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Harry Potter Fan Role Play => Role Play Character Bios => Topic started by: ally on February 27, 2008, 11:08:11 AM

Title: Ally
Post by: ally on February 27, 2008, 11:08:11 AM
Name:Ally Bartemius
AGE:  15
Height 5'6
Appearance:long curly blonde hair, and bright green eyes, her eyes changed colors on different moods. 
RACE:white 
Parents: Lily Maxime and Alan Baremius 
Personality: lovable,sweet natured, and outgoing. 
Likes: party, talk to friends, and do magic
Dislikes:uh.... stuff
Power:telepathic
History: Her parents are both powerful wizards. She had a twin brother but was taken away when Ally was seven, she never saw him again. Ally and her brother were in seperateable. Her father turned onto Voldemorts side and became his follower. Ally was raised by her mother ever since then.
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: LordBlaZe on February 27, 2008, 11:36:28 AM
nice bio:P
could use some more detail but I like it none the less ;D
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Post by: Kilynn on February 27, 2008, 11:55:58 AM
good bio!
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Post by: cody on February 27, 2008, 12:22:52 PM
nice bio
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on February 27, 2008, 12:27:55 PM
Quote from: LordBlaZe on February 27, 2008, 11:36:28 AM
nice bio:P
could use some more detail but I like it none the less ;D
yeah i know i just didnt know what to put
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: fudge0604 on February 29, 2008, 12:49:33 AM
This is not GREAT but good. You need to put in more details into every category.
This is a person. If your going to write a bio about yourself, wouldn't you put more into it?
Its ALOT more fun to read a bio that is descriptive, detailed and longer.

*ALBUS*
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on February 29, 2008, 04:29:43 AM
yeah sorry bout that
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: _-Casey-_ on February 29, 2008, 11:50:41 AM
read a few of the others and you'll get an idea about what to do thats what I did and mine came out to be okay
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on March 1, 2008, 05:10:36 AM
okay ill do that
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Post by: KeKe p on March 5, 2008, 07:23:43 AM
yeah good start you might want to read some of the other and you will come up with stuff to put donw once you post and get an idea of her by the way she acts and thing.....but good i do like it so far..
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on March 6, 2008, 05:22:26 AM
k,k ill do it
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Post by: KeKe p on March 6, 2008, 06:29:16 AM
ok i hope to get to now you more...
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Post by: walker08 on March 6, 2008, 11:15:16 AM
Hi. Nice bio. I'm new too. I hope we become good friends. :)
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on March 9, 2008, 05:21:33 AM
lol, i also hope we become friends.
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Post by: lexip.13 on March 23, 2008, 03:57:25 AM
wow no offense but that kind of sucked. hope we can't be friends.
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: Molly on March 23, 2008, 05:41:28 AM
Quote from: lexip.13 on March 23, 2008, 03:57:25 AM
wow no offense but that kind of sucked. hope we can't be friends.

THATS MEAN

nice bio.... i mean no one ever checked mine out so be thankfull!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Ally
Post by: ally on March 24, 2008, 05:03:36 AM
lol... thanks
yeah my bio kinda suxs but oh well...