((k im so bored right now so im gonna improvise a story, it'll probably suck but just read it for fun))
Finally, he was out, out in the open and free at last. Free to rage his chaos against the muggles and the wizarding world. He was the nephew of Bellatrix Lestrange. At the time of voldemort's final death he was starting his schooling. Ofcourse he wouldn't go to the mudblood filled school of Hogwarts. He was taught by old death eaters and dark wizards alike. Unlike lord Voldemort he was heartless. Completely heartless. Without any hesitation what so ever. He lived for killing and that's what he did best. He wasn't the greatest wizard but he was smart. He could plot anything, and could finish any1. He also used to respect his aunt, Bellatrix, but after she was killed by a low life blood traitor, he only laughed. She hesitated and that's why she fell. He had no fear in killing and would do what ever it would take to build an army to bring down the ministry and rule the magical world. No one would stop him, especially no one with the name of Potter. He swore it, he would rather die by a muggle then a Potter.
((lol hope you like it, it's pretty bad though i know, ill continue it if you guys like it))
((here's another part i thought of))
A great feeling swept over him. He was living his life's dream. He had finally become an official Auror. It was truly a brilliant day for him, the minister of magic, Kingsley, had personally talked to him after he had become an Auror. But that wasn't anything new to him. He had known Kingsley for a while now and he enjoyed his company. A good sense of humor and a brilliant artillery of spells makes any wizard impressive, and the minister was no exception. Blaze was now walking down diagon alley, it was a few days before school would start for children but he wondered what was the need for Aurors' these days. With Voldemort long gone and the final death eaters locked away in Azkaban, the only other criminals were simple, low-life thieves. He had heard rumors of a relative of the Lestrange regaining some power but he was unheard of in these parts of England and was definitely no problem for the ministry. Yes, life was good. He was currently going to gringotts to retrieve some gold until suddenly he heard a crash behind him. Then some a screem and a yelling man. He turned to his surprise and saw too men with hooded capes and a fancy L design on their chests smashing into Burgain and Botts(im not sure how you spell it). He wasn't on duty but an Auror was always ready. He whipped out his wand and witnessed something sick. The taller of the two raised his wand and used the killing curse to murder the women at the front desk. "D@mn" thought Blaze and sprinted into the shop. "Stupefy" he though and the killer was smashed into the back wall unconscious. The second man turned and yelled "Crucio" but blaze rolled to the left, about to yell Stupefy but behind him he heard the words "Avada Kadavara". Time slowed down for him, his head was half turned and from the corner of his eye he could see an ill faced man with an evil grim pointing his wand at him. Green light smashing out from the tip. He would be dead in a millisecond and he knew it. Time regained speed and the light thundered upon him. He heard a voice murmur "defendo" and everything went black...
((lol, i couldn't really let you guys say anything on it before because i barely had put anything down, hope you like it so far, tell me if i should continue. I have some good ideas but theres no point in writing if no one is enjoying it, would love some response lol))
((OMG....another fan fiction writer....LOL...continue please....I love it so far ;D ))
((k))
but im gonna think about it this time lol. I'll post it back later
"what happened, i came here as soon as i heard that an Auror was hit by the killing curse, where is he?" demanded Kingsley
"calm down minister, he is ok, i will explain to you and the rest what happened as soon as he regains consciousness" said the nurse.
Pain, everywhere, for a few seconds that's all that Blaze could feel. Then he slowly opened his eyes and saw his friends and fellow aurors. "ugh, what happened" asked Blaze.
The nurse fled in "Excuse me all, but you must leave for now i must talk to the patient, privately"
"We're not goin blimey anywhere" said Ronald Weasely. "what ever you say to him, your gonna have to say to us"
"very well then" said the nurse, a little annoyed. She turned to Blaze and said "You were shot at by the killing curse but lucky for you a young man tried to deflect the curse with Defendo (i made this spell up, i think lol, it blocks of spells and curses)"
"WHAT!! was i hit??" exclaimed blaze.
"let me finish!" said the nurse. "As i was saying, you got very lucky. The defense spell knocked off the killing curse right as it hit you. You were hit by the intention of the curse but not the curse it self. We call it essence. As the curse did not fully reach your body but the essence of it did. Think of it as a super stunning spell. You will feel a lot of pain for the next few hours but drink your medicine and you can leave in a few days"
"wow, well thats a relief!" said Hermione Weasely, Ron's wife.
"Yes but almost 25 innocent lives were taken there, what are we going to do, who were they, we have no information at all" mumbled Dean Thomas, half confused.
"WHAT? 25 lives by those 3 men" said Blaze in shock.
