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Title: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on August 28, 2007, 06:14:53 AM
Dear Diary   

My name is Lucy Theo. I am an average height, weight, and looks female at the age of 14. Basically I am average. And invisible. But then again everyone is in my school, Hogwarts. That is unless your name is Ron, Hermione or Drum roll please, Harry. They are the most popular kids in school. Even kids who claim to hate them wish they were them. They are always in the newspapers, blogs or whatever else.
   Me and my best friend Claire are as tight as a fat kid in spandex. Well at least we were until her cousin cool and confident Meena transferred from Beauxbatons Academy.  Ever since then I've had to share Claire. I remembered the first time saw Meena. I about died. She had hair that was perfectly straight. Gorgeous highlights that made her already perfect face even better and complemented her skin tone. Her make up was perfect. She had a body guys make rap songs about and girls always envy. Her clothes were adorable and in fashion, girls looked to her for advice about what to wear. But, the most important thing she wore was her attitude. She walked through the halls like she owned them and if you got in her way, you'd die.
  I resent Meena. Its not because she totally ignores me or she's taking away my bestfriend and the only time she talks to me its because she needs a pencil or something. Its because she's EVERYTHING IM NOT. Enough about Meana. I mean Meena. This is my life. And my story. I am determind to make it a good one.
   Huggsss!!!!

              Lucy

~That's all for now. I hope you like it! More later or after i get a few comments. Critic me please!~
Luv, Isabelle :-*
Sorry i made some mistakes the first time but, I edited so it should be better. I just mixed up somenames. Claire is Lucys best friends and meenas the cousin
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: lexisweird5 on August 28, 2007, 06:19:05 AM
Oooh wright more SOON! It sounds really good!!! ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: fudge0604 on August 28, 2007, 09:13:56 PM
It sounds very good you have maked the start very good.
But try too make it alittel better. "Do your best work" as my teacher always say too me.
"I know you can do better!" And the same i am saying too you!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on August 29, 2007, 02:28:14 AM
very nice!!!! me likey!!!! lol keep it up!!!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on August 29, 2007, 02:32:05 AM
Thanks for the feedback i'lll write somemore. Well i've got it all written its just a matter of typing it on here. Im not doin much so i should be able to soon.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on August 29, 2007, 02:33:26 AM
ok bay bay!!!! lol sorry I had to get that out!!!! lol ill be waiting for your next portion. ;D ;D
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on August 29, 2007, 03:06:05 AM
ha ha I'm listening to that song right now.. ha ha! OK time for more

        Today during lunch Lucy was sitting there eating my potato chips when my owl Eiger swooped down and dropped a letter down right in front of her plate. Not another letter from my mom! Lucy often got letters from her mom. She opened it and here's what it said.
                 Dear Lucy
         I have been watching you from afar and I am totally in love with you! I want to meet you! Please meet me by the whomping willow (Not too close i wouldn't want you beautiful face bruised!) Tomarrow night right after evening meal. Please Join me!!
                 Love,
                       ?? ??

         Lucy sat there for a moment. Excitement brewed inside her.
        "LUC!!" Lucy snapped out of her daze. She looked up to see Claire grinning her normal happy, ear to ear, grin. "Whats up girl?" Lucy slide her letter under her plate. She didn't want to share this with Claire at this point. She wasn't sure if she would go and blab it all to Meena.
        "Well nothing really just wishing i didn't have charms with Hermione. I don't know why she's in our fifth year class anyway!! No matter how good i do, Professor Flitwick never says anything about it because, he's too busy complementing Hermione." Confessed Lucy.
        " OH, Luce goose. I know how you feel" Sympathized Claire. "at least were not in Gryfendor. That would be horrid considering they basically worship the Harry Hotties." That was Lucy and Claire's names for the trio that dominated the wizarding world
        " Speaking of Harry have you heard that Harry was telling Ron he had a huge crush on some one in our year!! But she has a boyfriend though. Real Bummer. That means i can't be me or you!! It may be Meena. She's had so many boyfriends this year!" Lucy grimminced hearing Meena name being used.  She blubbered out something to say how cool that would be. It was tough trying to act like she liked her Frenamy.

Well that's all I am gonna write for now!! Lemme know how you feel! Also what year was Cho in was she a year ahead?  OR the same year! Plz lemme know! kthx
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on August 29, 2007, 03:10:27 AM
very very good!!!! bumpy!! ;D ;D
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: Ginny Weasly on August 31, 2007, 06:10:28 AM
Cho was in the same year as Harry...

