Prologue!:
Chad were walking in his room at the top of the prison. Walking in circles, were nearly everything he did.
His bed were as thin as possible. Just two inches, and it were lying on the floor.
He had a candle light on a night desk right of the left of the bed.
The room was very small, and it were half dark there.
But back to Chad.
Chad had been angry. Very angry. For 2 months ago he got beaten by a kid.
A filthy half blood kid. Eleven years old. And he, were 20!
But he knew why that kid had done it.
It had been pure luck that the laws of elemental magic,
should just go and help a little boy a bit.
But Chad had swore revenge. A revenge so strong.
He was gonna be the most powerful wizard in the world,
and that little boy would die in his struggle for power.
Chad stopped walking.
But... Did he care? No his mind told him several times.
But the soft part of him ( Indeed it was VERY small! ) told him that why,
Should a 11 year old boy die in his struggle for power?
Chad were shameful of that thought.
His grandfather would never have thought it.
Back to planning this whole thing. Chad thought to himself to get his thoughts, concentrated
on planning.
After an hour he laid hiself down on his bed. Then he thought evilly too himself:
Soon is the whole world mine!
Can someone please read this?
I did read it, I'm sorry. I actually thought I posted.
I like it. Bump.
Okay. I also have that feeling sometimes.... But when I check I haven't posted. It's so annoying.
The next part will come today or tomorrow I think...
(Hello! I have been sick and not able to write another part. Here you have it!))
Part one: A mysterious dream.
Chad woke up. He looked around himself. Same old prison, same old room.
He had dreamed of that little boy. That had been his dream lately.
He saw the kid. Then the elder wand came into the dream. Then the elder wand got into the boy, right in his heart.
Then he had seen the boy shooting ice out from his hands. Massive ice. Attacking Chad.
Always the same dream.
But he had got it. He knew why the boy had done it. His power wasn't his own power... The elemental powers of course.
He was going to get that power. And make it his own power. And the little boy would die.
Bad for him... Chad thought to himself, and fell asleep
(( It isen't much, I know that but i don't have the focus to do more now...))
Part two: The missing prisoner!
Albus was sitting in the great hall having breakfast. Through the windows the sun shined in making the hall very light today. The great hall were full of students, also having their morning meal.
Nearly everyone talked to someone so, it was very loud inside. Albus was having some cornflakes with milk and jam on. He was tired and his right hand was stuck on his right cheek, a prank some older kids had done with him. Glued it right in his face.
He ate half of the bowl, then not wanting anymore. He leaned backwards, and tryed to see someone to talk with, so that time could go on, and his classes would start. No one that he wanted to speak with...
Some older boys, came towards him, pointed at him and laughed. ~So it was THEY that glued my hand!~ Albus thought to himself angrily. He looked at them angrily and he fought desperately with himself, not to freeze them or something like that. The boys just walked past him, laughing and ignoring him now. He tryed to send a frost wave after them, but without his right arm, it wasn't so easy.
Just a little ball of non-material ice floated in front of his eyes, and then vanished.
The boys laughed at his trying and then walked away. As they walked out of the great hall, Albus saw Jessie coming running towards him, having the daily prophet in her hand.
She looked a bit stressed and she had a strange face. The one she had when he had awakened from his slumber, after his fight with Chad. She approached him and said:
" Albus! Come here and see! Look here! In the paper!" She said fast and sat down right next to him.
She opened the prophet and started to read:
Breakout from prison! There has been a breakout from the prison Grindelwald made for his enemy's, in his time. The one that escaped from the prison was his own grandchild, Chad Grindelwald.
Wednesday evening he had found a way out from his cell, and then ran away. The ministry are now on the case solving it. They don't know what he will do, but they have gotten a tip from a guardian of the prison. The ministry didn't want to go more in details and sent me away, not having more to tell.
There is a rumor coming from a ministry worker that he will go after Albus Severus Potter, the son of Harry Potter. Some says that Chad have some unsolved business with Albus. Jessie stopped reading and said:
" What is going to happen now? " A bit afraid.
" I don't really know...." Albus replyed. Now he was worried. He knew that Chad would come after him.
He was getting a little pain in the stomach as his mind wondered what would happen to him.
Some tears swallowed up in his eyes. He got up from his bench and said: " I'm... I'm going to.. to.. be killed...." With a sad voice. He started to run against his dorm wanting to be alone. Tears started to come down his cheeks, and people looked at him while he ran out and headed for his dorm.
Jessie quickly got up and followed him, running after wanting to make this situation better for him.
((It has been a long time since the last post, but I didn't know exactly what to write, and I didn't get so good response on this... You don't want to write a fan fic when its nearly just you who looks through it...))
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Continuing of part two:
Albus ran up every stairs with Jessie right behind him. Tears were welling up in his eyes, and he couldn't see properly because of all that water in his eyes. Soon he was by the picture of the fat lady.
He quickly mumbled the password and the second after she had opened up, he grabbed the pictures frame and opened it more quickly. The fat lady screamed of suprise and started to yell at him.
The halls were empty so no one but Albus and Jessie saw this. Jessie was now starting to get tired.
In the second floor, she had thrown the paper away, as it just bothered her.
When Albus opened the common rooms entrance Jessie had just ran around the corner. “ Wait Albus!” She shouted. When Albus entered the common room, Jessie was by the picture by the fat lady, apologising quickly:” Sorry…”
As she came inside the common room and closed the entrance.
She saw Albus running up the boy dorm and then into the first door, his room.
Jessie ran across the common room and up the stairs. After five trips she was by Albus room. She tried to open it, but it was locked. “ Albus!” She said loudly and started to bang the door. Those who was in the common room looked at Jessie in a weird way. Jessie noticed that and said “ Just a little problem… Please go away”.
When Jessie started to bang the door Albus shouted to her: “Go away! I wanna be alone!” sad. Albus face was now covered with tears, and as he cryed he shivered a bit.
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Albus was laying in his bad, in the top of the Gryffindor tower. All of the walls were covered with a thick layer of ice, and banners of the Gryffindor lion and pictures of famous quidditch players, posing.
Ice taps was hanging from the roof, giving Albus a feeling of being home and safe.
It was the day after he had heard about Chad. He had skipped classes because he didn't want to go.
The sun was in the middle of the sky, pointing out for everyone that it was about noon.
It was ice cold in his room, and stifling hot outside. Jessie had been sitting outside his room for hours, giving up in a while. He hadn't heard from her since then, and he didn't want to be the one that started the communication, stubborn as he was.
Suddenly, it felt like a knife was struck right into mind. By reflex, he waved his hands, and ice daggers, flied out from all around him. He started to twitch because of the pain. His scream was heard over nearly the whole school. Then, a force took over him. He was controlling his own mind, but not his body. Then, a weird feeling came over him. It was like there was someone other in his mind, forcing him to walk out, and down the stairs. Albus paniced and started to scream,” HELP! HEL….” His mouth shut, and no sound came out.
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I'n now working my butt of! I've scrapped nearly the rest of the story, now only the fine tuning is thing that is left to be done!
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The common room was empty. Albus blocked his ice powers in case the person that controlled him tried to use them.
His mind was racing, trying to figure out what that was happening. ~Chad....~Albus thouhgt dark in his mind.
Oh... Yes... You are certainly right! Chad's voice came from his head making Albus freak even more out.
~What do you want with me?!~ He thouhgt to himself, wanting to communicate a bit with Chad, and to know his evil plans.
You'll know when you come to where I am. The elemental laws is NOT on your side anymore! They've comed to help you once, but never more! You just wait you, my little powerful boy! Then he laughed, a creepy evil laugh.
