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       It was midnight when bill weasley looked out the window to see fleur sitting on the porch crying. he walked out to her and said "whats wrong"
    She yelled"no bill quick get back inside" but it was too late the clouds had parted and Fleur screamed for mrs. weasley to lock the door and keep ginny safe
    Bill was about 7 feet tall at this point! he howled when he saw fleur only when she looked at him she saw he still had almost ful human control of himself when she remembered that bill wasnt bit by a full fledged werewolf
     he stared longingly at her for about three minutes before he ran into the woods still howling louder and louder
     Mrs. weasley came out to see that fluer was crying. Mrs. Weasley asked her if she was ok, but all fluer cuold say was "WHAT IF HE HURTS HIMSELF, OR WORSE WHAT IF SOMETHING ELSE HURTS HIM" SHE RAMBLED ON FOR HOURS LIKE THIS TILL DAYLIGHT

                       SO WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK
                        i wont go on till u tell me if u like it

Fabulous i'm loving it so keep going if it's just for little old me  ::)
Love the story mamabiscuit

thanx mamabuiscut

that night bill found himself hiding in the shadows waiting for an unexpecting fox to hunt for rabbits so he would not be hungry. he looked for about an hour behind a termite mound
when he heard somthing! He pounced and heard a great yelp for it was no fox, it was someone he knew he could not know who it was though because this person was also in the shape of a wolf."remus"he said to himself and for sure it was remus lupin. lupin pushed him off and stared at him for sometime. bill thought to himself fluer and mum must have sent for him to make sure bill was alright. lupin remembered Mrs. Weasley letter perfectly
he was in his one room apartment speaking with tonks about how much he felt for her
and how dangerous it was to be with him. Remus lead bill to a spot in the woods he was fond of hunting and keeping others safe from his bite. he discovered this place many years ago when he was walkin through these very woods, that was the night he was bitten by Greybak.
 

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       They entered a little old cabin that looked decayed and never used. Inside Bill saw bones and furs of small animals. He suposed lupin had caught them in his prime years. Lupin directed him in with a nudge, Bill wished someone could explain how Remus got there or what this shack was for and who put it there for he had been in these woods before and never had he noticed it. he had so many questions but only one problem, as a wolf he has a lack of speaking. Lupin indicated a tattered looking chair by biting the chair then Bill. Bill wondered why was Lupin being so violent, he knew Remus Lupin to be a very kind man. Then with a quick look at himself then Lupin he remembed nieter of them were humans right now. Bill found himself sniffing the tattered chair before resting his paws on it. He slowly drifted away into the night. As he woke up he opened his eyes, he wondered "why am I on the floor in a rusty old cabin." he looked around to see a tired looking man rolled onto his face on the ground a few feet away from himself. Before moving to see who it was, he tried to remember what happend. He remembered a girl screaming "FLUER" he shouted aloud "oh no what have i done!"
    The man on the ground rolled over and looked at bill and said "she isnt harmed."
      "Remus" said Bill "what are you doing here, how did you know i was here, and how did i get here"
    "last night you became you're well wolfish side shall i say you sure scared the hell outta Ginny and Fluer though Ron and Harry were havin a good laugh about fluers ramblings"
    "HA" exlaimed Bill "are they ok though, i didn't hurt anyone did I?"
   "No, I am quite curious though? how did you not atack Fluer at first instinct?" asked Lupin "thats of course what i would do" 

      After explaining the night to Bill they headed back to the Burrow"you'de better be grateful Bill, i was on a date with Tonks when I got you're mothers owl, and i told her id be back in an hour but i decided you needed someone, or in our case somthing to keep you company. I won't be suprised if shes waitin with Fluer and you're mother."
     
