7th too, ok, ppl? PLEEEEEEEEEEASE POST! and also, please check out
my *crappy cuz i need more links, but dont worry im getting sum* hp site,
www.expage.com/crazee4hp
please and thank you.

i saw ur site, it was ok...but ur story's great! please post more, and i'll get more ppl to post on it....what does gardere mean?

great story... Keep going

hey sway....see shelby, u got fans, though, i'm her# 1 lol* that's cuz it's a great story, and u put me in it. so when will my name be corrected by the way lol* post...post!

i think your hooked on ALL the stories on this site....lol! your name is EVERYWHERE on the fan fictions! ok, continuing............... (im adding stuff to my site, dont worry, it wont be that crappy for long!)

i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
i luv tom
anyways................. ya, the story.......

dean and seamus jummped up, dean witha  krowbar in his hand, and seamus with a - sock. neville woke upm then gulped, and hid underneath his covers. ron rolled over and said
'c'mon, u can have a better weapon than that seamus......HOLY ****!' ron jumped up, and grabbed the krobar.
'SIRIUS BLACK!' dean roared.
'SHUT UP, DEAN!' harry yelled.  neville looed up in horror at ron and harry, surprised how scary they could be.
'and i thought hermione was frightening at dinner!' neivlle gulped. even sirius laughed, which made the three boys jump.
'congratulatins,  sirius!' harry grinned. sirius pulled harry and ron into a tight,brotherly embrace, then let go. he looekd at the other three boys, and said calmly
'the only person  iwant to kill is u-no-who and his supporters, especially wormtail.' the three boys shook, and laughed nervously, as tho he may pounce.
'ya, im surprised i got the job. took awhile, but im under close watch. the ministry will be dropping in, no doubt.' ron and harry grinned.
'so....hermione tells me she's a prefect.' sirius said casually.
'what?' ron and harry said. she would obviously be prefect, but she hadn;t told them.
'ya, i talked to her when u guys were ignoring her. wanna go visit her?'
so they crept to the girls doratories, ron hoping that he would catch emily walknig with a see-threw nightdress on.
they creake dopen the door, and the screamed. parvati and lavender were wearing green masks, braiding eachothers hair. herminoe was reading. she gaped at them. the girls had hardly anything on, just night dresses, and they each turned pink.

that's so funny! i have to write more on my fna fic tommorrow.in mine, i'm harry's long lost cousin and sirius and i r really good friends! i don't mined if u take the idea of sirius and i as friends!*lol* but, when r pple gonna know what my real name is? my real last name...

parvati and lavender quickly put on their bath robes, and
hermione covered her bare legs with her blankets.
'sorry, ron, but u have the wrong dornitry! the sixth
years are just a few doors down! and harry, i'm
surprised, i didn't think u were that dumb! cho
is in ravenclaw!' hermione snarled. harry noticed
where ron was looking, and it was wear hermione's
legs had been. he shook himself.
'uh- s-s-sorry, m-mr b-b-black, we, er, were
just, um, having sum fun, please m-m-mr black,
d-don't k-k-k-kill us!' parvati said, lavender nodding
behind her back. sirius roared with laughter, and
so did the other boys. parvati looked disgurntled,
and dean and seamus, who woudln't miss taking
a peek, laughed too. herminoe got up, and looked
as though she could smack them all,
even sirius who was acting like a fifteen year old.
'congrats, sirius, now, can u boy sleave?' the boys,
still snickering, left. they conversation that followed
afterwards surprised harry.
'best legs, next to emily and fleur, she has, that granger!'
dean said, nodding. neville looked odd, as tbhough
not wanting to addmitt he could sink as low as the
othe rboys and talk about what they had seen.
'oh ya, skinny and long, she sure is growing...' ron
said dreamily. harry stared at him.
'mm hmm....and lavender and parvati in those
tiny night gowns!' the boys (sirius had gone) orared with
laughter, even harry had to admitt herminoes legs were
nice and paravti looed stunningly pretty, even with a mask
on. this was the life...except he didn't want to sink
too low.

\
sorry, emily, if u feel offended, i'm just trying to make u one of those perfect girls, if u know jwhat i mean, and ill change your last name to wat it is, all right? :-)

oh no! not a perfect girl! i'm nothing like that!i thought that i was a5th year like the others :'(

being a perfect girl goes against everyhting! i'm like fred and george and ron! i like to be just average! please not perfect! :'(

in the moring, they got their schedules, and harry kept seeing ron, dean, seamus and neville trying to sneak a peek at hermiones legs. semaus even dared to say that he slipped, so he could get a better view. she had kicked him really hard in the stomach *by and accident*
and then snalred at the boys
'if you ever fall again, i'll make sure you'll get hurt!' malfoy heard that, mocked her, and then pretendted to fall at her feet.
'if u think im falling at ur feet, granger, you've got the wrong idea, you nasty mudblood. what r u gonna do, touch me? thats the worst u can do, and i know it.' he looekd at her ankles, covered by socks, and then lifted his head up, at her bare legs. hermione didn't touch him, cuz she knew he would tell, but instead *pretended* to trip over him, kicking him in the cheek, hard. they went to their first lesson, cofm.
harry realised the girls were dolled up, and even the slytherin girls were trying to impress this teacher.
'duggups. really rare, its hard to see them, they can blend in. see these little holes? u know if its a male of female by the things it shoots out. female shoot out a smell that smells the cologne, and the males shoot our flowers for the female.'
he made them all shoot out flowers for all the females, and when hermione went to grab her flower, ron took it for her. she looemd absahsed, and ron said
'im gonna eat it cuz my breath smells.' the girls around him giggled.
after that, they went to herbology.
herboblogy wasn't very fun, cuz the hufflepuffs were being odd with harry, after last year, and they were also scared to go near him cuz crookshanks was there.
'crookshanks! what r u doing here? shoo!' herminoe wave dher hand queitly.
crookshanks hissed, hair standin up on end. herminoe was spooked out by he rcats behavior, and the medicine didnt seem to be working. it just made it go more crazy. even this morning was an example. it bounced around the common room like crazy, its tail on fire. finally, they had d.a.d.a, the class they were looknig forward to.  all the kids fought over the back seats, terrified over him. he decided to tell them what really happene dthat night the muggles were killed, but they just seemed more scared off him.
'ok, now, we're talknig about jinxes and hexes, and how to block them and such. you're very behind in them.
then i'll be working with u on....' but then the bell rang. ppl jumped up, looking realieaved to go.
'NO HOMWORK!' he called.
hartry and ron went to divination, and hermione went to arithmancy.
harry ewntered the oerfume-smelling place, with tea pots and things. they sat down.

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just then, a teacher which resmebled a over grown bettle came out of the curtains.
'my deeears...' she whispered faintly.
'i have just been crystal gazing. i saw sumthing.....amazing....it's power over took me, and i knew i could've gone far..'
'too bad she didn't go far away' ron joked. harry punched himself in the stomach so he wouldn't gigle.
'we will get a new member...your class, will...and sumone will leave it...will die...' she looekd at harry sadly.
'or maybe, you have a mistake. maybe sumone will just stay here, no new ppl and no ppl dying!' harry sauid loudly. what a fraud!
'my dear, if u were there, u would know...but u weren't, so i advise you to keep your mouth shut.' she said, sounding more like prof. mcgonagall.
parvati and lavender scolded harry and ron. they were mad at him cuz of last night.
'we will be working with getting messages from the brain, just sudddden messages...just by looknig at objects.' she said in her back-to-usal-airy-fairy-self.
'um, isn't that called remebering?' ron said. harry snorted with laughter. they got lots of homework at the end of class, probably cuz of the yell outs. they wen tto lunch, ron cursing all his homework. they met hermione in the great hall, wolfing down lunch.
'o, great, hermione, trying to get another thing stand started? trying to protect sumthing else now, eh? what is it? homework?' hermione didn't even scowl. she picked up her bag and ran to the direction of the library.
they ate, and went to their next classes. that night they stayed awake, donig their homework, and hermione wasn't their.
'where is she?' ron asked, bloting his homework.
'i dunno.....the library?' harry shrugged. parvati and lavender were whispering, then parvati came over to harry and ron, lavender behind her.
'hey, parvati' ron said slyly. ' can i see u in that mini dress thing again?' parvati went red, then directed her comment to harry.
'i know where hermione is going all the time.' she said knowingly.
'where?' harry asked, know ing what she was gonna say next.
'not telling.' she said huffily. she walked away, lavender behind her. that prooved harry right.
'then what was the point of cumnig voer here?' harry yelled across the room. they were bent over a list.
'heyya harry.' george came over to them.
'im quidditch team captain. the official one. fred fills in for me sumtimes....we *hahaha* share!'
'oh, congrats.' harry said.
'ya...and guess whos keeper now?' fred prodded, looknig at ron. ron wanted to be on quidditch, so they knew this would bug him.
'who? tell me and i'll rip them!'
'emily mckinley! the pretty girl...who, trust me, is NOT perfect!' he snroted with laughter, nudged fred, and he fell back, laughing.
'
ron moaned.

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'i lost the position to a-a-a girl? i pretty perfect kinda girl!?" ron grummbled. fred and george looked outraged.
'she is not perfect....shes like us, only worse!' it must've took a lot to addmitt that, so this girl must be wild.
'she is? how?' ron prodded.
'in every class, the teachers threatened to kick her out! she's so dumb, she might go back a grade! well, shes really samart when she feels like it. she pulled a prank on snape! it cost 250 points from gryffindor! can u believe that? so, were minuse sumthing.....everyones real mad at her - oh! look - here she cums!@ shh!" she walkled by and grinned at fred and george. she sat down. she looke dperfect and innocent, harry thought fred and george must be talking about sumone else.
'sup' she nodded cooly.
'uh...' ron looked  amazed.'so, you're keeper?'
'ya. sucks, don't it? i wanted to be seeker, but harry here has that position. lucky you.' she punched him in the arm, and harry's eyes watered. she had lots of strenghth for a girl. he resited not to grab his arm. or punch her back, but he would never punch a girl.
she laughed, and harry could've sworn she snorted.
she got up, and tripped. she was klumsy too.
'meant to do that.' she laughed.
'ya sure.' fred joked.
'i did.' she said darkly. he gulped.  then she laughed in his face, and he laughed too. she stayed there, talking to them, when hermione came in at 11;30pm.
'where have u been?' ron aske dright away.
'none of your buisness.' she said, sticking her nos ein the air.
'whoa! nice hair, who r u?' emily added. hermione stared at her.
'im hermione granger, whats it to you?' hermione said darkly.
'whats it to me? i like to get to know the freaky ugly ppl before i mock them.' emily said, shaking her head, her pretty hair flying in rons face.
herminoes eyes and lips thinned.
'well, whats your name? r u that girl with no brains who got kicked out of class?' hermione snapped. emily nodded.
'yup, thats me, no brains...listen, herms, u don't mind if i call u herms, do ya? well, i just wanna be everyones friend, k?' she said, getting up, gonig red. she stormed off, leaving hermione confused.
'is she the oddest?' hermione shook her head. she took out a list and sat down, she was immediantly crowded by girls who had spotted her.
'hermione, what should i get - ?'
'herminoe, what does - '
'herm-' the were all shaking lists and quills at her.
'sorry, listen im kinda od busy here...' she saud loudly. they were still crowded round her, so she dashed up to, for sum reason, the boy doritry. she didn't cum back.
'harry' sumone whispered. herminoe was wearin ghis invisibility cloak.
'i can't stand these girls...' she hissed, crouching down, hitting ron on the head sharply.
'what do they want?' harry asked.
'er - im tired, night. here - '  she took it off and slipped it into harrys bawled fist. they went up to bed.
'whats hermione up to?' ron asked.
'i dunno....' harry said.
'and all those girls?' ron asked.
'hmm....they obviously want sumthing from her, but what?' harry said thoughtfully. he went to bed.

