Lilly walked down the hall. She could see Matt standing by his locker. I wish me liked me... It was the second day of school and she hoping to chage things this year. She had allways been really shy but this year she was going to be more outgoing. She looked at the clock. I better hurry so Im not late. She raced to band.
As as she got there she sat down by her friend, Molly. "Hey." She said. Molly replied saying something about math but she wasnt paying any attention. As soon as she saw Matt walk in she zoned out. Then he looked over at her and smiled. "LILLY? Hello?" Molly yelled. "Oh my gosh... do you still like him?" Lilly had liked him for two years now but never got brave enough to ask him out. Why would he want to go out with me? Hes perfect...
wow its really good... :P ;D ;)
lol is this real life or in the wizarding world?
real life at the moment, shes gets invited to go to school in hogwarts ;D
pRetY goOd so Far. KeeP iT uP gUrL! I aM exciTed to sEe hOw it turNs ouT.! ;DIsabelle
yeah really good, Ilikeit!!!lolz BUMPY!!!! ;D ;D ;D
(a two monthes later)
"I wonder why he moved all the sudden." Lilly said, depressed. Matt had moved about a month ago. No one knew where he went... or why. "Maybe his dad got moved in work." Molly said, sad for her friend. "Well I better get home... Im going to be an hour late as it is. You could call me later." Lacy nodded, knowing how Mollys mom was. "Bye." She said softly.
Lacy sat in the living room watching TV. She noticed and envolope on the coffee table.
What could this be? I never get any mail. She ripped the evelope open and pulled out a short letter.
Dear Miss Lilly Peterson,
You have been formally invited to join Hogwarts school.
Suddenly she heard a knock on the door. She was afraid because she was home alone. She slowly open the door to reveal a huge man. "Hello Miss Peterson. Im Hagrid." He told her about the many wonder of Hogwarts. She thought she would be horribly afriad of this man but she was at ease. "So Im a... Witch?" She asked, confused.
Nice Ilike it!!!! I'm just gonnagues... but actually nevermind, it might spoil it..... bumpy!!
Good :]]
Lilly could barely sleep that night.
So I am going to go to... Hogwarts? Being shy she was afriad she wouldnt make friends.
And what about Molly? Who will she hang out with? What will I tell her? Her mind was clouded with so many thoughts that she could not concentrate. She walked over to her computer and started sending Molly an email.
Dear Molly,
I hate to be this way but I am moving. I am very sorry but I cannot tell you why.
I will try to call you as often tomarrow. Tell everyone that I will miss them.
Please don't be sad, Lilly
oh sad!!!! well bumpy!!!!
ooh there you just replayed one of my dreams!!!
BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!
Wow. I dont' think thats gonna go over well with molly. if my bff said that i would go over there and smack her and say "WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG IWTH YOU GURRL?? YOU KNOWYOU CAN TELL ME ANYTHING!!!"
(lol srry i havent been able to write lately... maintenance work on my internet...)
Lilly walked into the Great Hall. Wow. This place is amazing. "Miss Lilly Peterson. Come here." A voice boomed. She walked up to the front of the room. She sat down as the man pointed to a chair. He place a hat on her head. "Grifindor!" Lilly jumped. A talking hat?/i] She walked over to the table which appreared to be Grifindors. She stoped as she saw a familier face.
"Hey Lilly." Matt said.
*gasp* NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dun dun dun!!!! what is she gonna say!?
Lilly smiled. "Hey Matt." She managed to say. He smiled back. "You can sit over here next to me." She blushed. "Okay." She sat down beside him as he began to talk. "I wished I could have told you where I was going but I was afraid you would think I was crazy or something like that."
Lilly walked into the Grifindor common room. It had been a long day. She noticed Matt sitting by himself so she walked over and sat beside him. "Hey." She said. "Hey sorry to leave you but Im really tired." Lilly nodded and decide she would go to sleep also. She walked to her bed and layed down. She felt something on her pillow, a note.
Lilly,
Meet me at the lake tomarrow at noon.
Matt
OOOH
BUMP!
is this your first FF ?
Yeah cuz if it is it's really good and suspenceful!!!! lolz anyways BUMPY!!!!
great job :))
((yeah its my first one. :P ) next day)
What could he want... its not like he likes me. Lilly could hardly concentrate in her classes. All she could think about was Matt. Then the bell rang and she hurred out the door. She was sick to her stomach with worry. What if I say somthing stupid? Do I look fine? She jumped around when she felt a tap on her shoulder. "Lilly what I wanted to ask you was... um... Will you go with me to the fall dance?"
BBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMPPPP!
Lilly didnt know what to say. "Id love to go to the dance with you." She smiled. "Great! Ill see you at the dance tomarrow!" Matt ran off to his next class. LIlly sat down on a rock, dazed. Then she looked into the water. What am I going to wear? I dont have ANYTHING! She ran off to class, planing to go to hogsmade afterwards. Hopefully Im not late!
As Lilly walked down the streets of Hogsmade looking in all the shops. Sunddenly she stoped when she saw a beautiful dress in the window. Thats it! Its perfect! She ran inside and tried it on. It was a black dress, strapless, and long enough to cover her ankles. It had some sort of sparkle to it. It fit her like it was made for her. She twirled in front of the mirror. I HAVE to buy it. She trew back on her t-shirt and jeans and ran up to the cashiers counter. "That will be $300." She said. Lilly handed over her credit card and then ran out of the store.