       "Im very soory that you missed you're night with Tonks, but I thatnk you for doing so." said bill.
    "its alright im always happy to help a friend, but next time be sure to know when the full moon is going to be. Do you know its not as acurate as say a centaur but I hear that muggles have things called computers that would tell you when the full moon is going to be, i've heard its fairly accurate!"
     They were welcomed to the burrow with a crying Fluer, Mrs. Weasly, Tonks, and Ginny. While fred and goerge were in the backround saying to bill "Brilliant mate, did you and Lupin have a fight! Who won!!!"
      "You two are so immature, a werewolf will never attack another werewolf." came Hermione's voice from behind, closely followed by Ron and Harry.
      "Shut up Hermione" said George "we just want to know whos the better were wolf"
      "Bill darling, are you ok, why dont you go inside and chang ill sew those clothes back together later" said Mrs. Weasley
       "Thats all you can afford isnt it." said a drawling voice from behind a tree. and out came the last person they wanted to see.
      ron said "MALFOY WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE, IF YOU'RE NOT GONE IN 2 SECONDS I'LL" 
       "RONALD, THIS IS NOT YOU'RE BATTLE" said Mrs. Weasley
      "Poor ron cant even fight."
       "Fred, George" said Mrs.Weasley
       "Pleasure mum" said Fred
      "what put me down put me down put me down" cried malfoy as Fred and George carried him to the garden.
      "this'll teach this eves dropping little mommys boy a leson" said Fred and George as they shoved his head in a nome infested hole

    That night Bill went to talk to Tonks when he passed Harry's and Ron's room. He knew it was wrong but he couldnt help listening because he had heard his own name.
    "Did You see the way Bill reacted to the full moon, it was cool but scary, i thought he was gonna kill Fluer." Said Harry.
    "I was hoping he would" said Ron.
     "I hope im not interupting anything boys " Said Bill with an angry smirkk on his face. "what are you two doing up this late anyways, its 1:00 in the morning,  go to bed"
    "Yes Mom" said Ron with an attitude"And what are you doing up this late as well"
    "Ill mind my own buisness if you mind yours" Agreed Bill" and Don't be talking about my wolfish behavior, are we clear?"
     "Ya sure Bill" said Harry. Bill left the room, and Harry and Ron both jumped out of bed kneeled down and each pulled out a broomstick Harry's Firebolt, and Ron's Cleensweep.
Harry ran over to the Window, threw it open and latched it. "Are you ready"asked Harry as Ron mounted his broom
    "yup lets go" said Ron "WAIT!, what about Hermione, and don't forget we have to pick up Neville."
    "I know" said Harry i told Hermione to meet us outside on the wood line. shes gonna ride with you and Neville being heavier He can ride with me. Too bad we dont have any  Thestrals eh Ron."
   "Shut up Harry"said Ron irritated.
     

suspence ;D

so what do you guys think i wont type unless i get replies

come on peeps i would like to know

Sorry ahven't been able to get on line its great i love it KEEP GOING KEEP GOING KEEP GOING loving it
Love ya all mamabiscuit
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          Before Bill went to Tonks's room he listened through the door to see if the boys were gonna say anything else about him but when he heard what they were talkin about he peeked in the door to see them going through the window being as smart as he is bill put a traking charm on rons broom before he flew out the window
     In a minute billl had grabed charley's firebolt he had gotten for christmas last year, mounted it, and was out the window after them. he whispered to his wand "point me" and so it did right in the direction of rons flight.
     "Do you think bill thought we were up to something" said harry to ron as they were several thousand feet ahead of bill, but he knew were they wee going by his wand.
     after traveling for an hour he saw two brooms below him on the ground and their masters next to them but with two others this time
    "That must be Neville and Hermione" said Bill quietley as he landed a few feet away from them
    "did you hear somthing"said neville rousing harry.
     "No i didnt hear anything neville go back to sleep" said Ron and Harry at the same time