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there was a whirl of colour. the world was shaking. then, suddenly, hermione appeared.
'hermione?' harry called. she ignored him. she looked around, wildly, as if she had heard him, but couldn't see him.
'harry?ron?' she called, her voice echoing.
'its harry!' he went right up to her face.
'where....what?' she called.
suddenly, everything went green. profesor mcgonagall appeared.
'hermione granger.' she said. hermione looked at her.
'y-y-yes?' she stuttered.
'you have failed everything. you are expelled. and your friends, harry and ron, has been murdered. tortured. your parents are next. you can nevber get a school education. u will never get a job.' herminoe screamed, then burst out crying.
'herminoe! thats a lie! hermione!' harry yelled. he tried to run towards her. sumthnig was pulling him back. she cried.
'noo! you're lying!' she screamed at mcgonagall, violent tears splashing her robes.
'no, im not. its getting worst.' she the teacher said. herminoe screame dloud, and harry woke, up, yelling.
'HERMIONE! ITS A LIE! HERM-'  ppl were running towards his dormitry. ron and dean and seamus and neville bolted awake, sweating too, for harry.
'whats wrong with hermione?' then the door swung open. herminoe was there, her prefect badge agleam, alond with emily, parvati, lavender and fred and george.
'whats wrong?' hermiobne squealed, runnnig towards him. he hugged her tightly, and ron looked jelaous and went over to them. crookshanks leaped on harry's bed, staring at him with great concern. it was odd for a cat.....
he let go of herminoe, and blushed. its felt like he had just been taken over the imperius curse, but he could fight that....sumthing stronger....
'whats wrong, harry?' ron asked. hermione was crying silently.
'uh....nevermind...' he mummbled. they finally all left, and when they did (hermione did not tho) the three friends went down to the common room. he told them about his dream. ron looked worried, and hermione laughed.
'please, like that's gonna happen..' she said, rollnig her eyes.
'it felt so real, hermione. i felt the pain. so did you. everythnig looked 3D....' he said.
'well, harry, its just a normal nightmare! like i'd actually fail, right?' she scoffed. she didn't mention about ron and him getting murdered. she went to bed without further ado. ron lent towards him.
'i believe you, harry, i think this has sumthnig to do with u-know-who.'

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the next few weeks were very shaky. harry kept falling asleep ,even though he wasn't tired. ppl were especially worried when he was walking then suddenly fell asleep. he had jerked awake before he hit the ground, screaming. ppl were being careful round him, and even sirius had it worst. everyone hated his classes, as cool as they were, they were frightened.
emily was following him, and he wiodnered why till she came up to him and said quietly
'r u all right? do u need support?' he shook his head, then ron pretended to fall. she looked at him oddly.
hermione and emily were now friends. she was dearly sorry for acting so stupid, she wa just having a bad day cuz sum boys had cum up to her and said sum stuf that deeply offended her.
harry went to comc class with ron and hermione, crookshanks followed him, and hermione snapped.
'go away, before i get ird of you, cat!' she screamed. crookshanks was acting too odd, and herminoe thought at first it was this cut he had.
'it must be from the swamp or sumthing." she had said. but it didn't look like one. it looekd liek some kind of mark, harry had never noticed before.
all the girls were looknig nice, as usal they did when they had lessons with gardere. he brought in the animals, but all the girls talked to him instead. at the end of class, the girls knew he was twney-one, liked sweet girls without makeup, was single, his b-day was in two weeks, and more. hermione was the only girl who listewned to his lessons, tho with misty eyes.
'he really nkows what hes saying, he does...' she rambled on, ron moaning telling her loudly to shut-up. the went to divination, finally, after sirius's lesson on counter-hexes.
they went to divinatoin, and prof trelawny talked on about stuff they could do to pick up better 'signals'. harry looked out the curtianed window longingly.
he was flying out to the forbidden forest. ron was already there. he stood there. then voldemort appeared. ron screamed.
'i;ve killed harry and hermione.' he cackeld. ron screamed, and actually started crying. then l.v wooshe dhis wand, and huge, hauiry spiders appeared. the crawled all over ron, and ron screamed loudly, crying and shouting.
'ron! RON!' harry screamed. he tried to urn towards him, but he just moved backwards. suddenly, he felt sumone grab him.  he woke up.
'

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the whole class was staring at him, bent down. ron was closest, then prof.trelawny. ron was still shaking him, tho not like he needed it. he was already shaking violently, his blood felt as frezzing like it was the onrth pole on the coledest winter day. he was twitching suddenly.
'my dear, what is wrong? what happened in your dream?' prof. trelawny asked urgently.
'nothing.' harry lied.
'nothing? my dear, u were twitching and jerking so violently, like the cruciatus curse! u were shaking, clutchiong your scar and screaming as loud as u could, im sure! nothing indeed! phut!' she replied, her eeys widened as wide as they could go.
'can i go?' harry mummbled.
'go! u won't do any such thing! i forbid it! tell me your dream, potter! tell me! it was the most vibrant one i have ever seen and read about! whoever is sending u these messages, they must have sumthing of yours in them! must be blood, potter!' she sounded mad. crazy. he was backing away, his eyes popping. ron looekd terified, and the girls were crying.
'potter, let me, i also heard u are collapsing all over the school! we could not wake u, potter, boy! we even set ur robes on fire0' harry looked at the singes - 'and u would not wake! potter, tell me, now then i -'
'NO! I HAVN'T BEEN COLLAPSING! STAY AWAY FROM ME! YOUR NOTHING BUT I STUPID PHONY! A FRAUD! GET AWAY!' he waved his wand at her, kicked open the trap door, and thundered away. he didn't know where he was going, it just got darker and draker. herminoe was right! what a fraud! a fake! he kicked the wall out of anger. his foot got sucked into the wall! he gasped. he ytouched the wall lightly, and his hand got sucked in. harry yelled out, frightened, and ran. he didn'tknow where he was going. he ran to the girls bathroom to see moaning myrtle.
'harry!' she gasped, surprised. harry sat agaisnt the wall. he burried his head in his hands. he started to cry. he couldn't help it.
'harry - are u allright?' myrtle asked. she wrapped her cold hands around him, and hugged him. it felt good, even if it was the ugly ghost who obviously fancied him. he stoped, and thought for a minute. sirius!
'myrtle - i got to go - i'll visit u another time. allriight? i promise.' he added, seeing her lip quiver. he ran out before she could respond, ran to sirius. he waited till the class was over, and walked in. he lookeed delighted to see harry.
'hey harry - whoa! whats wrong?' he asked. harry fewlt like crying again. he told sirius about the dream, and the dream he had had about hermione. sirius looked the scariest harry had ever seen him.
'sumone is trying to tell u sumthing, harry.' sirius said.
'who?' harry mummbled, not looknig directly at him.
'who took blood from u, harry? who wants u dead?' sirius replied grimmly.  that was to obvious.
'v.oldemort.' harry answered. then he felt a chill. sumthing he had never gotten before. he then knew. v.oldemort was back to power. v.oldemort was after him. he was cuming. he was going to kill. harry's chill grew, he couldn't help it. he shivered, then started to twitch in pain. he fainted.

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he woke up, and found himself in a place which was very dark. it was the hospital wing. he looked around. no body but himself was in there. he put on his glasses, and saw- crookshanks! he was leaning against him, purring.
'r u stalking me, cat?' he hissed. harry gasped! did crookshanks just smile? he shook his head. he got up, wanting to tell ron and hermione about his dream. he was sure hermione knew from ron. he was dissapointed they hadn't cum to see him. he got up, ready to escape the hospital wing. just then, the door opened. harry jumpe dback on his bed, and opened his eyes just a crack to see what was going on. dumbledroe was there with snape, mcgonagall, sirius, lupin, and sum other ppl he couldn't see. they leaned over him.
'dumbledore, what do u expect happened? why did he have that dream?' snape asked, sounding surprisingly concerned.
dumbledore just stood there, beaming down at harry with a look harry had never seen before.
'i think its time for a secret meeting of the order of the pheonix...fawkes, lets go.' he turned around swiftly, and he heard them all walking away.
why did snape care? how did snape know about the dream? surely - surely sirius would'nt have told him? and what in the world was hte order of the pheonnixes? why had fawkes cum? what was going on? harry put his glasses back on, got up, and whispered to crookshanks
'im gonig. shut up, and don't follow me.' he tip toed across the room to the hospital wing door. he went out, just seeing dumbledores cloak turn the corner. harry followed him, but crookshanks streaked passed him to follow them also.
'crookshanks!' harry hissed.  but the cat didn't look back, but ran, and then turned the corner. he ran down the hallway,  but they were all gone. where had they gone to? he kept walking arouhnd, then felt the same dragging sensation he had before. he found himself infront of the wall. the suck-in wall. he ehard footsteps. sumone was cuming! he looekd, and just beofre he jumped into the wall, he saw hermione and ron. he fell forwards, and sprang his hand. badly. he moaned, and looked around. a looooong hall followed. he walked down it, wishing he had his invisibility cloak with him. he wanted to see herminoe and ron, but he couldn't seem to get out anyway. so he walked. and walked. he came to a great purple door, which looked beautiful with the perfect-white walls. she looekd in the window and gasped.

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people were in the room. there was a large purple table,
and about twnety or so witches and wizards were there.
what were they doing? the table was so large and long,
harry couldn't see eevryone there. he could just tell
that dumbledore was there, including snape,
sirus, lupin, mcgonagall, gradere and sa lot of other
ppl harry didn't know, or he just couldn't see their
faces properly. one looked liike as old babysitter,
ms. figg, but it couldn't be her cuz she was a muggle
who lived next dorr to harry ever since he could remeber.
she was cranky and had lots of cats, and to
entertain harry, she would pretend to talk to her cats
and sumhow, miracuously, they would talk back,
at least meow and purr. sumone else looked like
mundugus fletcher, sumone who shook harrys
hand at the leky cauldrom right before he had even
begun his frist year at hogwarts. he watched them,
his ear pressed agaisnt the door.
'we have received an owl from hagrid and maxime.
they have completed their mission, - ' everyone
clapped - ' except for one, particyaly large family
of giants. they like the scary power of voldemort - '
everyone winced except for lupin (and harry) -
'so there will be sum diffiuculty after all. of course,
we knew it wouldn't be easy, but this family of
ginats are telling other ppl about the power, and r
getting jnto sum ppl's heads.' they crowd was silent.
fawkes swooped down from a perch, and sat
down on mundugus fletcher. (harry could definitly
tell it was him) they - they talked to eachother!
'now, anything else?' dumbledore asked wearily.
they each had a mallet. lupin smacked his hard on the
table, and a pretty ringing went off.
'harry's dream, dumbledore.' he said. dumbledore
sighed. harry could tell dumbledore knew sumthing
that no one else did, by the look he gave the door.
harry quickly ducked, but he was sure dumbledore saw
him. what if he opened the door, and harry got in
trouble? he didn't know how to get out of here! he
presses against the walls, every part of it, but
nothing. harry got worried. the meeting wouls surely
end soon, wouldn't it? he pressed harder. he was
getting tired. he slouched agaisnt the door, waitng
to get caught. he fell asleep.

