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Title: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Jack Chance on January 6, 2007, 03:37:09 PM
Author's note:

Well, I had this idea for the longest, and so I decided to post my awesome story  and share it with you.  Reviews that I got from other people, online, as well as actual friends, said that it was believable.  And that was when I only had three pages on.  Now, I have five, so I hope you like it!  Comments make me happy, so make me happy ^_^  if you want it in text form, which is so much better, due to the wider range of fonts, just pm me, and I'll try to send the file, as I still have no idea how to do that, heh... so, yep, enjoy my fan book!
oh! and if you see any flaws, like typical typos and sentence structures that are completely retarded looking, please don't laugh, just tell me, if you can. ALOOOHA!







Harry Potter
and the Caverns of Chaos









C H A P T E R   O N E
T H E   F I N A L   D A Y S   A T   P R I V E T   D R I V E

   A young man with jet-black hair woke up with a start. Harry Potter, of number four, Privet Drive, had yet another dream about Lord Voldemort. He looked to the right of his bed to see Ginny Weasley gazing at Harry, like an angel observing a human.
     "I hope I didn't wake you, Harry." said Ginny quietly
     "Oh, no. It was my scar that woke me up." Harry said, quickly grabbing his and Ginny's clothes, changing.
     The Weasleys and the Dursleys allowed Harry to have Ginny stay with him over the summer. After Harry turned 17, he would be of age, so the Dursley home would no longer be a protective place for him.
      All over Harry's room lay parchment bits, broken quills, and books with moving pictures. Harry and Ginny have been constantly writing back to the Weasleys, convincing them of their safety. Harry's owl, Hedwig, was at the Weasleys, waiting for a reply about the last dream from Hermione.
     Bill and Fleur Delacour finally got married. Ginny often groaned about having vella cousins, but this kept Harry cheerful.
     Ginny kissed Harry lightly on the cheek, and saw that Harry was trembling.
"Harry. what's the matter? Is it something I said?" Ginny whispered.
   "Oh-it's not you. It's...it's nothing to worry about. It was just a dream." said Harry.
   "Harry, it's the third dream you've had this week.  And each time, it's your scar.  Are you sure you dun wanna see Hermione?"
   "And listen to her talk about all of 'McGonagall' this and 'Occullumens' that?  I don't think so." said Harry, already upset.  "She's probably gonna write that anyways.  I'll bet you on that."
   "Pff...whatever, Harry." And Ginny got off the bed, put her clothes on, and opened the door. "Let's eat something for a change," she said.  They've been eating nothing but sweets that the Weasleys sent, due to the fact that Harry couldn't eat Muggle food because of the dreams.
   "Who knows, maybe it's the cake.  Mum always put too much sugar.  That might be the reason for your dreams." She said, leaving Harry's room and heading towards the kitchen.
   Harry followed suit, going downstairs, when he heard a scream.  This time, he ran back to his room, grabbed his wand, and cautiously went downstairs to see all of the commotion.
   "Harry, look!  It's Hedwig, outside!" said Ginny in an afraid and shocked voice, with an expression to match.
   "Oh, no..."started Harry, looking out the window.
   Hedwig was out on the lawn, with only her wings covered with her feathers.  She looked tired, injured, and quite embarrassed.  Harry ran outside to take in Hedwig, then let her rest in her cage.  He took off what Hedwig was holding, which was a letter and a greenish-black box.  He then went back to the living room to show Ginny what Hedwig had.
   "Harry, is that what I think it is?" gasped Ginny.  "You-know-who's...?"
   The greenish-black box was completely blank on 5 sides.  The last side had a skull with a serpent out of the skull's mouth, like a tongue.
   "The Dark Mark" said Ginny, in a hushed voice.  "Read the letter first."
   Harry,
I don't know what to think anymore.  You-know-who's looking for you, I presume.  Hedwig shouldn't have come.  She's too recognizable.  I know, you don't have any other owl with you.  It's not your fault.
Anyways, that dream of yours seems all too real, but what if he read your mind already?  What if he's reading it right at this moment?  You really need to practice your Ocullumens.