Love it KEEP going  :D

    After that Bill was sure to be very careful with his steps. when he got to the boys (and girl) he slowly lifter up each of their brooms and walked into the woods carefuly watching them all through the night trying not to fall asleep. as he was almost drifting off he saw movement where he was watching(hecould not tell what it was because he was so drowsy). quickly he rubbed his eyes but when he opened them, he saw that Neville was looking at him almost two feet away.
     "Who are you and what are you doing here" said Neville angrily pointing his wand at Bill.
     "Put that away before you" said Bill cut off
     "HARRY" said  nevill"HARRY COME QUICK, ive found a spy, most likely from voldemort himself"
     "Put it away neville" said harry "thats rons brother""what are you doing here though Bill i thought you'de be with Fluer all night"
     "the question is what are you doing harry? Said Bill "you know its dangerous for you to be out of the house without even tellin somebody that you can trust"
     "the only people i can trust" said Harry annoyed "are the ones right here" he said pointing at the others. "i thought we agreed to stay out of each others buisness"
     "Well when you're running away from our home i think i can spare to break a promise" said Bill
     "Me and Neville are gonna bring ya with us, but one wrong move and we will jynx charlies broom with you on it faster than you can say Cauldron cake, Got it"said Harry.
    "why dont you just send me back"questioned Bill.
    "First off you know too much already. second off you will tell mrs weasley and third off
you could be of great help to us" said Harry.
    "What plans"said Bill?

     

great story keep going

thanx Lashik

whoa that must be a good sign

     Harry ignored Bill, and walked away. Neville said "don't worry, it wont be dangerous, i havent said no and i would normaly back down."
     "not helping"said Bill "im am irritated that 17 year olds are holding me hostage for thier own plans, im not afraid."
     "Well its time we get going"said Harry in a hurry"we have a long journey ahead of us, and we must use all the daylight we can, so as to make sure Mrs. Weasley doesnt find us."
     "But where are we going that we cant tell mumj about"said bill even more frustrated than before.
     "you need not know yet." said Hermione quickly so Bill wouldnt ask anymore questions.
     "Ron!"said Harry picking up rons broom from where bill was hiding it and tossing to him. "Bill, Hermione will be riding with you as to make sure you dont go off course or get us from behind.
     "Harry do you remember who you are talking to " said Ron "thats MY brother Bill he wont turn on us"
     "anyone you may think is on youre side might as well be a spy for Volddemort" As Ron winced harry continued"do you rermember Crouch pretending to be Moody! did you think of that. That might even be someone who found Bill in the woods before lupin and has bills esence to continue making polyjuice potion"
      "dont you use youre head Harry" said Hermione "first off where would he get the other ingredients while we are flying, second off if he did he he would have to drink something every hour, which then we could say was suspicious, and third no one could have found him before Lupin Because then they would have taken his wolfish essence"
      "Thanks for being so smart hermione"said Bill greatfully.
      "Well lets be off " said Neville holding Harrys broom waiting for them to come. 

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waiting  ;D

no offense Mamabuiscut but i know jon and hes a slow typer and when he gets ideas about this story helll post them right away but hes watchin the steelers game now

its ok lashik
wow mama i didnt know you liked it so much
   


      "Yes lets go" said harry "quick soon Mrs. Weasley will realize that we are gone and shell be after us so lets go"he said mounting his broom.
     "Fine"siad Bill "but the next stop we make someone must tell me what we are doin"
     ron whispered something intoo Hermiones ear, then went over to Bill and said quikly and quietley "Hermione will tell you on the way"
    "Thanks a lot" said Bill greatfully
    Ron mounted his broom, and said "Harry where is our next stop anyway"
   "We are flying north to the old riddle house to look for clues that Voldemort might have left three years ago when he killed that old  kojer old Frank....whatshisname"
   "What on Earth are you talki"said Bill but before he could finish hermione said
   "ssshhhhhh" with urgency "Harry wont tell you anything untill he can trust you more, so if you keep asking questions he will trust you less and less.
   "ok i get the message said Bill but i need to know some stuff anything really just tell me where we are going and why"said Bill.
   "first off we are going to little hangelton where Tom Riddles father live, second off to you remember three years ago at the tri wizard tournoment when cedric died, well thats where voldemort was hiding before he reganed his body"
   "Tom Ridlle? but thats he who must not be named why are we going to his fathers house?"