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harry was in a dark room. screaming was everywhere.
he looekd around, and the room turned green,
flashing green then black. he turned and saw
a family geting tortured.
'STOP!' harry yelled,  looking for the attacker.
he whirled around wildly, yelling. whereevr he turned,
a family was being murdered, tortured. he was
screeaming, just thebn, everything went red.
a hooded figure was walking slwoly behind him.
other hooded figures, masked, were walking, nay,
marching, behind this tall, thin cloaked thing.
harry's scar burst with pain. he droped to the
ground. he twitched. he would die of pain. he knew it.
'harry potter.' a cold voice said. it blended in with
an unpleasant wind, and a chill went down harry's
back. he jerked around. the hooded figure in
the front took of his hood, and harry's head exploded
with a strange pain he had never felt before.
crying, screaming, dullness, sadness, depression, shouting
.... it was horrible. it was about a million times
worst than a dementor. harry just sat there. he
couldn't do anything at all about this weird feeling.
what was happening?
'i will kill you. you know i can.' the voice
hissed. harry knew that voice. it haunted his dreams
wheneve he got the chance. l.ord v.oldemort.
harry didn't answer. was this really happening?
it felt like it, definitly.
'i will kill you, soon. i will not give u any clues.'
the voice whispered, touchnig harry's scar.
harry din't feel anything. there was too much of
that strange feeling in his blood.
'i will torture you... and then, kill you.' the voice
said with amusement.
harry wnated to say sumthing. but he couldn't.
everything just froze in his body. he couldn't think.
he couldn't breath. he couldn't talk.he had absolutly
no feeling at all. he just stared. voldemor.t cackled
evily, and so did his fellow death eaters behind him,
in two perfect straight lines.
'CRUCIO!' voldemor.t screamed. harry jerked and twitched.
he could feel painb now. more main then he would've,
cuz just a second ago he couldn't feel anything.
he was getting the full blast.
he woke up, screaming, twitching, shaking. crying.
it finally stopped. it really had happened, but how>
that had only happened in a dream, they didn't mean
anything, did they? he rembered his dreams last year.
yes, they meant sumthing. sumhow, v.oldemort is
connect by harry. he rembered what trelawny had said,
and knew it wasn't the scar. it was his blood.
v.oldemort knew how to get to harry's head.
but how did he do it? what about the dream
when harry had sumhow eavesdropped on
v.oldemorts conversation? he would kill harry when
he elast expected it...when was that?
harry was heavily guarded....everywhere...
he couldn't think of a place he wasn't.
he scramble dup, in pain, and remebered where
he was. he looked in the window. they were gone.
harry walke dinto the room. there was a door!
harry opened it, and was sucked forwards. he
summersaulted, fliped and flopped, and fell
face down onto a very cold floor. he looked
up slowly. he had no idea where he was. then
he saw. gadgets and gizmos, newpapers, so
many things. this must bve a secret hide out of
sumsort. he turned and saw sum pink swirls
close up. he looekd around, and was sure he was
in sum sort of secret office....dumbledores secret
office.

how could he get out? he saw a large
pheonix. it looked just like fawkes.  harry walked towards
it, then tripped. he stumbled, and tried not to shout.
'gah!' he fell right into the largets feather.
the feather bent backwards, and he tipped out of
the room. he was infront of the gryffindor entrance,
of the fat lady. he turned around and saw shining
armour he had always treated like the others. now
he knew to treat everything with cautuion,
especially at hogwarts school of witchcraft and
wizardry.

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he walked into the common room after
getting yelled at by the fat lady for waking her up
at such an "unearthly time in the moring". he
saw  ron and hermione sitting their, staring at him.
they just sat there. they looked like stone, they
were even the same colour. it looked as if
herminoe had been crying. ron looekd harrassed.
hermione shakily picked up a piece of parchment
infront of her. he handed it to him.
harry took it and read it.


dear mr. harry potter,
i am very sory to tell  u this, and very sad i am also.
This is olympe maxime. Hagrid and i ave been on
a mission. i ate to tell you this, but...one giant got
angry with us. harry, hagrid has been murdered. please do not feel vairy
badly, 'e weel be weeth you always, in your 'eart.
please keep in up speereets.
love,
madam maxime
ps - be vairy careful. fleur says ello.

oh no!!!! *starts crying* how can this happen? please keep going...i updated my story! ;D

*sigh* calm down, em...remember, i told u and the readers who don't post that i'm thinking like j.k.r.
please don't cry. i'll write more after i leave the wizard stage....or when i get really bored, and especially when more ppl post and read the story...

hey...will u read my story? ???

ya, i read them, but i don't usally post, dunno why, i post for hermione_g's...ya, i'll start posting m-m-more, i'm sorry, please don't take is as an offense. but for now, i g2g, i have to meet *cough* someon in a chatroom. brb ppl, luv ya!

bye..*looks sad*

ya, the books r gonna be sad and very eventfull, dont worry, readers and posaters (mainly emily) lol

lol...please update!

k, updating.......



harry had gone dizzy. he lost his balance, stumbling as he
backed away. he could tell from the horror on his
friends faces he had on a weird, sad, grazed look,
like he had just come out of a  different world,
where everything was wonderful and than awful.
harry was so stunned he didn'ty think he could cry,
until he felt warm, salty tears well up in his eyes.
he shook his head slowly.
'no...' he muttered widlly, his eyes casting around
the room anbd finally finding ron and hermione.
'no...' he repeated. hermione nodded. then she burst
into tears.
'harry...heres nothing we can do!' she whispered.
ron looked as though he could cry too, but must feel
paralized. he just stood there, looking petrified,
staring at harry than hermione.
'no... it can't be! i know it's not true!' harry hissed,
even scaring himself. hermione looked surprised,
and her whispers turned into wails.
'harry! o, harry! please!' she wailed. she was crying
wildly, it looked as htough her eyes would pop out.
they were already bulging, and so were harry and rons.
'no! its not true!' harry yelled at the letter. he pumped
his fist against the wall, and ran out the door,
the last thing he saw was hermione fling into rons arms,
and the letter floating like a feather, innocently, like
is was just a mysterious parchment, down to the
common room floor.

harry didn't know where he was running, his feet
just carried him somewhere. he found himself, much
to put off his temper, infront of the wall where
the mystery room was. he rpactically yelled
in frustration. then he slumped down to the wall,
his face in his hands, tears streaming down his
face. he couldn't help it. he felt strange. he wanted
an adult. a woman adult, like mrs.weasley, or
even mrs. granger, or...mum. he cried harder, and
he gulped violently. he hiccoughed and choked,
and tears burst from his eyes. he was acting
so stupid!
'stop crying!' he told himself firecly. it just made
him cry harder.
'mmuuuuuumm....' he whispered, wanting to scream
it. he knew if anyone saw him like this, like
malfoy, or one of the slytherins, or rita skeeter,
he would be done for. but right now, he didn't care.
he wanted the dead ones alive. he then thought
of nevilles parents. he wnated the innocent
insanes to go back to sane. then he felt a sudden
urge of anger. he felt like he could kill. it
all went back to voldem.ort.

harry was walking slowly back to the gryffindor
common room, not sure if he really wanted
hermione or ron there. he thought hard, trying
to psh out his thoughts of voldemor.t, and he also
wanted to stop crying, just incase sumone did see
him. he didn't understand. hagrid couldn;t be dead,
it was a feeling....Something was trying to get
into his head, which was pushed way back, to
the vary back of his had, it didn;'t seem important
at the time, he thought, but now it must be.
it must have sumthing to do with voldem.ort, or
hagrid. he casted his mind around, but
nothnig doing. he walked right into the fat lady's
portrait.
'o great...i have to waker her again!' he muttered,
messaging his head where he hit it. just then, to his
great surprise, emily came hurrling down the corridor,
running at a great speed.
'harry!' she gasped when she rechead him.
'emi-' but she yelled the password, grabbed his wrist,
and she dashed inside, him tripping over his own
feet, and fallnig to the ground.
'c'mon!' she moaned, practically draggin him.
'emily, wha-' she pushed him on the rud cushy couch,
and he just saw ron and hermione sitting on the couch
together infront of him. emily squeezed beside ron,
and the three fdaced him, full of concern.
harry was slightly angry.
'what was that all about?' he directed his question
to emily. she turned red, muttered sumthing, and turned
to face to wall beside her on her right.
'harry, r u ok?' ron asked. hermione was still crying,
tho silently, and it looked like another crazy
burst would set her to crying-wildly mode.
'ya, im f-' but he couldn't say it. he tried not to cry
infront of ron, but herminoe could probably
tell he was holding in with a tremndous efort.
'Oh!' she squealed, loud enough to be a scream/wail.
she jumped up, and ran to harry's side and huged
him like mrs.weasley had. like a very good friend.
she squeezed him tightly, and absolutly, compltetly
broke down. ron and emily looked horrified,
especially emily, coz she had never seen hermione burst
out crying before. the two friends quickly
went over to hermione and grabbed her firmly
and dragged her to the couch. ron hugged her,
and so did emily. harry was stunned and just sat there.
hermione quietened, but harry secretly wished
he was still being hugged.
'harry.' ron said seriously.'harry...me and hermione
are really upset too, he was a good friend, and
you really scared us. we went looking for you,
me and emily and hermione. when we could'nt find u,
we got really worried. where were u?' he added,
trying to get hagrid off harrys mind politly.
harry looked at emily quickly. should he trust her?
she was a new friend, but he wasn;t sure if they
were that good of friends. he decided he didn't want to
tell her, not yet.
he settled on shrugging.
'i want to go up to bed, ok?' harry said stiffly. emily
miust;ve knew what he was thinking, about her not
being trusted, and she burst.
'harry, i understand, but please, trust me. who would
i tell? if its about the age thing, im still explaining
to mcgonagall im not turnnig sixteen till next year
so i should be a fifth year!' she added quickly.harry
looked at her.
'i want to go to bed.' he repeated firmly. he was
flattered that she wnated to be trusted, and he now
sort of did, but that didn't stop him from being
reluctant.
'harry - please - ' hermione begged, still sobbing, tho
with control.
'no.' he said so firecly, the three of them backed off.
he went to the boys dormitry, and crept into bed.
long after, it felt like, he heard ron come in.
'harry?' he whispered. harry pretended to be asleep.
that didn;t fool ron, tho.
'harry...dont do anything stupid, he was going
to die someday...its devistating, i know, were
greatly sad too, but...' ron drifted off. harry was thankful,
so much, he couldn;t put it into words, but he was
also so confused, so sad, so angry he couldn;t put that
into words either. he wasn;t sure if he went to sleep
or layed with numbness the whole night, but either
way, he couldn't feel a thing.

omg,,,,how sad!!!!!

there has to be sum sad parts, doesn't there? sad parts, happy parts, parts that don't make sense, sucy parts, favourite parts, parts that r intense! (im starting to ryme, now, arn't i? want me to keep gonig?)
LOL, ok, omgoodness, look at the time, i better get serious and cut the rhyme! (that was sooo st-ew-pid, sorry!!)

he woke up the next moring, not knowing the time, day, or even where he was. then he remebered. he looked at the sun dial hermione had given him.
'blasted thing!' he mummbled, as he tried to see the time and hit himself in the head with the dial part. he was in a very crnaky mood, he could easily tell, which made him even mroe frustrated. he walked down to the common room, after cursing his socks, which he tried to put on his eyes as his glasses, and his glasses b-coz he broke the glass, and them in half. he couldn't bloody well see, and he blamed the bed for that, and kicked it, only making a searing pain in his big toe. he grumbled as he walked down the stars, like being angry was the answer. he walked into the common room, and saw sum ppl  scattered about, and he sawe emily, hermione and ron in a corner, next to the fire.
'good moring, harry!'emily said cheerfully. he bumped into herminoes chair, and she noticed how loudly he swore, and his broken glasses.
'harry..' she mummbled carefully. everyone was staring at him, the first years giggling or staring at him. one kid, the guy who had been foillowing ginny everywhere, looked at harry. ginyn did too, with raised eyebrows and a grin that looked like she was surprised and impressed.
'harry...your glasses!' herminoe said.
'octuculus raparo!' herminoe chanted. his glasses fixed.
'thanks,'; harry muttered, deciding not to tell them never to put their glasses on their feet, and that herminoe was stupid b-coz of course his glasses were broken! he grumbled and sat down on the only chair remaining that they had saved by  emily's and rons homework they were doing lazily together.
'what about breakfast?' harry asked. emily looked into his eyes.
'what about last night?' she challenged. harry glared at her. he sighed. he knew he would have to tell her, they would probabaly strap him down if they didn't. so harry sat and told them, including emily, everything that had happened except for the whole crying bit, and wanting a parent to hiug him, and that he was so happy when hermione hugged him. he felt guilty about that, he still thuoght ron liked hermione, but he also liked fleur and emily.
hermione's hand was over her mouth, ron eyes were bulging, and emily would've looked oddly calm except her hands were clenched tight and she kepy runnnig her fingers threw her hair, and twitching, like she knew sumthing they didn't. they all stared at her. she was unaware of that until ron coughed oddly, and she jumped.
'breakfast, anyone?' she gushed, before they could answer, she dashed to the fat lady;s portrait and pushed it open.