Albus's body walked out of the common room and down the long stairs. There was nobody out in the halls, even not a single teacher stopping him. He was forced out, and his body headed for the forest. ~The forest again? Man you pick bad places! I mean, a stupid monkey would have picked better places! ~Albus thouhgt wanting to teas him a bit.You should really shut up yo f**king little spoiled child! When he was half way down to the forest, Albus's powers with ice had nearly gone away with the warmth outside. He was feeling ill, and was seconds from throwing up. Finally, he got into the forest, where it was slightly colder.
The cold breeze hit his face, making him a little bit better.
Albus mind was now starting to panic. What would he do to him? What would happen?
His eyes focused on something moving closer and closer. A high shadow, with glowing ice blue eyes, the hair, dark curly, nearly black, and his rotten teeth.
" We meet again little child.... Come with me.... Oh, I forgot. You can't move you're limbs right?" His voice was evil, desperate and filled with a tone of teasing. Albus tried all he could to move himself, attack Chad, anything, but he was like the witch, drowning in a lake, with a huge stone around the neck. Doomed was a better word, had Albus thouhgt later when all of this was done.
His feet moved fast back Chad, who's pace was really fast.
There was not a sound in the forest but the two boys, walking fast. Chad started to talk with himself, mumbling and sometimes laughing. Albus didn't heard what he was saying, and neither did he want to. Albus noticed that many trees around him was down to the ground, leaving an empty spot with no trees at all.
" Here, NO ONE will find us!" Chad said. He was starting to turn insane, now his plan that he had been working on so long was finally finished, and his grampa's calling, which he hadn't succeeded in, was now delivered over to his shoulders. He had gotten obsessed with the fact that little Albus had defeated him. He forced Albus's body down on the ground. Around him was several incantations, forming a big circle. Chad got his wand out from his pocket and started to wave with it. Around and around and around and around.
The circle around Albus started to spin in the exact same speed as Chad's wand. Now, the control over Albus's body vanished, but Albus didn't notice, as stricken with fear as he was. He screamed, as he felt that his ice powers was drawn away from his body. He screamed and screamed, and tears was falling down from his face, freezing mid way down the cheeks because of the cold.
A little whirlwind was made from Albu's heart, to the tip of Chad's wand. In the start, it was grey, but after a second, it turned into a blizzard. The blizzard grew bigger and bigger as Albus felt his powers was drawn. First his ice powers, then the normal wizard powers.
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What is a cliffhanger? I don't know all those english expressions.
It means you stop writing when the suspence is really high. Its a good thing
ah. Any comments guys?
I am in love with this story keep writing please!!!!!
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keep writing or I will make you...mwahahahaha....sorry I'm eating chocolate ice cream right now :P
lol.....The next part is most likely coming on sunday or monday.... Sorry, but I can't do it before!
I'm in a play you see and these days were showing it!
Yay! can't wait and I hope you have funn!
"YOU SOBOVIAN BASTARD!"
Jessie had appeared out from nowhere, clenching her wand in her hands, fury was glowing out of her eyes.
" Expelliarmus!" She bellowed out. There was a glimth of red, and suddenly Albus felt his powers stop being drained.Albus had fainted because of the draining. The last thing he had seen was Jessie standing there.
Then, an absolute darkness had taken him, stopping all his thoughts, leaving a dark empty mind back. The blizzard got away from Albus, and moved itself to Chad, going right into his mouth, then disappearing.
Chad quickly got to his feet, as he had crashed into a tree, back first. " I WILL GET YOU LITTLE GIRL!" He was furious.
His precious plans had been destroyed by a little girl, and she would not get in the way any more when he completed the draining process.
The wand was lifeted, but before he had started to say the death curse, a voice interrupted him.
" Don't you even try hurting these students anymore!" Ginny was standing right next to Jessie, her wand in her right hand, being ready to do anything.
Behind her appeared first the headmaster, then some other teachers.All having their wands ready. Chad looked back and forth at them, then, talking calmly, but you could easily hear the ferocity in his voice that was raging his body, waiting to be unleashed.
" I'm gonna take this boy, steal the rest of his powers." He took a little pause, then continued, talking even lower.
" Then I'm gonna take the world, starting Hogwarts" His voice raising," Kill all the teachers, kill those mudbloods, and take over the castle."
The silence was complete. Everyone staring at him. Then he finished, bellowing out, " THEN I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD!"
" See you later" He whispered. A quick wave from his left hand, made flames appear from seemingly nowhere, surrounding him.
All the teachers raised their wands and thought as quick as they could ~STUPEFY~
But before even the recognisable red glimth was there, the fires had disappeared along with Chad, only leaving a burned mark on the forest ground.
(( Sorry for not writing this before. Now you have it, and I will try to make the next part as soon as possible.))
Ahh, stupid crazy man. :P
Jeeze, crazy...
Anyway, great story Albus. I love it. Keep going, you are doing an awesome job.
Thanks. I actually think the next part may come today or tomorrow. I feel enlightened! :D
I loveth it!! tehe!! Bump!
Gratias! Pablo espanjol?
hei hvordan er deg- I think thats Norwegian... but idk
How do you know that? But it isn't completely right but all the words were Norwegian!
You asked, Hello how is you, you should rather write,
Hei, hvordan er DU! Deg is another type of word, that make that sentace especially weird in Norwegian.
Well...Deg means the same as du, but the sentance get wrong, that is why there are two words, that mean exactly the same, but canot be put in all sentances.
And that was the Norwegian lessons for today!!!!!
hehe Shhhh! its a secret.. and Okiee!! I'll put that in my little notebook! hehe I'm a little smarter then most think!
YOU, SMART! *Albus and Sondre(me) Rolls on floor laughing like they're gonna die*
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Nice story Sondre :P WRITE MORES!
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Thank you thank you!
It is an awesome name....XD
*pushes* Now write more, you lazy bum. ;)
Don't you call me that! *Turnes away arms crossed, and with a big lip* " HMPH!"
*pokes* Stop being a baby and do as I tell you!
I'm working on it! Geeze! WOMEN!
Darkness.
Unfolding.
A pair of eyes was slowly opening, trying to get use to the bright light in the hospital wing.
Albus slowly woke up from his long sleep.
"Albus! Your awake!" Jessie's voice came from his right. She hugged him tightly and sighed in relief.
" Wah....What?" Albus shaked his head and sat up. It felt like he had been dead and revived in the last second. It took some seconds before he realised that what he felt as his waist, was a diaper." W-Why the heck do i have a diaper on?" He said tiredly, his voice horse. He was confused, and didn't remember a thing about what had happened four weeks ago.
" I'm so glad you awake! I'll call on madame Pomfrey!" In her voice you could easily hear relief, happyness and other things.
~Why the heck am I here? Why was Jessie so happy and relieved?~ And just before he had finished thinking, all of his memories were back. Chad, controlling him out from his room, down to the forest, where he drained his powers. Jessie saving him. The next thing he could remember was a silent darkness.
In the first, he had thought he was dead, but after a little while he felt connection with his body.
All the feelings and impressions flowed over into his mind, making him unable to speak or move, or practically, do anything. Jessie hurried back, madame Pomfrey right behind her.
"Good. I'll call your parents so that they could come here at Hogwarts."
And as fast as she had appeared, she disappeared, nearly running out of the hospital wing.
Jessie sat down again. His second wisit in the hospital wing, caused by Chad.
Would it never end? What would the outcome be? Someone killed?
Those questions hurteled in Albus's mind, while he tried too keep himself calm.
He still felt his powers, but they was weak. Weaker than ever.
" What happened?" Albus turned to Jessie and looked her into her eyes.
" Well....I saw you walk down against the forest, while I knew that you hadn't been in class that day,
But something was wrong. I tried to contact you using my mind, but your mind didn't feel like it is.