Harry scoffed at this response.
"Told you she would say that." He said, and Ginny got upset and read the rest for him.
Harry, we're all afraid.  You should stay closer to us.  We'll take you in.  Mrs. Weasley is going ballistic right now.  Please be safe.
- Hermione

After Ginny read the last syllable, the box opened.  Harry immediately pointed at it with his wand.  A projected miniature three-dimensional figure of Lord Voldemort appeared, shielding himself with his hands.
Lord Voldemort's voice was more confident and deep than ever.
   "Now, now, boy, you don't need to poke my eyes out," he said.  "That 'Hermione' girl is pretty tidy, don't you think?  I hope you like your bird's new look.  Its feathers will grow back in two days.  Speaking of two days, I'll be coming here in two days, Potter.  Yes, a pleasant surprise from me on your Birthday, isn't it?  I also hope you liked the vivid dreams I gave you.  It's just a piece of the puzzle that I hope will happen.  Well, I must be off.  I have an important guest to talk to.  I think you know him.  Rubeus Hagrid?  Bye-bye for now."
   Voldemort disappeared in the box, and then the box itself exploded into ashes.
   "Harry, are you alright?" asked Ginny, in a shaken voice.
   "Right.  Excellent, never better.  Let's get out of here.  I still got some fire powder somewhere..."said Harry. "We're not eating here."
   Harry took Hermione's letter, went upstairs to put everything in order and ready, then went back to the living room with his pouch of fire powder.
   "Gin, you go first to the Burrow, I'll be there soon.  Take your stuff and Hedwig, please.  I gotta tell my Uncle that they gotta go," said Harry, throwing powder in the fireplace, turning the fire green.  Ginny obeyed and went into the fireplace, saying "the Burrow".  She disappeared and Harry went to his Uncle's room, banging on the door, shouting "WAKE UP!!  He's coming!"
   Harry opened the door, then shook his Uncle and Aunt into waking up.
   "Get up! Hurry, you need to leave the house now!  He's coming soon and you don't want to be caught in this house when he's here.  Come with me to the fireplace!  Get all of your things!  We need to go!"
   Vernon Dursley grumbled then put his and Petunia's clothes in a luggage.  He then went and grabbed Dudley out of bed and told him to pack his things in two minutes or he'll leave him behind to die.
   Soon after that, the Dursleys and Harry went back to the fireplace with their things.
   "Now," said Harry, "this may seem strange, but the fire is green.  It won't hurt you, it'll just tickle a bit.  Say the words "The Burrow" when you're in the flames.  Uncle Vernon, you first."
   Vernon regretfully took his belongings with him into the fireplace, then said "The Burrow" loud and clear.  He poofed out of sight at lightning speed.
   "Dudley, you next." Said Harry, then Petunia was after Dudley.  Harry then looked at the house in which he could only remember as his home, went in the fire, then said "The Burrow".


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Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Jack Chance on January 6, 2007, 03:52:46 PM
C H A P T E R   T W O
T H E   B U R R O W

      "WHAT IN THE RUDDY BLAZES WAS THAT!?!" screamed Vernon at Harry, when he came out of the fireplace.
      "Er...Don't you remember what ANYONE TOLD YOU?" screamed Harry even louder.  "You will DIE if you choose to go back.  Do you want to DIE?"
      Vernon just blinked and mumbled something like "left my hat in the room...", but said nothing any further.
      "WELL!" said the familiar vouce of Mrs. Weasley.  "I think we all need to eat!"  She flicked her wand at the table and an entirely steaming meal appeared.
      "Woah!" gasped Dudley, seeing the thing he loved most of all appear before his eyes.  "Let's eat!"
      Everyone sat on the table; Mr. Weasley sat on the end, Mrs. Weasley on the right of him.  Across Mrs. Weasley, sat Ginny.  Next to Ginny say Harry, of course.  Across him was Ron, who smiled, before saying "Can ya pass the mashed potatoes, 'arry?"  Hermione, who sat next to Ron, stepped on Ron's foot.  "Harry, tell us everything you can after you eat."  Facing Hermione was Dudley, who evidently dropped the bad attitude, trying to cooperate with Fred, who was explaining the topic of Quidditch.  Listening intently was George, who sat next to Petunia, who sat next to Vernon.  Across Petunia was Fleur and next to her was Bill.  The other end was occupied by none other than Percy.
      "So!  I think Dudley was right.  Let's eat!" said Percy, and everyone laughed, except Mr. & Mrs. Dursley, who was still twitching.
      The food was excellent, from {okay, i gotta put in some rich details in there but i got nothin so far, hehe so this is just food comments, blah blah...}
      After the feast, {blah blah fillers about how the Burrow looks like, where people are sleeping, and such place.  Maybe I'll have a little contest for this.}
      Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Fred, George, Percy, Bill, Fleur, and Dudley, went into Ron's room.  Dudley closed the door and the group spoke, starting with Harry.
      "He's coming for me.  Voldemort's gonna try to kill me.  What can I do?"
      "No, Harry, what can we do?" said Ron.  "We all decided that we're going to protect you no matter what.  You're our only hope for a better life."
      "Well, for starters," said Hermione, "We're not going to wait here."
      "Then where are we going?" asked Dudley.
      "Number Four, Grimmuald Place." Hermione replied, grinning.  "Okay, everyone out except Harry.  I need to show you something."  She then closed the door when everyone else left.


