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Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Topic started by: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 08:45:12 AM

Title: The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 08:45:12 AM
ALRIGHT! ANOTHER FAN FIC!
Before we begin, I would like to say a few words.

Ahem.
This idea was supplied by our dear friend Tweetie, so many thanks to Tweetie.  ;D Also, I would like to add that this fanfic is a sequel to my previous fanfic, "The Final Showdown".

Thank you very much, Tweetie!

*Chokes*
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 08:52:32 AM
Let's go!

It has been a month since the bloody death of the Dark Lord. Ever since his death, the Death Eaters have decided to go all out to take revenge for their master. The ex-minister for magic, Cornelius Fudge, has already been assasinated. (Slashed in the thoat by a muggle tool known as a paper cutter). Albus Dumbledore has taken the minister's seat (FINALLY!), under the protection of good old Alastor Moody.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 09:05:02 AM
Deaths of muggles have already amounted to over thousands and muggle reports of magic sightings were at all high. Nobody, magic or muggle were safe on the streets, with hundreds of deaths each day. It was a war. A war between good and evil... ...

(ooo... So scary  ;D)
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 09:19:15 AM
Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft and Wizardy was halved, one half for students, the other half for mecenaries trained for battle, known as SeeDs, (No copyright infringement, Squaresoft) led by members of the DA and Professor Dumbledore himself.

The SeeDs are have rounded up many of the Death Eaters, but many more are still at large.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: Em on December 15, 2004, 09:33:07 AM
I like it! Keep going! ;D
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 16, 2004, 09:07:58 PM
Thanks, Em!
There was another party of expierenced fighters, that had exsisted ever since Harry was fifteen. It was known as the "Dumbledore's Army", or DA for short. ( ;D)  Everyday, when they were not in battle with the horrible death eaters, they were training new SeeDs.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 16, 2004, 09:15:48 PM
Today, you would be brought to a terrifying scene of fighting, where, when the DA arrived was already a bloody mess. Many muggles have already lost their lives. This place, was called Privet Drive, right outside Harry's old home.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: pig on December 17, 2004, 05:08:26 AM
this is realy intresting good cocept more  :)
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: Tweetie on December 17, 2004, 08:51:33 AM
Quote from: 0612 on December 15, 2004, 08:45:12 AM
ALRIGHT! ANOTHER FAN FIC!
Before we begin, I would like to say a few words.

Ahem.
This idea was supplied by our dear friend Tweetie, so many thanks to Tweetie.  ;D Also, I would like to add that this fanfic is a sequel to my previous fanfic, "The Final Showdown".

Thank you very much, Tweetie!

*Chokes*

Ah, please, 0612, you're making me blush. *hides bright red face under desk* :D  You're more than welcome!  I love it so far, write more quickly! ;D
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: Fawkes on December 17, 2004, 08:03:46 PM
intresting..continue.. :sweetheart:
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 09:07:43 AM
Thanks alot guys!

There was a crater in the street. Streams of smoke emitting from it. Hidden in every dark corner was a masked and armed Death Eater. Harry was sure the Death Eaters had no idea of the DA's arrival. After all, they were not concentrating on their backs. This gave the DA a big chance.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 09:20:22 AM
Harry split his army into two. One half was to eliminate the Death Eaters by stealth. The other half was to attack head on. The first half of the DA moved up the buildings and very soon, they were to be found in many hidden spots.

The stealth team was led by Ron and the head-on team was led by Harry and Hermione. Harry and Ron could communicate with each other via wand sparks, which were cleverly enchanted by Dumbledore such that only the people who're supposed to see it can see it.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 09:29:51 AM
Harry sent up green sparks, which meant "Are you ready?". From a corner of his eye, he saw yellow sparks, which meant "Yes.". He sent up red sparks which meant "ATTACK!!!!!"

The army charged forwards as Death Eaters began to collapse with the spells that hit them from behind. The death eaters diverted their attention instead to their attackers, and Harry realized that they were seriously outnumbered: Three to one.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 05:26:35 PM
The death eaters charged forwards themselves.

Curses and spells flew across the place, hitting Death Eaters and DA members at an almost equal rate, meaning that Harry's side was suffering more losses, but the better of each side were winning fast.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 05:34:00 PM
Harry was fighting six death eaters at a time, and winning easily. He had a trick, and that was to cast a spell and pull, hard. This way, the spell would hit multiple enemies.

Six death eaters surrounded Harry. Harry pointed at one of them and screamed "Stupefy!" And when he said the syllable "Stu", he had began swinging his wand. When he finished at "fy", his wand is already pointing at the sixth death eater.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 05:42:47 PM
There was a ring of red, and six death eaters were blasted backwards, and they hit the ground motionless. Harry skipped forwards and did his old trick again on five death eaters.

Out of a corner of his eye, he saw Hermione doing Harry's spinning trick on twelve death eaters successfully at one go. Then Harry heard a loud scream. He turned and saw a familiar face collapse onto the ground.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 19, 2004, 05:48:40 PM
The female face was covered by a long mane of red hair and blood splatters onto the ground. Harry's blood chilled. It was Ginny, his girlfriend.

Harry rushed over to Ginny and he felt something white hot graze his face, but he didn't care. Just then, Ginny hit the ground and Harry stopped right in front of her...
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 20, 2004, 08:36:14 PM
Harry knelt down in front of Ginny. Her face was splattered with blood, immobile, on the ground. Then Harry saw a mark on her face. It looked like a hex mark.

Blood splattered from the wound, just as Hermione ran over and knelt right beside Harry. Harry saw her roll her eyes and mutter something. The hex mark disappeared immediately.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 20, 2004, 08:46:01 PM
Although the blood did not go, Ginny looked slightly better. Her eyes snapped open and she got up slowly.

She looked at Harry and then she stood up. She shrugged and said "It tickles." and then she went on and continued battling. Harry raised his brows. Hermione grinned and walked away towards the battle.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 20, 2004, 08:54:34 PM
Let's now move on to look at Ron's half of DA members.

Neville followed Ron. (Being a little scared). However, the spot they chose was not so good. Seven death eaters stood in a circle, whispering among themselves.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: pig on December 21, 2004, 04:06:48 AM
good funny how ginny just gets up :)
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: Fawkes on December 22, 2004, 12:27:09 AM
continue..
[yeah.. that was funny.. maybe you should have thought of something more realistic 0612 ;D](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v116/WhiteUnicorn/heart.gif)
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 23, 2004, 08:38:10 AM
Oh, I just wanted to scare you guys.  ;D
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 23, 2004, 09:05:37 AM
Let's Continue

Only Ron and Neville, against at least seven death eaters. It seemed something silly to do, so Ron decided to call for help. Seamus Finnigan and Dean Thomas turned up.

And so they attacked the Death Eaters, who, having been taken by surprise did not summon any resistance, and the battle was easy and quick.
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: Fawkes on December 24, 2004, 09:00:02 PM
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v116/WhiteUnicorn/heart.gif)continue..
Title: Re:The Death Eater's Revolt
Post by: 0612 on December 28, 2004, 09:18:27 AM
I've really got no idea how to carry on. I need help!