they followed emily, and looked at eachother. herminoe could tell from the look on harry and ron, that they were gonig to talk about her - oddness.
'no.' herminoe said firmly. they had reached the great hall, and emily was no where in sight. hermione was spreading jam on her toast.
'what?' ron asked in a mock-innocent tone.
'i'm not talknig about emily. i like her. and even if its possible theres something strange going on with her, well....its none of our buisness.' hermione said, glaring at her toast as if it, too, were saying it was gonig to talk about emily.
'hermione-' harry urged. hermione looked hurtful the harry was takinng advantage of the fact she wanted to be soft with harry.' hermione, a lot of thinghs arn't any of our buisness, but have we ever cared before?' harry pushed.
'well, it didnt have to do with a friend, did it?' hermione snapped. she got up, just as emily came to sit down. harry noticed she came from the other hall that didnt lead to the gryffindor common room.
'hey - whats up, hermione?' emily greeted them.
'uh...i got to...go to the library.' she said quickly. she dashed, and harry was sure she was telling the truth, that it wasnt just an excuse.
'well, guess what?' emily said, grinning.
'what?' ron said, and harry heard him silently plead "you'll go out with me.'
'ok' she said, 'im in fifth year now! yay! mcgonagall finally understood what i was telling her!' she sat down and ignored the food in front of her. ron  ginned too, and harry got up. he had saew cho glance at him from the ravenclaw table. he had a feeling they were talking about him. she looked hurt. he wlake dove rthere, and i saw her shush them.
'cho? can i talk to you?' he asked. the girls grumbled and half giggled. she looked up at him, her face cold, but her eyes showed hurt. she got up, and her best friend got up too.
'um - alone?' he said, hoping he didnt sound too offending. she nodded towards her friend, and she sat, glaring at harry so hard he felt suddenly odd, like scared alittle. they walked down the corridors.
he explained to her, and she seemed a great deal more happier and realieved.
'oh, ok, i didnt think u were the type." she said sweetly. they turned and looked at eachother. she had a funny look, it must be sum girl thing, harry thought.
'uh...so...want me to wlak u back to the great hall?' he asked. she shook her head and stepped closer to him.0
'no.' she whispered. harry felt shuldn't nervous, in a good way, but also felt like he knew he shouldn't be doing this.
'uh..do u miss cedric?' harry asked uncertainly. cho looekd away, and then she said quietly,
'of course i do...i really liked him.' she said, without a trace of embarassment.
'but hes gone now, u know? forever...'her voice trailed off, and harry felt her gasp for air. harry wanted to kiss her. he didnt know why, but he felt a strange, sudden urge. he heard footsteps, but ignored them. cho was leaning in. was it a kiss? it was. she kissed him on the cheek, very close to his mouth. he wanted it to be on the lips, but there always was another time. he kised her too, and she went red.
'i should go, im so sorry, i feel so horrible.' she whispered, tears streaming down her face. harry came back to life, and couldn't hear footsteps anymore. cho ran from him. girls r so dramatic, he thought,but sho was still....cho. he turned around, and saw -----------0

snape, smirking.
 voice.,' he said, in his usal cold voice. harry turned red with anger and embarassment.
'sir' harry said icily.
snape stared at him, oddly.
'10 points from gryffindro for kissing.' he saidm, and with a swift of his cloak, he left. harry glared at his back, and walked to the library to visit hermione. she wasn't there. he went to the common room. no, she wasnt there. he frowned. he felt like talking to her. he shrugged and stayed there, where ron and emily came in, laughnig about sumthing. harry jumped, pulled ron away from emily's clutches, and told him about cho. ron punch harry lightly in the arm, winked, and laughed. harry reddened. emily then joined them, and harry asked
"wheres hermione?' emily went red and changed the subject quickly.
'how about that weather, huh? realstorym, huh?' she said, got up, and ran to the girls doritries. harry looked out the window alter on, asnd there wasn't a clooud in the sky.

harry decided to take the advantage of hermiones and emilys absence to talk about emilys strangeness and herminoes abbsence all oif a sudden.
'i dunno about emily, she cool tho.' ron said. harry shrugged and nodded.
'what about herminoe?' he asked.
'hmm....' ron mummbled.
'shes not at the library..... and parvati checked for me, she isnt in the girls dormitries, and she skipped lunch.' harry poointed out. ron shrugged, leant back, and stared at crookshanks sitting in harry's lap.
'whats with that cat? hes alwats following u.' ron said suspiciously.
'dunno.' harry answered, pushing crookshanks off. suddenly, ron gasped, screamed, jumped in the air and flew backwards, stumblnig over the chair.
'RON!' harry shouted. ppl looked at them, and ron looked at crookshanks.
'harry, since when was crookshanks a-a-a-a-....girl?'

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hary and ron stared at crookshanks. crookshanks looked horrified. the three stared at eachother. things got tense. then  -MEOWR! crookshanks lept into the air, leaped onto george's head (he swore loudly, and everything went quiet)
'FOLLOW THAT CAAAAAAAAT!!!' ron yelled. harry and ron dashed after if, shoved open the portrait, and leaped out, ron tripping over crookshanks. he swore loudly, and decided to ignore the staring portraits who started yelling, and sahing threw other portraits, scaring the ppl in them. they yelled as crookshanks darted threw the corridors, meowing loudly and screechy-like. just then, herminoe came, out of no where, laughing and was rather giggly.
'HERMIONE!' harry screamed. she looked at them, and was about to say sumthing, then ron yelled 'LOOK OUUUUTT!!' she tried to stop, but he slipped over the floor and fell into hermione. they both got knocked over,  and hermione quickly pushed him off her.
'wha-'
'RUN HARRY! GOOO!' ron shouted. herminoe covered her face from his spit, ron got up, followed harry, who was follwoing crookshanks, and hermonoe got up, and chased after ron. just then, crookshanks stopped. emily came screeching up the corridor, and crookshanks ran up her body, and jumped. emily shreiked, and fiantly saw harry, ron and herminoe go by. emily yelled and chased after hermione. they were runnnig up and down the corridors, screaming. just then, someone side-stepped infront of harry (crookshanks had slipped betweent their legs) and harry stopped dead.

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hey, aj, have u read my story yet?? ok, only a bit mroe, im suppsod to be off, its midnight here....

sirius stood there, staring at harry with deep concern.
'what is it?' he asled urgently, looknig behind him, then at ron, herminoe and emily.
'thats - what - i-i- would - like - to -know!" herminoe panted, emily nodding along side her.
'yes, sirius, crookshanks turned into a -a-a  girl!' ron panted. sirius raised his eyebrows. herminoe stared, and emily shrugged, looknig odd.
'i thought crookshanks was a girl, like, all the time, coz when i first came here, she - er- he? well - ' she blew up in frustration "- it was a girl!' emily screamed, turning red. sirius looked up at her.
'ACCIO CAT!' sirius bellowed. it didn't work, for sum reason. they ran down the corridors, splitting up, hermione, ron and emily, and harry and sirius. harry still heard them shouting
'ACCIO CAT! ACCIO! ACCIO CAAAAT!!!' but nothing doing.
the all flopped down in sirius's office.
'why didn't it work? it's always worked for me! me! herminoe! i know how to cast spells, ack!' she was horrified at having a spell not work for her. she had started to cry and pant worriedly, and harry and ron and emily tried to ocmfort her by hugging her and whsipering.
' i dont know, it should've.' sirius said thioughtfully confused.
'hmm...unless...'emily whispered.
'unless its not a cat'

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they all looked at eachother, and suddenly it dawned on
them.
'and..and that scratch! it's a mark!' hermione whispered
eagerly.
emily nodded, her eyes so wide they seemed to take
up most of her head.'shes an animgus!'
'and so maybe...shes the one who was sending me those
letters!' harry said, it making more sense.
hermione nodded, and ron smiled as tho everything
was solved, sirius looked impassive, but emily
was confused.
'letters? what...letters?' she asked slowly. harry explained
to emily about the mysterious letters.
'do u think...that...do u think that - maybe - possibly -
a- a- a- death eater is sending u these - these letters,
and that was th-the cat?' she whispered fearfully. they all,
except harry, looked scared at the fact of a deatheater
sleeping in their dormitries.
'i've got to go to the library!' hermione said suddenly,
standing up so sudden she knocked ron flying off
his chair and alerted emily. sirius looked at harry
with raised eyebrows. without waiting for an answer,
hermione raced to the door, kicked it open, and
raced down the corridor.
ron, sensing the look from emily and sirius, shrugged
and said 'it's what herminoe does.'

 lol...i love it! and yes that's very true it is waht hermione does! ;D ha ha!

lol, ya.... anyways, i saw u posted more of your story? i'll have to check it out! any-hoo....

that night, hermione came bursting threw the common room door, looking very angry. she savagly kicked a chair out of her way (it was very unlike her to treat furnuture this way) and she gurmbled and mummbled to herself as she flopped onto the now-kicked chair.
emily looked up, surprised, and ron and harry stared at hermione with scared looks. harry quickly heard ron muttering
'please dont snap, please dont get mad...' which almost made harry laugh, but herminoe cut off.
'that sneaky animagus!' she hissed angrily.
'what?' emily asked, leaning closer.
'i looked up all the books on animagi, and theres nothing, i mean nothing, about sumnoe who can turn into a cat by will with a crease-marking!!' she dropped the books on the table infornt of them, and harry could see that the tables-legs buckled, and the table wheezed.
'nothing!' she repeated.
'so...she's unregistered?' ron said slowly.
'yes, dimwit! shes unregistered! or else its wrriten down in invisible ink!' she snapped, ron looking abashed.
harry suggested herminoe look up agin, maybe she missed sumthing, and she just lost it.
'what? u think im dumb all of a sudden? im not, i know i didnt seen anything about a cat who-s'
'ssssh!' emily warned, looking frightening herself.
herminoe's voice had been rising slightly. emily deciced she and hermione should go to bed, to calm her down, she had muttered to ron and harry, and they wlaked up, hermione breathing heavily, and emily tellnig her to calm down, shes had a lot of strain what with - (harry and ron tried to lean closer, but emily casted a look around the common room, and saw harry and ron and she gave them a scowl and she thumped up stairs)
'whats that all about?' ron asked faintly.
'female hysteria?' harry shrugged.
a week had passed, and on a friday, the common room was girlless. everyone except ginny, and about two first years were left. the guys took advantage of this, but harry and ron were intrested in knowing where they all were.
'what about a tracking spell?' ron said.
'that includes hermione.' harry said.
'what about forcing sumone to tell us?' ron suggested.
'that would include emily.' harry said dully.
its just, harry and ron decided emily was the type who wouldn't let anything get passed her, she could easily convince ppl to tell her sumthing, and she was a really good friend, not to mention easy to look at. so the boys trudged around the corridors, and decided to visit hagrids hut, even tho it was missing the best part of it.

omg....that's really scary because i can get ppl to tell me stuff! good job! more please! ;D

lol, u just strike me the type, lol.....

harry and ron trudged down and opened the doors.
it was a gray day. suddenly, ppl started screaming. ron and harry looked at eachother and sprang into action.
they started running, and harry saw ron try to whip out his wand like how emily and herminoe did (it was weird, coz they both did the exact same thing) but he fumbled and dropped it. harry raised his eyebrows.
ron shrugged. 'it was worth a try.' he yelled as they started running towards the screaming. they stopped dead at the sight they were seeing.