"Please! This isn't the time for discussion, I propose the order get back together, obviously something is going on. Me and Ginny will set up a location and inform you all. I don't want to say much more, we should all be happy that no more were killed, let's go everyone. Get your rest Blaze" said Harry Potter. Blaze always admired him, a born leader he thought.
After a few hours he started to think. 25 lives just because he failed to stun merely 3 men. He felt sick and useless. Although he was a new Auror he was a fairly talented wizard. It was bad enough the lady at the front counter was killed but because of his lack to act 24 more had died. Above all that he had almost been killed. He promised that after he got back in good health he would practice his magic more and maybe learn some new tricks. He felt tired, sad and excited. "wow" he though the Order of the Phoenix, together again. His eyes felt droopy and he stumbled into a deep and long sleep.
((yea yea i know this part was a little boring, lol, but it was necessary. Don't worry the next one will be more actiony, lol. Hope you guys are liking it so far.
Quote from: LordBlaZe on August 7, 2007, 10:24:43 AM
She turned to Blaze and said "You were shot at by the killing curse but lucky for you a young man tried to deflect the curse with Defendo (i made this spell up, i think lol, it blocks of spells and curses)"
((isn't it difindo or defindo?))
((anyways....Blaze continue....don't think of me as rushing you but encouraging you to write more ;D ......LOL))
k lol thxs ill post more later
((okay....I'll be waiting....I'm taking place of those that aren't on these days....))
((haha lol, i see your posts more than any1s))
((I'm going to be gone when Sirius, Sarah, Devon, Ginny and other people decide to come on more often....because then you and Jessie would be lonely ;D ))
((umm... thank you :-\lol))
((Hey, you wanted me to comment--very interesting storyline! I wish I knew the nephew's name...
A bit of constructive criticism--try to separate your writing into visible, logical paragraphs (on here you have to skip a line between them), and don't use numbers (1,2,3,) but rather the full words for them unless they have three or more syllables. Don't be angry at me for saying that, but those are tips to help make your writing more readable and understandable for your, well, readers! Do post more...this is quite interesting...))
k thxs. I would write more proper but i dont have good writing skills, just good ideas
((Don't worry, all it takes is a little practice! :) ))
Very good job, considering your making it up as you go. I can never do that. Which reminds me...I have to work on mine.
Anyway, your writing skills will get alot better with more practice. It doesn't have to be perfect, but if you want people to respect you as a writer, I suggest you try.
It is really interesting.
((LOL...yeah Blaze....continue....we're all waiting....LOL ;D ))
VERY NICE!!!! me likey!!!! haha lol!!! i had to!! but im writing a fan fiction to!!! although its not as good as yours plz still read it!!! its called..... uhm...wel i forget what its called but someone should know!!!! if you know the name of my fan fiction... then tell these people!!!! thx!!! xoxo!!
srry guys i've been super busy. School hasn't even started but i play a lodda soccer lol ;D A gotta show stopper for you all so keep reading. I'll post later today or tomorrow... promise
oh I see....well you better post tomorrow....LOL
(here you go)
Blaze entered the room, Ron and Hermione were already seated. Many of the other members had also just arrived and many were new, like him. It was three months after he had been impacted by the killing curse's essense. He felt much better now and he had also touched up on his magic. He had visited Harry Potter for a while. Harry was Head of the Department of Auror's. He had taught him a few new tricks to be used at sticky situations and also Ginny had taught him an advanced Reducto spell and served him a mighty fine dinner. He loved the Potters family, they were so warm and friendly. After that he had ventured to Ron Weasely. They had become good friends now. He talked to Hermione Weasely, she was probably one of the most capable wizards he knew. She gave him several books on advanced spells and more. He had become friends with only Bill Weasely after he had graduated, meeting him just casually at a pub. Bill invited him to his house and he had then met all of the family. The friendship tightened as Blaze turned into an Auror and was in the same squad as Harry.
Soon everyone had arrived and was seated. The last to enter were Kingsley, the minister himself, and ofcourse Harry and Ginny Potter. They had elected Harry to be leader of the new Order of the Phoenix and this was their first meeting. Harry didn't waist a second and with a loud voice, started his speech. "welcome all, new members and old friends, you are all know members of the Order of the Phoenix. We all know why we are here so let me get straight to the point. The mysterious Lestrange family member had been confirmed to be William Lestrange, thanks to the ministry we know have some information on him. He was orphaned at birth but was taken in by some mysterious family member, for some reason he is now recruiting dark wizards to do his bidding. They have attacked once at diagon alley, once near hogsmead, twice at the ministry and a large attack at the residents of Godric's Hollow. They seemed to be a petty criminal organization but they have become more powerful and more deadly over the 3 months. Before anything else goes wrong i suggest a squadron of the Auror's round up all of our magical creature's allies. It would be wise to start off with the giants---
"Interesting point Harry but do you really believe that this Lestrange person has already recruited magical creatures, it is preposterous, not even Lord Voldemort could have done that so fast. Really Harry is this necessary," said Hermione.
