Albus was watching the news with his dad and his mother.
The anchorman was an old wizard. He changed the case and said:
" There has been an big fire at Ollivanders wand shop. The Ministry have searched
the whole place with magic detectors. It seemes that the ministry don't know what
maked the fire. If it had been a wand there would have been magic tracks.
The ministry doesn't want too let more information go too the press before they are
more sertain what happened"
"What? A fire in Ollivanders? Who would do such a thing?" Albus said and looked at his parents.
"And how cannot the ministry find out how the fire were set on?".
" There are soo much things like that today Albus... You should think that a new dark wizard were
approching!" Harry said too Albus.
"Yes Albus. But the part that makes me feel uncomfortable is that the ministry don't find any clues...." Ginny said.
The ancorman changed the case and Harry turned off the TV.
" Beadtime Albus! it is 10 a clock!" Ginny said.
"ooh must i go now? it is the last day of holidays. PLEASE?" Albus said begging
" No Albus . Go too bed now...." Harry said.
Albus stunned and got upstairs. He went into the bathroom brushed his teeth and took his pyjamas on. He got into bed and fell asleep in a second. He had an terrible dream that night.
He dreamed that he had appered in a dark and endless room. Then a man came in.
He had a little beard on his chin. He lifted his hands and waved them against Albus.
Suddenly fire came out of them. The fire attacked Albus, and he burned up.
Albus was awekened by his mother and father standing over him trying too wake him up.
"What is it Albus?" Ginny said and looked caring at Albus.
Albus told them all that happened. When he was finished he said:
"What is it?"
"It is nothing but a little nightmare Albus.. Go back too sleep now you have a big day tommorow."
Harry said.
Albus laid down trying too sleep again. He was lying there in half an hour before he started
sleeping again.
wow its really good... wonder who caused the fire... ??? loz
bump
Thank you Lacy!
You will find out the mysteries later... oooh....
(lol...)
I found your FF! I like it so far! GJ albus
Here for some more! Hope you will enjoy it!(please make me some comments!)
Albus was now standing in 9 ¾. He was exited too finally start on Hogwarts.
He hugged his mother and his father and went into the train. He got into the train and looked for a place too sit. Suddenly he saw a blonde girl. She looked at him and then she said
« Wanna come sit with us?».
«Sure!» Albus said. He walked down the corridor and in the door.
Inside there was a girl with black long hair and some black-brownish eyes.
There was a boy with dark brown hair and hazel eyes.
And a girl who was skinny and was wearing a little kind of retro clothes.
She had blue eyes and a dirty blonde hair ((Writing of what is in the bio's....))
«Hi! My name is Isabelle Patch but you can call me Izzie! Whats your name?» The girl with dirty blonde hair said.
«Hi! Im Albus Severus Potter...» Albus said a little bit shy.
«What is the rest of your names?» He said.
«I'm Blaze. I'm in Gryffindor... everyone in this room is..» Blaze said.
«Hi! I'm Sky! I've never seen you before... Are you new?» Sky said.
« Yes i'm new....» Albus said.
The girl who let Albus in said.
« I'm Jessie!» She said and looked at him.
Albus haden't notice but the train had allready started. He sat down in a empty seat and laid his luggage on the luggage ledge. « What grade are you all in?» Albus asked.
«I'm in 5th...!» Sky said.
«I'm also in 5th..» Blaze said.
«I'm in first grade just like you!» Jessie said.
«I'm in 4th...» Isabelle said.
A guy with pale face and blonde hair entered with a girl with brown hair and blue piercing eyes.
«I'm in fifth grade!» The boy said with a little childish voice.
The girl looked at him and giggled.
«What are you laughing at?» Jessie said.
«Nothing.» The girl said.
«Well well... what do we have here? A whole bunch of looser's? Coming from Gryffindor i think?»
The boy said cruely. « Lets get outta here Kilynn....» He said.
He walked first out of the door. The girl looked at them and giggled loud.
Then she said.
«Coming Draco.....» She walked out the door.
Blaze whipped his wand out and used it too close the door.
«Who was that?» Albus asked curiusly.
«That was Draco Malfoy and some other kid that is admiring him. I have never seen her before though... He is a dirtbag....» Blaze said.
And now i'm gonna have a little break. Don't worry! The rest would soon be here!
I wanna try too finish writing it....
(ill be in it too!!!) its really good! keep it up!
Thank you!
lol nicely done
It took a while too write it.... i haft too go through every profile.....
Cool.I can't wait till the next one.Don't forget me.(Lily Potter)
Yeah!
Oh my gosh Albus I am so sorry I didn't find this earlier!!! You told me to look for it like the instant that you made it, but I never did!!!! I am so so so sorry!!!!!