I felt an darkness. Revenge. Hatred. And I knew that something was very wrong, considering Chad was on the loose. I alarmed Professor McGonnagall-we had transfiguration then- And we went down to the forest, me first, and right in my heels, Ginny. I think you know the rest untill we got there." Jessie told him the rest, and about Chad's plan.
"Wait. How long has I been gone?"
Jessie looked down at the floor. " Four weeks tomorrow." Albus saw some tears in her eyes and said,
" Don't be sad Jessie! I'm okay! "
"I missed you so much. All the others did too. We've visited you every day, Me, Sky, Izzy, Ginny, Billie and others. We thought that you.. you.. was gone..." She looked up again, now drying her tears.
" I'm so glad your okay Albus." She hugged him another time then sat back.
It was shocking, being away for four weeks. " How's my parents?" His voice still hoarse.
"They're okay. They've visited several times, but your dad couldn't come so much because of his job.."
"What about Chad? Has anyone found him yet?" Albus asked quickly eager to get the answers. Then he could get his powers back again!
" Not a thing...." Jessie said slowly, wanting as much as him to get Chad caught.
Albus leaned back again. "We'll just wait untill I get better then and take him down.. I think" A smile appeared on his face. He'd go through anything to keep his friends and Hogwarts safe. Anything.
Jessie smiled back at him, wiping a tear with her hand.
" I got to get some sleep....See ya later Jessie..." Albus tuncked himself up, his knees to hic chin, and slept in the blink of a second.
( I'm not finished yet! This is going to be a long story!!
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The doors of the hospital wing opened, and walking out, was Albus.
Madame Pomfrey quickly closed the door, because the flue had come, strangely, now that it was nearly summer. " The other students cannot afford being sick! The exams are soon coming!" As she had slammed it back.
It was a wonderful feeling, finally coming out from the boring sad hospital wing, and go out in the castle, where new secrets always was waiting for you. Albus started walking, his pace fast, as he wanted to go up to his room to start practising for the upcoming exams.
He started running, the heat in the castle, warming him up, making him feel sick.
A short cut here, a short cut there, and soon, he should be up by the Fat Lady.
But right as he was going to run into a new corridor, a voice stopped him.
" Albus wait!" Ginny's voice disrupted the silence in the castle, everyone being outside.
Albus stopped right away, waiting for her to reach him. She approached him, and stopped. She was panting and her arms was resting on her thighs, while she got her breath again. For a little moment, she stretched out, revealing her real height, but then, crumbling her back a tiny bit, went into the normal stance.
" What is it Ginny?" Albus asked quickly, feeling the stiffling heat around him.
"Albus." Ginny started, looking into his eyes," Try and freeze that corridor completely up. It should be easy for you."
Albus didn't answer and got ready. He took a long breath, before taking his hands together, palm against palm, chest height, then stretching them out to the sides. A small ice cube appeared in the corridor, while nothing else did happen. " WHAT THE HECK?!"
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Albus mouth dropped in shock. He searched inside of him, but didn't nearly find anything.
The gigantic pool lake that had been inside of him, was now nearly empty, some inches with water left.
" Just as I thought... Chad nearly took all of your powers, but some are left...But it doesn't seem like there is much left, so why hasn't anything happened lately? Why hasn't the castle been attacked, just as he promised? Why hasn't any signs of rising evil appeared?" Ginny was talking slowly, her fingers running through her beautiful fire red hair. Albus just nodded, waiting for her answer.
" I've spend some time in the library the last couple of days, and I found out some things about elemental power draining, and I found something pretty interesting." Albus's eyes opened , and a small hope that he would get his powers again, grew slowly from the depths of his heart.
" If the draining process is interrupted, or some powers are left behind, the for one of them to use the powers, some years must pass. The reason nothing has happened, is because of that! If you use the powers before, they are REALLY small! You didn't use your powers after it being split up. Techically then, Chad should be able to use them. I took a long time, but I finally found a book where the information was held. It takes five weeks from obtaining the powers, to use them. That's if the draining process is interrupted or canceled. If every drop of power is gone, you can use them instantly. Chad already know this, so soon, he will go after you, wanting to take the rest of your powers. I've talked to the headmaster, and tomorrow, some aurors will come here to the school, as extra security." Albus eyes focused down to the ground, some tears gathering up. What if Chad attacked the aurors? Killed them? Killed his friends? He couldn't bear the thought if someone died, protecting him.
Ginny looked at him, his thouhgts being read easily. " Relax Albus. Their sending top knotch people. Your father made that clear in a meeting with the headmaster and the minister. Hogwarts protects their students whatever." Albus looked up, and looked into her eyes.
Ginny met his eyes, then smiled to him. " Everythings gonna be fine!" She said soothingly, kind her voice low. Albus smiled back.
" Bye Ginny. Thanks for telling me what he's gonna do and what that's gonna happen..." Albus said slowly, and wiped some tears away from his eyes. He turned on his heel, and ran into the corridor, once again heading for the common room. Tears was gathering on his chin, then, wither dropping to the ground, or continuing their path down his throat.
Ginny stood there completely still, knowing well enough he had it.
Its awesome like always!!
Oh my gosh! I feel so bad! I just found this! It's so good Albus! I love it! Hehe I called Chad a bastard.... hehehe....
A dusty book placed in the hands of a twelve year. Not a usual sight since classes was done, it was stifling hot inside, and the train went to the kings cross in a week. Albus was sitting in the school library, the silence absolutely complete, only interrupted him scumming the sides quickly, then turn over to the next side, and continue the work.
Three days had passed, since Ginny had told him the aurors were coming.
Three days since he'd learned the big hunch of his powers, being stolen from him.
Three days since he'd ran up to his room, crying, finding all of the ice melted.
Three days had passed, and Albus had changed.
From the depths he had got up.
From the depths, a new hope was growing.
From the depths, such a will was growing.
And from the depths, a desire to protect everyone he loved, everything he cared about, grew without stop knowing, that he'll do anything, no matter what, to protect those he loved.
But could he find his answers before time had run out?
His eyes widened as he found what he'd searched for. Finally, after all those long hours of reading, sneaking around in the restricted area with his fathers cloak. He made his notes on a piece of paper that he put in his pocket, then pulling his fathers invisibility cloak from his bag, taking it over him, then walking slowly into the restricted area.
Behind the shelves that hid thousands of secrets, hidden information that only seventh graders were allowed to find, and there Albus was.
He'd never like the rules, but he tried to hold them. But as he sometimes said, Rules are to be breaked. Why else are they made?
He found the place where the book had been, hearing whispers around him coming from the books.
It was still kinda dark inside the restricted area, although it was three in the afternoon.
The book was put back unaudiably, then he silently walked out again, on his toes.
He went out of the restricted area, walked to the place where he had been reading, took off his cloak and stuffed it into his backpack. The backpack was taken on extremely fast, as he started to run. Run. Run out of the library, and up against the Gryffindor tower.
He had some work to do.
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It was half past nine, and under his fathers invisibility cloak, was Albus, walking through the stuffed
commonroom. It was very hard, indeed, because no one was to know he was going outside.
Already at eight o' clock he'd call it night for the others, and go to his room, starting to prepare himself.
As he was pushing himself through two backs, both of the persons leaning onto eachother, holding hands.
They were one year older than him, and as he passed, he checked that his cloak was hiding him properly, he saw Jessie in a corner.
Albus suddenly felt great sorrow. He had been ready until now, but only by seeing Jessie completely alone in the corner, his resolve was broken like a glass, crushed into pieces, making him regret he was going to do this. ~It's for everyone's best... remember that Albus...~ He thought to himself.
There was many people around him, but Albus couldn't feel their minds at all. He'd
cut of his mind just as Ginny had taught him, so that Jessie or someone else could feel his presence.