Bump!!!!!!!!
(that night.)
Lilly sat on the end of her bed, looking at the picture she had kept of her and Molly. It made her sad that her best friend was so far away.
I should write her an email.Dear Molly,
Its Lilly agian. I have so much to tell you. I am going to a school called Hogwarts... and guess what?
Matts here. He asked me to the dance. There is so much I want to tell you but theres so much i cant!
I really miss you and wish we could hang out agian sometime soon.
Your Best Friend (hopefully), Lilly
Good job lacy! Keep it up!
Very good job!
Bump!
yeah like amazing good!!!
Post again please!
Lilly crawed into bed when she heard a beep from her computer.
Its Molly!!! She raced over to her laptop.
Dear Lilly,
You will allways be my best friend! I wish you could tell me more but its just one of those things.
Good luck with Matt and have fun at the dance. I really miss you and hope we will see eachother agian.
Your best friend, Molly
Lilly could finally fall asleap.
BUMPY!!!! but make the next one longer please!!!
(srry.)(next morning...)
Lilly had oversleeped. It was noon allready! I have to hurry the dance is in four hours and i still have to eat lunch! She decided to ask one of the girls if they could get her a lunch too. She walked over to her mirror and started to apply her makeup...
Lilly looked beautiful. Her makeup was perfect and her hair looked as if a professional had done it. Her dress completed the look. She grabbed her matching purse and made her way too the dance.
Steamers covered the walls. Balloons were scattered across the floor. The light were low and the music was loud. She looked around and finnally found. Matt. "Hey." She yelled over the music. "Hey." Matt yelled back. "Lets dance." They seemed to have danced for hours. "Ive had a great time, Matt." He smiled back. Suddenly she heard thunder, the power went out. "Lets go outside and excape this chasos." He said as students ran around frantically. They rushed outside.
They had been sitting around for a while out in the rain. She couldnt keep it in much longer, she had to tell him how long she has liked him. She was about to talk when he interupted. "Lilly I want to ask you some thing... will you be my girlfriend?"
ooohh!!!!! but then if you want to continue the story for a long time, make him be like a total jerk in reality or something.
(srry that its short)
"Of course!" Lilly exclaimed. "Lets go for a walk around the lake." As they started to walked Lilly began to talk again. "Its really beautiful out here... even when its raining..." She paused for a second. "You dont know how long I have liked you." She looked into his eyes and smiled. He took and tucked her hair behind one of her ears. "No you dont know how long I haved liked you." He said as he leaned in and kissed her. She put her arms around his neck and kissed him back. She had never been so happy...
BUMP!
Me likey likey !
really good, but it would be really entertaining if she goes out with him, but hes a real jerk
May i ask how heas a jerk jess?
like she finally gets to go out with him and then she realizes, that she had only seen what he looked like, and not his personality, and like that he just did things that someone made for her wouldn't do, but she tells herself, listen, this guy is soooo hott, I'll just stick it out, he'll come around and then he wont and she'll finally just break up with him or something
That was confusing ;D
That gave me a whole new look on this story...
But he hasn't proven he's a butthole yet!!
But in the next couple of posts it may begin to stick out
We will see.
Just wait and see........ Glances at watch..... clears throat and glances at watch....
Hint hint lacy!!
Lacy! We want more! We want more! We want some jerkyboyfriends!lol...
(Ok srry writers block for a while... next part based on true story.)(next night)
"GO GRIFFENDOR!" Lilly screamed. She decided to walk around and talk to her friends. "and find Matt." She muttered. She could admit it... she was obsessed. She walked around looking for him, when she finnally spotted him... with his arm draped over Erica's shoulder. He looked over at her and then looked away.
lolz!!!!!! Yeah Lacy come on!!!!!! PRESURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lolz!!!!
Yeah! BUMPY!
I thought he liked me! She looked over at the girl and noticed something... She seems really familier. Then it stuck her. The girl who called herself Lillys best friend, was under Matts arm.
(short and sweet lol cant think of more to write... post more later)
BUMP!
Nice Lacy!
Then Matt tilted up her chin and kissed her. "Molly?" Lilly muttered ander her breath. She walked over to him. "Matt?" She said, her voice shaky. "Yeah?" He said, his expression blank. "Oh i see." He said taking his arm off Mollys shoulder. How could I have been so stupid? How could I have mistaken Erica for Molly? "Molly can I talk to you?" She said, pulling her ex- best friend away. "How could you? I thought you were my best friend?" Mollly looked at her anger in her eyes. "I was." She turned around and walked to her new love. Lilly couldnt hold it any longer. She ran off towards the forest, to cry.
Dam dam daaa!
lol...
BBUUMMP!
i loved it!
omg Molly is awesome!
WOW!!!!!
BUMPYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!
yes yes yes!!!! They're BOTH jerks!!!!! muahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ouch. But as a writer myself you would think that they would go o9ut longer so that it would be alot harsher on her than just a 1 dance. Like idk. but other wise gj
this is really good.