I absolutley love it!!!!! Thanks for putting me in there by the way!!! So I think I know whats gonna happen soon but it's hard to tell because people always put in strange plot twists!!!!
Anyways...
BUMPY!!!!
;D ;D ;D
I sound like Draco's poodle.
I love it
Keep writing
Very impressive!
Wohoo. Im in it. go me.
Very good job Albus. I like it.
Bump.
Thank you every one!
The rest is soon to come!
YAY! i have finally writed some more! Hope you like it!
And here you'l have a bit from Albus's diary.....((Gonna take way too long too write all that in real...))
1.September.
It has been a great day today.
I have finally made it too Hogwarts. It was great this evening!
When we came here we was escorted by Hagrid, the game keeper.
He took us too the lake. There was many boats. We took the boats over the lake, and into a cave.
There was professor Mcgonnal. She explained how Hogwarts were and some of what they were gonna do next. I thought that she looked VERY strict. We walked into the great hall.
It was HUGE! We walked down the hall. There it was a old looking hat. It started too sing abaut Hogwarts being made and that when bad times come even enemies must stand together.
When suddenly proffesor Mcgonnal had a parchament in her hand. She said all the names and for each name the hat selected what house too be in. When it was my turn I nervously sat down at the chair and put the hat on. It started too talk in my head. It said « Well well..... Albus Severus Potter you are as hard too select as your father.» I thought too myself all the time: NOT SLYTHERIN NOT SLYTHERIN! And then the hat answered « Well if you like it soo....» Then the hat bellowed out : GRYFFINDOR!!!!! I took the hat off and went for the Gryffindor table.
After a while Dumbledore said some words. He said some rules and that the forest is highly forbidden for anyone. Then lots of food suddenly just appered right in front of me.....
It was a delicius meal. I have never tasted something good as that. When we got too our dormitory I
only lay on my bed and felt these good beds.
Albus was done writing. He laid his diary down at his night table and felt a sleep in a second.
me likey
Thanka you!
Am i in this anymore?
just asking, it's ok if im not
sure!
BUMPITY BUMP BUMP........................BUMP BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm writing some now....... hope youl like the next part!
ok I'll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
....umm Albus forgot about me...hello...anyone...LOL....hehe
GREAT STORY ALBUS!! ;D hurry and continue...writer's block....
Yeah.... I hate that...
i is great !!! can i be in it???
oh yeah I should be in it as well if you didn't get my hint in my previous post ;)
i should try..
Albus was walking in the great hall with Jessie. They had just had their first potions class and were
angry at Snape. He had been torturing Albus with all this hard qustions. Now they was gonna go too the library too study a bit.
«What homework should we start with?» Asked Albus.
« Snape's i think.... I wanna get rid of his because he gave incredible much too do!»
Jessie said angrily.
Albus opened the door into the library. He and Jessie walked in there. There was no one sitting at the tables.
«Where should we sit?» Albus asked Jessie.
«Here!» Jessie said and sat down by the nearest table.
Albus also sat down. They got their homeworks up on the table and started too work.
An hour later Jessie said.
«Whoops! I have too go! Girl club!» She said.
«Okay!» Albus said. Then he thought too himself: What should i do now then?
Like an answer of his thought a heavy book fell down from a bookshelf.
Albus got up from his chair and walked down too the book. He took it in his arms.
The title was :Strong old magic!
He opened it. In the first page it said:Each person is connected too an element.
When you find that out you can practice your element and gain power in it.
Albus closed the book shocked. He put it in his bag and went too the common room.
Come on! READ IT SOMEONE!
lol BUMP! wright more please
I don't know if i wanna write some more if you are the only one that have read it in a while!
im still not in it tho.
Nobodys gonna read if you don't write
yeah...
Albus was sitting in the common room. He was sitting and reading the book.
He was now in the second chapter: What is your element?.
He had read half of the chapter and was very sure that his element was Ice and cold.
But then he suddenly came up with a thought:Maybe if Ollivanders shop were taken on fire on that way? But then he read : Fire is an very hard element too control. Just some can control it but none has the complete control of an element.
Then he was done with that chapter. He turned the page and in a big title it said: Some easy practises!
Think of the element of yours and feel it into you. Take all your focus on the thing you are gonna
do. DO NOT LOOK AT ANYTHING ELSE UNNTILL THE LATER CHAPTERS WHEN INSTRUCTED!
He closed the book and went out from the common room going through the portrait of the fat lady.
