OKAY... this is my second Fan Fic.. I hope you like it as much as you liked the 1st one.. (If you haven't read the first one you should unless you don't want to!!)- (if it sucks tell me so I don't have to write the rest!!)
(PART ONE)
*Only 2:30am* Pete said sitting in his bed. Suddenly he had and urge to eat. Pete looked in his mirror and saw his eyes go black. Without thinking Pete jumped out the window. He had a crash landing. "Crap" he said as he landed in a puddle or mud. He then ran deep in to the forest.
Pete looked all around him. It was quiet, but he could hear an animal, a very large animal in the distance. Pete smiled and ran towards the sound. He then stopped and saw the animal. It was pretty big and Pete smiled as he stared at it with hungry black eyes. Pete walked towards it slowly looking it over.
The animal looked up at Pete and was about to run, but it was to late. Pete jumped and ripped the animals throat killing it instantly. The animal fell down and started to bleed everywhere. Pete went down and began to drink. When he was finished all that was left bones and loosely hanging skin. Pete stood up and wiped his mouth and his eyes turned back to his normal bright red.
Pete looked around and saw the faint outline of the castle and he walked towards it. Pete watched around him as he walked. He felt someone's eyes following his every movement, but couldn't tell who it was. It had a strange vibe to it. Pete went to his right and felt them looking at him still. He then went to his left towards the castle. He was happy to not feel the eyes on him but then he heard someone running towards him.
Pete finally broke into a fast run. He ran away towards the lake feeling the eyes on him the whole time. Pete started to run towards the school and heard the footsteps fade away. Pete stopped to take a breath and he heard the footsteps again. Pete looked around and saw a small glimpse of black hair. Pete turned around and ran all the way to the castle.
Pete soon felt very relieved as he heard the foot steps stop and the eyes not following him. *I wonder who that was?* Pete asked himself somewhat scared. *I would have fought them, but I couldn't feel who it was and I'm to tired right now.* He thought to himself again.
Pete got to the castle and didn't fell like going up to the Gryffindor common room. Pete looked around and then decided to go up to the roof. Pete walked up to the side of the castle and started to jump from ledge to ledge.
After a while Pete got to the roof and he sat down on the edge of the roof and looked everywhere. Pete then looked at the forest. He could see slight movement from the animals, but nothing from the person who was following him. Pete laid down on the edge of the roof and laid on his back. He looked up and stared at the sky. It was almost black and had a lot of stars. He studied the stars and found different constellations.
omg this sucks >_>
JK JK JK
it is pretty good. Better than I could do I can say that.
I think im gonna delete it...
No I don't think you should... I don't even know if you can.... can you?
I can delete it...
ok... well it's your choice
I'll prolly write another part and post it and see what happens....
good plan oh and you can use any of my characters if you want to.
Okay thanks..
Sure no problem.... Now get writing!
I will later... when I feel like writing....
;D That's exactly how I feel about writing my fan fiction!
Well I'm tellin you to go write yours!! NOW!! please!! hehe
OK OK fine... maybe...
If not then I will cry.... or die... OR BOTH
AH! Don't die! Or Cry! Or BOTH!!!
to late I think I want to cry... I feel depressed....
Billie are you going to continue.....I want to know what happens next!!
I still have to figure out what happens next.. I lost my notebook that told me...
oh.....okay then.......I'll try and be patient=]
Yay... I'll try and have it up tomorrow!
it doesn't matter because I'm probably not going to be on tomorrow....olympics is pretty big here.....like humongous!!
Okiee... then that gives me time to write!
(I do believe I made you wait long enough.. heres Part Two.. Oh and I hope you like it because I already have part 3&4 written and half of part 5 so if you like it then I put the other parts up in the next few days.!!)
(PART TWO!!)
(From here on it might be hard to follow.. If you have any questions please ask..)
It wasn't very soon until Pete had fallen into a deep sleep and began to dream. Pete smiled as he walked along hand in hand with Leah. He looked over at her and smiled. No one had said anything the whole time and it was perfect. They walked along a strip of trees that showed just enough sunlight. The sunlight hit Leah just perfect and her skin shined brightly and her hair moved with every step she took. Pete laughed as he tripped slightly on a rock. That was the first sound he had made the whole time they had been walking.
Pete soon regretted breaking the silence. That's when everything went wrong. "Avada Kadavra" said a deep voice from behind him. Pete looked at Leah as her body started to fall to the ground. He caught her when she was about three feet from the ground. He fell to his knees as he hung onto her. He refused to believe what he knew had happened. He took her wrist into his hand. Of course, there wasn't even the slightest pulse beat. He softly kissed her forehead, and whispered something softly to her still body, then turned to her killer.
