It was an nice after noon and Rachael had just gotten up . She had to get ready for school so she went into her closet and picked out and Nice tee to where with her cami. As she was walking into her bath room she hered her mom."No sorry I don't what a swan I want to Jappenese cerry blossem ice sculpser.Ok ok thank you bye." Her mom said then she hng up the phone.Her mom was getting marrried for the thired time and each time it gets harder and harder to plan . The bridal shop called her by her friest name now that she had been married so many times befor and people whould set up bets on when they whould last or have there frist fright but now Rachael was used to it for her it was just another day.
Good idea for a story, but try spell checking before you post, as well as rereading for grammer mistakes.
Bump.