Love it and sorry if i sounded pushy but it's really good and everytime i get into a story it seems to never get finished by the writer and that's very frustrating

sorry but most of the time i get as far as i normaly do i loose my train of thought

we are going to his fathers house becuase that was the last place he was found hiding, and we think we can find something that will help us find him, snape, and wormtail" said hermione "Harry thinks this will help the world but hes beenacting really wierd latley, eversince Dumbledore died."
   "But why is he doing this hes just a kid"said Bill
   "no one knows but the boy who lived thing has kinda gone to his head i think. i think he needs to do this because no one else will. we are going to pick up some other members of the D.A first before we go though"
   "whats the D.A and whos all in it that we are picking up."said Bill interupting again.
   "the D.A is a defence against the dark arts class that Harry started 2 years ago when Umbrige wasnt teaching us anything, and we are picking up Seamus finigan and Luna Lovegood."

yeah new characters!!! really good

thanx

hey ur doin great! just keep writing! just Keep writing! just keep writing writing writing! wat do we ddo? we write!

Ginny lover that's really funny Like a cheer leader thing bob Listen to her Jon write write write
Not being pushy  :P

Quote from: Ginny Lover on February 10, 2006, 08:01:10 AM
hey ur doin great! just keep writing! just Keep writing! just keep writing writing writing! wat do we ddo? we write!

lol
no its from finding nemo isnt it

   "what bout that Cho chang girl wasnt she with u too"bill said curios
   "When harry and her broke up they havent talked to each other since " said Hermione quietly to Bill
   "then what about Dean Thomas" questioned bill
   "Ginny broke up with him aand then harry started dating ginny so Dean dosent want anything to do with harry" answered Hermione
   "why doesnt Ginny know what harry is doin then"said Bill
   "she will soon enough harry left her a letter when she was asleep and you werent lurking around" said hermione "any other questions while you are at it"
   "yeah" bill said "i do"
   "and whats that" said an irritated hermione
   "how do you know all this" said bill
   "i am an intelligent person and i listen when we are plotting to do something"
   Bill shook his head

oh yeah finding nemo v funny
Very good story i love hermione in this full of her self but i think its in a really funny way
Well Done Jon

ya it is from finding nemo.

ur doin great jon (can i kall u that?? people dont normally like me calling them by their first name.) so keep writing! just keep writing, etc.

i dont mind if u calll me that

alright. now write! hurry up im getting excited!

    by the time hermione finished explaining they were in london
    "what are we doing here"said bill "i thought we were goin to little hangelton"
    "we need suplies stupid" said harry
    "you need to drop the attitude potter" retorted bill
    "hey hey!!!" said neville "the last thing we need right now is a fight in the middle of london where we would get arrested from the muggle police and go to trail at the ministry"
"dont you use your heads"
     "and we also cant afford a fight because we need as many people as we can get and both of you are very valuable to the opperation"added hermione

goodness. partying? tut tut. wat was it for? now, any way (not to be rude) WRITE!!!!!!

i really dont think u like it do you! lol

     "well lets stop at the bank and get some money before we do anything" said harry. when they walked in he saw gripphook the goblin "suprised you're not already with voldy"harry sneered
     "us goblins dont socialize with anyone but ourselves so chop chop what do you need before i have the dragons on you" said gripphook "oops! i shouldnt of told you that"
    "i knew it ever since hagrid brought me here! wow i never thought he was right till now" said harry "the things you learn by peoples blabbering mouths"
    "yes yes get on with you're buisness before i get irritated" replied gripphook
    "take me to my vault and get me a bag" harry said holding out his key to gripphook
    "harry how much money do we need" whispered hermione in his ear
    "a lot"he replied "do you know how far it is to little hangelton! we'll need a good bit of food for all of us. i mean there are six of us isnt there"
    "here we are"  said griphook "if only i could lock you in but i would get fired wouldnt i"
    "and what bout' my bag" said harry
    "here" he said holding out what looked like a flour sack that had been used for a toilet
   "thanks" said harry disgusted

dont be so silly, couse i like it. else i wouldnt bother reading it would i? and what is the bag going to be used for? nevermind ill find out.