By that thought, he turned away from Jessie, crying. Now, he was at the end of the common room.
He crouched and crawled out, opened the portrait. Quick, knowing he didn't have much time, he jumped out, then turned around, only to see a confused auror looking into the portrait, saying,
" Hello! Is anybody there?HELLO!" The aurors had been placed around the castle. The two aurors that he knew the location of, was two, the one by the picture of the fat lady, the other, by the entrance hall.
It seemed like they never slept, always the same persons there, with their black sunglasses, black suit, and jet black hair. Burly guys, muscular guys, that Albus doubted had any special wizarding powers.
He started running as he turned the corner, the cloak around him, sometimes showing his feet, he was without shoes and socks. Sometimes it showed his clothes, his favorite blue faded jeans, and an orange T-shirt that said 'sorry', with big white letters. By a small amount of time, he was in the entrance hall. Now, he was sneaking on his toes, making as little sound as he could. There was no one there, most people in their common rooms, or some place else. The security guard was standing in the middle of the gigantic room, completely still, just as he had done earlier, and every day since he and the others had arrived four days ago. As he passed the security guard, he stepped on the front of the cloak, walking it off. The security guard looked at him with big eyes as he slowly turned his head against him, stricken with fear and shock.
~FRICK ON A STICK!!!!!~Albus thought to himself as the security guard opened his mouth and said,
" Shouldn't you be in your common room, Albus?"
" Errmh... umh... " He stuttered. Then, the most brilliant plan came into his head.
" PLEASE, DON'T HURT ME! I'VE SUFFERED ENOUGH ALREADY!" Tears was gathering in his eyes, as he started to fake cry, using all the emotions he felt, to make himself cry.
The guard let his guard down, and took his right arm over Albus's shoulder, wanting to comfort him while he brought him to the commonroom. But, the moment he touched Albus's shoulder, his hand shot out as a fist, hitting his 'elder' parts. Then, when he crouched in pain, Albus delivered a hard blow from his hand, right to his neck, making him unconscious. To be sure he was completely away, he reconnected his mind for a second, travelled into his, then controlled it into deep slumber. He ripped the way between his mind and the other minds. He'd taken Ginny's advice, and started with martial arts. He was getting skilled, and now, he had red belt in tay kwondo, 4th degree black belt in kung fuu, and was a newcomer in four other arts.
" Suckah!" While a little smile spread through his face. But, he was reminded of what was going to happen, and his glory moment was interrupted. The invisibility cloak was taken up from the floor, and put on carefully, making sure it covered him completely.
He walked over to the door, opened it, not being locked yet, he slowly opened it, walked outside, a light summer breeze hitting his face, and as he breathed in the hot air, it felt like he was going to puke. Not wanting to spill his limited time, he started running as fast he could, and, in two minutes, panting, he was by the outskirts of the forest. He could remember that evening like it was yesterday.
The time, the emotions, the clothes, everything. Even that special tree.
It wasn’t too far, so he started walking, knowing soon, soon would it happen.
The forest was silent as always, only sometimes interrupted by some students voices, most of them fourth graders or higher, hanging out. Finally, he reached the place, now, crying as he was remembering what that had happened, and what that he was going to do.
He sat down, right next to the tree where his life’s highest, best moment had unspilled.
Jessie's lips met his, as she leaned towards Albus. They were sitting on a branch, top of the tree, the moon glancing down at them, accompanied by the billions of stars. The greates feeling was going through both of them. Stomach tickling, head rushing, heart going in a hundred and twenty. Albus backed away, now regretting.Don't Don’t wanna ruin our friendship… You’ve just broken up with Blaze… I’ll just ruin this…”
Jessie looked at him with big eyes tears appearing.
Albus got back to the present, being back from his flashback. Then, he got up, walked into the opening right next to him, and sat down, meditation position. He put his arms up in the air, together, right above his head, then spread them, and brought thesynchronized syncronized movements, making circles. Then, after five minutes, he clapped them, making an ice circle with the small amount of power he had gained. The circle was three metres wide, tree metres from every angle. It was filled with a long incantation, starting where he was sitting, circling around him, going out and out, filling the whole circle with ice leunknownof an unknow language.
Albus started messing something that could not be heard. All of the ice letters vanished, and then, reappeared in the exact order and formation they had been a second ago, now in the air.
It was a bit higher than Albus, but it started sinking. His mind was settled. This was happening, and now, no one could stop him. The letters stopped with his head, but then, continued going downwards, folding nicely by his shoulders, creating some sort of mask around his whole head, then starting to go downwards towards the rest of his body.
The pain was excruciating but he couldn’t scream out, because then someone would come too near and their soul would be sucked right into his, mixing, then taking over his body as he took over their body, ruining everything he had done so far, and making it unable for him to do what he planned on doing.
While he finished the incantation, the letters themselves, had been going slowly upwards and downwards, covering his wholIt'sdy. ~Finally. It’s happening. Good bye… For now… My dearest friends. ~
A little hole was made in the top of the ‘mumified’ Albus, and up, came floating a blue flame. It had the size of a thumb, and as it raised into the air, all of the letters vanished, and under, was Albus. But his eyes was dead. You couldn’t see a spark of life in them, focusing on something, while not focusing at something at all at the same time. The blue fire disappeared into nothing, and Albus fell onto the ground.
He had done that something you should never do.
But he had to.
His friends were now safe. Everyone was safe. A Single word let out of the mouth, of the lifeless Albus, before it died. " Jessie" His voice was faint, and within a moment, there was an unpleasant long, " aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh" before his body died.
The unthinkable had happened.
Albus had drawn his soul out.
OMG.... you killed him..... but but but... that means he's gone... this isn't the end right... and he didn't die... gosh....
Ya'll know when ya'll know!
Ahaha! He loves me ;D But he's dead :'( So many emotions.... so confused ??? Confused makes me angry! >:( Angry is hot.... like the son... which requires sunglasses 8)
Wait whats thats suppose to mean??
Just that I have mixed emotions ;D And I love it Albus it's so great!
Good job, Albus. I can't wait to read more! I;m glad to see someone pays attention in Ginny's classes. Haha.
It know I'm good! DON'T SAY TO ME I'M GOOD!!!!!!!!!! ;D
I always remember those dumb little things that don't matter at all.
Please post more Albus! I can't wait!
Your sooooo good!! hehe.. keep up the good work!
I'll write tomorrow. I'll have to figure out a bit more of the story... And, I have to go to bed in a little time...
OK ;D I can wait! (But not for too long!)
I can't wait! Rocks back and forth waiting*
~What's going on?~ Albus thought, as he just disappeared with his soul.
He was his soul, he controlled it, he was alive, yet, not alive again.
But, he had read in the book that his soul was going to explode, making him an invisible ghost.
The blue flame, his soul, appeared one more time, giving him sight of his body. The last electrical impulses through his spine and brain was starting to vanish, leading his body into a death cramp.
Albus's body was twitching around, the eyes empty, and, as the last beat of his heart was, the twitching slowly stopped, the eyes looked even emptier, and the last signs of life left his body.
Everything had went as he had planned.
A sad feeling swept over him, as he remembered he may never come back.
But something was wrong. Albus could feel it, a dark feeling
slowly coming up on him. He felt for his power.
They was gone. Wasn't he going to keep them?
What had happened?
Suddenly, he was dragged off, long into the forest, deeper and deeper. It was going so fast, and he was wondering what that was happening. He felt terrible, but,
he had prepared for this. Maybe only for some days,
but to maybe die, didn't seem to much of a deal,
when to protecting the world from a crazy maniac.
Then, stopping, being dragged downwards, into the earth.
Albus was scared. Why was this happening?
What was happening?
After being dragged some yards down into the ground,
everything opened, and he landed in a cave.