Pete couldn't see the killers face, but saw the outline of his body. Well Pete was pretty sure it was he, because of his outline. "Who are you?" Pete demanded in a loud fierce voice. Pete started to walk closer to the man and with every step he took it made him feel like he was falling through the air.
"Be careful little Petie boy I wouldn't keep walking if I were you, you might not be to happy with yourself." Said the man. Then the man laughed and started to slowly back-up. "Well maybe my job would be done quicker if you to fall" He said and laughed.
Pete stared at the outline. The man seemed about in his early thirty's or late twenty's. "Well I don't know what 'job' your talking about, but there's no way I'm going to fall. I barely ever trip." Pete said. But for some reason he felt like he was falling even when he stood still. *What's wrong with me, why do I feel this way* He thought to himself. Pete didn't like the feeling and was getting mad with every step he took.
The man laughed. "Well Pete I do believe my work here is done. For now" The man smiled and pointed his wand at Pete. "good bye Pete" the man said as a stream of water hit Pete in the face. After that the man disappeared.
Pete wasn't sure what the man meant, but he was hit hard in the face with the stream of water. Pete didn't feel it in his face, but towards his back and his shoulders. Pete turned away from where the man had been standing and started walking towards Leahs body. He had a strange feeling about what all had happened. The voice seemed so familiar, but it brought back memories of hate. He was a few steps away from Leah when he felt water flow into his mouth and nose. Pete started coughing, and closed his eyes. But when he opened them he wasn't in the forest, and there was no sign of Leah or the man anywhere.
NOOOOOOOOOOO I DON'T WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE WERE GONNA GET MARRIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(PART THREE)
Pete looked around. He was laying in a puddle of mud. He suddenly realized he had fallen asleep. *But everything felt so real, I can't see how it wasn't. Then again I'm so glad it wasn't real* Pete thought to himself as he sat up in the puddle, and remembered how Leah looked as she died. "I wish I knew who that was thought" he said talking about the man in the forest. Right then Pete felt someone's eyes on him. He flinched, but didn't check to see who was looking at him. Pete literally ran up the side of the school, and climbed onto the roof. There he looked around. He felt the eyes on him, and saw a figure standing in front of the forest. Pete backed up and couldn't see the figure anymore and felt safer. He turned away from the forest and began to slowly walk away from the edge of the castle. Suddenly Pete fell to his knees as someone placed their hand on his shoulder.
"Pete?" Leah said calmly as she helped him stand up. "I'm sorry if I scared you, but are you okay?" She asked with worry in her eyes, but calmness in her voice.
Pete sighed in relief. "It's okay... I thought you were someone else" Pete explained his voice a little shaky. "I'm glad your okay" he said and gave her a small smile. It made Pete happier actually seeing Leah alive and in person. He knew it was dream, but it still freaked him out seeing her dead in his dream. Pete gave Leah a hug the backed up and looked at her. "You are okay right?" he asked.
"Yes Pete I'm fine. I just got back from hunting, and I saw you on the ground from what it looked like it seemed you were sleeping, but then you turned over and your face was in the puddle. You started coughing really bad, then ran up the side of the castle. You were going so fast, that all I could do was watch you. After you disappeared at the top of the castle I decided I would follow you. So I did, and Pete did something happen you seem of jumpy and shaken up" she said sadly. She just looked at him and waited for an answer.
"I'm okay" Pete only half way lying. "Lets go for a walk in the forest" Pete said. He wanted to check out a few things around the forest, and wanted to see if anyone was really there. Or if he was going insane. Pete smiled at Leah then began to climb down the castle wall.
"Okay" Leah said. Leah followed Pete climbing slightly fast down then Pete was. When her feet hit the ground she waited for Pete as thoughts ran through her mind. *Why won't he tell me what's wrong? Why does he keep lying to me, its not like him* Leah blocked her mind as Pete got close enough to be able to read her thoughts.
Petes feet hit the ground and he smiled as Leah and took her hand. He began to walk slowly towards the forest. Pete looked around like he normally would but took much more in. He studied every tree and every small animal that ran past him. Pete saw a few animals that must have been dead for at least two days. "I should talk to Billie about not killing the animals" He said to Leah and himself. He saw nothing different, and smiled happily and sighed with relief.
its been awhile so i thought i might post some of what i have..
awesome story!!!
Yay!! I like it!
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tehe giggle you like it!!