it says that hermione asked how much they needed and he said alot because there was soo many of them


    the bag is for the mony

ya i figured after a while

you boys are crazy!!! love it Jon especially neville talking bout using is head when his abit to quote Moody GOF "wittless wonder" complete contradiction hilarious lol

sorry i havent writen in a while and i cant now because i gtg

  They walked to diagon alley to get supplies. but when they got there it was nearly desserted, besides a few bystandards walking about. They read an enlarged newspaper clipping in every window.
it said "Walk the streets at your own will. we have recent news that he who must not be named has been spotted around Knokturn alley. Others say that it is an enfairy disguised as he who must not be named.
     "well that was wierd" said Harry after a while.
     they walked further in only to see most buildings borded up saying "closed" or "going out of business sale"
     "what are we going to do" said Ron "the places with the good supplies are mostly closed"
     "I have an idea" said Hermione
     they followed her all the way to Weasley wizard wheezes where to their shock they saw was opened.
      "Hello mates" said fred as they walked in the door
     "what can we do for you " said george next

More More More How do you like it how do you like it we like it good

sorry that was bout the oldie song More More More Excellent cant wait for more

yeah i know thanx

sorry i havent been on in a while, ive been on gaia. its great jon, just keep going.

hey its just going to be a short post i dont have much time


  "Hey fred george, you know the first time when i was here you said anything was free for me" said harry
  "what are you..." fred said
  "getting at?" georged finished
  "Bottom line is we need supplies and your merchandise would work as distractions" said harry
  "No harry your not?!?!?" said george
  "Are you" said fred
  "Yes" he replied
  "well we are coming too" said fred and george at the same time
  "I won't fight against that but you need to use your own brooms"
  "No problem" said george glancing slyly at fred

i like it so far keep writing

*sigh* the posts stopped. *Sob* the story was so good...!

the story waz so gud n we were gettin 2 da gud part  :( o da suspense ;D

ok im sooo sorry to everyone who follows this story i havent been on forever been really busy anyways.......

ok im sooo sorry to everyone who follows this story i havent been on forever been really busy anyways.......


     the twins took the group to the back room telling neville not to touch anything to keep him from hurting himself.they all imidiatly started grabbing everything that looked usable.
     "wow fred, george do you guys ever have any spare time?"
     "not ussually" said fred
     "but its definatly worth it"replied his twin
     they filled thier pockets and every other storage area they found on themselves to carry the suplies then the twins said"shall we be off then?"
     "yes, but first i need to change into some robes these muggle clothes are killing me" said bill appearing out of nowhere
     "why did u give us such a scare" said gearge straightening back up
     "Oh sorry guys i forgot to tell you that he was whatching the brooms outside"said harry
     they all left their muggle clothes behind and put on robes. then they all mounted their brooms ready to go one way to the riddle home.
     "i estimated that the riddle house is about a 200 mile trip from here" said hermionie.
     "of course you did" said fred sarcasticly.
     "the no existant family is gonna be in for quite a suprise when we show up on thier front porch" said harry with a smile making the whole group laugh.
     they flew for about 2 hours till they reached the town of little hangleton. succeding at being suspicious(because it was still daylight) they asked around to find out where the old riddle home was. no one seemed to know what they were talking about so they decided to put the muggle money together to get a room at the inn for the night.at about 10 o' clock at night and bill went out to the porch but the strangest thing happened. no one expected for 2 full moons in the same month. harry and ron were going to get food in the town when they saw bill struggling with himself on the porch and quickly closed the doors to the inn leaving themselves out with him. he growled in there direction the let out a loud screech then started to run.
     "what do we doo???!!!" said ron
     " i hate to say it but we just have to wait it out" harry replied
     "but what if he leaves town and gets lost?"
     "he's a big boy ron i think he'll find his way, and if we're lucky he could be able to find the house and tell us where it is"
     "i think he'll be a little distraced by finding a snack!!!"  said ron
     "well we can't do anything so lets just do what we were doing and hope he doesnt find us or the townspeople."



     

LOL....nice turn of the story