Roots was growing on the walls,
and the cave was circle formed.
In the middle, there was a big fire, the smoke
going out of a hole in the roof.
Sitting next to the fire, was Chad.
He looked terrible.
No shirt, you could see the bones in his face and you could also see his ribs, being skinny as h*ll.
His hair was greasy, his pants ripped here and there,
and he had cuts all over himself.
Albus saw his back, and just by seeing that human being, made him sick. He was so mad.
But then, Chad got up.
He looked around in the cave, looking right past Albus,
as if he was invisible.
“I have his power! I HAVE HIS POWER!!!!”
Chad screamed out.
With a wave from Chad's hand, hundreds of ice spears had appeared out of thin air, all around Chad.
Then, all of them shot out, hitting the walls. Several spears just flew through his soul, dealing absolutely no damage.
Albus was shocked.
Chad, had gained his powers.
((Sorry! I'm so lazy!))
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Good that you like it!
I like reading... and reading other peoples stories...
Absolutely wonderful, Albus. Please continue...even though it makes me feel guilty because I haven't written in mine in a looooong while. Haha.
Please, keep going!
Then I'll write even more so that you HAVE to write more in yours! MUHAHAHAHA!!!
Bact to topic. Next part, out this night. I'm going to a birthday party, but, I'll write it when I come home.
Till then, Bye!
Bridge.
The air was chilly, and you couldn't see a hand in front of you.
Whispers were heard from everywhere.
Out of no where, a fountain slowly appeared. All of the water in the fountain was frozen, even the water in the air. Then, more and more started to appear. Now, a stone floor was assembling around the frozen fountain. Suddenly, a house appeared. It was clearly buildings from the roman empire, big, stone buildings.
Another house, another house, the one as big and great as the next one.
Whispers turned into regular voices, streets appeared, then, people, appeared.
In all ages. Childs appeared, running around the fountain, running in the streets, screaming, shouting, laughing.
But the whole world was in ice. The childs was covered with ice. Gigantic ice taps hang from the houses.
Ice, was, everywhere.
All of the building looked like they was some part of a big city, but, there was only ten buildings, in a circle around the fountain.
Out of the closest, biggest building, right next to the fountain, three old men, stepped out, in a line behind each other. They had long, ice blue robes. All of them stepped out to the fountain, spread, making a triangle. Each of them grabbed an ice handle that just had appeared.
They said together, " Lat isens kraft taka oss, bringa oss, forføra oss, la den visa oss veien, so me kan
balansera verden." 'Let the power of ice take us, bring us, seduce us, let it show us the way, so that we can balance the world'
Children gathered around them, whispering, " They're gonna do it! Wow!" all of them waiting in excitement.
Suddenly, the fountain raised,seemingly by itself, revealing three ice chairs, just like
the chairs kings have, in a triangle, and, in the middle, on one of those clairvoyance tables, just made of ice, was an orb.
There was frost around it, and inside, a deep deep fog.
The three men stepped inside,
and,
the fountain slowly got down, sunk down.
When the fountain was back at it's regular place,
the orb, changed.
It exploded, and out came some fog, then,
a man appeared out of no where.
He was tall, his hair, down to his midst,
his eyes, was ice blue, and they reflected something special,
something no one, no one without power,
could find out what was.
The man opened his mouth, and started to breath slowly.
“ It seems that it has happened, my lord.
We already knew that this was the time of the elemental
children, but, we didn't know that it already was the ice time!
Have you foresaw this my lord, without telling us, the three of the ice?”
One of the men said slowly, his voice dark.
The mysterious man, now sitting on the table that he had appeared on, said, “ I am ice. You are just weaklings,
thinking you know everything” His voice was very dark,
and he continued, muttering, “ Any child could have foresaw the
time of ice. Do you not remember the prophecy?
'A time will come, where the elements, will gather,
and together, make, the elemental children.
Twas, as the sun rises in north,
the children are to be born, on the same date,
each, in a different month of time.
In January, Lightning will be born,
France, will awaken it's powers.
In February, Ice, will be born,
and The Elder Wand, will awaken it's powers.
In April, Earth will be born,
Denmark, will awaken it's powers.
In May, Metal, will be born,
England, will awaken it's powers.
In June, Fire, will be born,
Africa, will awaken it's powers.
In July, Sand, will be born,
Egypt, will awaken it's powers.
In August, Thunder, will be born,
America, will awaken it's powers.
In September, Air, will be born,
and Denmark, will awaken it's powers.
In October, Water, Will be born,
and England, will awaken it's powers.
In November and December nothing will happen.
The elements will rest, until their powers are needed once more,
when the final battle comes. “
The three men nodded.
All of them knew the prophecy, what that would happen.
Everything they knew.
“ We know that, your majesty, Ice,
But... What is happening? We find ourselves weakening!”
“ The boy, Ice, have lost his powers.
Gone over to soul form, performing the outdrawing.”
Ice spoke slowly, muttering.
“ He has?!” The three men said together.
“ Shut up with you.” Ice snapped, then,
continued, “ I need you, to bring him to me.
Afterwards, you are to leave.”
The men nodded slowly, they wanted to argue,
they could council ice.
They were the three of ice!
Not wanting to make Ice angry, quickly, they messed together,
“ We, that are the three of ice, calls upon ice,
one of the elemental children. “
They continued messing it.
Suddenly, an ice blue flame appeared right next to Ice.
“ Get out!” Ice said as the fountain was lifting upwards.
Children outside, was waiting, and clapped, as they saw the three of ice go out.
Albus was hanging mid air, in front of Ice.
He was terrified.
“ Welcome. I am Ice.”
Albus stared into his eyes, now finding himself in his body that he had left minutes ago.
~What, was happening?~
Ekk! It totally and completly AWESOME!!!! woot go you!!
Continue Albus! If it helps, I wrote a little more on my story. I'll put it up soon if you keep posting yours.
Albus looked into the man's ice blue eyes, something horrible with them.
He was shocked. Suddenly disappearing, then materializing, in a small room with lots of ice,
with this man. But, in all of the confusion, he felt a link. A bond, some kind of connection with this man.
Albus just stood there, awestruck, looking into his eyes, as if being devoured by them.
Suddenly, the man raised his hand, and hit him. " You idiot. Don't look into my eyes to long! And what is it with you doing the outdrawing!?"
Albus stumbled, and fell. He didn't have the time to react, so, he hit his head hard on the ice floor.
He rubbed his head where it had hit the floor, and then said, " Ouch! Why did you do that!?"
as he got up, facing the man.
The mans anger was could easily be detected, but Albus didn't care.
" Why am I here? I gotta go back! I can't be here now! I got to protect my friends! Return me to Hogwarts this minute!" He was more demanding then he ever had been.
Ice was just staring at him, inspecting him. " You idiot!" He snapped, and tried to hit him once more, but Albus ducked,
making him to miss with an inch.
“ What're you gonna do when you come back then?
Are you going to take that man that took your powers,
without being able to do anything?”
Albus looked down, realizing how reckless it would have been for him to come back without any powers.
“ What can I do then?” He asked, now looking right into Ice's eyes. He knew there was some kind of connection between them.
Was certain of it.
“ You're finally talking sense...
Now, I'll tell you.
Hundreds of years ago, a prophecy was made.
It said so,
'A time will come, where the elements, will gather,
and together, make, the elemental children.
Twas, as the sun rises in north,
the children are to be born, on the same date,
each, in a different month of time.
In January, Lightning will be born,
France, will awaken it's powers.
In February, Ice, will be born,
and The Elder Wand, will awaken it's powers.
In April, Earth will be born,
Denmark, will awaken it's powers.
In May, Metal, will be born,
England, will awaken it's powers.