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a party. girls were everywhere, even sirius was there, thumping gardere on the back and laughing! harry could easily pick out hermione, who was standing right next to gardere, who had his arm around her, bringing her close every now and then and - thanking her for preparing this party! she was a deep scarlet, and was crying she was so hapopily-embarassed! harry looked voer at ron, who looked angry and horrified. it wasn't a pretty look. emily was there, standing beside hermione, giving her standing support coz hermiones knee's would buckle every now and then. emily looked like she didnt care that much for the party, but she was eyeing all the food with a hungry look in her eye. gardere was opening presents, and shouting thanks and winknig at the girls, who's knee buckled and they went red like hermione, but it wasn't possible to go asd red as her.
just then, emily spotted them, and tried to go over there, but herminoe looekd scared, but emily left anyways. she amde hewr way over to them, about five minutes later!
'hey guys!' she panted.
'whats gonig on? whats herminoe doing? what were u doing?' ron snapped, looking at hermione and then at emily. emily looked surprised like ron had just slappe dher.
'well, its gardere's birthday, and the girls threw him a party, mainly herminoe planne dit all tho!' emily said, gesturing towards the magiked firecrakcers and the loud music.
'how cum we were'n tinvited?' ron asked.
'well -' emiyl sputtered, looking quite abashed, ' ron - phut - all the girls like him, so they all came and sort of helped with the party. i cam for hermione...' she mummbled, looknig highly embarassed. ron did too.
'uhh...' he muttered fiantly. harry looked at hermione, then his eyes casted around, and he spotted the pile of presents, and a large cake. he turned arounsd to point the huge, yummy-looking cake out to ron, but he couldn't find him or emily. he walked into the crowd, and felt sumone tugg at his arm. he looked wildly around, and saw -

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harry breathed a sigh of relief. he had htought it was sumone else, he was so jumpy! why?
'hi cho'
'hi harry' she grinned.
'um...so, u like gardere too?' he asked dissapointedly.
she shook her head, and harry breathed again.
'im here coz my friend is absoulutly crazy about him!' she said, pointing to her best friend who had lost all her stiffness and was screaming like a maniac, waving a card shaped like a heart. harry and cho laughed together.
'want to...talk a walk?' she asked nervously.
harry went red.
'uh, ya.' he said, hardly able to talk. they walked to the side of the school, by the astronomy department, and cho flopped down and looked out at the lake, that now looked like a far away glitter pool.
'pretty, isnt it?' she shrugged, obviously not very into that as other girls were. she looked out at the quidditch pitch, and smiled mysteriously.
'c'mere.' she said, grabbing his hand, and he followd her, into the castle, up the stairs and to the gryffindro
common room. they stared at eachother, and cho said,
'well? say the password.' she said. the fat lady looked at cho suspiciously. cho plugged her ears, but harry shook his head and said the password (pumkin guts) aloud so she coul dhear. she looked surprised, and harry thought he was gonig too far, but he took her hand and walked her inside, hoping agaisnt hope the common room was empty. it was nearly empty, except for sum of the boys, and ginny, but they didnt pay any attention to them.
cho told him to grab his firebolt. he did, aske dher whats gonig on, and she pushed him towards the door. they went down sum stairscases, took sum turns, and they were at a large portrait.

i love it! i thought it was someone else too...*turns red* please write more! ;D

lol, who'd u think it was? ok, ill keep writing...

a pretty woman, dresses in a blue, flfuffy, long flowing gown stood there.
'password?' she said graceuflly, smiling and winking at harry.
'fickle juice' cho said. the picture swung open, and reavled a room decked in the ravenclaw colours. it was triangular, and it had sum more pictures around it. it was practically empty, the girls at garderes party, and sum boys cast a glance at them. harry tried to duck out of the way, wishing he had his invisibility cloak with him.
they only seemed to notice cho, and they waved at her. they ran up to the girls dormitories, she grabbed her broom, and they ran out to the gorunds.
'what r we doing, cho?' he called, racing after her. she was a fast runner! she stopped on the quidditch pitch, lifted her hand sin the air (her broom dropped) and she yelled, 'look, harry! all to ourselves! ravencalw seeker versus gryffindor'seeker!' she laughed. harry smiled stiffly. what should he do? let her win?
she pulled sumthing out of her pocket. a whoole bunch of apples and oranges! harry wasn't sure, but he thought there were sum melons in there too.
they were going to have their own little quidditch game.

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aj, join in! c/mon have sum fuuuuuuuun....!!!!!!

cho put on a funny impression of madam hooch.
'mount your brooooooms!
 she cried.
'annnnnnnd were off!' she screamed. she threw the fruit into the air, and the melons came pelting at them. they ducked, laughing, and harry tried to look for the glowing oranges. cho looked too, and just ducked a melon. harry shot an apple onto the hoop on cho's side, and she laughed and did them same to harrys side.
a half an hour later, they were still at it, but chos broom started to go a bit funny. it was getting dark, harry was sure the party was over, and harry could tell he missed dinner. he raced over to her, and just as the broom started to buck her off (she shrieked, b-coz she had fallen and harry now had a hold of her hand) he swang her aboard his firebolt. it slightly went down, and cho held onto his waist tightly. it reminded him of the third year on buckbeak, and hermione had been squeezing his waist, but this ws different. they soared around, and harry spotted 2 figures clinging together, kissing, having the time of their lives.
'we should go...what if they see us?' cho whispered. so they ducked down, and hid at the edge of the forest, in hagrids hut, where cho sat on his bed, looking shy. harry blushed.
'u saved me out there.' she said, thankfully. harry went redder.
'uhh... no i didn't.' he said stupidly. cho leaned in, and so did harry. it felt like fate what happened next, harry couldn't control ot, and tried to erase the flash backs of when he was 11 and 12.

oh my gosh! i love it! please continue! who were the two ppl kissing?

good job Shelby!

who was kissing,,,,and what's next?

thanks u guys.... uhhh, im a little blank right now,and im kinda busy.... how do u chat live on aol? coz i wanna chat live with vin diesel tonight on aol live at eight! pleeease tell me sumone....!!!!!!!!!!!! ill write alittle more,o k? im gonna be gone awhile coz my b-day is in five days.... the fourteenth. (not inmcluding today) ok, abit more...

they were leaning in... cho's lips touched harry's, and just then, the door banged open. harry jumped, and the thing he last heard was from ron - 'ok, mroe cups coming -holy crap!'
harry and cho pulled away from eachother quickl;y. emily, ron and herminoe stood there, staring at him. hermione looked petrified, ron looked as though harry had majorly scored, and emily looked down right surprised. just then, harry heard a loud sob, and ginny stepped out into the open. harry yelled her name, but ginny quealed and ran.
'ginnn-eeee!!' harry called, getting up. cho looked suddenly very angry and highly confused. she got up, pushed passed hermione, and hermione looked at cho disgustedly. harry wasn't sure, but he thouhgt herminoe said sumthing vbery rude to her. they all stared at eachother. harry went red, and so did emily. ron looked weird, inbetween proud, impressed, and surprised. hermione looked shocked, horrified.
'uhh....' emily muttered.
'i, um, got to go find someone.' harry said. he got up, pushed pass emily and ron, and ran up to the castle. he passed the kissing couple up against a tree. he wante dto sotp and find out who it was, but it wasnt any of business anyways, he was practically about to do the same thing with cho.

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o, thanks anywyas, i think ill keep gonig, just abit more...

he ran, and wanted to see cho. he went to the gryffindor common room to get his invisibility cloak, and saw ginny there, with george, fred, and that guy who always tries to talk to her. fred and george looked up at harry with surprised, and ginny's friend got up, approached him, but harry was already half up the staircase. he grabbed the cloak, ran back down, and to the ravenclaw's common room.

very cool i love it! ;D ;D

cho stood just outside it, so harry slipped off the cloak.
'hey, cho, aboput what happend back there -'
'no, u dont have to explain. i already know everything i need to know.' she said, smiling oddly, like ron had when he didnt believe harry hadnt entered himself into the tournament.
'know what? cho - '
'i know u were cheating on that girl back there!' she snapped, losing her smile, and looking frightening.
'what? cho, ginn yis nt my girlfriend! i - '
'o, shut up, harry, just shut-up! im sick of u now! why dont u just - just - leave me alone and never talk to me anymore!' she said the password, and slammed the picture door shut with a loud bang. the girl in the pciture frowned, and cursed. harry trudged back in his invisibility cloak, making sure he didnt collide with mundugus fletcher. wait! harry gapsed. he whipped around again, but he was gone. what was he doing here? he ran around the castle, but just then, a portrait door swung open, and he got pulled into it, his mouth and eyes being covered. it k8st've been a few ppl who pulle him in.

very mysterious!

more?


poor Ginny!

please post more!  :'(

shelby i love it but please post more! i'm going out of my mind!

sorry, sorry!! ill be back thrusday too, ok? *my bday is toimorrow*!!!!!!!

harry let out a yell that couldn't be heard, coz of the hands over his mouth. he heard a slam, and sumone pushed him onto a fluffly chair. they ppl's hands removed, and he blnked and turned very angry.
'what was that for?' he snapped, looknig at ron, emily and hermione.
'harry!' hermione said in a tearful voice.' u knowe u shouldn't be snaeking about in the castle, when u-know-who is back to power!'
thump. they all looked where emily was sitting, or, at least, was. she had fallen off her chair. she got up, brushed her chestnut-colour hair out of her face, and said,
'u-u-u-know-who? b-back to power?'
ron told her he'd fill her in, and hermione looked at her blankly and said, curiously, 'where hav eu been all these years? u know what? i remember when u first came on the train, and saw us, u didnt even gasp or sumthing about harry.'
emily flushed, and said quickly 'so...uh, ya. where were u?' if she tried to delibratly change the subject, it worked.
harry decided not to tell them about him wanting to see cho, so he said
'the kitchens. i was very hungry.'
'why werent u wearing your invisibility cloak?' ron asked, pale and shaking at the thought of vol.demort.
it suddenly dawned on harry.
'i...i... i thought i was. actually, i know i was! it...it must've slipped off!' he jumped up frantically, but emily pushed him back into the pink chair.
'harry,' she said seriously. harry stared at her.'u have to be careful! i mean, if ur hungry, u could've asked me! i do have a stash in my room, u know, just in case i got hungry.' she shrugged, and hermione raised her eyebrows at her.
'anyways...u've had an owl.' ron told him seriously.
harry looked up.
'what?'
'actually...' hermione gulped. she opened her book bag, and dumped about fifty letters on his lap, 'letters.'

OMG I LOVE IT! PLEASE POST MORE!!!!!

harry gasped, and ripped open an envelope.

dear harry potter,
i got kicked out of the castle, but i will be back. thank goodness u have sum more there, and dumbledore is a great help. yes, i was crookshanks. so, theres a clue to who i am. u do know me. i do hope u be careful, and beware the unkown.
-vjsflkhgkhalha;lhj;lh;lhj;hja

hermione looked over at his, and saw it was exactly the same. she pointed this out, and read the letter voer again.
'harry...whos all the ppl u know?' ron asked. harry would say thats a stupid question, but truth be told, he didnt know a lot of ppl.
'hmm...i know cho...i know mrs.figg, my old neighbor, but shes a muggle...uhh...mundugus fletcher...u three...the teachers...hmm...o! wait! i there is a woman who i know is a witch! i saw her in the leaky cauldron! i just forget her name...um, was it dorris crokford? i cant remember...' harry said,. hermione suddenly jumped.
'give me those letters!' she said, misty-eyed. she had an odd expression about her face, like when she figured out rita skeeter was an animagus. before harry could answer, she snatched all the letters and threw them into her purse.
'hermione, what is it?' harry asked.
'i just rembered sumthing.' she said, walking towards the door.

WHAT DID SHE REMEMBER? WHAT DID SHE REMEMBER! :o :o :o

oh please up date! i wonder what i'm hiding.....*trying to remember* lol*

lol whoa - calm down, lol!!!!

