((since it appears that fudge isnt going to continue his i am also going to make a story based on everyones charecters. PM me if you want to be in the story. thax, vanessa))
((I'm gonna contiune my! I have writing block! (and i am BUSY!) ))
((okay well i think my story will still be based upon everyones characters if that is okay with you))
(okay and it isent just based on everyones characters! What i have writed for now is the day when Albus got too Hogwarts. It is a story also as you can see in the first reply....)
((okay well... do you want to be in my story?))
((okay.....))
Vanessa walked into Hogwarts. Student walked from class to class and teachers looked around, watching for trouble. She hadent ever seem such a busy place. She looked down at her paper, her first class was potiens. She walked across the hallway, acidently bumping into someone. "Im so sorry." She said tuning around. The boy looked up at her and smiled. "It okay. You must be new here. Im Albus Potter." Vanessa looked at him in awe. Hes the son of Harry Potter. "Im Vanessa." She looked back down at her schedule. "Can you tell me where poteins class is?" Albus nodded and pointed to a small hallway. "Walk down to the end of that hallway. You should see a door that says potions on it." Vanessa smiled. "Thanks. I guess I better go." She gave Albus a quick wave goodbye and ran off to her first class, hoping she wouldnt be late.
YAY! im in something! I'm the happiest boy on earth! *Sarcastic*
((lol))
Albus pulled a funny one! HAHAHA!
Vanessa walked into the room. "Miss Pakinson, wecome to potions. Im you teacher, Professer Snape." Snape sneered. Vanessa sat down at the only open seat, next to a girl with brown hair. "Im Kilynn." She said with a smirk. "Oh and just to tell you now, Dracos mine!" Vanessa laughed. "I dont even know who he is! Anyways, Im Vanessa." She said, starting to mix potions, hoping to get it right. "Ill ba right back." Snape said, standing up. "Dont be messing around." Kilynn rolled her eyes. "So what house are you in?" Vanessa asked curiously. "Slytherin of course. Im not a fithy mud blood!" Vanessa smiled. "Im a Slytherin t..." She stopped talking as she heard the door open and Snape walk back in. "Hopefully you are all done with your asignment." He said, walking around to inspect the potions everyone had made.
Vanessa walked out of the door and hoped she could find her way to the great hall for lunch. She turned towards Kilynn. "Can you show me the way to the great hall?" Killynn nodded. "Follow me." She looked at the great hall in awe. Its huge. Look at all the students. A blonde girl walked up to her. "Hey you must be new! Im Jessie!" Vanessa smiled at her bubbly personallity. Kilynn coughed, *Mudblood*. Vanessa ignored her. "Im Vanessa! Im a transfer student." Jessie smiled. "Do you want to sit with me and my friends?" Vanessa nodded and walked over to her table.
hey r u in this class;]she said
((uhh this is a story not a RP lol))
Whenever someone says something, start a new paragraph, it's much easier to read then.
Very good story. I like it.
Vanessa saw a girl toward the end who wasnt wearing a robe. She still looks old enough to be going to school... The girl gives her a smile and returns to eating. Then she sees Kilynn walking around with another girl.
"Purebloods are the only thing that should be at Hogwarts. I mean what is the use of teaching mudbloods, they are just a waste." Kilynn sneers. The girl beside her nods. They both walk over to a table, sitting down beside a boy with blonde hair.
"Hey Kilynn... and Kristin." The boy said, smilling at Kilynn. "So did you know that there is a new Slytherin? I wonder why she isnt over here yet. I mean all Slytherins sit over here." He smirked, looking over at Jessie and her friends. "Wha!?!? Why is she sitting with those mudbloods!"
Vanessa turned around, hearing his comment. "What is the problem?" She asked, not knowing the gap between Slytherins and all the other houses. Kilynn rolled her eyes.
"Forget about her! If she wants to ruin the Slytherin tradition, she can!" Kristin said, looking at Kilynn for an aproving look. Kilynn gave her a just shut up look and continues eating.
Awsome job, keep it up.
BUMP VANESSA!
nicely done, put me in this lol
relly nice
Vanessa rolled her eyes at Kristin.
Why does everyone have to live based on their house?!?!"Dont worry they are allways like that." Said a boy sitting across from her. "Im Blaze by the way." He smiled. Vanessa smiled back, fealing herself blush a little.
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Vanessa walked down the sidewalk, looking in all the quiant shops. She stopped, seeing a store with some cute teen clothes. She stopped, turning to Jessie.
"Lets go in here! They look like they have a lot of cute clothes!" Vanessa smiled at Jessie. Jessie nodded following her in. Inside she saw Sarah, accompinied by Sirius. Everyone knew that they were dating. She waved at them and continued looking. She stopped seeing a cute top. It was a white shirt with a pink tank that went over it. It was super cute. Jessie smiled and nodded, signaling that she should buy it. Vanessa ran over to the cashiers desk and payed for it.
"Where next?" Jessie asked. "We could go get something to eat... Im kinda hungry." Vanessa nodded.
"Me too. Lets go to the coffee shop, they should have some good snacks." Vanessa walked over to the coffee shop, Jessie walking beside her. A lot of people were in there. Blaze, Mira, Kristin, Kilynn, and so many more were huddled inside. Vanessa could smell all the sweet scents of coffee and the mouthwatering smell of cake and cookies.
nice keep it up!!
BUMP! I wanna be a bit more in it too...... *CRY*
jk....
((dont worry u play an important role in the story! lol))
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hey this is relly nice keep it up ok
((Where is Sky? Lol XP))
love the story. Blaze sounds cute!!!
love natalie
hes vanessa so BACK OFF! just to warn u if u want to live
lmao! ok so when's the next part coming~~ hurry up V, we can't wait forever
nice story Vanessa ;D
keep going and I'll keep reading...oh yeah and you forgot to mention a very important character *coughs* me...duhh....
Well it could help if you log in every now and then you know
Vanessa walked up to the counter. "Ill have a frapiceono." The waitress nodded and walked back and started preparing it. She walked back to the counter, handing it to her. The walked over to where everyone was sitting but stopped, seeing a familer face. The blonde girl gave her a shocked smile.
"Maddy?" She said, her voice quviering. Maddy nodded. Vanessa sat down beside her, talking about everything that had happened since they had last seen each other. Vanessa father had moved, forcing her to leave her best friend a couple of years ago.
((writers block))
lol nice, BUMP!! put me in more :P lol jkz
BUMP!
(oooooooh oh oh can i be in it too, lol. by the way i love the story)
I wanna be in this too.