In June, Fire, will be born,
Africa, will awaken it's powers.
In July, Sand, will be born,
Egypt, will awaken it's powers.
In August, Thunder, will be born,
America, will awaken it's powers.
In September, Air, will be born,
and Denmark, will awaken it's powers.
In October, Water, Will be born,
and England, will awaken it's powers.
In November and December nothing will happen.
The elements will rest, until their powers are needed once more,
when the final battle comes.'
You, are one of the elemental children. Now,
and still if you have had your powers, it would have been nothing compared to the power the elemental children has together.
You need to survive. The world needs it when the time comes.
I can only tell you one thing.”
Albus looked at him, eyes big, awestruck once again.
~I am an elemental child? I am the son of Harry Potter,
owner of the elder wand but... How? How did I get picked?~
Ice paused, then continued, ignoring his thoughts.
“ I am Ice. I am the leader.
Now, you know who I am.
Then.
No one, can really take away your powers.
What that Chad did, was, to copy your powers over to him,
then, hiding your powers, deep into yourself.
The only way to get them back, is to believe in yourself,
but, you have to give up something.
The job, no, the duty of the elemental children, is to secure the world. They have to be equal to everyone, and can not, be controlled by feelings.
To win back your power, you have to give up
the one you love the most. Also, I have to take away your water, and air powers.” Ice's long speech had made Albus speech-less.
“ G-G-Give up Jessie? Never! I can't do that!”
He half shouted out, making his ears hurt because of the small room they were in.
“ Okay. Then, we'll just wait until the world ends then.”
Ice said slowly.
“ Ginny can take him down! He's nothing to her!”
said Albus, trying to find a solution.
“ I know that red haired girl can take him down, but,
if your powers are gone, the elements will go in unbalance!
Ice will disappear, more and more ice will melt, fire will take more and more over as the planets heat rises, and there will be no earth for the humans and animals to live on.
And, when the final combat comes, ice will not be there,
and the whole world will be destroyed.
Will you give up your beloved now, elemental child?”
“ I... I have to...” A new determination filled Albus.
He sat down in a chair, while tears filled in his eyes.
“Sorry... Jessie...”
Meanwhile.
Chad was standing on the outskirts of the forest.
Already had he warned the castle about when he should come, and now, the half of an hour had gone, and they hadn't
showed the white flag, to surrender themselves.
He had maximized the boys powers,
now, feeling dangerously powerful.
The power that the boy had had, was 10 times less powerful.
He had prepared so that when he got the boy's full powers, it would maximize to it's full limit at once.
He raised his hands, and shouted out,” you're gonna have it, HOGWARTS!”
Suddenly, five gigantic ice blocks appeared in the sky above
Hogwarts, now, falling down to crush the
castle.
“ Oh no you don't!” Ginny's voice was heard,
and a small body was seen up at the top of the astronomy tower.
With a wave from her hand, all of the ice blocks had disappeared.
Chad stared with malicious content at her.
Suddenly, the headmaster was standing next to her.
“Ginny. Do not finish him off.”
“ Why not?” Ginny said while she smirked at Chad.
“ Cannot you feel it? Something big is coming. Can't you feel the power coming against us?”
Ginny looked up at the sky, recognizing the power.
“ Is that Albus's power?
How?”
“ You'll find out later.
I know you can take this Chad down easily, but,
this is Albus's fight.”
Ginny looked at him, her eyes big.
“ How did he regain his powers?”
She looked out in the sky.
“ I'll just hold him back until Albus comes?”
“ Yes.”
“ Then you gotta move headmaster, because it will be a bit hard to hold him back without hurting him.” Ginny smiled, then jumped off the tower, letting the wind take her safely down.
“ So. You finally showed your face!” Chad had appeared out of thin air, three yards away from Ginny.
“ Well...” She started, then, rode a wave that appeared from nowhere against Chad, attacking him with water arrows.
The first fight, had just begun.
((From now, It's gonna get harder to post new parts. I'm starting school tomorrow, so I won't have so much free time, starting seventh grade. But BYE! Hope you enjoyed it!))
Water arrows....sweeeet. ;D
I know! ;D MAYBE I'll make the new part tonight... But I have to go to bed early so... I don't really know...
Woot go Ginny you rock! and Albus you rock to because you made her rock! lol woot! this is awesome!
This is so good Albus! I love it! You almost made me cry!
Thanks. More this evening. I PROMISE
I am TOOO lazy.
Drops of water, falling down, mid-air, freezing, then being crushed by the ice floor.
Albus was still in the little room with Ice.
Now, he had totally given up Jessie. It pained him, but, it had to happen.
" I...I th-think she's away now..." Albus said, looking up at Ice.
" Then, I will teach you a very special technique." Ice said, looking down on Albus, who was sitting in one of the chairs. " But first, your other elemental powers has to be eliminated."
He stretched out, and laid his hand on Albus's head. It was one of the best feelings Albus had ever felt.
Ice just touching him. The feeling of being completely home. Ice, was in fact, the source of his powers. Then, he breathed in, “ Albus. I'll teach you one more thing. Now, your other elemental powers are gone, I'll teach you a really powerful technique. It's called, 'merging' “
Albus looked up at him, his eyes big, still flooding with tears. He had loved Jessie.
“ It's a technique, which hasn't been used in a long long time. You merge with your element,
becoming immensely powerful. Your whole body will be of ice, and, nearly indestructionable.
But later on, when you stop using the technique, you will find your body even colder.
Five degrees. “Ice looked down at him, his eyes focusing on his palms. “ Now stop crying.” His voice snapping coldly, while Albus made some sulks.
“ Soon, I'll let you go, find your body, and fight that bastard. But, you will have to kill him.”
“ WHAT?!” Albus shouted out, jumped up, facing Ice. “ I CAN'T KILL SOMEONE! NEVER!”
The feeling spreading through him, slowly, being freaked out. Before Ice even said it, Albus knew what he was going to say.
“ Kill him, or let the world go under. Your choice. Now, I'll return you. Find your body as quickly as you can.” Ice said, the snapped his fingers, making Albus disappear, along with himself.
Albus arrived just at the place his body was. He looked down, his soul now in it's fire state.
Slowly, he started connecting his soul into his body again. The book had told him everything.
How to come back, how to draw his soul out.
Then, the fire was dragged down into his body's mouth. The eyes started to gain life as his heart beat once again, being dead for fifteen minutes. Electrical impulses was spreading through his brain and spine, making him able to move again.
Albus got up, terrified.
Tears spread down from his face.
~I'm going to kill a man.~
Oh noes! Poor Albus...killing for the first time...*shakes head*
Awwies... hes so young.. and he has to give up love and kill someone.. Thats a sucky life.. But anyways.. Like anyways.. its awesome! tehe
Thank you guys!
It's so good! Write more!!! NOW! Oh and did I die?
Albus, just finished it all mate and it's awesome please-pretty please write more :D ;D ::)
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I'm working on it, but I don't know what to write! But I think that I can have my Computer to School tomorrow, so I can write a good part there when I'm bored!
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Clash!
Ginny and Chad stormed against each other, flames and icy shards flowing from the spot they hit each other.
The air around them was getting foggy, the results of the extreme temperature changes, that occurred when Ginny called out her fire, it engulfing her fists and feet, and Chad's ice, engulfing his feet and hands.
Ginny smirked as she held her defensive stance, feeling the weight of his attacking arm.
Chad was very strong despite his slim figure. But Ginny, was also different under the looks.
Even though she didn't look like it, she had faced the devil himself, without blinking.
She had murdered over a billion. She didn't look like it, but her looks betrayed, the 21 old woman, who looked seventeen, had a child with one of the most powerful creatures in the universe,
she was one of the most powerful telecenetics ever to go through Hogwarts, and she was on the brink of destruction, the ministry trying to get her, Cody and Xaver, out of the country, or worse off, kill them.