Okay, not done yet, but I still have more to type.  Yes, I have a story board slowly moving.
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Shara2007 on January 7, 2007, 03:42:54 AM
hey I love it and cant' wait for more.
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on February 10, 2007, 10:52:23 AM
this is so cool
i was so into the story
so when are you going to start the next chapter
LOL
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on March 4, 2007, 11:59:00 PM
i really liked it too!!
do more do more!!!!
lol!!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Jack Chance on March 11, 2007, 06:27:50 AM
hmm...what should i write about next...ah!
im so gonna spoil it.
uhm..so the dursleys and harry go to the burrow, then harry and ginny tell the weasleys about voldy. hmm..then hermys over there too and she swears because she realizes that voldy will come to the burrow now that voldy knows where harry will be at.  then two days later voldy comes knocking at the door and kills vernon dursley yes!! oh yes!!! petunia faints but then has the courage to get dudley to realize that he wasn't really just a muggle, but had a little more than a squib's amount of magic.  petunia finally admits that shes a true witch and has been telling lies ever since. haha! yes that will be PART of the next chapter haha!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on March 12, 2007, 12:07:44 AM
even though that was quick and to the point i still liked it!!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on March 17, 2007, 10:45:52 AM
Keep going!!!!!
Keep going!!!!
i love it!!!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on March 20, 2007, 07:29:00 PM
yeah vernon dudley...dies(that's alittle too harsh, don't you think??))
ok just continue because i like it ;D
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on March 21, 2007, 05:12:32 AM
(yeah....i guess i kind of liked them...i mean who else would be there to boss harry around!!!  that part was sort of quick and to the point)
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on March 21, 2007, 08:20:30 AM
((LOL
i know right harry would not have anyone to boss him around except for maybe dumbledore and  the teachers
i am so bored))
jack are you going to continue oh and can i be one of the administrators on http://hogwartschool.11.forumer.com please :(
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Jack Chance on May 10, 2007, 02:37:50 PM
Oh my...I HAVE BEEN INSPIRED FOR MORE THINGS TO WRITE!

and it has some ideas from my original plan and from ideas in this very forum!  to check out chapter 2 everyone! The Burrow!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on May 11, 2007, 08:15:54 PM
what??  ???
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: JackChance on May 12, 2007, 01:57:57 AM
:)
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on May 13, 2007, 08:43:28 AM
Quote from: harrypotterfan:) on March 21, 2007, 08:20:30 AM
can i be one of the administrators on http://hogwartschool.11.forumer.com please :(

that's what i was gonna ask!!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on May 13, 2007, 10:52:25 AM
LOL....I don't really care now though....I don't go on Jack's site often anyways... :-X sorry Jack
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: Jack Chance on May 24, 2007, 01:25:30 AM
KEEP READING!!! 2nd chapter still in the process!!
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on May 24, 2007, 04:23:52 AM
ok then I'll wait.....LOL
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on May 29, 2007, 05:33:00 AM
Quote from: harrypotterfan:) on May 13, 2007, 10:52:25 AM
...I don't go on Jack's site often anyways... :-X sorry Jack

i'm, afraid to say this...but i think i'm gonna quit.....
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on May 29, 2007, 05:37:33 AM
quit what?! this site?
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on June 4, 2007, 01:15:09 AM
oh no way!! i love this site! but i'm done with jack's...i got it going again after i started it....but now i'm tired of it. it's fun but it takes so long cuz right after i finally get through answering all my posts sarah will have already posted on them again! and on here there's more peeps and more things to do.
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on June 23, 2007, 10:17:25 PM
LOL..I understand...same situation on this site...but there are more people on here making this site much funner....
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on June 24, 2007, 10:23:16 AM
what makes me really sad is yesterday i was bored so i got on jack's again. it was deserted once again like how i found it. your brother hasn't posted on it in a while....sarah hasn't like ever anymore...it was sad...i posted a few to see if today when i get on someone would respnd...so we'll see.
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on June 24, 2007, 09:57:44 PM
.....LOL....I think my brother would have posted...he's been telling me on his free time he goes on Jack's site....LOL
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on June 25, 2007, 03:19:42 AM
ya he's there. i really wish al would get on more then she  is though....
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on June 25, 2007, 03:30:05 AM
she??
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: ChoChangHP118 on June 25, 2007, 12:01:29 PM
i don't even know what i meant by that! i think i was talking about sarah or something...i don't kno! lol
Title: Re: Harry Potter and the Caverns of Chaos [7th Book]
Post by: LordBlaZe on August 7, 2007, 03:45:04 AM
good story, too unbelievable that ginny stayed at harry's house and why are the dursly's so nice. i dunno lol but it's a good start