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Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Topic started by: ronweazley122 on January 6, 2005, 06:35:55 AM

Title: Alternate dimensions of hp....
Post by: ronweazley122 on January 6, 2005, 06:35:55 AM
this story is hp with a slight,twist.Its the first book....with a choice changed.please comment.

The alternate dimensions of:*Harry<<>Potter*

beginning(the changed choice):(on the train in the first book when malfoy enters)"is it true?"he said."They're saying all down the train that Harry Potter's in this compartment.So,it's you,is it?" "Yes,"said harry. He was looking at the other boys. Both of them were thickset and looked extremly mean. Standing on either side of the pale boy, they looked like bodyguards. "Oh, this is Crabbe and this is Goyle,"said the pale boy carelessly,noticing where Harry was looking. "And my name's Malfoy, Draco Malfoy." Ron gave a slight cough, which might have been hiding a snicker.Draco malfoy looked at him. "Think my name's funny,do you? No need to ask who you are.My father told me that all the Weasleys have red hair,freckles,and more children then they can afford." He turned back to Harry. "You'll soon find out some wizarding families are better then others,Potter.You don't want to make friends with the wrong sort.I can help you there." He held out his hand to shake Harry's. Harry thought for a moment. Maybe he was right. He was starting to like that guy Ron, and he thought they would be good friends, But Malfoy had a point...... He was unpopular at the school he had originally gone to,because he didn't like dudley.should he make friends with the bully and become popular?he had a second left and malfoy was beginning to get annoyed. Harry shook his hand. Ron mouthed wordlessly at both of them. Harry followed malfoy out of the compartment.
Title: Re:Alternate dimensions of hp....
Post by: Ginny Weasly on January 6, 2005, 10:35:38 AM
*laughs* This will be an interesting story Ron. Please continue.
Title: Re:Alternate dimensions of hp....
Post by: Lord Voldem0rt on January 21, 2005, 10:43:58 PM
He, He, He! ;D That's funny!  Please write more!
Title: Re:Alternate dimensions of hp....
Post by: Kiara Johnson on January 21, 2005, 11:59:21 PM
I love you Ron!  lol, this is great, of course, now please, post more