Very very good. I like it. The only thing I see is that you changed perspective halfway through the story.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 03:03:44 AM
I just noticed your right!! Omg. Thats embarrsing. I'll make sure the rest of the story is right
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 03:15:54 AM
As Claire rattled off more about Meena, Lucy fell under the spell of boredem and began to think about the letter. It could be a cruel joke. Or it could be some adorable boy. What if harry had been talking about her and Claire just got the story wrong. If it was Harry she'd have to turn him down. She simply had to. Woudn't she?  She couldn't possibly date Harry. He was famous and she toatly wasn't.
   "Uh Lucy don't you think you should uh, go to your class about now??" Lucy looked up and saw Harry. To her left Cho had appeared when she was off thinking. He sounded nerves. Mabye its because he likes me!! She thought happily. She wiped her sweaty palms on her robes. Grabbed her books and a said "Yeah, I suppose I woun't want a miss a minute of faboulous Flitwicks class." She though mabye she would get a laugh but, he just stared at Cho. She got up and left gleefuly. As she ran through the hallway her head swirled with happy thoughts.

-Sorry its sorta short and it took me so long to reply. School is starting so i've got all that jazz to worry about.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on September 1, 2007, 03:37:54 AM
oh no worries, I don't mind, school starts on tuesday for me, so it's gonna be just about impossible for me to get on!!! and good job by the way!!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 04:10:55 AM
School doesn't start until tuesday for me to but, i've had MAJOR tennis practice so we'll be ready!! Wohoo.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on September 1, 2007, 11:08:15 AM
Oohhhhh cool!!! well we have been having soccer practice, but it hasn't quite been major..... lolz anyway, I might not be on quite so much this weekend, because me and my mom are goin out of town...... but we might get wireless internet!!!!!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 10:58:00 PM
Yeaz i know. GB right? To see the GP.. haha that was fun. Well bring ur laptop and ur internet if you can.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on September 1, 2007, 11:00:40 PM
Don't worry, I already reserved one..... and it's the newer, faster one!!! so I will deffinetly go on while im in GB with th GP(grandparents)
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 11:02:12 PM
So wait. your bring yours or you getting a diffrent one. Im confused
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on September 1, 2007, 11:35:21 PM
well I specifically don't own one.... our family SHARES two, so I am taking the newer of the two.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 1, 2007, 11:59:19 PM
Yeah thats what i thoughtI finallllly have a second page. lol.  Well plz tell me if you like it or not. PLZ?


"Good after nooon 5thyears!! And hermonie" Proffeser Flitwick winked when he said hermonies name.
"Ughh" Groaned Lucy a little too loud in disgust. Why did he always pay attention to Hermonie so much YUCK YUCK YUCK
"Do you have something to say Ms. Theo?" Flitwick heard the groan. Whoops She thought.
"No, Sir. Sorry about that Proffester" Lucy murmered. A co uple of girls gave her a look and giggled softly. The rest of her lessons drudged by boringly. When classes had ended Lucy went up to the Hufflepuff commen room and sat down on a sofa which faced their stone fire place. Boys and gi rls started to filter in. NO sign of Claire. Luckily Meena was in ravencalw so they didn't have to spend much time together. Lucy noticed a new paper on the notice board. She got up and walked over to it. She coudn't belive what it had said.
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Sorry it so SHORT.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on September 8, 2007, 10:54:29 PM
Im not sure anyone has read this in a while but, has anyone noticed that since i started writing this story alot of other storys about guys have came up! For example Him and one by a girl name Lacy. copiers  :P im jk.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on September 9, 2007, 12:43:39 AM
well Him is based on reality.... or what I want in reality....well the beginning is... but the ending totally is not!!!!

BUMPY!!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: fudge0604 on September 10, 2007, 02:34:31 AM
BUMP!

good job Izzie!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on December 9, 2007, 11:58:40 AM
Come on!!! I really want to read more of this!!!! Please write more!!
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life.
Post by: uglycupcakes on April 14, 2008, 03:15:09 AM
Hogworts Students-
Tomarrow after evening meal everyone
will met in the Great Hall for an annoucement.
Teachers please give lite homework for the
meeting shall go late.
  -Headmaster
NO! thought lucy. My meeting with whoever would have to be poseponed and what  if he didn't go and then snuck to the whomping willow and thought she didn't show! Could she wait that long? Why coudn't he just be a normal boy and come out and dtell her! Did he think that this was romantic or something because it totally was not even close! What was--
"Hey there Lucy!" Ben walked in.
"Ben! You startled me!"
"Sorry bout' that!"
Ben was Lucy friend since they were in diapers. They were even closer than her and clarie were. Ben was like her brother. THere parents were friends so they often vacationed together.
"So whatcha read in?" He asked. He was inquering about the notice.
"OH just a nmeeting tomarrow night. Apparently an excidting annoucement!" Lucy put on a faux smile to mask her disappoiment.
Title: Re: Lucy Theo's life story. Or atleast what she wants you to know about her life
Post by: dobby888 on April 27, 2008, 05:05:57 AM
ooooooooo..... me likey!! BUMPSICKLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!