'what?' ron and emily aksed at the same time.
hermione smiled, and said.
'we might have her!'
she was just aboiut to push open the portrait door, when she turned around, and said to harry, with a sneaky, foxxy little grin,
'o, and harry - the kitchens r in the opposite direction u came from...the ravenclaw common room, tho, is in ur direction.' she winked, and was gone. emily and ron looked at harry with raised eeybrows, and harry flushed.

lol...more please! i love it! i wonder what i'm hiding....*trying to remember* lol oh and check ur messeges! ;D

i'll be back in a while! at about 8....please post more! ;D

the next day, hermione was in the library, pouring over books. ron emily and harry were in the great hall, munching on their supper. dumbledore stood up, and everyone looked at him.
'i would like to make an announcement.' he declared.
everythnoig went quiet. shelby and allison, two first years who seemed to lead all the other first years, were whispering excitedly and looked up at him.
'there will be a christmas ball, and a halloween party. if we r lucky, our company may include beuxbatons and durmstrang. now, please continue eating.' but no one continued to eat. they whispered excitedly, and allison and hermione were already telling eachother who they wanted to go to the ball with.
'i want to go with matthew perry!' shelby laughed, turning red.
must be muggle-born, harry thought. allison laughed, and told shelby who she wanted to go with.
hermione came bustling out, looking very upset.
'its not there! sumone checked it out! and, obviously, i left my books at my mini-library at home, so...' she was red with frustration.
'theres gonna be a ball.' ron said, looknig at emily.
'oh...'hermione mummbled. 'well, i dont really think i wanna go, then.' she said.
ron stared at her. ' why not?' he asked. herminoe shrugged.
'o...my reasons.' and she left.
                                  * (days past, its now halloween night)
nothing much had changed over the days, ppl were still scared of sirius, hermione is still looking for that certain book, and so on. the four friends were heading to the great hall, and when they opened the doors, bats flew out of them, and eerie music rang in their ears. skeletons were dancing, and the candles were flicking eeirely on and off. it was sort of annoying, but spooky all the same. hermione was rather twitchy, and ron was laughing, emily just sat, eating some of the food.
shelby and allison were telling spooky stories. the first years, including sum second and even third years were lsitening intently, and jumped when sirius told thenm 'happy halloween' and the fact that he was blamed for murder, didnt help.

be back thursday ppl, i gotta go!!!!!!

lol i love it! hey, i wonder what i'm keeping a seceret? *thinking hard* lol* ;D

lol Shelby!

yay I'm in it!

I'll put us more in my story, I have a Great idea!


Keep going!

ok, great! im back until sunday. oooh, my b-day was really cool. how was the bahama's? em, did u go anywhere? lol, my cat, crookshanks (kitten, orange and white) is playing with my robes! (i got the costume kit!)
correction: crookshanks the second

they were enjoying their food, ron spitting it out every time he had a burst of laughter. hermione looked at him to scowl at him (emily was too busy whiping the food off her robes in totally disgust) when she suddnely gapsed.
'look!' she said, pointing them in the direction of dumbledore. a man, whereing a bottle green claok with his hood up, was talking to dumbledore. ron was still laughing, an demily nudged him hard enough to make him swear.
'ron!' hermione snapped, the same time harry said 'shut-up!' ron fell silently, a breezy smile on his face, and they stared at the green claoked-man - or woman.
'who do u think that person is?' emily asked seriously.
'i don't know...' harry mummbled.
'hmm...should we follow them?' ron asked.
'no,' hermione said firmly, ' hes the headmaster. we should be able to trust that.'
ron nodded.
'hermione's right...oh, um, look!' she pointed away from dumbledore, in the exact opposite direction.
'um...what is it?' harry asked, after staring for about five minutes.
'uhh...a window...with, um, erm...a bat perched on it, upside down?' she said nervously. then, as if on purpose to make a diversion, she put her elbow in her food.
'oops!" she said loudly, and ran away, dabbing her face with her napkin and threw it down on the ground. harry raised his eyebrows, ron gaped at them, and hermione shook her head in odd disbelief. she was definitly hiding sumthing.

MORE!!!!!!!!!

lol, ok!

still, only a few days had passed, and hermione was gonig mad over that book. she had started looknig through other books, and harry got a glimpse of 'muggle spies:police and the foes' and harry wondered why she was looking in that book. but she didn't find anything. she had written a letter to her parents, asking them to send that certain book, but still got no answer. it was the morning, a week into november. quidditch season.
a group of hufflepuffs walked by, talking. hermione looked up at them, and dropped her spoon with a clatter. she turned beat red, and pursed her lips, like she had just ate sumting extremely sour. emily looked horrified, ron stared, and so did harry. the hufflepuffs must've noticed, becasuer they stopped to stare too. justin finch-fletchley was holding a dusty-old colour book. that was what hermione was eyeing. she jumped up, and headed toward him.
'um, hi, justin!' she said cheerfully, swallowing painfully.'
'o! hi, hermione!' he said brightly, shifting the book to his other arm. she eyed it, and looked as if she were about to pounce.
'um, so, is that for muggle studies?' she asked.
'yup...' he nodded.
'um, can i talk to you? um, alone, please.' she added, blushing and looking at his friends, who looked very offended, waved, and left. they moved away from the gryffindor table, and she talked to him in a rush, and he kept leaning closer. at the end of thier odd conversation, he looked deeply dissapointed.
he trudged over to his friends, still carrying the book, and his friends asked him sumthing, and he shook his head.  hermione sat down, eagerly, harry noticed.
'whats up?' ron asked.
'o, i akse dhim if i could borrow the book, he said after his lesson, so that means we'll have it by christmas, hopefully.' she kept looknig at thew hufflepuff table, shifting her legs, and suddenly twitching. harry saw that jstin was staring at the gryffindor table, looknig sour like hermione looked.

ok, a bit more...im even getting into my story, lol...ok...
o, and does anyone know j.k. rowling's fan address, where u write her letters? i very badly need to ask/tell ehr sumthing.

it was finally time for the qudditch match. harry woke up at 4am, excited and jiggly-feeling. he paced the common room, did his homework, and stare into space, wondering about the mystery writer. eventually, breakfast came, and he hardly ate anything. fred and george kept stuffing food in his face, and harry had to keep going to the bathroom to wash it off. but now, he was iun the locker room, fred and george telling them,
'if we dont win, team, then we'll bloody well sneak bogie-flavoured beans into your food, jump out at u in the corridors, and hex u with jellylegs! so win!' they cried, the team rolling on the ground at their seriousness. emily and harry, side by side, wlaked out onto the pitch together. she smiled at harry. harry smiled back. madam pomfrey';s voice rang in their ears.
'mount your brooms!' she cried. malfoy bared his teeth at harry. harry glared. then, lee jordan's voice rang in his ears, nextly.
'annnnnnnnnnd their offffff!!!' he screamed. and flew into the air, and the coll breeze whipped on his face. all hios worries left him. he started looknig for the snitch, spinning around, letting off  this wonderous feeling.
'hey, potty! watcha doin', practicing for the national retard's dance team?' malfoy called.
'hey, malfoy? wheres the eighth player? i thought the got another slytherin to play for you, so u can catch the snitch?!' harry called. malfoy yelled as a bludger came hurtling towards him. harry laughed and flew away, to the slytherin's end.
'gryffindor leads, 20 to 0!' lee yelled. harry spun around, and head up, to look for the snitch their, to stay out of they way. but when he looked at the sky, he saw it was turning green, silver, and then black. it was swirling. harry was spinning. everyone was laughing at him. then, cho mroe visable thenc anyone, laughnig the hardest, and pointing at him, yelling
'he likes me, and i only kissed him because he was famous!'
'no!' harry tried to yell. that wasn't true, was it? he was spinning, and suddenly, cho grew, bigger than a giant. she was howling with laughter, grabbed his broomstick, and started throwing him around.
'wha-?'

hold on, brb, i swear, i hate my bro sumtimes!!!

he was screaming loudly, but cho just laughed and laughed at him. then, she turned into an ugly bat, and the bat started screeching, syaing
'no one likes u! go away! dieeee, potter!' then, the bat bropped him, cackling. harry fell threw the air, screaming and flailing his arms. where was his broom? he heard screaming. he felt heat and coldness hitting him, but it just seemd to obunce off. there was a sheild around him. then, a beautiful bird came swooping by. harry was falling. he was gonig to hit the ground. he was going to die.

Very Good!

thanks! ok, does anyone know jkrs fan mail address? in snail mail or owl post, doesnt matter!!! (owl post - email)
and, ok, i need a nickname - should it be:
shelgel (SHELby GELder)
sheebz
ellie (shELbY)

what do u think!?!??!?!?!?!

i dunno about that but i love ur story! please continue!!!!!!!!!

lol, ooook, but if u ever do think up a good short form thingy for my name, please tell me, im the only one who doesnt have one, i think...o well, anyways...

just as his legs hit the ground with a snap, the bird thing flew down and grabbed him around his arms. colour was swirling everywhere. then, the quidditch pitch came back into view. he saw faces bending over him, muttering, and he heard sumone say,
'broken legs, i think, professor dumbledore sir. i even heard the sanp. im so sorry i dint reach him in time!' the voice shook. harry whirled around,
'wha-?'
'harry, calm down.' he heard a soothing voice. he looked at the general direction of it, and saw gardere.
'move aside, please, everyone, give him some room. we ned to take him up to the hospital wing.' it was dumbledore who said that. harry tired to get up, but he couldn't move his legs. the pain was searing threw him, and he gritted his teeth. he felt a strechter apear under him, and he was being tooken up to the hospital wing. he groaned, and saw it was gardere. he saw dumbledore waving his hands, and heard loud bangs to calm, the crowd. harry wondered what the big deal was, why gardere was sweating, why emily and hermione were sobbing into ron's robes (ron was too busy tyring to see what was happening, where harry was gonig, to care and be impressed by two girls sobbing, looking for him for comfort) and why the crowd was looknig horrified. so gardere was magicking him down the hall, harry tried to look where he was going.
'um, do u know where the hospital wing is?' harry tried to say. it came out as a grunt, but gardere seemed to have understood.
'yes.' he said calmly.
'well, um...this isn't the way, erm, is it?'
'no.' he said firmly.
harry stared at him. where was he being tooken? what was gonig on? it seemed like hours before gardere finally stopped, turned into a room harry didn't reconize, and push him into a corner. harry wasn't sure, it was so dark, where gardere exactly was. but then he found out.

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heeeheeehee! ok, more's cumnig right up!!!

he was right infront of harry's face. he was breathing heavily, and harry cauhgt a wisp of mint. harry ocughed, and felt gardere's hand over his mouth.
'sssh!' gardere whispered.
'ok, harry, tell me. tell me everything.' he said hurriedly.
'um, what do u mean?' harry asked nervously.
'about thsoe dreams your having! i know your having dreams, we can easily tell. u msut tell me. what is going on in them!?' he shook harry, and his broken glasses fell askew.
'wha- i - i- the dream i just had now?' harry asked.
'all your dreams, harry! all of them! whats gonig on in them? hmm? what?' he was leaning in closer to harry, their noses practically touching, and harry heard him say lumos. a blast of light came from his wand, and the light searched the room.
'nox!' gardere hissed. the bright light went out.
'uuuh...well, um, i...i can't really remeber.' harry lied, not sure if gardere was working for v.oldemort. what if he wasd? he couldn't tell gardere whats going on! he had to get away - or gardere will kill him.

im not posting mroe until sumone posts. well, just abit, and thats all....

harry tried tov lift himself up, but gardere pushed him back down.
'tell me, harry! u must tell me!' he sounded fierce, and harry was now convinced. he was working for vol.demort.

'GET OFF ME!' harry yelled. gardere jumped back.
'harry-' he said loudly.
'get AWAY!' harry tried to lift himself up, but the pain seared threw him like the cruciatus curse. harry felt for his wand, but he hadn't put them in his robes. how stupid!

gardere lit his wand and pointed it in harry's eyes. it blinded him.

harry yelled as loud as he could. he screamed to scare gardere off. but he knew he was gonig to die. gardere had the wand. harry had nothing but broken legs.

gardere advanced on him.
'HARRY I-' he tried to yell over harry's screaming.
gardere pointed the wand at him. harry flinched. this was the end.

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hmmmm...maybe ill keep u guys in suspence for awhile?
pleeeeease post

ok, more coz im bored....

but before gardere could say anything, as if harry's mind had started working again, harry grabbed gardere's wand out of his grip. harry heard him gasp, and harry pointed the wand at him.
'STUPIFY!' he shouted.
gardere fell to the ground. harry panted.
'lumos!' he muttered, and the wand shone with light. harry looked around the darkened room.  it was empty. the walls looked extra thick, so the sound could be kept in this room alone.
thats why gardere took me in  here, harry thought, so no one could here him...
he shook his head. it wasn't time to think of gardere, it was time to think of how he was going to get back.
he couldn't walk...what else was there to do? harry looked at the wheels. he would have to turn the wheels forward in order to move...too bad hermione wasn't here, he couldn't remember the incantation for moving things. that was probably because his head was swimming with pain. he grabbed gardere's wrist, lifted him up onto the stretcher (there was hardly any room, and lifting him up seemed to take awhile) and started to push forward, his wand in his mouth, lighting the way.