He went too a abandoned class room. He got himself some water in a bucket and thought: Here goes nothing.... He focused all his power and strenght on the bucket with water. He thought of that the water froze and in his mind he made his illusion clear. He collected all his frost and sent it against the bucket. Nothing happened. He stuck his finger into the bucket. He felt that the water was ice cold. He smiled too himself.
Suddenly the door opened and one that he had just learned the name of; Kilynn came into the room.
Next too her was Vanessa standing.
« What the heck are you doing here?» Kilynn asked rude.
« None of your buisness!» Albus said too her in the same tone.
Vanessa looked like she had nothing too do with it and whispered too Kilynn: «Lets go!»
« No way!» Kilynn whispered back.
Albus just walked out of the room. He closed the door behind him and walked down the corridor.
When he turned the corner he walked right into Cho. He was so suprised that he gave from himself a little scream.
« Sorry!» Albus said when he finally have got what has happened.
« Nothing Albus....» Cho answered.
Albus suddenly noticed that his book was lying on the floor. He grabbed it and took it under his arm.
« What is that?» Cho asked curiously.
« Nothing... Just an old book....» Albus said slowly.
He got on his feet and started too run against the common room before Cho has gotten a thng abaut anything..... ((Lolz.....))
« Wait Albus!» She shouted after some seconds but it was too late. Albus was long gone.
yeah im in it. Thank You Albus!
Good JoB!!!!
~Kilynn~
Bump, good job. Keep it up
OK, I like reading it, but couldn't you use quotation marks (" ") around dialogue? It makes it alot easier to read. And anything written needs quotation marks or italicized.
I'm writing in open office.... There it isen't quotation marks....
Um, don't you use a keyboard? They keyboard comes equiped with quotation marks and any program that doesn't have them is too old to use. Notepad (a program that come with every computer) uses them even.
hehe..... In the computer world i'm not that experienced.....
I'm sucha nerd... :P
I think geek is the word..... lol...... ;)
Here is a bit more. I have nearly the rest here done. The next last part!
ENJOY!
Albus got better and better. In two moths he had finished the book.
But more and more mysterious fires started. Albus had started too count them and watch where they were started. It started in the ollivanders shop. Went north to a witch's house and went fourther and fourther north. One day he got to know that a fire had been down in Hogsmead.
I think Hogwarts is gonna be the next of the fires.... He thought quietly too himself one day.
REAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
read and make some commentaries (( I know the Spelling that i made wrong there....))
((the one time im it i sound like a total brat!!!! and are me and blaze together in this???))
Isen't it Kilynn i make look like a brat? You are the one that don't wanna make some trouble and yes i can make you and Blaze together in this....... More writing too me....Thank you Vanessa!
lol....
((lol good point... and thank you!))
write more!!!
Okay! But soon. I have some awsome posting with you and Natalie now and that is not often for me!
nice BUMP UP write more lol
O thanx guys!
Bump, write more!
Albus was walking around in the corridors. He thought too himself: Think i am gonna go back now. He turned next too a corner and in an secret passage. as he went in he suddenly saw Vanessa and Blaze standing there kissing.
They just suddenly looked at him.
" Woops!" He said and turned around.
" No wait Al...." Blaze said.
But Albus coulden't hear him because he was long gone again.((lolzar....))
As Albus was walking he saw out of the window. Then he suddenly saw that
the forest were on...... FIRE!
He got panic. Then he thought too himself:Calm down...Go and use your ice magic at the flames.
He ran down the stairs and out the great hall. He ran out and started running for real. When he reached the forest he suddenly saw a guy in front of him.
The guy raised his wand and said:
" Stupefy!"
Albus got down on the forest ground.
Then he was long gone this time also.((lolzar..... ;D))
The only thing he could feel were that he was been levitating away.
He forced himself too raise up and look into the forest. He was long into it.
Then he realized that the fire had been an illusion used on him too run against the forest. He tryed too look at his kidnapper but he could not do it.
He suddenly felt tired. Then he got unconscious.
Try to work on your grammer a bit. Some of the sentences are wierd. But I understand it, so it's all good. Haha.
Keep going!
Well i am an eleven years old norwegian boy...
We have not had soo much Grammar yet... We started with the grammar last year and then i nearly diden't got anything! (( Is that an proper excuse?))
i started dieing of laugher about the me and blaze part lol
Quote from: fudge0604 on November 7, 2007, 10:08:15 PM
Well i am an eleven years old norwegian boy...
We have not had soo much Grammar yet... We started with the grammar last year and then i nearly diden't got anything! (( Is that an proper excuse?))
Don't give me excuses, boy!
Lolz, I'm just joking.
Seriously, though, I love reading the story, you have some great ideas. The grammer thing is just to help me, a reader, understand some things better.