"Yes it is, I would rather be safe then unsure. What is the harm in it anyways. We take hagrid and a some auror's to talk to the giants. Hopefully they will help us if we need it." replied Harry, really selling his idea.
"Then it's settled, we'll all go to the Giant's and round up as your sayin Harry" said Ron, excited as usual.
"No, i will take my squad of Auror's and Hagrid to talk to the giants, this isn't anything huge, we just want to make sure we have one of the strongest race's of magical creature's on our side" Harry looked stern and sure. Nothing would change his mind. Him, Blaze, Luna Lovegood, and three other Auror's would escort Rubeus Hagrid to convince the giants to fight for their side if they ever needed help. That was the end of the meeting...
(there are two parts to this chapter, i don't feel like typing more so ill post it in a few hours or so)
ooooh i like it!!!!! me likey!!!!lol!!! btw I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D keep writing!!!!
((I like it.....as I said to Jessie....no pressure.....LOL....just keep on writing the story....))
(k this is the end of this chapter, keep in mind im writing as i go lol, oh and some of the spells are made up, their aren't enough real spells to have an intense duel and stuff, Enjoy!)
Knock! Knock "Er who's there, ima busy at de moment" said a voice from behind the door.
"Hagrid, it's me, Harry" said Harry Potter standing with his squad of Auror's outside of Rubeus Hagrid's house.
"Oh My, is that you, blimey Harry didn't expect ta see ya here" said Hagrid as he opened the door. "come in come in"
The 6 ministry workers stepped into the small shack. "Hagrid we need some work from you, it's legal and safe, ofcourse" said Harry looking at his old friend.
"Anything harry, just name it" said Hagrid as he poured out some tea.
"Well we need you to talk to the giants for us, it's a complicated story, but if you could convince them to fight for us if we ever needed it, I would greatly help out the ministry," replied Harry.
"Ofcourse, i was going to visit my brother there anyways" agreed Hagrid. He would do anything for Harry after he had stopped Lord Voldemort. So after they all had some of Hagrid's tea they went outside and disapparated. They ended up near the town of the Giants. "well let me take ya all to the Giant King and other high authority members, i'm quite well known around here now" said Hagrid and led them down a path. Soon they were met with a large Giant. Blaze had never seen a giant and was baffled. They were huge, and strong. With them on their side they could destroy any enemy.
"Mgggrrr, Comee!!" mumbled the giant as he led the party to a large castle looking area. They walked into it and saw the so called Giant King. He was larger than the normal giant and seemed to speak quite good English for a giant.
"Why have ye walked over me lande?" said the King, his eyes bulging out.
"Honored King of Giants," started Harry, "we ask of you to consider becoming allies with the ministry of---
--"Enough" interrupted the King "Kill them ALL" said the King laughing horribly
"Grab hands" said Harry still calm. He tried to disapparate but it didn't work. A few giants were coming up to them with large clubs. Harry was confused, there was no way the giants could have performed the anti-apparate spell. The castle door burst open, a large giant yelled "SAVE POTTE" and he fully tackled one of the giants. Following him came a few more giants. Soon the giant's were going at each other with full force. Blaze pulled out his wand and acted fast. "Stupefy" he thought and the red light crashed into a giant. It didn't even budge the giant beast. He was about to try something else when about 10 men in dark cloaks appeared from the crowd of giants, all with fancy "L" shapes on their chests.
Green light was summoned from all of their wands, but the squad of Auror's had already cast their artillery of protego charms. Nothing was said, the fight started at once. Blaze and Jonathon (another Auror) dived out of the way. "Inferno Blazius" said Blaze and a giant fire ball crashed into one of the hooded men. Another two closed into them, it was a two on two. Green light flashed infront of Blaze twice. "Stupefy" he thought but the spell was blocked. Dark light soared upon Blaze, he ducked it and cried "Sectum Sempra" the first of the two cloacked men was cut on the shoulder, blood poured out like crazy. The second man waved his wand and a magical rope was tied around Blaze's neck, it got tighter and tighter. He couldn't move or breathe.
"I got you" cried Luna Lovegood, she removed the rope and stunned the man.
"Thanks Luna" said Blaze after some bloody coughs. He dived to the other side, "Incendio Maximus" said Blaze, a large fire appeared and caught the robe of a wizard. Everything was in rubble, giants falling everywhere, he saw the dark hooded man falling, they were no match for the Auror's. But they just kept coming almost like when one fell another re-appeared.