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D

thx, em! ;D

harry didn't relaly nkow where he was going. he didn't really know what he was doing.  all he knew was he had to go straihgt to hermione, ron and emily.

he spun around corridors, jumping everythime he saw

a suit of armour, everythime he heard a creak,

and everytime he got an urge that sumnope was

watching him.

he finally reached his destiny. the gryffindor common room.

he said the password, and the fat lady stared down at

him.

'um, excuse me, but how are you going to get in there,
exactly?' she asked sarcasticly.

'just open the portrait, please!' harry moaned. she swung it open, and he started yelling.

'ROOON! HERMIONE! EMIL-' they rushed towards him,
took a look at him, and gasped.

they broke out, babbling.

'Oh my goodness, Harry, what happened?' Hermione squealed.

'Harry, where were you? Where'd you go with Gardere?' Ron sputtered.

'Harry, what happened? Whats wrong? Are you O.K?' Emily asked, barely in a whisper.

'Let's go in the Common Room,' Harry muttered. "I'll explain in there.'

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Ron and Emily grabbed onto the sides of the stretcher,
when Hermione spoke up.
'No,' she said shakily.
Her Prefect badge stood agleam.
'What?' Ron snapped.
'No! Ron, Harry's hurt! He should go straight to the
Hospital Wing! I'm surpriused he didn't go there first!'
'HERMIONE! Harry has sumthing important to tell us! Why
can't the hospital Wing wait?' Ron said loudly, going pink.
'It can't wait, because it might be sumthing serious!
He's in pain, I know it! He's safe there, anyways! And
i am a school prefect, so i demand that!' she grew more
confident as she glanced at the innocent glimmering
badge.
'THATS ALL U CARE ABOUT, HERMIONE! SCHOOL!RULES!
HARRY'S OUR FRIEND, OUR BEST FRIEND! YOU OBVIOUSLY
DON'T CARE ABOUT HIM ENOUGH TO LET HIM COME IN
FOR A FEW MINUTES! YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE HIS FRIEND!'
ron yelled, turning a deep shade of megenta.
he had hit a nerve.
hermione went beat red. her fists clenched, and her chest
raised up and down rapidly, her breathing sounding
like a bulls.
'What a nerve you have to say that!' she hissed, in
a deadly voice. she clutched ehr wand tightly, and red
sparks wer flying wildly.
'you are DESPICIBLE!' she screamed. she turned
around so fast she hit emily, so quickly backed away, said
the password, and entered the gryffindor common room.
before she slammed the entry door shut, she bellowed,
'TEN POINTS FROM GRYFFINDOR!' and closed it with a
defeaning snap.
that was the angriest harry had ever seen hermione.
'did that just happen?' emily whispered, awed.
'well, if it didn't, i'd question ron's face.' harry replied
quietly, so only emily could hear.
ron looked extremely ugly, as red as hermione, breathing
heavly, and kicking the stone wall. he swore loudly,
and the fat lady told him off.

'Um, Ron?' Emily said, touching his arm softly.
he jumped.
'what?' he asked, startled.
'Why don't we jsut take him down to the hospital wing,
and he can tell us what happened on our way.' she offered.
he looked at her, opened his mouth, than closed it, and
nodded, looking rather smug.

Harry told them what happened quickly, becasue

the Hospital Wing wasn't that far from the Gryffindor

Common Room.

'So, he must be working for Voldemort!' Ron said,
his voice higher than usal.

'Oh my god . . . we shouold stay with you, then, harry,
just in case. for as long as we can.' emily said.

'You won't be able to,' harry said  smuggly.

'Why not?' emily asked, looknig as if the first person
to make her do sumthing would get there butt kicked.

'Becasue Madam Pomfrey would freak out. She goes
crazy over her patients, you should've seen her when
some git-defense agaimnst the dark arts teacher in our
second year removed all his bones in his right arm!' ron
exclaimed.

harry nodded when emily gasped.

'OUT!' madam pomfrey was yelling at ron and emily.

'This boy needs his rest!'

so they trudged out reluctantly, rons hand
covering emily's mouth so she wouldn't say or do
anything rational.


harry couldn't go to sleep. his bones were pretty much
mended already, but madam pomfrey insisted he
stayed over night in the hospital wing, away from danger.

he felt sumone crawl onto his bed. he jumped, startled,
and put on his glasses that madam pomfrey had tooken away
just an hour ago.

'who is it?' he whispered.

whoever it was, they must be two feet tall.

'Dobby, harry potter sir, to visit you. and to tell
you your in great danger.'

dobby's voice shook with sobs.

'what do u mean, dobby? do u know something?' harry
asked hurriedly, looking him in his wide, green,
orby eyes.

'yes, dobby does, sir. dobby knows.' the elf said,
its wailnig getting louder.

'oh, dobby, please be quiet!' harry hissed.

'sorry, harry potter, sir. dobby is very sorry. dobby
does not know how to tell harry potter this, but -'

the door opened. harry froze. dobby let out a great
gulp and dissapeared with a whisp of smoke.

'harry?'

hey, emily, your sign. thingy! lol, thats the song i was talking about, remmeber???? sk8er boi, avril lavigne!!!!

anyways, im making up for the tiome i was at my dads.

'ya, but madam pomfrey always insists that her patients
stay over night, just in case.' he said with a sleepy
smile.

'oh, ya! i know exactly what u mean! when i was killed,
she still kept me in the hospital wing!' she laughed,
as if being kiled by a monstous snake was jsut a
little wind.

harry lauhged freely.

'So, um... a ball, huh? intresting. Um, are you going
with anyone?' she asked nervously, looking
down at the white sheets that seemed to be
reflected off the moonlight, and tracing the edges
with her transparent finger.

'No. i might check out the durmstrang girls, tho.' he
said, just as nervously, thinking that cho nor
any of her friends would want to go with him now.

'Oh. well, you know, if you don't want to go with
anyone, i could - erm - ' she looked sheepish, and faltared.
she left out a deep sigh, and continued, sounding as if
what she was saying she didnt really want to say, or
was beating around the bush.
'- help u find sumone.'

'oh! well, sure... um, ya, all right.' harry said,
wanting to know what she was gonig to say before
she looked depressed.

'um, great...' she said, trying not to sound too sarcastic.

'i better go. um - things, u know, with ghosts.' she
mummbled.

'oh. right. well, see you.' harry said.

'ya. see you.' she muttered, getting up.

she left, and harry felt an odd feeling he had never felt
with myrtle. he was sad she left, and he wanted her to stay.
or maybe he just wanted sum friendly company.

the next morning, he went to the straight to great
hall for breakfast. he was very surprised to see
the myrtle was sitting there, chatting to hermione,
her looknig giggly, and hermione looking
enthustiastic, nodding and talking animeaditly.

'ok, so, if he asks, ill make it for you, then?' hermione
said happily.

'yes! o, hermione, u r just the best!' myrtle wrapped
her arms around hermione, spotted harry, turned silver,
and floated up to him.

'hey, harry! you don't mind if i sit next to you?' she
asked nervously. she glanced at hermione, who was
jogging over to the hufflepuff table.

'uh, sure.' harry said. he took a seat next to an embarassed
looknig emily and ron.

'hey guys.'

myrtle smiled uneasily, and shook emily's hand, explaining
why her name included "moaning", and emily laughed,
smiled, and told myrtle her name.

they got off to a great start already.

'we have to start getting dates for the dance, mate.'
ron said, glancing quickly at emily, who turned away
as quick as rons glance.

'ya, i guess. too bad we have to go threw this again.'
harry moaned.

he examined the tables (except the slytherin one)
up and down, saying things like,

'maybe...possibly...definitly not!...hey, why not...
looks too young...too old...' and ron just nodded along.

harry spotted hermione, leaning against the hufflepuff
table, chatting to justin.

ooooooo justin and hermione!!!!!! lol keep going bailey! that song sk8er boi is like my favorite! ;D

I like it!


hehe, I like Avril to!, I like Complicated.......

ya, i luv al her songs. oooo...its hard to type with a bandaid finger, lol. ok, ill wrrite alittlr more, only b-coz...

ron must've seen hermione and justin, too, because the next thing he said was
'why is hermione and justin together? i didn't think those two would make a good copuple!'

'she told us awhile ago she didn't want to go at all. i wonder why?' said harry thoughtfully

'guys!' emil said loudly. ron looked at her, and harry jumped out of his daze.

'thats hermione's buisness! stay out of it.'

ron lookced disgruntled, and harry just turned to looked at myrtle.
she was sitting there, staring at the food longingly.

they were in the middle of charms, when harry suddenly felt very dizzy. he started shaking. his eyes started closing. he started to slip of his chair, and no one seemed to notice, except for emily amd ron who were right next to him.
'harry!' emily hissed, shaking his arm.

harry! wake up! no!' ron jiggleed him and prodded, but nothing doing. he started to lose his vision.

'No... oh, please, not anymore! Not now!' Harry begged quietly.

he heard a distant voice. he had never realy heard it before...but it was so very familiar. he must've heard it before. But when? The cold voice, though a dreamy edge to it's voice was whispering

'go to sleep...sleeeeeeep...dream.... black out...'

'No...no...pleeeeease, no...' harry moaned. it started to swril purple. He saw a tiny little image coming towards him, startled and very worried. Things, taller than the small image gathered around him.

'Dream...sleep...' and than, somehting harry must've ehard before, but it seemed like forever said,

'blood...ftaken...'

harry jerked awake, yelling.

'NOOOOO!'

Very Good! *Claps Hands*

lol.

Harry jumped up, suddenly very alert. Everyone
was staring at him around the Charms room.
He shook himself, aware that Parvati was crying
softly, and Hermione breathing panickly.

"Potter? Potter, are you all right?' Professor Flitwick
squeaked.

'Uuuuuhhh.... I'm sure i am, Professor...' Harry said
slowly.

Prfoessor Flitwick continued with the lesson, though
rather reluctantly, and Harry had time to think
rather than listen.

He had heard that... all that whispering. It seemed
faint, and million miles away. But someone couldn't
be calling that, or surely, the others would have heard?
Buts it all inside my head, thought Harry.

He tried to grab onto the hissed remarks, but it seemed
to slip away as fast as the dream had come on.
He was able to fight it though. Whoever is doing it,
proabably V.oldemort, must be losing his touch.
But he's only getting stronger, a large part of Harry's
brain hummed.

He suddenly had an aching headache. He tried to pay
attention to the snoozeable lesson, to drown out
his thoughts, but his thoughts were so much louder than
Professor Flitwicks squeaks.

hey guyz, i cant remember.... r  there durmstrang students there yet?????

uh...i don't know......sry...but great story!!!!!!!!!

u mean u dont remember...?? ?? ?? ?? ??

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me neither. i looked through it, but couldnt find anything about it...

u cant remember either?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??



anyone else know?? ?? ?? ??

pleeeeeeease tell me!! coz i cant continue if ppl dont

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lol...ya, as soon as i figure out they r there.... o well, ill continue a little bit then... i'll just say that they arnt there yet???



harry trudged threw the moring, wishing the horrible, not to mention embarassing day would end. he kept thinknig of those last five minutes, wodnering why or how he had fought it that only time. would it mean volde.mort is getting....weaker?

harry was suddenly interupted by professor mcgonagall, who had walked right up to him, her lips getting slightly thinner by the second.

'potter! stop day dreaming and answer mym question! O.W.L.'s r cumnig up, quickly,and if your not ready, you'll fail!' Professor Mcgonagall snapped threatningly.

'Sorry, Professor - it's just - uum...' Harry wasn't sure what he could say.
He couldn't go on about how he kept getting the weirdest dreams, how he kept getting anonimos letters... he settled on a lie.

'Potter?' professor mcgonagall scowled, walking even closer to him ,and bemding down to look him in the eye.

'Uuuh, nothing, professor. nothing...just don't feel very well.'

hermione looked like she was fighting a hard battle, trying hard not to wave her hand in the air and explain what had happened two lessons ago.


'u do look sick, potter. i suppose you sholud go down to the hospital wing then.' she said, her thin lips almost gonig back to their normal state.

'No!' harry said quickly. he couldnt spend another night in that hospital wing.
he was sick of its white walls, its white sheets, and the amount of care he got, especially from madam pomfrey.