Hehe.....
i will be in it too if you want me to be in it
Sorry Lauren...... I am at the last part now soon.....
Albus got awake. He had ropes all over him.
He had an bad headace. He got panic.
Where was he? What was gonna hapenn with him now?
Calm down.... Take a mind scan in the area! A little voice in his head said.
He took a scan in the area. He did feel one mind here. It was 3 metres away from him. When he tryed too silently break into it he heard a voice.
" Don't you even try!" It said.
" Who are you?" Albus asked quickly.
" I am Chad Grindelwald..... " He said.
Albus's mouth fall down.
" What do you want with me?" He asked frightened.
" Well......." He said in an evil way.
" You will find out.....!"
Albus got panic. His cold was getting stronger and stronger.
As he had read in the book.
Ice can also be the despair element. Sometimes it feeds from despair and panic
He could not do a thing.
He just felt that he went colder and colder.
" ohhh.... Are you trying too do some ice tricks? You should know that that does not work on me!" Chad said.
Albus just got panic. His whole body now was just filled of it.
He tryed everything but his mind could not calm him down.
Now he started too send out frost waves.
he started too cry a bit.
The tears froze.
" Oh I am so afraid of a little 11 years old boy that can some ice tricks!"
Chad said evily.
That were the bit for Albus. The ropes cracked of cold.
He got on his feet. He was glowing blue.
All his cold realesed.
All he saw was Chad's big open mouth.
Suddenly 2 metres from Chad some big ice was growing fast.
Chad started too channel fire against the ice.
Some melted but he did not stop much of it.
When he destroyed some it build up again fast.
The ice was now 3 metres high and were 1 metres from Chad.
Suddenly the ice just jumped ahead and trapped him.
The glow of Albus stopped as Chad got stuck.
All of him was inside the ice.
Albus now saw Chad good.
He had black long hair. He was really skinny.
Like he not had eaten on weeks.
Albus could not get anything straight any longer.
he fall down on the groun and losed consiousness.
Albus waked up 5 hours later.
He was lying in the school sick room.
The bed he was lying in was good and cold.
He opened his eyes.
" Albus!" He heard Jessie say. Her voice was terrified.
He had never heard her voice like that before.
" Is he awake?" He heard Ginny's voice say.
" What happened...?" Albus asked slowly.
" Well.... We don't know.... Could you tell us?" Ginny said calmly.
Albus started too tell. When he was finished Jessie and Ginny looked at him with big eyes.
" It looks like you have been through a lot Albus. But how did you feel when your element react like that? i have never heard of something like that....."
Ginny said in her normal tone.
" I felt stronge like i could do anything i wanted too. " He said.
" Okay......" Ginny said.
Jessie was just sitting next too him.
" Are you okay now...?" She asked him.
" I think so....." He said too her.
" We have just found one change in you Albus....." Jessie said slowly.
She was staring at him with consern in her eyes.
" Your body temparature has lowered with 10 degrees and it looks like you function like normal..... I have also notice something Albus...." Ginny said.
" look here...." Jessie said and pulled out a mirror out from her pocket.
Albus looked into it. Now he saw a whole different Albus.
His face had gotten a blueish kinda look. Whole of him had.
" What the .........?" Albus said.
" I have just heard abaut something like that before...." Ginny said slowly.
Then madame Pomfrey came inn.
" Hush! He need too get some rest! Out ! OUT!" She nearly screamed.
Jessie and Ginny got up from their chairs.
They walked out. Then madame Pomfrey got into her office getting something.
" Here is some dreamless sleeping potion " She said when she came in again.
He got a glass and he swallowed it in seconds.
Then he got more and more relaxed and then he got into sleeping.
(( T his was the last part! And one more thing! From now on in Rp's my apperanceis like the way i described it.....))
COOL!!!!!!!
But, wait, does that mean that your Fan Fiction is over!?
no... I did write wrong. I must have a closing part. But i'm gonna write some more element story's!
Albus woke up.
He diden't remember anything. he was just lying there.
Then all of it came back.
Jessie were sitting nex to him holding his hand.
" Are you okay Albus?" she said.
" I think so... What happened to Chad?" he asked.
" Well after you falled asleep Ginny went out in the forest taking hand of him. Now he is in the same prison as his grandfather was in. "
" Oh that were good to hear..." Albus said.
Madame Pomfrey come in and said
" You are ready to go now!"
Albus dressed behind a board.
Then he and Jessie went out of the sick room.
END OF STORY! DADADADADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Could you guys read this? This is a bit important for my next story!
MARVELOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. I absolutley love it
*Thanka you thanka you...* Bows in several directions.