~ Someone is closing in! Is it...? It is him...~
Ginny looked into Chad's eyes, smirking as she jumped back,
and said, “ Seems like our fight is over, but I warn you. Don't underestimate the boy behind you. I don't want to see him murder someone in the blink of an eye, without a reason to kill.
It will destroy him.” Ginny looked into his eyes, then disappeared, leaving nothing behind, but the trace of their little duel.
Chad spit on the ground. “ *****.” Murmuring to himself, he turned on his heel, and looked into the forest. He had gotten a bit tired, but he had more than enough energy left to take down the boy.
Slowly, he sensed an appearance by the forest.
Albus stood in the outskirts of the forest.
Still, his mind was soft, but he couldn't allow it, if he wanted to stop Chad, from ruining his world.
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it Albus! It's so good!
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(( I just wanted to re-write some of this! It's not much , just some changes I wanted to make!))
Meanwhile.
Chad was standing on the outskirts of the forest.
Already had he warned the castle about when he should come, and now, the half of an hour had gone, and they hadn't
showed the white flag, to surrender themselves.
He had maximized the boys powers,
now, feeling dangerously powerful.
The power that the boy had had, was 10 times less powerful.
He had prepared so that when he got the boy's full powers, it would maximize till his body couldn't stand it, and stop.
He raised his hands, and shouted out," You're gonna have it, HOGWARTS!"
Suddenly, five gigantic ice blocks appeared in the sky above
Hogwarts, now, falling down to crush the
castle.
" Oh no you won't! " Ginny's voice was heard,
and a small body was seen up at the top of the astronomy tower.
With a wave from her hand, all of the ice blocks had disappeared.
Chad stared with malicious content at her.
Suddenly, the headmaster was standing next to her.
" Ginny. Do not finish him off. "
" Why not? " Ginny said while she smirked at Chad.
" Cannot you feel it? Something big is coming. Can't you feel the power coming against us? "
Ginny looked up at the sky, recognizing the power.
" Is that Albus's power? How? "
" You'll find out later. I know you can take this Chad down easily, but,
this is Albus's fight. "
Ginny looked at him, her eyes big.
" How did he regain his powers? "
She looked out in the sky.
" I'll just hold him back until Albus comes? "
" Yes. "
" Then you gotta move headmaster, because it will be a bit hard to hold him back without hurting him. " Ginny smiled, then jumped off the tower, letting the wind take her safely down.
" So. You finally showed your face! " Chad had appeared out of thin air, three yards away from Ginny.
" Well... " She started, then, rode a wave that appeared from nowhere against Chad, attacking him with water arrows. Ginny smirked.
The first fight, had just begun.
Cool
The first fight had ended,
and the second was fast approaching.
Albus stepped out of the outskirts of the forest, sobbing. Tears was dripping from his face.
Why, was it that death was the only thing that could stop this.
Albus was trapped in his own mind, in his own fears, all of it pressing, crushing.
He looked up, hearing a shout. " So there you are, halfblood scum! " Chad was smirking, and pointing his hand at him. Albus looked at him. The man who had ruined his life. Nothing but sadness filled his heart, not a bad feeling against him. It felt like someone has stabbed him, and life itself, was pouring out.
Chad disappeared, and appeared infront of Albus. An icy hand pierced his left shoulder.
Albus screamed, screamed at the top of his lounges, shouted out all of his pain.
But still, he just stood there. His other shoulder were pierced. Blood spluttered out.
" That's how it's gonna be kiddo? Well then, BYE POTTER! " On Chad's right arm, a gigantic ice shard grew, merging with his arm, forming a sword.
Albus closed his eyes, and waited for the unescapable.
The unescapable death.
GASP!!!!!!!!! NOI ALBUS NOOOO!!! YOU NEED TO KEEP FIGHTING!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JESSIE NEEDS YOU!!!!!!!!!
Hehe... It will be fine, relax Jessie! :P
And, I think something went wrong, so I had to re write my last post a bit. Something must've deleted itself...
Oh goodie I was hoping so!!!
You are an exceptional writer for your age, Albus. Keep going!!
Thanks. I'm at my grandparents now, (Like it says in my sig) and I won't be able to write something good. And I'm so pissed off right now...
Just write it on a peice of paper or something and then type it up when you get home!!!
" NO! " The desperate scream of a thirteen year old girl, sang through the forest, and castle.
Albus was pushed away, falling to the ground, tumbled. In the few seconds before he hit the ground, and got the air in his longues hit out, he managed to see a blonde figure, and blood.
Jessie fell to her knee, feeling the ice cold sword piercing her stomach. Tears in her eyes, she glimsed at Albus, smiling, as she hit the ground violently, with an unpleasant, crack!
She lay there, just as if she were asleep, only that blood was oozing out from her stomach, and a crazy murderer, was hanging above her. Chad cursed, than drawed the sword out of her stomach; Jessie felt the sword turn, and puncture vital organs.
Tears filled Albus eyes.
COOL
OMG NO... you hurt her.. wanta jerk.. tehe
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
((It's really great though, please write more! (And let me live!)))
Everything seemed to go in slow motion. How could this happen?
His mind, senses, and body, seemed like they were shattered into pieces for themselves, not able to function. All he could do, was to look at Jessie. "Jessie? " A faint whisper left his lips, softly.
The wind blew, playing gently with her hair, something that Albus had seen, and adored, times before.
This was uncomprehensible.
Chad strode over to Albus, his right still a sword. Smirking, he raised his arm, ready to finish, something that he should've finished a long time ago. If it hadn't been for his recklessness.
Stumbling, he got up, ready to face him. His mind was in chaos. And inside of him, he felt an extreme rage, growing, growing. He couldn't control it.
Never, had he given up Jessie. It was impossible to him. She was his world.
" JESSIE! " He shouted out; couldn't but, to release his pain, his suffering, his sorrow.
Chad attacked Albus.
No no no no no no no no no no!!! ALBUS HAS TO ATTACK CHAD!!! NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND!!!
Seriously great though... love it!
Why must you kill yourself and her.. whata jerk.. but its still really good..
You don't know what's coming :P I've got it all in my head, i've had it for a long long time now,
but it's hard to get it out! New part soon. But first, I have to finish Harry Potter and The Order of The Phoenix, because we are having a reading competition in our class, and I am currently leading, but,
I have to be clear that I will win... :P
I have 400 pages left to read now, and tomorrow... ( End tomorrow for the competition...)
Albus jumped away, then channeling ice shards at Chad. The raging urge to kill him, was taking over.
His teeth gritted, heart throbbing, he turned himself into ice. Merging, into the essence that was ice itself, making ice, himself.
Chad backed away, feeling something. Unbescribable, uncomprehensible, impossible.
Awestruck, his mouth fell, big eyes.
Albus felt his mind grow dark. Cold. Slyly, he smiled, while he laughed a maniacs laugh. He rose to the sky, now pitch dark.
Ice, was overpowering him, a dark cloud stretching over his mind. Soon, he wouldn't recognise friend, or foe.
His whole body were of ice. Glowing. Radiating, with power. Magnificent power.
Skulls of ice, appeared from nowhere, and faster than a normal eye could see, they ate into Chads legs.
The scream, was crucial, filled with pain, and hatred.
Albus felt his hate, towards this man, grow, bigger than anything.
Inside himself, a moster was created. From his powers, hate, agony, suffering, and need to protect.
Suddenly, a long sword, appeared in his hands. It's presence was extreme. Malevolent, sly and evil.
A sinister presence.
Albus's eyes went ice blue, engulfed by ice.
:o
OH MY GEE!!! ALBUS IS EVIL!!!