'its ok, professor, im probably just tired or hungry or sumthing.
 
she didnt seemed convinced.

'really. im fine, professor.'

she stared at him hard, as if she were trying to see threw him. she finally continued the lesson, every now and then making sure harry wasn't sprouting fangs or anything odd like that.

guys, please go to "general" then please go to
"trapped in an elevator" thanks. just read on.

hey bailey! love the story...as usual.... ::) ;) keep going please!

finally, the day passed. they read the notice bored, and the durmstrangs were cuming tonight.

that night, they waited outside. they looked at the lake, the first years bouncing on their toes, giggling and getting restless. shelby and alison seeemed to be hanging with hermione, admiring her. harry was startlerd when sumone yelled,

'LOOK! THE LAKE!!'

they all stood on the top of their toes, and harry saw at the lake a large whirpool, and a ship popped out, holding the durmstrang students. when the door opened, harry was eager to know who would be the new headmaster.  

Ron was talking to him, but harry hardly heard. one kid came out, but then was snapped at, and tugged at by a manly hand with bright green fingernails.

Then, a stubby foot poked out, wrapped by a bright green shoe to match her nails. then she was fully visible, in high-lighter yellow robes. she had on a funny hat, with things on the right side, making it tip over her one large eye. it was Rita Skeeter.

Harry groaned, and fell back. he looked over at a sour-looking hermione, who was clenching her fists.

'Dumnledore!' she crowed, walking out of this ship, her students following her. she had an accent like krums, and the suck-up tone like karkaroff.

'Why, Rita. Your now working as a headmistress?' dumbledroe said kindly, her eyes twinkling in the night. Rita smiled, and said, conjoring up a bright green wrap,
'vhy, dumbledore! vont u show me in?'

so they all trudged back inside, and began the feast.

Harry hadnt realized that viktor had come. he sat next to hermione, and engaged her into a conversation.

'u see, i am only here becoz i said i vanted to see you, i am really finished my schooling. how many years do u have left, hermy-own-ninny?' krum asked her, leaning over, and looking upset when he realized she hadnt heard a word he had said. hermione's eyes were boring into justins. he was staring back nervously, looknig jealously at krum.

JUSTIN AND HERMIONE?! OMG!!!! hey i love that song ne thing but ordinary! ne way.....keep goin!

lol... u'll find out at the end of the book. ;-) ok, anyhoos...

it was finally christmas break, and they were loaded down with homework. hermione now looiked as though she were stoaking justin, but justin would just shake his head, looking dissapointed. krum was following hermione everywhere, and yesterday, just after lunch, harry and ron walkked in on hermione and krum in a class room together.

OMG!!!!!! KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol okzeeze!! o, ppl, check out trapped in an elevator in general, PLEASE!!!!!!!


'vill you?' viktor was saying.

'viktor...i told you. i just -'

'but, hoo else vill i go vith?' he was saying impatiently.

'i don't know! u can go with anyone.' hermione said darkly, glaring at the wall behind krum.

'vot is that supposed to mean?' he asked, confused.

'i mean, everyone cums up to ME, asming for my autograph, or i get hate mail from your admirers!' hermione said uneasily, still staring at the wall.

'vell...vhy dont we pretend to break up? i vill go vith sumone else to this dance, and ppl vill know then, ve r not together.' viktor said, like it all made sense.

'why dont we...' she stopped with a weird loo kon her face.

'vhy dont ve...vhat?' he asked, tipping her chin up to face him. he was leaning closer to her.

harry heard ron growl in a deafeated sort of way, and he leaned against the wall, muttering sumthing that sounded like

'dont kisss! its hermione! no kissing!'

'well...i was just...nevermind. we'll pretend.' hermione smiled mischeivously, a sif sjhe had sum sort of plan.

krum tipped her chin towards him, leaned towards her, and tried to kiss her. but she had moved her head, and said,

'we should start pretending right away.'

bgut he kised her anyway, and she seeemed umcomfortable.

ok guys, i need to finsh htis asap, so im gonna write a lot, as much as i can, okeeze??!?!?!?!?

harry walked in on ron and emily in the great hall again, talking and blushing. emily jumped when harry sat down inbetween them, and he hadnt realized krum had cum right up to them.

he sat right down besdie emily, and engaged her in conversation. she answered stifly, and was surprised, when, out of the blue, krum asked,

'vill u go to this chrismas dance vith me, emily?'

she went a bright red, and for sum reason, ron had too, and they both stifened and side-looked at eachother. she opened her mouth, closed it, and opened it again. she looked like a fish.

'uuh...um..heh..well, i guess so.' she said finally, inflating like a balloon which had just been popped by a pin. ron did they same as she had, when harry was startled when myrtle floated up to him.

'hi harry,' she said eagerly.

'hi..' he said slowly. he sighed. he knew what she wanted..he mineswell give it to her.

he pulled myrtle away (well, told ehr to walk with him, he didn't really want to pul a ghost) and said quicjly, shifting on his feet,

'will u go to the dance with me?' she gasped, hugged him, and flaoted away to hermione.

hw shrugged. he took that as a yes.

the pass few days, of going to hogmeade, he had seen myrtle and hermione arou d eachother, sneaking things back and forth. well, harry thought they were sneaking things, he actually wasnt sure, but he saw theiur pockets bulging and they moved quickly wqith nutsfy eyes.

it was the night of the dance, and the boys were getting ready.

EEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW    VICTOR KRUM! HE'S TOTALLY UGLY!!!!!! sry had to get that out....i thought i was going with ron? ne way, keep goin!

o, dont worry, ull see what i have pl;anned!!!!! but im not really in the mood for writing right now, more later today, ok??

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lol...that's ok...just keep going!

'So, ron, who're you going to the dance with?' harry asked causally.

'um, padmam again...she asked me when she saw krum ask emily.'

'oh...why didn't u ask emily?' harry asked.

'i tried! both of us just got really shy and stuff...i dont know!' he said out of frustration, putting on his knew dark blue robes.

they boys went down stairs to the dance. harry looked around for myrtle. sumone tapped him on the back. hu turnned around, sure it was myrtle, but it was hermione.

'um, myrtle is gonna be late,' she said akwardly, not looking harry in the eyes as she told him this, 'so, um, she wants u to just go in w/ out her, ok?'

ron heard hermione and turned to stare at her.

'what're you doing here?' he growled. hermione lookd hurt, and she turned on her heel and stormed away.

'wheres your date, harry?' ron asked, padma clinging onto her arm.

'um, shes going to be late.' harry said, looking around over top of ppl's heads. jsut then, he heard someone call his name.

'harry! over here! its myrtle!' harry swallowed, as ron cracked up.

'myrtle? moaning myrtle? ha ha haa! oh harry - honestly - you can do b-' but he stopped and his jaw dropped once he saw her.

she did not look like a ghost. she looked like a human, with her dark hair pulled back in a white rose, with aqua robes. she had on a white necklace, too, that glittered. she even had skin, and was actually walking, not floating. she looked beuatiful.


sorry, guys, mroe soon!! my intetnet shut down, i am so sorry!!!!!!!!11

harry gaped at his lucky fortune.

'uh...h-h-hi, um, myrtle,' he stuttered.

she blushed. harry steered her to a large table, where ron, padma, him, myrtle, krum and emily sat. krum dint talk to emily at all, hwo was looking magnificent in robes of dark green. he jsut talked about hermione.

'u know, its too bad hermy-own-ninny could not make it. terrible. shes really smart, though, isnt she? talented, too,' and he went on and on, obviously still not aware he was still talking. they got up and danced, after dumbledores little speech.

ron kept looking voer at emily, and wasa trodding on padmas foot.
'ow! ron, stop it! jsut - stop!' and they stopped dancing. Emily looked really bored dancing with krum, and krum wasnt really paying any attention to emily what so ever. Harry tried to dance his best, feeling a little cheated becasue now he could step on myrtles toes. if she were still a ghost, he wouldnt have to worry about that.

'u - look - really -...uh...nice.' harry breathed. myrtle mummbled 'thanks' and they broek apart as soon as the song was over. they all sat down, ron taking a swig from his butterbeer. padma wasa trying to talk to ron, but as soon as he saw harry, he jumped up and made harry sit there. padma got disgruntled and wlaked off.

they were all talking, when hermione came running up to them.

'harry! harry!' she cried, bumping into cho and making her stummble into a table.  she reached thenmm, and they were all on their feet, krus arm around her shoulders muittering

'hermy-own-ninny! vat is vrong? vat hapen?'

'ok - well, i went into the gryffindor common room, and went up -

'r u alvright, her-own-ninny? are u alvri-'

'o, shut up!' hermione snapped at him, then she said,

'o, jsut cum follow me!' and pulled on harrys arm. ron looked very stubborn.

'no, harry, don't. its probably sum stupid trick, to get us to like her again!'

'oh, ron, thats ridiculous!' hermione threw him a dealdy glare, that made him follow her up to the gryffindor common room.

she ran fast to the common room, yelled the password, and jumped into the scarlet and gold room.

'watch out!' the fat lady cried, as the portrait slammed shut.

hermione dragged hary up stairs, and stopped at his dormitory.

'in - here!' she panted, her hands on her knees. she took a deep breath, and pushed open the portrait.  harry and ron shouted and emily screamed. krum backed against the wall in horror,  looking inside the room. harry couldnt believe what had happened. hermione stood there, and said the obvious,

'sumones payed you a visit.'

hey guys, im oging to flroida on the 19, until the 29.... so i wont be able to psot then, but i will try to post lots now, tho!!!!!!

(but i am xwaiting 4 sumone to rpely fst)

it's absolutely BRILLIANT! I LOVE IT! R A GENIUS! but ur not goin to be here on my b-day!  :'(  the 28th! alwell have fun!

omg, that really sucks!!!!  :'(  not to mention i just found out their r gonna be mroe terrorists attacks when i am supposed to be goin.... but im gonna miss ur birthday!!!! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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lol, im not a genius.... but here is  more....

Harry took a deep breath and steped into the room the was covered in broken things, and, painted on the walls were death threats.

ron walked up to them, and muttered them aloud.

'beware, harry potter...the end is near....avada kedavr is coming...' ron shivered, and myrtle continued in a frightened voice.

'watch wear you step...' myrtle loked up at the ceiling and screamed. they all looked up at the ceiling too, and everything was quiet again. Emily looked at all their faces, and said, her eyes shining with fire,

'yours truly, the dark lord's servent.'

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!  ne way, what's weird is that someof my friends say that when i get mad my eyes look like that! cool how u knew! lol ne way keep goin it's awsome!

LOL, anyhoos, im back from florida!!! it was really nice there. ok, ill continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

emilt stood there for a moment, as if making a hard decision, then sudenly, her robes blwoing behind her, she ran out the door, past krum who looked scared to touch her, and down the corridor until they couldnt see her. they all looked at eachother.

'is it just me...' hermione began awkwardly, 'or is there sumthing up with emily?'

hehehe...*rubs hands together* wicked story i love it!

oo good story!

Put me in with Malfoy! I love Malfoy. drool
Its a GREAT story. I love Malfoy. im writing one. seen from slytherins point of veiw

hey, the song is called "sk8ter boi" by Avril Lavigne  ;D

ya go shelby! please please write sommore!

nice story!

YA REALLY COOL

hi

I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY LAVENDER

thanks! ;D

whoa its been  soo long and now the fifth book is out so i dunno if im gonna keep writing this one . . . should i? :-\

i pretty much forget where i wanted to go from there lol . . . actually i do remember sum stuff......like emilies secret . . . .and stuff . . . .

to tell yall the truth i have a whole different rzon why vol-demort wanted to kill harry . . . .should i keep going? :-\

well i dont remember what was going on, i think ill just start a new one or smthn coz i forget who that dude in the cloak wuz . . . .

yeah

ooo man u can't quit on me now~!!!!!!1

AHHHHHH! you are a GUINUSS!(is that how you spell it?)but please please keep going! i love it!

Cool this is getting really good when are you contiunng?

Thanks for a great story so far,

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oh! come on! you absolutely positivley must keep going!

Ya this is good.

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Wow that was unkool. 8) ??? :P >:(