"Retreat, back to the village" cried Harry, all the Auror's started to run back casting defense spells on the way. The hooded men started to run at them. Blaze, being the last Auror to run murmured a phrase and thought deeply of his state. A large wall of fire was conjured between the auror's and the men, giving them a few more seconds to retreat. One of the larger giants came roaring, he jumped through wall of fire and sped up to the fleeing Auror's. Luna stepped forward, she casted a binding spell on the giant but the beast was too much. He broke free and smashed Luna out of the way.
"NOOO!!" yelled Harry, "Disapparate NOW, that's an order, i'll get Luna"
Blaze wasn't going anywhere without a hint of revenge, "Rapia Burvia" he cried and an almost net like fire wrapped around the giant. He roared in pain. The fire was dark magic and it would burn the giant until Blaze felt satisfied. He saw the other Auror's apparate with Hagrid and Harry running where Luna was, he closed his eyes, lifted the curse of the giant and apparated too...
*wow thats really good!!!!! keep going!!!!!!!
((OMG...what happened....LOL...Harry all of a sudden sounds like a Army general....retreat go back to the village....LOL....sorry keep on writing))
lol well hes head of the departement of Auror's...he has to be
yes yes I know....okay now hurry up with the story.....LOL ;D ;)
yeah get a move on!!!!(fyi im goin to Valleyfair from 3-11ish today!!)
((wow! You guys are good writers :D) I love the story so far.)
okay.....hey Blaze hurry up....LOL...joking ;)
k ill post some tommorow, srry i almost forgot about this
lol me to!!!
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D no offense or anything....... ;D ;D
((non taken lol, enjoy))
THUD!! Blaze landed into Harry Potter's house or in other words the Headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix. The other auror's were there and so was Hagrid. Everything was a blur, what had just happened??
"Thank god your ok, sit down on the chair, where Harry and Luna?" asked Jonathon. Blaze head was still spinning but he managed to reply.
"I..I dunno all i saw was Luna get hit hard and then Harry ran after her, we should go back shouldn't we, I mean we have to save them" said Blaze, his voice becoming more and more hurried.
"No, we have to sit and wait. We have been given an order and it would be unfair to put our lives at stake when Harry might just be fine and dandy" said Jonathon. He was Harry's second in command and was a brave fighter along side a strong leader. Just as soon as Jonathon finished talking and asking each Auror what they had seen and done Harry Potter apparated into the room. Blaze heart lifted but dropped again to see tears running down Harry's eyes. He wasn't crying but something had happened, something really really bad. Before Blaze could ask anything Jonathon was already firing questions.
"Harry, oh heavens sake your ok, what happened. Where's Luna?" Jonathon bellowed, his voice deep and firm.
"I don't know. I looked everywhere but I couldn't find her. One of those hooded men claimed to have killed her but I have a good feeling he was lying, I hope" the words came slowly and muttered out of Harry's mouth. He was sad but Blaze could feel that he did not lose hope that Luna was still alive. Soon Ginny was downstairs. When every one had confided with them their stories and what had happened they were sick.
"But she could still be alive can't she, she can still be ok. I just don't know how to break this to Neville" said Ginny who was crying silently. Luna Lovegood was in fact Neville Longbottom's fiancée. They had been dating for a while and decided to get married. Through Neville's life he had faced many hardship but this would completely crush him.
"I think we should tell him now, if we hold back or wait it would only be more unfair to him" said Harry and everyone agreed. Soon they were at Hogwarts and walking to the Greenhouse to talk to Neville. When they got closer to it they heard some conversation. It was Neville but someone else as well. Blaze's suddenly got excited at who it could be and barged right in to see Neville and Luna talking together.
"YOUR OK" cried Blaze and quickly hugged Luna.
"Why yes ofcourse I am, why ever would i not be" she said quietly.
After everyone was re-united with Luna the story was slowly revealed. Although they were supposed to go back to Harry's house Luna disaparated to the first thing that popped into her mind and that was with Neville. Everyone lightened up except Harry of course. Something was very wrong in the world again. He would have to arrange another Order meeting and also consult the Ministry about this, this new criminal had to be stopped before he could undermine one of the best Auror squads again. He instantly wrote a letter to Kingsley and of course to Ron and Hermione. Although no damage was done he had again put other peoples lives at risk for his own mistake at predicting the nephew or Bellatrix Lestrange.
wow thats good!!! and that was really long too!!!! bump!!!!!!!!!!
lol thxs the next part is really sick so keep readin
ok i will, wait do you mean like gory sick or really long sick??
no i mean like, lol lemme rephrase. The next part will be really good.
oooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh I understand now!!!!! Sorry my Brother talks like that all the time, sorry I should've realized!!