I know! You don't know how much thought I've put into this! I've been on this FF for too long... I'm getting many good ideas!
Heehee, he did the "mwahahahaaa..."
*coughs*
Continue please!
The sword controlled him, as it was a monster, inside of him. Slowly, he landed. Radiating with power, the sword in his hand was raised.
It was of ice. A dark ice. Looking into it, you would find no depths, no end. Nothing, or everything.
Chad had sunken down to his knees. Not a single word could escape his mouth. The sinister presence, kept him silent, as he glared into the depths of the sword.
He was waiting to be executed.
Albus mind, was empty. Blank, harsh, cold. Nothing, could stop stop him, stop him from the murder that was at stake.
He ran forwards. Sword raised, snarling, he ran forwards.
Albus reached Chad, and pierced his heart.
Killed him.
Awwws. Poor Albus had to kill someone...
But luckily now, since Chad it dead and all, Albus can turn nice again, bring me back to life, and then we can get married!!! ;D
Hehe...
New part out soon!
Aww young little Albus killed someone.. unbelieveable.. tehe
*Laugh till I die* LOL
Come on Albus! It's time for us to get married! We need more!!!!
bumpers please
Up in the tower
The hawk steel look of Ginny Weasly, roamed the fields, took every detail into mind, as she watched the doomed fight between two bitter parts.
Albus versus Chad.
Chad versus Albus.
Good versus bad.
The unending circle of battle.
Albus was seeming to lose. The urge to get down there, and cut Chad's throat rushed within her.
The headmaster appeared next to her, as she took one step closer to the edge of the tower.
" Don't. " The only words that was let out of his mouth. She'd happily punch him in the gut now, but punching someone nearly always had consequences, she reminded herself of that, whilst staying still.
Albus' energy was fading, she sensed it easily. But an ominous feeling spread through her body. Something dangerous was being unleashed, as she glimted down. Snow was falling down in a small area.
A girl was lying on the ground, blood oozing out from a wound in her stomach.
A man with his nose on the ground, his chest pierced right by the heart.
And one boy, shining eerily. Made of ice, he held a long sword. The boy himself, were also of ice.
She disappeared out of sight, along with the headmaster. They both arrived by the scene, even though she already had went over to Albus, which stood next to Chad. It was needed for her to be quick now, or Albus would be lost. Disappearing in an instant, she kicked Albus in the side of his head in air, from behind.
He was forced to the ground, whilst Ginny appeared in the same spot she'd disappeared, a second later.
Ginny sighed, as she ran over to him, bending down. She touched his head with one hand, a frown appearing on her forehead. Forcing down the monster inside of him, she had to be careful. One fault, and then it would kill her.
The sword was slowly dissolving into snow, which flew up to the sky. She smiled, as it was gone.
Looking around her, she checked if Chad was dead, she saw that the headmaster was by Jessie, he'd started to heal her. Albus was unconscious, the mental stress that he'd been through had made him weak.
He was in the need of rest.
Ginny lifted him up, over her shoulder, and disappeared once more.
;D It's great! All of Ginny's disappearing got kind of confusing, but I got it! Write more soon please!
A dark presence, constantly pulsing, never resting, always present.
Never, did it stop rubbing fiercely against his mind.
Even though trying to stop it, made no result, nothing happened.
Ignoring.
Pressing.
Dark.
Albus awoke, an excruciating pain inside. His body, didn't feel like his body,
nothing, felt like it should. Frustrated, he failed to notice, the dark, new presence in his mind.
There was light, too much light, as he slowly opened his eyes one gap. It was impossible to keep his eyes open, it hurt.
He was in a bed. Not his own.
He wasn't warm, he wasn't cold.
He didn't know where he was, who he was.
Nothing clear.
Albus.
A voiced called in from his head. It was cold, full of hatred. Not his own, or anything he'd heard before.
Not human.
~Albus? Who's that?~ His own voice, it was recognizable. His head felt dizzy, even though strangely light. Words. Albus. Jessie. Ice. Chad. Ginny. Dad. Mom. An ice cold feeling ran through his spine, as every part fell, into it's space. He ignored the dark presence.
But something missed. Why was he here? How had he gotten here? Questions filled his mind.
His mind rushed, going back. Nothing was in his mind, before he was remembering standing in a forest.
Right in it. The trees where high above him, and the moss was moist under him.
A blue light, a blue flame. He remembered. He'd drawn out his soul.
But then, nothing else came up. It was empty.
Pushing his eyes open. Fighting.
His eyes opened , the searing light was still there. His sight was blurry.
A big white room with a lot of beds. Lot's of curtains.
But there was no one around him. No people, sitting on chairs, around the bed.
Alone.
Completely, alone.
(( This isn't so good... since I wrote it after midnight -.- Might be a bit strange with that prescense thing, but, I can just tell you that that presence, is the sword that Albus used, it's gone living inside. ))
No no! It's good I like it! Really intense and confusing! Suspenseful!
BUMPY!
OMG its A-Friggin-Mazing!!
A voice called in the distance, echoing.
" Albus? "
It was all hazy.
The sun shone in the windows of the hospital wing. It was as light as always, his eyes was blended by the ice cold white walls, the floor, the curtains, the pillows, everything, a shrieking white.
" Who... is it? " His voice was raspy. Blinking quickly he looked around, his eyes being accustomed to the searing light.
Disappointed, he met the nurse's gaze, standing in front of his bed, with a glass of water, and a plastic cup with his medicine. Taking it into his hands, he threw the pills into his mouth, took a big sip of water, and swallowed whilst lifting his chin.
Taking the empty cup and glass back, the nurse retreated back to her office.
Albus sighed. The shock hadn't left him yet. Elemental children, the monster inside of him, Jessie getting a sword through her stomach, him killing Chad.
No injuries marked his body, except a few bruises. He'd been lucky. Albus sat up, wondering why he had to stay in the hospital wing, when he was recovering. His eyes wandered to his right.
Jessie was lying in the bed, peacefully. Her hair tangled together by one of her shoulder, it was cruising around her face perfectly.
You'd never thought she'd been pierced by a sword a couple of days of ago...
Tears filled his eyes, as he rose from his bed, and walked overs to hers, unsteadily, his feet hurting. Sitting down on a chair, he took her hand, and squeezed it lightly. Tears escaped from his eyes, pouring down his cheek. Sobbing.
Frustrated.
Desperate.
Devastated.
When will she wake up?
I love it! This is a really good story Albus!
Bumpy!
Still uber amazing!
Thanks guys! :D
Do you think you're going to write any more Albus?
Dunno! :D
Okay! Well please try to come up with some more!! I love reading your stories!
And I love reading yours. ESPECIALLY the darkness has only begun! :D
(( DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME LAZY! :-* ))
The days raced, the rain howled, and the seasons passed.
Or at least, so it felt, to Albus. Life without Jessie, was torture.
Every second felt like a minute.
Every minute was an hour.
Every hour was a whole day, and a whole day was eternity.
Five days. Five heart breaking days. Five days, with his conscience at the bottom.
Five days.
~ It's my fault...~
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Tears streamed. Sniffing, Albus held Jessie's hand, joyfully. Praising life, his cheeks was red, his face moist, and a big smile was put on his face.
Sitting on a hard chair, he was in the cold-wall hospital wing. Next to him, Jessie sat upright.
She was tired, her stomach hurt, but she had finally awaken. Her hair was moist, and perfectly curled and bruised around her face.
Stroking her hand gently, he stared into her near lifeless sparkling blue eyes.
Giving her an encouraging smile.
" It's all... going to be... fine... "
I LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha Okay, this is amazing!! I'm going to try to come up with more for the darkness has only just begun because of what you said... Thank you!!